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 Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:03 pm
Hope you start feeling a bit better Fish.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:04 pm
Just be the one to hold my hand.
Can't you just pick me to be your 'right now' man?
Being together...
It doesn't mean "forever."
When did dating have to be start being so serious?
Can't write.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:06 pm
It wasnt that bad, you just didnt use the right wor.ds in some places
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:07 pm
Seaphron It wasnt that bad, you just didnt use the right wor.ds in some places Like what? It's not just that, I just can't keep adding to it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:11 pm
Just be the one to hold my hand.
Can't you just pick me now to be your man?
Being together...
It wont be "forever."
When did dating have to be so clevar.
I dont really know that is how it read in my head.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:15 pm
Seaphron Just be the one to hold my hand.
Can't you just pick me now to be your man?
Being together...
It wont be "forever."
When did dating have to be so clevar.
I dont really know that is how it read in my head. Ah. Yeah, I can see how some of that sounds better.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:18 pm
Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:18 pm
Are you writing the poem for anything in particular or are you just writing?
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:19 pm
Seaphron Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend Yeah. sweatdrop Although, since a lot happened, not much has happened.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:20 pm
Meta_Fish Seaphron Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend Yeah. sweatdrop Although, since a lot happened, not much has happened. That is good though isnt it?
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:20 pm
Demonix13 Are you writing the poem for anything in particular or are you just writing? Just writing. I've written a few today, because I'm just full of... emotions.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:21 pm
Seaphron Meta_Fish Seaphron Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend Yeah. sweatdrop Although, since a lot happened, not much has happened. That is good though isnt it? Good and bad. I'm still on hold. Which also means I'm still not rejected.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:23 pm
Meta_Fish Seaphron Meta_Fish Seaphron Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend Yeah. sweatdrop Although, since a lot happened, not much has happened. That is good though isnt it? Good and bad. I'm still on hold. Which also means I'm still not rejected. Good reasoning.
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:23 pm
If I ask, will I get any answers?
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:27 pm
Seaphron Meta_Fish Seaphron Meta_Fish Seaphron Yeah, does not suprise me that you are having trouble thinking of something you have wrote like seen good ones lately and alot has happend Yeah. sweatdrop Although, since a lot happened, not much has happened. That is good though isnt it? Good and bad. I'm still on hold. Which also means I'm still not rejected. Good reasoning. I guess. That's probably a first for me. Heh. Demonix13 If I ask, will I get any answers? Nope. Sorry, but it's kinda personal. I just like to post my 'prose.'
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