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(( Holy s**t guys, we're roleplaying with an 8 year old, this is going to be so exciting. ))

(im 17 you idjit i make mistakes some time get over it jerk stressed )
"thank you and murr i not sure about my name sorry" leans back over to his booth "sorry enjoy you meal"

((Hey now, take it easy. Coach him. Pastery, we're in no rush here. The RP will be here when you get back. Take it a little slower, and take the time to make sure you at least complete your words. I understand it's the internet, and hardly anybody types like they're writing and essay, but let's do our best, okay? Your posts can be read much more easily if you at least use the proper punctuation. Capitalization would be great, but it's not imperative. Just take a minute to look over my other peoples' posts. You should be writing a narrative, not a play-by-play.))

"Hey, Zamph, I'm sorry. I've been short and snippy with you. I've had a long day, but now that I've got my mozzarella sticks and my coffee, I'm doing okay now. Let's start over," Loose apologized. He did have a long day, he'd been studying for finals for hours, and he realized now all he needed to cool off was a little human contact.

"My name's Lucien, you can call me Loose. Why don't you come sit with me and we'll have a drink. Do you smoke?" Lucien questioned as he lit a Parliament and took a drag.

((Capitalization, punctuation, Run-ons, fragments. Pastery... YOU FAIL ))

[Pastery, please try to write in the proper form. Remember your lessons in English Composition. Write full, coherent sentences, with decent punctuation. Try to write as if you are composing a novel; typing what you wish to convey, proofing it to see if you have made any mistakes, and using spell check if your browser has one. If you want, what you can do is what my mother had done when she wrote a long term rp for Myst with a friend of ours. She used Word to type up her addition to the saga, utilizing the program's built in spell checking program, and copying it onto the browser's text field to post it.
There is no need to rush, but there is great need to understand clearly what you are adding. We want to know you input, and would love to see how the addition of your fursona will effect the story; but it will be very difficult, if not nigh to impossible, for us to know what you are saying if you don't clean up your grammar.]

(okay im going to retry my last entry and thanks)
"Nah but knock yourself out like I said earlier my names zamph glad to meet you loose” Zamph said as he took a seat zamph has been awake all night so called working but after his nap earlier is fine.

((Nurren, you're a bit of a hypocrite. Your posts are comprehensible, legible, but you still make errors.))

((I'm going to correct your post here, and hopefully you'll see what we're talking about.))

"No, but knock yourself out. Like I said earlier, my name's Zamph. I'm glad to meet you, Loose." Zamph said, as he took a seat. Zamph had been awake "working" all night, but after taking a nap, he was fine.

((Now, that's just correcting the errors. I would spice it up a little bit, like so smile )

"No, but knock yourself out. Like I said earlier, my name's Zamph. I'm glad to meet you, Loose," Zamph denied Loose's offer to sit with him, and turned back to his own meal. He'd been awake all night. He was supposed to be working, but ended up goofing off on the computer most of the time. He was tired, but after taking a nap earlier, he could at least keep his eyes open.