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 Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:04 pm
These two days had better help.
D:
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:04 pm
Tatsuman Meta_Fish Tatsuman Meta_Fish I feel empty. It's like I'm alone. My heart's been turned to stone. So I hand it to you, baby~ " Together?" You say maybe~ And then you turn. And you drop it. When you see him again! And my heart is broken! I'm naught but a man! So I pick up the pieces! And I try to move on~ But it seems my Alexandra, has now become Dawn. Yeah, she's now become Dawn.
Not bad with the rhyming. Not much for poetry myself, though.Thanks. It actually means something that you read it, let alone said something about it. It's more of a lyrical piece, I guess, because I sang it in my head.
I read everything in here. I'm not too good at keeping quiet. 
Ah. I kinda figured that. The 3rd and last line sounded song-ish It would sound better as a song. Kind of Emo-rockish.
Maybe a power ballad...
Either way, I flows better when reading it as if a song, if that makes any sense.It does. Thanks, Tats. Thank you. People do care.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:08 pm
Meta_Fish Tatsuman Meta_Fish Tatsuman Meta_Fish I feel empty. It's like I'm alone. My heart's been turned to stone. So I hand it to you, baby~ " Together?" You say maybe~ And then you turn. And you drop it. When you see him again! And my heart is broken! I'm naught but a man! So I pick up the pieces! And I try to move on~ But it seems my Alexandra, has now become Dawn. Yeah, she's now become Dawn.
Not bad with the rhyming. Not much for poetry myself, though.Thanks. It actually means something that you read it, let alone said something about it. It's more of a lyrical piece, I guess, because I sang it in my head.
I read everything in here. I'm not too good at keeping quiet.
Ah. I kinda figured that. The 3rd and last line sounded song-ish It would sound better as a song. Kind of Emo-rockish.
Maybe a power ballad...
Either way, I flows better when reading it as if a song, if that makes any sense.It does. Thanks, Tats. Thank you. People do care. No problem.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:20 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:22 pm
Singing Rage Against The Machine songs. Despite the fact that my brother made ANOTHER loud noise.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:22 pm
Wha? What is it? Qu'est vers le haut ?
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:27 pm
Lavableman Singing Rage Against The Machine songs. Despite the fact that my brother made ANOTHER loud noise.
Ah. I thought you might've had a bad sexual encounter with a paper shredder.
Ouch.
Anyway, good luck with shutting up your brother.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:30 pm
Tatsuman Lavableman Singing Rage Against The Machine songs. Despite the fact that my brother made ANOTHER loud noise.
Ah. I thought you might've had a bad sexual encounter with a paper shredder.
Ouch.
Anyway, good luck with shutting up your brother.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:33 pm
Parents... Bloodshed is out...
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:34 pm
He made another noise... This time by punching the side of my bed.
And 5 seconds ago, he slapped himself.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:35 pm
Great. Now he punched the T.V for saying someone was speaking French when he thought the person was speaking Japanese.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:36 pm
You just.
Lead.
Me.
On.
God dammit,
Kalli
Dawn.
Just make.
Up.
Your.
Mind.
You're running
Out.
Of.
Time.
My ******** just
makes.
It.
Worse.
I've given.
Up.
So.
Much.
But you won't even
be.
My crutch?
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:37 pm
Lavableman Great. Now he punched the T.V for saying someone was speaking French when he thought the person was speaking Japanese. Use PK Flash. It paralyzes, stuns, and sometimes poisons. Or blow him to pieces. Use PK Rockin'
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:38 pm
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