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 Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 1:56 pm
Ergo War Codejunky
Awshume Buk-et (if we assume that it wasn't a joke) would be approved as long as there is a limit to the food that can be summoned (i.e. it has to be prepared beforehand or there's a limit to the amount.)
Sumo Strength is approved.
Shinkansen is approved with the stipulation that it be treated like Shunshin.
Iron Soul is complicated: it could be disapproved because of its similarities with the Steel-release, but could be approved if it is bumped up to S-Rank.
Necrosis: This technique is disapproved because it is essentially a repeat of the canon Taijutsu technique Oukashou.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:03 pm
Winter: Tattoo mischief is denied.
ImKotsu: Melody is denied.
Chez: Hydration is denied. Shakuton only works one way, sorry.
Reaper: We're working on your stuff now!
Codejunky: Holy cow! Get better soon!
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:56 pm
Thanks and I hope it's not too much trouble. It's pretty "loaded" in those Jutsu but that's for the sake of not leaving any holes in the concept. Though if interesting jutsu are your thing I think these should do. ^^;
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 8:42 pm
Ergo War Winter: Tattoo mischief is denied.
May I ask why?
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:18 am
Reaper: It's absolutely fine.
Winter: The technique was denied because it is a way to impart and allow the use of techniques to another without that person having to learn it. Also, essentially the only limitation that we found on it was the number of techniques that could be applied that way to one person.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:14 pm
So If all the normal restrictions such as element restrictions and class restrictions. (I had assumed these were automatically applied, and that is my fault) Along with the tattooed having to follow the same training regiment as the customs list would it be more acceptable. something like this
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Art of the Mystic Tattoo
Rank: Null Rank (S to learn)
Type: Eisejutsu
Description: James takes all his knowledge of the bodies workings,sealing, and chakra flow and formulates a special brew. James then takes this formula and using a technique similar to a chakra scalpel, graphs it into the skin of a fellow shinobi. Imparting the energy and knowledge therein.
This allows the "tattooed" target to make use of the imparted technique through the writing or image. By covertly pushing chakra into there tattoo, a tatted nin can activate the stored technique or knowledge.
This technique cost James 50 chakra more than the technique involved, and cannot be used during combat. Tattoo size is proportional to the power of the technique or the amount of knowledge. The largest (S ranks) Taking up the entire chest or back. The smallest of them taking up a finger.
The body's regular energy outputs maintain the "tattoo" and its composition, but the body can only handle so many graphs. only one S rank, Two A ranks, Three B ranks four C ranks, five D ranks or 6 E ranks. any two of the lower rank eliminates a slot for the rank above.
A tattoo of an above rank eliminates half of the lower ranks.(Round Up)
(Trying to keep with our rank scale) So getting a S rank tattoo leaves only one A rank, two B rank, Two C rank, 3 D rank, and 3 E rank left.
Getting an A rank graph after that would chop your options again.
One S one A and one B would fill a single body to its "tattoo" limit.
Normal element and rank restrictions apply to graphed jutsu's and the recipient of the tattoo must train its use equal to the custom jutsu training requirement at that rank.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 3:36 pm
Reaper: Sorry, but as interesting as those were, your customs are denied.
Winter: Still denied. With all the limits that would be needed to make it passable, you would simply end up with plain-old Tensha Fuuin.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:04 pm
Sigh...ok. Thank you Ergo.
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:01 pm
Hmm, are there no ways for me to have them work, and may I ask what would be the issue with each one that would be the reason for their rejection. Well maybe other than the powerful nature of each, but lets just take this bit by bit since I can't figure the reasons why it was denied for myself actually other than probable issue with power.
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:15 am
Character: Vosa "Breath" Sihvat
Technique Name: Duality Style
Rank: S
Type: Bukijutsu (Simple, Attribute/Style)
Description: Using Ogre's Grip from Hakyoku-ken no Kata, Breath can wield his heavy staff with one hand, and wield his sword in his newly free hand. In this state, he can use moves from Hakyoku-ken no Kata with his heavy weapon in addition to sword styles with his katana.
Additionally, moves that would normally target one of the weapons (Chakra Scabbard, Nibui Sasu [ Blunt Stab ]) target both instead of just one.
Character: Vosa "Breath" Sihvat
Technique Name: Mizu Yousou (Mist Transportation)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind/Water
Description: Using a combination of Mizutamari Yusuo no Jutsu [ Water Puddle Transportation Technique ] and his Wind element, Breath turns himself into a ball of mist. While in this state, he can instantly travel about within a mist created by jutsu like Kirigakure no Jutsu, or teleport to/through elemental mists created by Shigure Shoen, provided he can see them.
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Oh, this one seems a little trivial, but I figured I'd double-check. Can you use Shikyaku no Jutsu [ Four-Legged Technique ] on 3 legs? If not...
Character: Vosa "Breath" Sihvat
Technique Name: Three-Legged Pounce
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: A variation on Shikyaku no Jutsu [ Four-Legged Technique ], but instead of getting down on all fours, Breath goes down onto his legs and one hand, with his other hand free to hold a weapon.
((EDIT: Forgot to add the Technique name to my bukijutsu style.))
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Leprechaun and the Voices
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:50 pm
Pre-approved::
Character: Alvard Shakuton
Technique Name: Heated Air Map
Rank: *Passive C, 20 Total Chakra reduction
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 6:32 am
Id received a post from Ergo and I'm gonna attempt to correct or revise the jutsu that were declined. I'll give some short arguments to my point in being able to form them but over all the key differences is the rewards and their depths. only some restrictions will change and some maybe added or replaced.
Reaper Elyse
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Makafushigi No Jutsu: Houshoku [ Profound Mysterious Technique: Pure Gluttony ]
Rank: Variable (S-Rank training)
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu (Passive/Active)
Element: Maruton
Description: Chisato in her life's works as a shinobi has developed a specific Jutsu assortment she calls the “Profound Mysteries” because of the depth of oddities with in oneself these Jutsu spawn from that even in the ninja world are considered “hard to believe”. Houshoku or “pure Glottony” as Chisato has branded it is a technique involving both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu skill.
The User of this jutsu works by using raw chakra and further evenly placing it trough out their muscles, much like a taijutsu practitioner would in complex techniques, but this action isn't meant to attack but rather defend by “consumption”. Th bodies metabolism is improved to such a state that it passes toxins much easier with progressed training that can take on poisons of an A-rank and extend stamina under S-rank toxic materials. The chakra consumption is set in raw lucid chakra natures (Rai, Kan, Sui, Fuu) and channeled trough the mouth alone in exterior consumption. Limiting the area that this ability can consume with in and further the type of materials ingested, most forms of doton and ninja weapons cannot be consumed for the physical nature they have, Yet this improved metabolic state creates a ravenous side effect that leaves the user with a passively intense hunger, where their body burn away it's power faster and over all chakra use is increased by [10] more chakra points even when not using this abilities benefits. This may also be satiated with food. Yet the secondary pool will still persist to bleed under the fact that the hunger will always return after a battle.
The benefits of “consuming” Chakra are it's strength. The user is capable of drawing in most chakra or toxin oriented attacks, and consume them with equal ranking chakra spent (excess due to stipulations of side effect) and metabolize it into a secondary restricted chakra reserve that cannot be drained from them, and it cannot be used for Ninjutsu. This ability works for both external and internal threats of a toxic or chakra based nature. The secondary pool is capped at 440.
External costs: (an exterior effecting chakra attack or forcefully applied pathogen) meaning they can consume 5 S-rank attacks retaining 80 chakra from each, spending 160 to capture. 10 A-rank retaining 40, spending 80 capture. 20 B-rank retaining 20, spending 40. 40 C-rank retaining 10, spending 20. 80 D-rank retaining 5, spending 10. 160 E-rank retaining 3, spending 5.
Internal costs: (an biologically assumed ailment or chakra intrusion) they can consume 5 S-rank for retaining 80, spending 60 to capture. 10 A-ranks retaining 40, spending 30, 20 B-rank retaining 20, spending 15. 40 C-rank retaining 10, spending 8. 80 D-rank retaining 5, spending 4. 160 E-rank retaining 3, spending 2.
• Consumption exchange set by the base chakra supplied to the jutsu.
• Secondary chakra pool that is retained with in muscles. adept increase in strength/speed (only with 1/440 in secondary pool)
• Can consume up to a 40 foot radius of chakra, (multiple consumptions rule that the largest cost factors for all. Limit two S-rank jutsu and multiply by 2 per lower rank)
• Secondary pool doesn't drop below 1/440
Restrictions:
• They naturally burn 10 more chakra for all attacks and are constantly feeling hungry.
• Chakra retained caps at 440 in secondary pool (Ninjutsu cannot be used by this pool)
• Passive resistance to poisons, trained in ranking relative to a ninjutus's training regiment. E-A, resistance to S only double time of resistance.
• Only toxins and raw lucid chakra based things can be consumed (literally sucked in trough the mouth, or drawn from the body to focus into energy)
• Consuming over the limit causes the user to force out natural and fully viable Chakra in place of it. Further limiting them from ninjutsu.
• Out side of battle chakra of secondary pool bleeds out back down to 1/440. 40 per turn bleed.
• Cannot consume weapons made or dense matter (like an actual metal or rock) or hard doton jutsu. Drawing chakra from it and leaving the item is possible. (only in the case of some weapons)
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Makafushigi No Jutsu: Kyoufuseiji [ Profound Mysterious Technique: Politics of Fear]
Rank: A (Passive/Active)
Type: Genjutsu/Taijutsu
Description: Chisato in her life's works as a shinobi has developed a specific Jutsu assortment she calls the “Profound Mysteries” because of the depth of oddities with in oneself these Jutsu spawn from, that even in the ninja world are considered “hard to believe”. Kyoufuseiji or “Politics of fear” as Chisato has branded it, is a technique involving both Genjutsu and Taijutsu skill.
The user of this Jutsu will train and posses their own mind in such a powerful Genjutsu they cause a metabolic reaction in their body were their body will experience a “stigmata”; a religious experience where one would experience the feelings of a martyr saint. In Chisato's case she develops lacerations and markings of written scripture that is a riddled tale of madness and horror. Forming trough the flow of chakra that holds it's self in these markings and the sheer depth of intensity the Genjutsu produces the users body goes trough something of a Baptism of “Fear”, turning their hair white when actively using their new abilities. The end result is that the chakra imprinted into her muscles and skin primarily are now able to cary over her Genjutsu with out forming hand signs but simple full body gestures (a punch or kick). As well as allowing her to fight and release Genjutsu E-B rank intermixed with ninjutsu. Entranced so deeply with their own depths of fantasy and horror the user is no longer effected strongly by Genjutsu of a low base rank or B-rank and below. While using this style the user project a constant visual mental image of a Large ten foot tall skeletal giant that hovers about them like a phantasm. It wears a white cloak and has a vail composed by a crown of black ice that drops black snow flakes, and just the same is cloaked in a flowing screen of black snow. This image only becomes apparent when The user is projecting a killing intent,(fighting). Chisato has lovingly dubbed the phantom “ Judge of Kokyotos”.
• Genjutsu can be performed with touch or gestures (punch or kick) the opponent can sense trough the five senses.
• Genjutsu constraints still apply into attacks done at range (so the sense that needs to pick up the attack does still matter)
• Passive: capable of telling genjutsu up to B-rank from reality is increased(this not being absolute but shrinks the impact over all of genjutsu at these ranks.)
• Passive ability is set by base chakra dealt into attack amplifiers do not apply.
• The illusion of the phantom judge cannot be reversed or Kai'd, which might be jarring if it's not noticed that this figure is only an illusion.
Restrictions
• Genjutsu cost one rank more than their normal. (ex. D rank jutsu cost 20, C rank 40, etc.)
• Genjutsu/Ninjutsu can only reach B-rank hand sings for Ninjutsu are required.
• Genjutsu from A-S rank cannot be used in this form.
• Attacks combining Genjutsu/Taijutsu only occur with arms and legs, contact with user can only cause E-D rank genjutsu
• The manner in which the Genjutsu must be applied such as a specific sense still does apply and can limit the use of some Genjutsu that may prohibit this styles effective use.
• Only Three [3] Genjutsu can be performed in a turn using this form o application.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Makafushigi No Jutsu: Kamikakushi [ Profound Mysterious Technique: Spirited Away ]
Rank: S
Type: GenJutsu, NinJutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Chisato in her life's works as a shinobi has developed a specific Jutsu assortment she calls the “Profound Mysteries” because of the depth of oddities with in oneself these Jutsu spawn from that even in the ninja world are considered “hard to believe”. Kanikakushi or “Spirited Away” as Chisato branded it, is a technique involving both Genjutsu and Ninjutsu skill.
The user of this Jutsu Uses Genjutsu and ninjutsu to form a shadow like hand of chakra that enters the victims head to further extend their ability to delve into the minds of a defeated opponent, and pull from them their memories, yet this jutsu specifically seeks to pull forth “memories” of two types. First, the average memory that the mind has etched into it by the bodies electromagnetic neural functions, aiming at the defeated opponents knowledge of Taijutsu and pulling it forth a replica of its pattern to imprint it onto the users mind. Second, the basic structural map your body and mind develop as you grow and train your body. This very same map being the mental construct our mind refers to when destroying dead tissue and replacing it with scare tissue or out right healing.(it's a little known fact that we heal by our mind retaining the DNA blueprint of how our bodies should be goes to work in instigating the actions of the cells to demolish and replace “necrotic” cells), Rewriting this will cause the body to violently react to the current state of being to be “incorrect” and proceed to scab over as if trying to heal the body that has now become “incorrect” to the DNA blueprint. The ninja falls ill with in a day and cannot fight for a day (two days real time) . The body will degenerate to heal and reform into this new permanent structure, being rewritten in a cocoon made of scar tissue in a word this action is the bodies natural life support system to deal with the desired changes it will go trough. Almost dieing and having their body push forward by way of chakra keeping the going on to speed trough the process of regeneration (which is pretty much a whole day) Emerging from the cocoon at the end of the 24hr's the Shinobi emerges with a further refined body capable of performing expertly in the Taijutsu style obtained as well as the styles obtained prior.
The resulting body looks young, exceptionally young, but it's weight may increase or the the size may grow slightly, but for the most part the frame will increase the muscles abilities with in the limit of the other styles. Complexed muscle fibers form providing the possibility of superhuman results, yet all of this must be trained further to retain said skill, but for the most part the user will naturally meet all requirements to and gain only one reduction point to their attribute caping at the max of [5]. Their body will not change beyond muscular improvement, that by the fact that having more muscle even if more tightly formed and complexed the weight of the body would also increase. With in the first use of this Technique the user will become 240 pounds of evenly distributed of advance complex muscle and fat. Flaws in the body from prior aren't targeted by the rewrite so they aren't fixed or improved unless the style may require said over haul of the body.Completely based on the power of mind over matte this jutsu works on a progressed state o basic evolution trough our minds ability to ingrain the desired changes needed for our bodies to function in our environment.The jutsu just drastically and dangerously crosses this threshold of natural development in incredible speed. The end result is a ninja capable of withholding several more taijutsu styles by way of theft and rebirth. Spiriting away the prowess of their enemies. And finally leaving the imprint on the victims mind that the user is a natural source of fear, Ingrained in them this fear will hinder their ability to fight at peek, overreacting or hesitating in actions and further avoiding the opponent at times. Over all it shatters the ability to focus well yet it doesn't harm you nor does the technique when it's used and finished retaining the Taijutsu style, though this imprint can also be optionally withheld.
• Can grant the user a new Taijutsu style, with a “natural” prowess towards it, cap of extra styles Is [4]
• Reduction to Taijutsu learning can rise by [1] each time this is used, caping at [5]
• The users body will configure a biologically perfect balance between the requirements of the styles “naturally”.
• Body of the user will become relatively “superhuman” upon mastering all styles. (meaning advanced endurance, strength, and speed) , or better said they're particularly advanced in all of these traits. Somewhere between sanin and konin,
Restriction
• The Jutsu leaves the user in a weakened state after use, due to “rebirth”
• It takes two real days to complete this.
• All styles must be trained in to completion before obtaining another Style.
• The person that this jutsu is taken from must be a defeated opponent that has recently been using said abilities. (simply fighting with styles skill works)
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:31 pm
Leprechaun: Three-Legged Pounce and Duality Style are both approved. Mist Transportation is approved with the stipulation that the user has to know that the Shigure Souen mist is there and active and must be able to confirm this visually before teleporting to it.
Chezmonkey: Approved. It needs a rank for learning purposes, and deducting that rank's amount of Chakra from Alvard's total Chakra should do just fine, unless you want to give it a post limit.
Reaper: Looking at your techniques now!
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 5:31 pm
I will add that stipulation. Editing that in, and posting to approved.
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Leprechaun and the Voices
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Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 5:39 am
I've added in a stipulation to the jutsu Politics of fear that limit the amount of Genjutsu performed in a single turn to 3 under the abilities of the jutsu.
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