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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 4:30 pm
Hey, I like this RP, and I'd like to join. I was just wondering, do I post thee profile here? :3
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 5:08 pm
Sorry, never mind, I don't fully understand this role play. It doesn't seem explained. Are the students supposed to be born as a mutant that can change into a fairy tale character and have powers? Are they supposed to just be regular people who take a special interest in fairy tales? How does the academy find these kids? I really don't get it. So never mind, I don't want to join any more.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 8:46 am
Back, Fo Reals~
Okay, maybe not 'fo reals' but still...I have enough places I can go to in which to gather some net. I realize I'm super behind in the posting and I'm planing on reading up on things before I even consider posting anything. But I thought that maybe ya'll should be informed that I'm here and all.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 10:00 pm
Yay! We're glad to have you back! If you need a summary of what's happened, you can contact Shauna or me and we'd be glad to help you catch up. You're not the only one that's been falling behind - I've been having a bit of IRL trouble myself...thank you for taking the time to let us know and it's appreciated.
Jello, I'm sorry neither Shauna nor I have responded to you in a sooner post, but know that we have not forgotten you! Seeing that this RP is a remake, you are perfectly welcome to use the rules to your liking. However, it would be nice if you posted a link to your RP (you don't have to, I'm personally just curious about what RP you plan on starting).
And last but not least, effingarmadillo, I have read your profile and I have several comments to make. First off, thank you for taking an interest in Ever After Academy and we appreciate you creating a profile. However, you have several issues that need to be worked out before you can join.
First off, where is your fairy tale character? You've given the name of your high school character, but not the fairy tale character that she will be portraying. Each character is assigned a specific role and only that specific role. Bearing that in mind, you will have to change the fairy tale appearance. I cannot think of a fairy tale character that wears jeans and t-shirts.
Another thing is you need to add a bit more detail. You described clothes, but what about body shape? Skin tone? Does she wear glasses? What color eyes? Shape of the face? Freckles? Hair color and texture? Athletic and lean or indoorsy and stick-figure like? Any scars or beauty marks? What you have written for fairy tale appearance is still way too little. Take a look at the other profiles written and get an idea of how detailed we're looking for. That is for everything in your profile of Binx.
Her personality is a bit vague. For example, what do you mean by shy? Do you mean she'll give strangers the cold shoulder or is she the embarrassed-no-idea-how-to-act type of shy? If she's creative (for that's the reason I'm guessing she likes fairy tales), what exactly does she like specifically about her camera? Is it the glimpse of showing her own perspective or does she like fairy tales become of the freedom of writing and creativity in words? You say she takes wild adventures - explain that. Random walks where she'll pretend she's on wild adventures or does she have a case of bad luck and what should be a simple walk ends up with her being faced with a rabid raccoon? Swearing is fine, but we don't like to use it in excess (there are ways of describing the same thing without resorting to crude language though one of my characters enjoys cursing). How deep are her anger issues? Would she physically lash out at people or mentally play games with them? Did that result from the small annoyances? Like if someone taps their fingers on a desk, would she instantly start yelling at them to stop?
Her history needs a lot more work. What age was Binx when her mother was murdered? What was the possible answer? Robbery gone wrong? How did she feel about her mother's death? Who is Liz? Best friend yes, but next door neighbor? Friends since they were in a cradle? How close are they? Explain in more detail why she likes photography so much. What does she think of it? Why did Liz move away? Why would her father start to severely beat her then and not after the mother died? Who put her up for adoption? The dad or did someone notice her abuse? Your bio does not describe a very happy girl.
Also, she does not have her own apartment. She would live in the boarding school which is Ever After Academy, not High. And maybe you did not remember it at the time of writing your profile, but she could not have simply "found out" about the Academy - it is a secret school where the administrators go looking for you. You don't find them. She wouldn't even know they existed till the came to her doorstep and told her about it. And in that case, why would she want to go to the Academy? Was she just bored with the place? Maybe there's a different reason?
I hope you take my comments into consideration when revising your profile.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 11:31 am
May you be happy for Randy has returned. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 1:10 pm
so I am thinking of joining, I will have my profile up ASAP.
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 10:49 pm
Thank you. A summury would help greatly. Truthfully my main source of internet is on my cell phone where I check out the posts and then respond to them on my laptop if I can. Something that is useful when you have to keep up with the posts on the go but not so much when it comes to going back and reading over everything.
So if either of you have the time I would greatly appreiciate it.
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2011 12:17 pm
Well, after you posted your breakfast meeting post...This is what happened..
Ryan pestered Lil a bit more about Cam, and Roxy showed up to their class and informed him of the scene the night before between Pol and Martin...and then Ryan left, kinda freaking out..but he came back into class later, and in the meantime, Roxy and Sierra had a little chat and came to know each other better...
Andee, Sierra, and Marty finished talking at breakfast...well, Sierra decided to head to class. Andee ended up giving Marty a bracelet she had made (viking-ish styled) and she hugged him before she left for Drama class...(He had math)
Andee met up with Cam and saw the lovestruck look on his face and she proceeded to drag him into one of the dressing rooms to interrogate him. Which she did until she was satisfied with what he told her. He, in turn, asked her about Martin..and she explained what little she could. Then they had to go into class, found out about a project they had to do with people outside of their class, and performed one of their old skits (which will be reprized at lunch as an invitation kind of thing to their party) for an example.
Stephen ended up leaving the Infirmary after Roxy left and Andy showed up, preferring to relax in his room, taking a bath...
First Period ends, and Everyone heads to second...Except Pol, Pol's on a mission to get back at Martin...So, Pol divebombs Martin, dagger in hand, and ends up slicing his face open near his eye before Andee speeds over and pins Pan to the wall. Sierra sees, and wanted to get to talk to Martin, but she was ushered to class. A teacher comes, Ryan, who's freakin out, takes Martin to the Nurse after Martin hands the teacher Pol's dagger...Andee let's Pol down and leads Pan to the teacher before she's dismissed to class. Which, she promptly leaves after telling the teacher what happens (intending on giving Martin the work he's missing, cause they share that World History class).
Ryan had helped bandage up Martin's face, however, excessively so. Andee rectifies it while Ryan is away getting Martin a clean shirt. Ryan comes back and tries to Re-excessively-bandage Martin's injury, which causes him and Andee to get into an argument. Martin stays out of it, though he's upset that Ryan told Andee about his scars, so Martin was in the bathroom when Ryan called out Andee's crush on him.
Scarlet (Alice from Alice in Wonderland) Is brought into play at the beginning of second. She, Lilith, and Cameron all have principles of nonsense that hour. Scarlet likes to call Lilith 'Kitty' and she gets to be the audience member when Cam and Lil begin flirting and end up revealing that they have feelings for each other. and Cam asks Lil to help him with his project in Drama, and she agrees.
Sierra has second in Chemistry with Bianca, and they become lab partners for the day. However, before they can get started, they find out that Ayden is gone from the Academy, which is bad news. Bianca is upset and she ends up leaving class without a word, resulting in one extremely peeved Sierra. Sierra asks the teacher if she can just do the assignment on her own, and she can't, resulting in the two having to come back after school to make it up. As a result, the teacher lets Sierra leave. Sierra finds Bianca in Ayden's room, crying..with Pol there as well. Now, Sierra is even more ticked off at Pol than she is at Bianca, so she grabs Bianca's arm and leads her to her room so they can talk. (Well, they talked after Sierra yelled a bit at Snow White)
Meanwhile, Pol shows up in the infirmary after receiving his punishment from the Principle. He want's to make ammends with Martin, but it's not the best idea at the moment. So, since Martin is free to go, Andee takes Martin off, trying to get him as far away from Pol as possible, but Pol won't have that. He follows after them, leaving Ryan to mope in the infirmary (which he quickly leaves to go lay out in the rain on his bedroom balcony, reciting the countries of the world and their capitals)
Pol quickly stops Martin and Andee, pulling out a dagger and telling Martin to take a free shot at him (just avoid the nose). Sierra (who was making her way to the infirmary with Bianca to check up on Martin) spots them and she act's big sisterly to Martin, Martin took the Dagger from Pol, but decides to keep it and turn it into a teacher. Andee and Martin get to leave, Pol rushes off, and Bianca is sad, cause that just made things worse. She had already lost Ayden, she didn't need Pol disappearing.
Pol headed to the Neverland hang out in the woods. Andee took Martin to her secret barn. Lil and Cam ended up heading to the cafeteria after second to get something to snack on (since after second they have a twenty minute break) before heading back to the stairwell that led to the roof. (Their snacks were quickly forgotten, as they soon started making out...) Bianca and Sierra chatted a minute before Stetson showed up, which Sierra took the opportunity to leave Bianca with Stetson. Ryan pulled Roxy out of her Math class to talk to her, which ended up leading them to Stephen's room for her to check up on him (cause she felt horrible for what she did to him) to find Stephen naked in the tub.. (hilarity ensues) and after he gets out and is covered up, he kisses her, causing her to mentally freak, leaving Stephen and Ryan behind.
Randy is back, and he's concerned about Pol... Andy is still in the Nurse's office... Scarlet is in her room... I think that's it....
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 5:01 am
Umm. Okay! I have a post already in progress for Marcel. And I'm gonna post it right now. Just something to get him removed from the scene. He's more of a character to get break apart messes like this so I have to get him away from the area and completely unaware so he can properly react to it later. As for Aquila, I'm gonna type something up for her to have her in the background somewhat. There but not really willing to get involved. Hopefully from there I'll have enough time to get them both in the flow of things.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 8:10 am
It be posted Mo' Fo's!!!
I have no idea of why he wandered out into the woods just to draw something...but there he is...until I figure out a reason anyway. As for Aquila, she's gonna come up in a few....hours. I'm only on my break so I don't have that much time to type something out. Sorries~
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 9:22 am
(OHMAHGOSH I think I totally forgot to mention that it was thunderstorming out side...I could totally see Marcel outside in a storm, but his art would get ruined! [So, I'mma pretend that he's under some kind of shelter, like a gazebo or something...if you don't mind...] GAH, I feel horrible now for leaving that detail out...I remembered everything else but the rain... stressed emo burning_eyes )
xD I FREAKIN LOVE YOUR POST! I didn't know Marcel was an artist! (something he has in common with Scarlet!)
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 12:29 pm
Hee, its no problem. I'll just give it a quick fix after work. A few nips, a few tucks and a bit of improv. and I can fix it up nice.
But Scarlet is a artist too. Cool. When I was creating Marcel I was going for the whole 'moody loner with a soft artistic side' thing. So a love for the arts was definately thrown in the mix. When he was finally finished the image kinda...stuck.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 12:38 pm
I've already told Allie (the queen of the brainless) that I think that Marcel and Scarlet should have an art class together...I think it would be cute...With her curious personality and Marcel's loner type...bound to be hilarious and insanely cute!
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 3:08 pm
Edited! Nothing major. Just some minor little details cleaned up here and there.
Ha, playing Marcel against Scarlet would probably be hilarious. Considering her 'charming' nature of wanting to know practically everything and Marcel's nature of wanting to be left the hell alone...it would lead to some interesting conversations.
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