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 Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 2:09 pm
they circled the village, just trying to decide where to go. Sumaru went next to lee and said" LEE, I hope you can handle it, but i want some of that gooooood cuuuury, lets go. Just down go crazy." lee nodded, and they both laughed. they then went down, to the restaurant, and started to order. they both had curry, and started to eat. It was great, and then they finished, lee wanted more, but knew he couldn't. He then spread wings, alkong with sumaru, and headed for the training feilds. it was going to be great, onother, knew jutsu. Fire ball, he was going to be able to shoot fire balls!!!!!!!! It wasw awesome! They finally landed at the feild, it was great, fireballs, he loved fireballs!!!!!! fireballls! He could just imagine the destructiv force of chackra fire balls, it could also be used as a distraction, oir defensive move.'
fire ball 4/8
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:52 pm
Sumaru rasn to the center of the feild, and said" Lee , pay attention, i am going to show you the jutrsu, it is very useful.' lee nodded and said" thanck you sumaru, this will make me much stronger." Sumaru and lee both nodded, sumaru then did some strange hand sighns, and lee knew he was starting. Now, sumaru said' fire balls" Three huge fireballs, shot right from the peacoks feathers. It was amazing. they hit a rock, and it exploded, to bits! Sumaru then ran to lee and said" that was fireball, very powerful, very deadly. Do not go crazy with it, use it in only great times of need, well thats what a real teacher would say,not me. just have fun with it..." lee laughed and then said" yeah, i will but i wont just use it randomly, besides i cant use it now.
fire ball 5/8
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:18 pm
" oh yeah, whoops i forgot. I still didn't tell you the hand sighns, here they are." said sumaru as he slowly, step by step did tha hand sighns. Lee quickly memorized them, an was ready to do the jutsu when.... two kids came outt of nowhere. they walked up to sumaru and said" Sumaru, its time to pay or fight, we mad e this deal a month ago , and theres no one here to save you.." Sumaru was stunned, and lee tooo. what was going on.. " sumaru then said " we will both fight you, come on lee, we can beat them." They all nodded, and the fight began. Everyone native to the star village used the mysterious peacok style so leee did too. he did he hand sighns, and said" mysterious peacok style: flight the peacok" he burst into the air and threw some kunai at the opponants. They were supprised by this, but not out done. they both did the hand sighns, and said" mysterious peacok style: scatter." The kunai were knocked aside, and the two of them burst into the air after leee. Sumaru saw this and used fireballs, the oppanents dodged this giving lee an oppurtunity to attack. he took out his kodachi, and used akiten kenbu. Going straight down, spinning rapidly.
fire ball 6/8
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:28 pm
He sliced right through the boys' Chackra, they had no wings, and were now falling, very fast. Lee decidee to quicken the fal, he put away his kodachi, and used huricane draw, the wind sped right at them, and they went even faster dwon, crasing on the ground. Lee thought they were done so he landed. Both of them got up, two minutes later, they were pissed, lee could tell. He decided to finsish them once and for all.. he bit his thumb, and did the hand sighns. he then placed it on the ground right when they used fireballs. The smoke cleared and okina hedi appeared. The fireballs hit the snake, doing almost nothing. The mighty snake then swung its tail, and hit the kids, knowcking them out , pprobably for good. lee had one, basically by himself, he had done great. it hadn't been that hard!
fire ball 7/8
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:45 pm
sumaru stared n disbeleif, lee had done that? Sumaru then said" wow, lee that was amazing, you are a great ninja, please try to use the fireball jutsu, i am positive that you can do it, you will be able too! Please lee, try. " lee nopdded, and agreed to preform the jutsu. he did the hand sighns and then said" mysterious peacok style: fire ball" Eight fire balls emerged from the peacoks feathers, it was amazing. Sumaru nodded in approval, and said well, you have become much stronger than when i first met you, go and learn more jtsu, in more places, you will suceed, you must pass the exams." Lee nodded,k some one thought he was ready! he then said[' thankyou sumaru, you are also strong.
fire bal;l 8/8
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 9:59 am
lee quickly got off the boat and thanked the man.. he was gonnaarrive in hidden star with style, like he always used to so that he didnt lose his cover.. that was how he always was from now on.. he liked to play it cool... Lee quickly did ome hand sighns and said " mysterious peacok style.. fligh the peacok......" he quickly spread wings, and was up in te air.. he quickly flewin the direction of town.. anyon who knew a hidden start jutsu was welcome in hidden star.. lee knew that.... so it would be easy for him to get in.. he could see that he was geting clser to the village... he just had to fly over the poisonious gasses, in the canyon...
chackra tracker 1/5
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:13 am
Lee quickly flew over the canyon, and held his breath. it would be bad to let any of the fumes in.. he quickly flew into the town and landed on the ground. he quickly walked to the inn. they immdiatly knew who he was and said" oh lee, it has been a while.." lee quickly nodded and said" yes, it has , may i please have a room..." the women nodded and said" okay thereis one on the second flooor." lee quicklly nodded and sadi: okay, may i please hae the key..." she quickly handed it to him and said" okay.. its 217....." lee qickly nodded, and headed up the stairs to his room. he quickly oened the door..
chackra tracker 2/5
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:22 am
lee quickly opened the door, and unpacke.. it was a jce, small room. but he woudlnt be here for to long..... lee quickly put some stuff away.. and heqaded out of the room. he quickly wnet down stairs to get a bite...... he qucikly sat dow at the restaurant, and ordered some lunch.. " may i please have some of ypour famouse american barbeque wings..." the man then smiled and said"oh yes, those are good. one order coming up.." lee just sat.. and it finally came.. he quickly ate and said" thnak you it was delicous.... "He then paid the bill and headed out.. he ahd to learn somthing form hakuto.
chackra tracker 3/5
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:33 am
lee quickly found hakuto and said" helloe hakuto.. would you please teach me the jutsu tha allows you to track someone if they flee...." hakuto quicjkly nodded andsaaid" oh hi lee, i would be hnored to teach you that jutsu.." lee quckly nodded and said" thnaks, so when can we start..." hakuto quickly thought an dsaid" well i have about two hours so why noy now.." lee quickly odded and said" okay why dont we fly to the feild together.." hakuto quickly noded and said" yes, that sounds good." the quickly junped up inot the air and began flying...
chackra tracker 4/5
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:41 am
They quickly arrived at the feild, and landed hakuto then said" okay here are the hand signs...." lee quickly watched, and immidiatly memorized them... he then said" okay i got them sio thats all i need to know right??" hakuto odded an dsaid" yep.. your good.." lee quickly thanked her and said "okay..." lee quickly flew back to tyeninn, but used the chackra tracker to fin hakuto. it worked, he could see where shee was. he quickly went up to his room, he was just gonnna spend the night.... it will be great.. now he could find enemies even if they used mist... " hahahahaha" greatr..
chackra tracker 5/5
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:56 am
Nyu arrived in the hidden star village. Just as he was about to step off the boat he noticed the sudden change in the type of chakras. It was a lot different than anything he had felt before. It was a sort odf pheonix type of chakra and it was circulating everywhere across the village. There were sevral children using the techniques like play toys. Nyu then realized Hmm.... This must be the village's specialty jutsu much like the steel villlage's main idea for manipulation of steel. I wonder if they will teach their customs to an outsider.
1/20
Nyu then stepped off the boat and waved to the man dving it as he waved back smiling. Nyu then tunred and saw a full grown man but he hadn't grown so much he was about the height of an 8th grader. Nyu looked at the man as he was a little creeped out from the man who wouldn't let him pass. Nyu then stood on both of his feet and looked at the man with a rather peculiar look on his face. Nyu then pulled out a kunai thinking that this guy wanted to challenge him.
2/20
The man then smiled an said"Well hello there! I am the greeter welcome to the Bear Country. The hidden star village is a small town inside the Bear country. This village is ruled by Hoshikage. The people of this village one day hope to become one of the most well known villages. They gain their power of their jutsu from a small purple meteor the size of a golf ball. Although the meteor gives them incredible strength it shortens the life span of the person who uses it.
3/20
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:21 am
Nyu then shrugged a bit and said"Do you have a welcoming commitee for everyone?" The creepy greeter nodded. Nyu then watched as other people walked off the boat without a greeter. Nyu then pointed to a family getting off the boat and said"Don't you have to go greet them?" The greeter then sighed and said"Well maybe we don't do it for everyone. We just normally do it for the royalties like the kages or feudal lords." Nyu had forgotten that he was a kage and then said"Right Right Right."
4/20
The greeter then said" Ok I will give you a basic description of the techniqe of this village I'll be done. The technique is called Kujaku Myouhou other wise known as Mysterious Peacock Method is the only technique the villagers know. This is a chakra control technique that creates a large fan of purple ghost-like feathers made of chakra behind the user. Although this is their only technique that are many sub-technique that can be used after this technique has been activated." The Greeter then nodded and ran to the next rich person getting off the boat.
5/20
Nyu then walked across the village and saw two children killing each other with mysterious peacock method attacks. The kid on the left was floating in the air shooting down tons of prple fire balls trying to hit the other kid. The kid with black hair was using his flight to move out of the way of the fire balls and then shot chakra strings from his fingers and tried to bind around the blonde kid saying"I got ya bro!" The kid with the blode hair was then binded in chakra and then fell to the floor.
6/20
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:43 pm
The blonde haired kid then fell to the floor helpless and said"Yeah I really need to work on that." The kid with the black hair the nsaid"I doubt it. You're probably just mad because your little brother just schooled you aren't ya." The kid with the blod hair then began struggling to break out and said"Dang it! When I get out of here I am going to beat the crap out of you." The black haired kid then began to laugh nad then skipped home after his triumphit victory against his older brother.
7/20
Nyu then laughed and said"I remember when that was me and my one of my best friends. Except he would always beat me and he was older so he had more strategies and experience. Sure I had almost every technique he did but he still had more experience and such." Nyu then hit himself in the head and said"Oh! Nows not the time for memories is it? I am bored I think hat I am going to take a small walk thriough town." Nyu then walked about half a block and saw a contest with a prize.
8/20
The man was holding a large gold fan and was shouting to the crowd that had gathered."Hello one and all! I am willing ot give away this solid gold fan and 1000 dollars to anyone who can defeat my son here. He is undefeasted and has had 1000 battles so far I have gained a dollar from each one of those matches. If you happen to lose to my sone you must pay 10 dollars to me. So who will decide to step up and take a chance in thei rlife the reward has great riches.
9/20
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:17 pm
Nyu then sighed and stepped up to the stage and said"Ok I guess I will go." Nyu then reched into his kage robe and pulled out some pocket change and dropped it into the father's hand and then pulled out his one-ton sword. Nyu then said"Ready when you are.." The kid of the man running the stage then said" Ok dad can I start?" The man then said" You can start at any time but I reommend that you activate your special jutsu first." The kid then snapped his finger and said"Thanks dad."
10/20
The kid then acitvated his mysterious peacock method and then turned it into a demon fox mode. He then said"Dad get off the stage." The dad then jumped down the stage to watch the battle. Thge kid then shot out several chakra strings to try and wrap around Nyu to make him helpless while he could deliver the final blow but unfortunaetely Nyu was too smart for that. Nyu swiftly appeared head on at the strings and sliced five of them in half that were coming from ther left hand .
11/20
Nyu swiftly turned his back and sliced the other hand's strings that had been chasing him while he sliced the other hand's chkara strings. Nyu then said"Hey if you're going to hope to beat me. Then I suggest you use a technique that I already haven't seen before. I have analyzed it perfectly. Bind - this can be used without activating Mysterious Peacock Method. The user send several strings of chakra out of the palm to bind the opponent." Nyu said smirking waiting for the next attack the kid would make.
12/20
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:54 pm
Nyu then looked to the kid as he was about ot use another mysterious peacock method technique. Nyu then laughed a bit and said" I studied the overall techiqe dude I'll give you a descrption Mysterious Peacock Method is the only technique the villagers know. This is a chakra control technique that creates a large fan of purple ghost-like feathers made of chakra behind the user. Although this is their only technique that are many sub-technique that can be used after this technique has been activated."
13/20
The kid then sighed after Nyu's very long explination and said"Yeah Yeah Yeah I know that all kages study as many jutsu as possible. But that doesn't mean I can't beat you with them. Infact I'll tell you what all of them do during the battle so there will be no excuse as to why you lost. This one is called all around it makes the chakra feathers from the mysterious peacock method extend into a wolf like figure which swipes its paws all around the user in order to keep opponents or attacks away.
14/20
"The next one is Fireball many younger shinobi of this village love this technique since it is so fun and bright it allows the user to manipulate the focused chakra of the feathers to become a large purple fireball and launches it toward an opponent. " The kid then shifted his weight to his right foot and continued talking" The next one I know is the whip technique it can be used without activating the Mysterious Peacock Method. The user sends the chakra out of the palm in the shape of a whip."
15/20
The kid then continued talking and looked to his father and said"dang your son thinks he's smart doesn't he?" The father rolled his eyes and nodded. The kid continued flapping his mouth" Ok this one is called absorbtion After activating Mysterious Peacock Method the users chakra comes into contact with a person the user can absorb their chakra. It is a very powerful techiqe that is good when fighting multiple opponents or in war occasions and such." Nyu was nearly half asleep.
16/20
The kid then said"Ok I am almost done. This next one is called Heal it Can be used without activating Kyujaku Kyouhou. This technique creates a chakra bubble on the fingertip so that when the user touches someone hurt they will be healed by the users chakra. It's not much of a fighting technique but is also helpful when helping comrades or in war occasions." Nyu was ow asleep and had drawn fake eyes over his eye lids to make the sone think he was awake.
17/20
Nyu then awoke and revealed that his eyes were lcosed through the kids speech for the most part. Nyu then said"Huh? where am I? Is that dumb kid done flapping his lips yet? Wen will he relaize no one cares? I mean the crowd left too." The kid then sighed and said"I suppose you're right but just one more technique descriptions and I'm done." Nyu then held out his right hand and then mumbled "Channel." Nyu then shot a chakra blast at the kid blowing him away.
18/20
Nyu then looked to the father and siad'You can keep the money just cancel the challege thing." Nyu ketp walking through the village thinking that this was a waste of his time. Akahoshi then appeared infront of Nyu and said"Watch closely." Nyu then got a verystange look on his face but this look was even stranger than the one he had when he had first met that greeter for the Bear Country. The man then shouted"I said to shut up and watch I am the kage of the village."
19/20
Nyu decided to shut up and watch. Nyu watched Akahoshiform some hand seals. Nyu the nmemorized them and siad"What technique was that for? The basic technique of the village Kujaku Myoho. It is the only technique the villagers know. This is a chakra control technique that creates a large fan of purple ghost-like feathers made of chakra behind the user. Although this is their only technique that are many sub-technique that can be used after this technique has been activated. It is our villages custom I hope it will come in handy for someone of your power level." Akahoshi then disappeared.
20/20
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