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 Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:43 am
sweatdrop actually when I wrote that I wasn't referring to the game. I was referring to actual naruto data. If you look at the manga, shino's father is equiped with nano-poison bugs, as is the black op Torune. When I spoke of their evolution rate, I was going off of my own knowledge, but if you need a reference click here. (last paragraph in bug techniques I wasn't gonna use skills they didn't allow on here *such as suddenly having bugs that could inject poison or heal wounds* But as far as general knowledge about the clan goes, nothing I said was false.
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:15 am
smile You basically said in your app, that they evolve rapidly, and you can basically just make bugs for any purpose. I did point out that the poison bugs were real, but very rare and probably aren't part of this roleplay. I am pretty sure, that those are the only two bugs that actually live in the host.
It would be smart to rewrite it and make it clear, otherwise, if i was approving applications, I would think... this person thinks he can just evolve bugs for any purpose?"This means that at any given time, an aburame can call forth bugs for a multitude of different things" pretty much says just that...
Also, many bugs in real life don't have very long lifetimes, and they don't really appear to be evolving 'at an accelerated rate because of it... though i kind of understand your train of thought there.
Anyways, this is just my opinion, so if you disagree, then fine. I don't think we should drag this conversation out any more here. (if you want to do it in pm or something that sounds fun, as long as you don't think i am trying to be mean or something like that... I just like to keep details clear smile )
Also. good luck
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:53 pm
ALRIGHT EVERYONE LISTEN UP!!!! Greg has now put me in charge of accepting bloodlines, I expect absolute perfection, if I even sense a shred of fail, I will fail you on the spot....ha no j/k but they still better be good, otherwise your getting denied, much like the cake, which we all know, is a lie I'll be looking at the apps abit later on tonight.
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Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:59 pm
Rpc Name: Erebus Sansanct
Village: Mist
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ranmaru Kekkei Genkai
What you know about the clan: The Ranmaru Kekkei Genkai is an interesting mix of both the Byakugan and the Sharingan. It takes the inherited skill with using Genjutsu, as well as the ability to process information at an incredible speed, and combines it with enhanced vision, ability to pierce walls with said vision, and sense both chakras and life forces. Blending that with an ability to cancel the Byakugan and create Genjutsu that can't be Kaied out of, and you have a very potent mix.
Rp Sample:
Silence. The tool of all shinobi. Stealth. The weapon of all shinobi. Nothing in all the world is more feared, or more deadly, than the one who can use both. Just because you are silent, does not mean you are stealthy. And just because you are stelathy, does not mean that you are silent. One does not mean the other. Both are seperate. Yet, both are one. Erebus contemplated this philosophical conundrum as he watched his target, eyes glowing red, waiting for the opportune moment to strike.
The man marked as his target was Hyuuga, as was obvious from his eyes. He had been on a reconnaissance mission, and had been discovered as he was leaving. What he knew, or how much he knew, was enough for Erebus to be sent on this mission. He was chosen above others because of his own eyes, the counter to the dojutsu that made the Hyuuga clan famous. The eyes that rendered the Byakugan useless. The eyes that shrouded, and the eyes that revealed.
Now. The time had come. The Hyuuga was setting up camp for the night, so his attention was slightly distracted. Erebus took a deep breath and exhaled it slowly. He made a single hand seal, and whispered "Kirigakure no Jutsu(Hidden Mist Technique)." A slow, creeping mist began surrounding the area, shrouding everything from sight. Erebus heard the Hyuuga gasp, taking up a fighting position. Another hand signal. "Bunshin no Jutsu," he whispered. Several copies of himself appeared in the trees. The Hyuuga looked up, hearing the pop of the clones appearing. With his dojutsu, his wonderful eyes, Erebus used his ability to extend chakra particles so that, to the enemy, it would look like one of his clones was the real person.
As one, Erebus and his five clones descended from their perch in the tree above. He pulled his daggers, Bal and Jobb, from his hip, holding them in a standard grip. "I will give you one chance to surrender peacefully," Erebus said in a near whisper. "You will come back to the Village," one of the clones said. "Be it by force, or by your choice," another whispered.
The Hyuuga smiled. "You know as well as I that I can't do that. Why do you even ask?" The bulging veins at his temples confirmed that he was using the Byakugan. That, and he was looking at the clone with the false chakra map.
Erebus and his clones shrugged. "Courtesy, more than anything else," another clone replied. "So that when defeat comes, the foe knows that it was his own fault for fighting."
The man nodded. "I respect that. I will do my best to not kill you." With that as his only preamble, he launched his attack at the clone. He struck it three times, and then the clone disappeared with a pop. It was a measure of his training and skill that he was startled for all of half a second. But that half of a second allowed openings.
The clones came in for a mass attack, and Erebus backed off, watching. The clones were quickly dispatched, popping into non existence in a cloud of smoke.
The original was now the only one remaining. And he was in the middle of a series of hand signals. The Hyuuga charged, closing the distance, trying to find the chakra map. But it was no use. The last hand seal was finished. "Kani Hokou (Crab Walk)," Erebus uttered. A confused look crossed the Hyuuga's face before he lurched sideways, forced to walk like a crab, and went tumbling to the ground.
This is just a Genjutsu, the man thought to himself, seeing Erebus advance on him. He did a series of seals, trying to release the Jutsu inflicted upon him. But he couldn't.
Erebus closed with speed and accuracy. One hand fell on each of the Hyuuga, midway through the forearms. "Aranu Atsubottai Kyouatsu no Jutsu (False Heavy Pressure Technique)," Erebus stated. Quickly, he brought the foe arms above his head and held them down with one hand, keeping up his Genjutsu. With Erebus's free hand, he touched the Hyuuga's shoulder. "Nemuri (Sleep)," he said. The man resisted admirably. But he could not hold out against the sleep that overwhelmed him.
Erebus stood up, looking at his sleeping foe. He sighed. Why couldn't he have just surrendered? Now Erebus had to carry him back to the village. Sighing again, he picked up the Hyuuga and made his way back.
Edited! Done!
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:06 am
Rpc Name:Arcus Memushi
Village:Cloud
Rank:Acadamy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Aburame
What you know about the clan/bl: Aburame are a clan of bug users. At birth they are bound to the bugs, which live in the ninja's body and feed on their charka. The bugs in turn do the ninja's bidding, requiring almost no handsigns to perform a surplus of jutsu. The bugs are completely silent and almost undetectable making them ideal for espionage. planting a female bug on a target makes them child's play to follow. The bugs have a life span of approximately 6 hours however because of the bugs' life cycle, there is never a shortage of female eggs. Still, if you wish to track someone for a long time, you must constantly replace the female bug they have on them.
Rp Sample:Arcus saw the punch coming and had more than enough time to block it, but he wanted his bugs free and he felt this was a perfect opportunity. Arcus brought his bugs to the surface of his face just as the punch connected, not only cushioning the blow, but also coating the assailants hand with his beetles. Arcus grinned, for now the fun would begin.
His bugs began to feed on the man's chakra greedly, but the man continued to attack, as if he didn't notice. Arcus dodged blow after blow before performing a replacement jutsu to get out of the range of the man's fist. He clearly had too much chakra. Arcus appeared a short distance away, slamming his hands onto the ground and allowing bugs to leave the sleeves of his jacket. The assailant stared at the advancing bugs with amusement in his eyes. He kicked at them, and mocked their size. That was a mistake, for within seconds his kicks slowed and his breathing became labored. He noticed his energy depleting as the bugs climbed up his feet and legs.
He stomped and he swiped, but the more he struggled, the more bugs attached. mushi dama should end this Arcus thought, ready to finish what he started. The bugs not already attached took flight, surrounding the panicking man. He began to scream and plead, fear and weakness in his eyes. Arcus frowned as his bugs slammed into the man, knocking him over. They coated him, and finished sucking him dry. Death isn't pleasant, but the job got done. Arcus thought as he pushed up his dark glasses and walked away, several hundred bugs trailing behind him.
((ooc I should probably point out that if I get approved, I'm gonna change my character's last name to aburame. I'm also going to change his bio to reflect him having been brought up by bug tamers.))
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:42 am
Rpc Name: Shi Motarasu (her name was changed to fit her personality, so its no longer Aburame)
Village: Suna
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame
What you know about the clan/bl: Aburame are a awesome clan uses insects to help them out. At birth they are offered to insects known as destruction bugs, which live in the ninja's body and feed on their charka. The insects in turn do the ninja's bidding by doing bug jutsus that require no hand signs.. The insects are small and completely silent and almost undetectable making them ideal for spying. planting a female insect on a target allows male insects to track the females scent. The bugs have a life span of approximately 6 hours meaning you'll need to replace insects constantly.
Rp Sample:
(im not going to use anything but bugs for this so you know i know how to use the clan)
Shi let out a sigh held out her left arm, she was on a mission to spy and follow a rogue ninja that had recently left her village. She smiled as a single bug flew back and landed on her hand, she had sent another one to take its spot just moments ago and was now listening to the up date on the target of her mission. "So.. he hasn't moved..." She let out a sigh before tilting her hand to watch the bug that was on it fall tot he ground dead, she had timed everything out perfectly so that by the time the bug had told her all the information it would only have seconds before dieing.
She sat there for a few more hours before standing up and sending off another bug to replace the one currently out there. After doing that she waiting a few more minutes before noticing the bug never came back. "damit... He must of been expecting the kage to send me after him..." She held out her hand once agian and a large group of bugs flew out and circled around her. "Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu" She said to herself and watched the bugs form into a clone of herself. "Go scout.." She said softly before the clone headed over to the guys camp sight that he had set up. "Most likely he is gone or is waiting for me to let down my guard..."
She let out a sigh before looking around before placing her hand on the ground. "Mushi Yose no Jutsu" a web-like spread of chakra shot out across the ground and within seconds more insects started heading towards her and crawling onto her. "More the better..." She she gathered enough insects she headed after her clone. The clone was standing down in the middle of the now destroyed camp site, apparently he had destroyed it and moved on. "Dam.." Suddenly the shinobi jumped out of the tree and threw a bunch of kunai at her and the clone, a few of the kunai shot through the clone causing the bugs to disperse. She quickly moved out of the way at the kunai shot at her also. "So you were hiding!" She clenched her fists together before jumping back a few yards and throwing a few kunai at the shinobi, as she did her bugs moved quickly into his blind area and moved quickly towards him. He of course knowing all about Shi knew that the kunai were a distraction and quickly blocked them before turning to the bugs and preforming a fireball jutsu that quickly incinerated the bugs.
"dam you!.." Shi let out a sigh before charging in at him, she had expected him to do soemthing to get rid of the bugs but this quickly in the fight? She was glad that she had gathered more bugs before heading off after her clone cause now they would come in handy. She slide to a stop and dove out of the way as the shinobi shot another fireball jutsu at her. She had made it out of the way but didn't gain much ground on him. She quickly got back up and made a few more attempts, the ground around her was black and deformed from all the fireball jutsus. "Idiot.." She said with a smile before rushing at him one last time before jumping over him, as she did bugs flew down and surrounded the shinobi. "Mushi Dama!" The bugs quickly enveloped him in a sphere and began to feed on his chakra. Due to him having used alot of jutsus just to fend her off, his chakra was running on low already and didnt take long before he passed out from being to low on chakra. "Finally..."
Finished >.> hope thats ok >.> i can make it better if you want!
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:36 am
tsubaka inoue Rpc Name: Ichigo Yuki Village: Kiri Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ink Artistry What you know about the clan/bl: Ink Artistry bloodline uses scroll and ink as weapons. Using ninja ink this bloodline can create a variety of animals do to various things. Birds for flying, Lions/Bears for attack and can even create small animals to sneak up on an opponent. Rp Sample: Ichigo looked at the time. It's time for training with myself. Ichigo walked out into the garden to practice is ninjutsu. "Sumi Buushin no Jutsu," Ichigo said making a ink clone of himself. The ink clone ran off into the distance of the garden. Ichigo pulled out his sword Jezumo and ran after his clone. Ichigo's clone threw some kunai's at Ichigo. Ichigo dodged and sheathed his sword and took out a scroll and drew a tiger, "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said then tiger then ran after Ichigo's clone. The clone had ran off, and tried going behind Ichigo spraying senbon needles everywhere. "Choujuu Giga," Ichigo said summoning and umbrella. The umbrella dispersed when it was hit. Ichigo got closed and tried a new technique, "Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu," the area started to unsheathe his sword. Ichigo striked his sword at the clone but the clone reacted and jumped back, I am becoming smarter then usual my clones would have died by now. Where will hit me next? Will it use some taijutsu or my genjutsu. The clone came behind Ichigo and used some shurikens. Ichigo had to jump back but he had gotten hit by one of the shurikens. "Good, Good, let us end this right now," Ichigo said. The clone drew at his sword and the both were ready to strike each other down. Both of them ran at each other and slashed each other at the same time. It seemed minutes had gone by and then The clone dissipated back into ink. "I took a good blow from that attack. I think I might need medical attention," Ichigo said walking of to the hospital. @Cobra: Fixed... is it better?
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:40 pm
Solitude over courage Rpc Name: Orikage Deevo Village: Mist Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Hyoton Kekkei Genkei What you know about the clan/bl: Ice Release is created when the user combines wind and water to create ice. Unlike Yurikage shinobi who use preexisting ice to use Hyoton, ninjas like Haku combined water and wind to create ice. Rp Sample: Orikage studied his enemy, the Akatsuki Kyouza. I never thought I had to use my secret power... he thought panting. Kyouza himself wasn’t hurt at all! Orikage raised one hand in a Tiger seal. “ Hyouton!” Orikage shouted. He forced more chakra into his hand as the nearby water bodies grew upwards. “ Raido” The water froze into a sufficient amount of ice to create more jutsu. Orikage raised his hand in a Tiger seal again “ Hyouga Bunshin no jutsu” he whispered as two ice clones appeared. Ontop of that he continued, “ Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu” Two water cloned then appeared. Kyouza seemed surprised as the five look-alikes jumped up to hit him. He knew what to do. “ Katon, Goukakkyuu no jutsu!” he shouted as a burst of flame erupted. The original Orikage jumped back as he tried to save his clone. Unfortunately the water jutsus had melted while the ice ones were half gone. “ Now I can tell whos who!” Kyouza shouted as he jumped up doing the ninjutsu again. Orikage jumped up as he broke a piece from his ice bodies. “ Koorikoku!” Orikage shouted as he carved many halberds and threw them in the direction of Kyouza. He in return kicked the deliveries in the air. He was surprised by the disappearance of Orikage when he noticed him above himself. “ Suiton: Bakusui Shōha!” Orikage shouted as he spat out an ocean of water. Kyouza drowning in the water said, “ Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ” A dragon emerged from the water towards Orikage. He dodged it with much difficulty. He flinched as he noticed Kyouza in close-combat saying, “ Katon: Gōen Rasengan ” His hand with the fiery red Rasengan met Orikage as he fell into the water by the impact of the attack. Orikage still in the affect of the Fire Rasengan, raised on hand and said, “ Hyougai no Jutsu !”the ocean froze as he jumped out in a armor of ice. Kyouza didn’t notice when Orikage jumped infront of him. He grinned angrily as Orikage drew out his katana, slashing Kyouza. “ Shikki Kansei No Jutsu ” Orikage shouted again raising a one-hand seal as the whole ocean raised up to the air, speeding towards Kyouza. He was successfully frozen as Orikage scooped up water in his hand, and one-hand seal in the other saying, “ Hyougatama ” He threw the ball of water at Kyouza as it was fixed on his head. Orikage walked away leaving him to lose breath.
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:27 am
@Penguin....wow the only thing I have to say is epic, one of the best apps of anything I've read in awhile, you grasp the consept of the bloodline and more then showed your use of it in the RP Sample and to that I say!!
@Kuro You seem to grasp the consept of the Clan and how it works and functions well, your RP sample showed you know how to use them effectively, still if you prove not to be as epic as Blade is at useing them I will revoke my approvel scream lol I kid YOU GET
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 11:39 am
Overflowing Hatred Rpc Name: Anansi Hyuuga Village: Konohagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Byakugan/Hyuuga Clan What you know about the clan/bl: It is known as the all-seeing eye. From this bloodline, the sharingan came to be. There is a blind spot at approximately the third column on the spinal cord from the top. The hyuugas are trained in the Gentle Fist technique. They can see tenketsu along the chakra stream throughout the body and attack them precisely to either halt the flow of chakra. There is a main house and a branch house of this clan. Hyuuga means "Toward the Sun". The members of the branch house are given a curse seal that makes it so that main house has complete control of them. It can only go away when they die. Rp Sample: Anansi was jumping through the trees heading back to the village after his mission. He stopped and activated his Byakugan, sensing somebody nearby, Anansi looked out of the corner of his eyes, and spotted a huge mass of chakra close behind him. He sighed and turned to face the shinobi who had been tailing him, "Come out or die" he said in an unsympathetic tone. He wasn't in the mood to deal with low class scum. The shinobi froze "So be it" he said jumping down. He ran towards the shinobi. Anansi quickly motioned his body to the left of the shinobi, and hit him with his palm in the back of his head. The shinobi passed out, and Anansi gave an emotionless expression. Suddenly, Anansi could see four more chakra masses coming towards him. "So you had back up, eh?" Anansi said as he took a fighting stance. Two of the shinobi quickly surrounded him. "You have know idea, what a Hyuuga's capable of, do you?" He asked as he spread his legs apart and put one hand closer to the ground and one hand in the air. "Eight Trigrams, sixty-four palms" he muttered. His pinkie and ring finger, on the hand that was in the air, folded to his palm while his index and middle finger stayed up.The yin/yang symbol that appeared on the ground signified he was using sixty-four palms. He ran forward. he hit the man to the left of him. He was using his left hand then his right. "Two palms." he said, hitting him twice with his index and middle finger. "Four palms" he said hitting him four times "......sixteen palms..."She said hitting the man on his right sixteen times "....thirty-two palms.....sixty-four palms!" he said, hitting the man on his right first with his left finger, while simultaneously, hitting the man on his left with his right finger, and quickly switching sixty-four times and finished by hitting the man on the right with his right palm and the man on the left with his left palm, blocking their chakra pathways. Suddenly the last two shinobi appeared both in front and behind him and threw two kunai each, "Rotation" He shouted as released chakra from all over his body and began to rotate quickly, creating an extremely strong barrier of rotating chakra, deflecting the four kunai. As soon as he stopped rotating, Anansi withdrew four kunai and threw them, with precise accuracy at the man in front of him, killing him on the spot, he then quickly ran towards the man that was behind him, "Last Resort: Eight Gates Assault" He shouted as he attacked and closed the man's eight gates. As Anansi appears behind the man, the man falls to the ground, unconscious, "You'll live, but your career as a shinobi is over" he said as he began to leave, "What is your name?" the shinobi asked. "Anansi turns around re-activating his Byakugan, "I'm Anansi Hyuuga, future leader of the Hyuuga Clan" He replied as he runs off, weary because the massive amount of chakra he used. I edited it
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:42 pm
zarase Rpc Name: Axon Yamanaka Village: Kirigakure Rank: Acadamy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Yamanaka What you know about the clan/bl: The Yamanaka clan members are best used on recon and intelegence gathering, the abilitys granted by this blood line allow for the user to infiltrate the enemy with ease. Though the clan has powerful jutsu the main flaws wold be the speed of the clans most famous jutsu the mind transfer jutsu and that any damage done to the "Borrowed" body would also be inflicted on the jutsu users orignal body. Another flaw with the yamanaka clan is the fact that most of the jutsu are passive and cause no direct damage and can easily be negated. Rp Sample: Axon was kneeling in a tree prepairing to pounce on two enemy ninja, one was slightly large and had a massive sword in his hand while the other was skiny and had no visible weapon. Performing the required handseals Axon used the "Mind Derangement jutsu." targeting the larger of the two ninja. Landing the jutsu Axon smirked as the larger ninja began to attack the smaller ninja causing massive harm to his teammates body. Axon cancled the jutsu after the beating was done, coming to his sences the larger ninja looked around in blind anger "Who are you?! SHOW YOURSELF!!!" Axon couldent help but smile at his confusion but his smile quickly vanished when another ninja showed up, the ninja was of average height and size but looked a lot more experenced then the other two. Axon came up with a plan while the two ninja discussed what happend, Quickly forming the needed hand signs Axon performed the "Mind Body Transfer Jutsu." on the larger ninja, safely landing in the body Axon slashed the large sword at the experenced ninja not allowing for an easy dodge. Quickly and skillfully the experenced ninja moved his hands onto the blade and jumped with the slash allowing for minimal damage to be done. Axon jumped back at the failed attempt and smirked "Your team has failed you and for the mistakes they made you will die." quickly going for another attack the experenced ninja puled out a kunai and threw it at Axons hand, piercing his hand Axons attack was stopped cold in its tracks and the sword fell out of his hands. Blood driped from Axon's fresh wound, while the same type of injury took form on Axon's orignal body, The experenced ninja quickly launched a punch at Axon's chest but missed hitting Axon's hand which had moved to intercept the blow. Axon knew he had very little time and chakra left so he had to move quickly. Wraping his hands around the enemy ninjas arm Axon swung him over his head and onto the ground face up Axon hrew a powerful punch at the experenced ninjas face causing instant death. falling backward Axon felt his grasp over the body fade with the last of his strength he looked over at his body up in the tree and felt his mental energys return to his own body. The larger ninja gained controll of his body and saw that his sensei was dead right infront of him he let out a deafining roar, "I WILL AVENGE YOU SENSEI." Axon up in the tree was to weak to take on another enemy so he came up with a plan throwing a smoke bomb at the enemy ninja Axon jumped as soon as the smoke released and ran to where him and his team were to meet up.
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 8:41 pm
Rpc Name: Dustyn Genn
Village: Konohagakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kurisutaru: Crystal Kekkei Genkei
What you know about the clan/bl: The Crystals are created by combining the Lightning and Earth Element. They can't be destroyed by Ninjustu. However, Taijustu can break it though it is still rather hard. A person in this bloodline can produce crystals depending on their rank, So higher ranks can of course produce more.
Rp Sample:
Dustyn was packing his backpack with paper, a marker, tape, and a Kunai knife he had stolen from his mom. He zipped up the backpack and yelled
Bye mom! I'm going into the forest I'll be back later!
You better be back by dinner or I'll come looking for you!
Fine! see you later!
He smiled and ran out his house and headed for the forest.
Dustyn went to the empty training grounds and threw his backpack on a rock. He opened the bag and pulled out the paper and marker and started drawing targets on the paper. He pulled out the tape and started tapping up the drawings of targets to the near by trees. He pulled out the Kunai and said to himself, Might as well start my Kunai throwing skills before I have to start at the academy. and with that he threw the kunai at the nearest target with flew past the target and the tree into a near by bush. He Frowned, Glad I'm starting off so strong... he sadly walked over to the bush and fished out the Kunai. He walked back to where he was standing and threw it again.
The sun was setting and Dustyn was still trying to hit the center of the targets, he had begun hitting the paper but no where near the center. He was getting frustrated and stomped over to the paper target and ripped out of the paper. Well what do we have here? A little runt with pink hair trying to work on his aim with little badly drawn targets and a kunai. Careful Pinky you might hurt yourself the boy grinned and walked over to Dustyn, grabbed the Kunai and threw it at the paper targets center hitting it perfectly without even looking.
Dustyn looked at the Kunai stuck in the tree with awe. He looked back and the boy with big eyes. Don't look at me pinky he pushed Dustyn on the ground and turned and walked away. Dustyn sat on the ground and balled his fists and started doing handseals Crystal Dragon Jutsu Dustyn whispered. A small dragon appeared next to Dustyn and stared at him. Get him The dragon looked at the boy walking away and slid on the ground towards the boy as fast as it could. the dragon made it to the boy and bit his ankle. Ahhh! the boy screamed and looked down to the ground with a pink crystal dragon was looking back up at him. Yuck! the boy lifted his leg and stomped the dragon underneath his foot. You! your gonna pay!
Dustyn froze he didn't know what to do. the boy stared running at him making handseals of his own Bunshin no jutsu the boy became two and the both ran at Dustyn. Dustyn scuffed on the ground and tried to get up to run, but as he tripped over a rock and fell back on the ground. He looked back to see two fist coming at his face. The fists connected to his face hitting his left eye and right check. Dustyn's eyes started to water and he tucked his head into his body with his forehead touching the ground. He did some hand seals and screamed Crystal Barrier! just then a pink crystal dome covered his body and stopped the boy and his clone from hitting him. Dustyn looked up the clone was still trying to punch through the barrier with the boy ran to grab the kunai in the tree. The clone disappeared and the boy walked over to Dustyn's barrier and with the kunai grabbed tightly in his hand.
The boy started impailing the barrier with the kunai. Dustyn's eyes were full of water and tears were coming down his face now, he was losing charka from keeping the barrer from breaking. He bit his lip and closed his eyes, in a soft voice he muttered Crystal Style: Arrow of Light when he opened his eyes they were replaced by balls of chakra he growled. the boy fell to the ground as Dustyn flew up floating staring at the boy, Its your turn to cry. He made some handseals and lines of chakra formed two pyramids one stacked on the other with Dustyn inside. A beam came out of the point in front of Dustyn, it shot at the boy and hit him in the chest. The boy glupped and held his stomach and passed out. Dustyn fell to the ground and his knees gave out, he fell to the ground and hit his head. He looked over to the boy lying on the ground away from him. Got you. he said before closing his eyes.
Dustyn woke up staring at the ceiling of his room, he stood up and felt his face his right check was puffed up and his left eye was bandaged, this backpack hanging on the corner of his bed. He jumped out of bed and collapsed to the ground. Ugh. He grunted and blew the hair out of his right eye. Dustyn's dad ran in and then stopped at the door
come on now Dustyn what are you doing?
Well, I WAS trying to walk but I guess that didn't work.
Guess not. Dustyn's dad chuckled and picked him off the floor and layed him back into the bed.
Thanks dad, I'm sry you had to do that.
I got you from the forest tonight so this was no problem Dustyn's dad chuckled again. But I'll warn you, next time bring someone if your going to try that justu in the middle of the forest, you may not be so lucky next time.
Well the kid that I used it on must of been worst
What kid?
The kid that was passed out across from me
What are you talking about there was no one there when I found you.
What!?!?! He Shot up and then fell back down from the lost of energy.
Hey little champ, calm down and get some rest. We'll talk more later with your mom. Night Dustyn. and he walked to the door.
Dustyn looked at him confused that no one else was found Uhhh ok, night Dad. and with that he fell back to sleep.
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Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:14 am
Why am I being ignored hjere?
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Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:26 am
You just need to wait like everyone else >.> They have the full right to deny someone just cause they complain to much
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