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 Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:05 pm
 Any better? I used Gaian clothes, but i'm focusing on hair more. @Anlina: AWESOME EDITS!!! Hopefully one day I might be able to edit like you...
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:28 pm
The only weirdness I detect, Alexa is having that one foot stick out. The nakey base makes sense, but the lovely robes cover up the other foot.
Shino: Better yes. I think the biggest thing to notice is that light falls around the head in a halo shape when hair is down. Look at Gaian hairstyles and even Lucca's hair tutorial if you need some inspiration.
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:36 pm
Sarah, I kept on telling you on the phone how the light falls on hair. xd I can't believe I forgot to post this in here, though:  Base by Alexa_Kintari, everything else made by me. Ugh. I hate the staff. V_V;; But I love the way the hair came out on this. heart
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:43 pm
Shinobu_Teiin: Thanks!
I think you have a good start as far as creating the shape of the hair, but your shading doesn't really give shape to the hair. Take a look at some reference photos of hair - it falls in strands and clumps in a fall from the scalp, and the top of the head is dome shaped.
Try planning out your hair before you start shading. Hair in the style that you have will have a part, so sketch in where that is going to be. Then rough in the general shapes of the hair. Highlight around the crown should follow the shape of the skull: http://bmafb.blogspot.com/uploaded_images/Ouidaded-704949.jpg
Highlights on the hanging pieces should run parallel to the pieces of hair in a band.
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:43 pm
TheQualityofMercy: Hmm... You think I should cover it up or move it? Maybe move the other leg? Argle. ><;
XxCleaNessxX: OO *blinks* Wait no... Probably not talking about me... ^^;
Anyhow, yay! Someone used my base! XD And the hair is good, Can't think of how to critique it at the moment. ^^; The staff's shading at the end looks a bit odd though. Maybe try lining it up with the way the rest is tilted?
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:11 pm
Alexa_Kintari TheQualityofMercy: Hmm... You think I should cover it up or move it? Maybe move the other leg? Argle. ><; XxCleaNessxX: OO *blinks* Wait no... Probably not talking about me... ^^; Anyhow, yay! Someone used my base! XD And the hair is good, Can't think of how to critique it at the moment. ^^; The staff's shading at the end looks a bit odd though. Maybe try lining it up with the way the rest is tilted? Thank you!
Meh. I really tried my best to make it line up... maybe I should try another shape or something. whee
I think it's the first time I added wisps of hair, too. O_O
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:18 am
I guess I really should reduce the number of edits I post here >.< ...but I can`t resist sweatdrop .......
A custome I did .......the base is from my customer....but I did the crappy hand holding the apple >.>
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:18 am
darumapyon
I guess I really should reduce the number of edits I post here >.< ...but I can`t resist sweatdrop .......
A custome I did .......the base is from my customer....but I did the crappy hand holding the apple >.>Only thing I see wrong with that is the apple looks to real for the avatar. Other than that, it looks GREAT!
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:11 pm
 It looks a lot better now. @_@ Edited the Staff of Angels a bit (bottom), added a piece of hair to the bottom... replaced the "scary" mouth. xd What say you? smile
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:23 pm
XxCleaNessxX It looks a lot better now. @_@ Edited the Staff of Angels a bit (bottom), added a piece of hair to the bottom... replaced the "scary" mouth. xd What say you? smile She looks P'ed off!
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:27 pm
Shinobu_Teiin XxCleaNessxX It looks a lot better now. @_@ Edited the Staff of Angels a bit (bottom), added a piece of hair to the bottom... replaced the "scary" mouth. xd What say you? smile She looks P'ed off! "Pissed?" confused
She's supposed to look pissed off. She's attacking, for Christ's sake! xd xd
P.S: Posted part 9 of the chat on GameFAQs... just letting yah know. razz
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 11:37 pm
O_O Whoa i completely forgot we had this thread lol xD
Meant to be Kos-Mos
I have no idea what version it is.
I realise it looks quite shotty but eh xP.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 10:56 am
Pounded O_O Whoa i completely forgot we had this thread lol xD
Meant to be Kos-Mos
I have no idea what version it is.
I realise it looks quite shotty but eh xP. Ah, I always like to see custom eyes made for avatar edits... Very nice 3nodding You pulled them off quite well.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 12:11 pm
darumapyon: The arm with the apple looks a little too long, but otherwise it's a fantastic edit!
 
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 1:31 pm
Sin Marai
darumapyon: The arm with the apple looks a little too long, but otherwise it's a fantastic edit!
...nyo I thaught the same and shortened it...but that looked wrong either >.<
....I like your two edits ...though the "dress" of the angel looks a bit dirty because of the shading (<---that`s the mean thing when you do shades for white clothes)
what I really love are the dark wings ...they kook so feathery
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