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 Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:04 pm
I'm here, I'm here, I'm still reading, it still rocks, don't strike me off the readers' roll~! gonk
Oh, did you notice that in the second scene this chapter, it says "It's all happing so fast." instead of "happening"? Just thought you should know. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:06 pm
I need to catch up with the last three chapters or so, but I'm still very much following the story. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:10 pm
Moryera Oh, did you notice that in the second scene this chapter, it says "It's all happing so fast." instead of "happening"? Just thought you should know. 3nodding I can't believe that slipped past both myself AND the pre-reader. Deep Vermillion I need to catch up with the last three chapters or so, but I'm still very much following the story. 3nodding Oh, I can't wait to hear your comments on the last few chapters.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:16 pm
OMG OMG I KNOW WHO THE SHADOW PEOPLE ARE I'M SO SMRT I GET A GOLD STAR DO I DO I?
... *ahem*
DV is much love. <3 And Much, much love for the story.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:45 pm
Okay, I had four chapters to catch up on. I'd say that falls within "three or so". xp 3nodding But oh, very nice. I liked it a lot; especially the last two chapters, though that probably wasn't too hard to figure out. Very good action scene, I can't wait to see what the future holds (for me, as well as for the rest of the story). 3nodding I think waiting to get DV physically involved until now was a good choice, as it built anticipation and then delivered well. Calmer Nice chapter: I liked the bit on DV. Although it's probably my ignorance on background Modly roleplay, I thought he just used the blindfold 'cos he was good enough to do so/wanted to focus his ears, rather than having any really neat secret powers that it hid. At least in the SoR, there are a few different reasons, some of them to be explored further eventually. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 1:58 pm
*returns from having been absent for a little while*
... eek whee
*squees and rushes off again to write an email*
OMGOMGOMGOMG... shinobishinobishinobi...
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 2:12 pm
Your new installments are great.
This one was just explaining things, but I am still wondering who the unmasked shinobi are. question
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 2:56 pm
Still a loyal reader.
This chapter is great. It took me a little bit to figure out that the two shinobi were Eter and Kiji.
And I'm going to have one HELL of a hangover in the morning. whee
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 3:01 pm
1) I'm still reading Mr. Gendou, and we still love it! gonk heart
2) Feasting on royal blood!~ Feasting on royal blood!~ heart
3) Poor Graye, no where to go now sweatdrop
4) I got a guess as to who the shinobi are, but I don't wanna give anything away incase I'm right... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 3:13 pm
Gendou The elite team of chosen were-creatures turned as * began scaling the walls of the city Should there be a, "they," where the * is? From one attack to another. Poor Legion. I wonder what Defenestrated wants with the Princess though... Wait... maybe she wants to marry her too! surprised
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 7:21 pm
Calmer Gendou The elite team of chosen were-creatures turned as * began scaling the walls of the city Should there be a, "they," where the * is? No, it should be a 'one and' where the * is. My mistake. Quote: From one attack to another. Poor Legion. I wonder what Defenestrated wants with the Princess though... Wait... maybe she wants to marry her too! surprised Perhaps, perhaps...
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 7:29 pm
More new characters.....
Yay for new people!
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:29 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:12 pm
Gendou Is anyone still reading this? I think it's time to take another roll-call for readers. My excuse is that I just moved into my college dorm three days ago. It's been a bit too hectic here for commenting. Still looking good though.
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 3:13 am
Chapter Thirty-Four is now up, and comments and criticisms are welcome as always.
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