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 Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:53 am
[I'ma go last, Seeing as though I have to think. I can't kill it, but I also can't subdue it with an explosion of mines calibre... Its confusing! DX]
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:55 am
((Well if you can't kill or catch then you post is sure to be very interesting~))
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:56 am
((Only three left: Rose, Niiro, and Saki. I will wait for them to finish before I give my evaluation, but so far, you're both doing good. Meluk, your grammar is all wrong again. Sentence construction and proper spelling are two keys in a good post. Take a look at Powchii's example. That's what I'm talking about. Try harder next time and fix that major flaw of yours before you can even think of becoming second-in-command. I want the best.))
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:07 pm
[[I think someone might have gotten on my account because the password had been changed. But I fixed it so it doesn't matter. And why does everyone have to use this tiny font? It's a pain to read.]]
When Ky had unleashed his attack, Rose quickly sat up, disturbing her sleeping giant of a doll. He grumbled and rolled over, facing the wall of the corridor now. Rose's hair stood on end and a wicked grin spread across her face. So this old guy was strong hmm? She wanted to fight him now, maybe even give him a run for his money.
She didn't appreciate that he was dumping this Hollow off on the Ravens. Maybe he couldn't finish what he started? Maybe he was too weak too? She made sure to make a mental note of this, for she might be able to use this in the future. She didn't know what for at the moment, but it seemed like useful information to know.
It also disgusted her with how the others looked at Ky. Like he was some Holy Being that had been plopped from the Divine Beings onto Earth. That attitude sickened her. That was the exact same thing she saw in the small gangs that littered the streets of new York. Some big wannabe tough guy with all his minions following him around, drooling at his feet, coming to attention at every syllable he uttered.
She fluffed her spiky red hair up a bit and then turned and kicked Traigheit, not too lightly, on his spine. He grunted, turning to face her, looking at her from upside down. "Get up you weak ball of fluff! The others have already started without us and I don't like being beaten!" She snapped, her eyes narrowed. She fingered the bracelets on her wrist and gave him 'the' look.
He quickly sat up, maneuvering his bulk so that he was facing the downed Hollow. What the heck was she supposed to do with that tub of lard? O High and Mighty didn't want it killed. That complicated things, since killing was much easier than trapping. She strolled over to the Hollow, just after Meluk had preformed his own little trick.
She tilted her head towards it and put her foot down on the Hollow, looking like some early conqueror marking their claim to a potentially wealthy piece of land. She spat her gum on the floor and instead took out a cherry lollipop from her pocket. She unwrapped the paper and stuck it in her mouth, sucking on it loudly, rolling her eyes. "Traigheit." She said simply, glancing over at him.
The Giant Ground Sloth sauntered over, his emotionless button eyes looking over the Hollow. Since it was so big he'd have to hit numerous points along it's massive body to slow it down. He began to do this, brushing against the Hollow as he lumbered down it's length. The Hollows writhing slowed, seeming as if it was swimming through molasses. Rose took her foot off the Hollow and stepped back, gesturing towards it.
"There, it won't be much of a challenge now, so do whatever you want to the thing." She murmured. She didn't let her guard down though, but hopped on top of her doll when he came back to her, surveying the slowed-down creature. she was ready to spring forward if it even thought about pulling some strange trick.
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:46 pm
Ky Die Verrater ((Only three left: Rose, Niiro, and Saki. I will wait for them to finish before I give my evaluation, but so far, you're both doing good. Meluk, your grammar is all wrong again. Sentence construction and proper spelling are two keys in a good post. Take a look at Powchii's example. That's what I'm talking about. Try harder next time and fix that major flaw of yours before you can even think of becoming second-in-command. I want the best.))
@ Rose: all you have to do is click the qoute button to see it in a normal font.))
The young Raven glanced at Rose and her doll. Meluk did not apprecaite the way she treats her own doll, her other half. The thought of the way she treated it sickened him to his stomach. He turned his back to her.
"You don't need to snap at your doll. It has done nothing wrong," Meluk snapped at Rose.
The argument was no longer about fooling around, it was about the way she treated people with respect. Looking at the way she treated the snake she didn't do what he had asked for. Meluk's gun changed into black visible smoke and it turned into his doll, Death Sama. As the tall, black, white skilled creature stood with his back straight, it stared at Meluk for orders.
"If you don't mind, I would like you to pick that hollow so Ky can study it. Please," Meluk asked.
Death Sama slow walked up the hollow and picked it up. As Death Sama struggled, Meluk felt bad trying to make him do so. Death Sama stood in his place with the hollow in his huge white hands waiting for the next thing to do. Waiting for Ky to open the gate to the living world. Meluk looked back at Ky waiting on him.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 3:49 am
((Do what you want. Nobody's stopping you, Meluk.)) stare
((Okay, Niiro and Saki left. Don't make your comrades wait too long, all right? Let's get this done quickly so we can move on to RPing in our new base.))
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 5:29 pm
Rose turned her gaze at Meluk, anger sparking in them. "Don't you ever speak that way to me. You know nothing about me, grunt." She spat, her whole poster exhibiting vehemence and anger. Who was this lowlife to think that she mistreated her doll? And even if she did what did it matter to him? Tragheit snorted, continuing to stand peacefully beneath her as she sat down on his broad shoulders, placing one hand on his smooth cloth neck.
Tragheit looked at the man who had angered his Master so, tossing his huge head up and then lowering it, giving his normally expressionless eyes a menacing look as a shadow fell across them. His jaws opened, revealing large, pointed fangs. His mouth stretched oddly wide, splitting the cloth up to the corners of his black button eyes. Unlike the prehistoric Giant Ground Sloths, Tragheit was a complete meat eater, and he had the fangs to prove it. They were made from some unidentifiable, but extremely hard substance, the same went for his huge curling claws. He normally didn't use these, but he would if he needed to and he didn't like his Master being insulted.
Rose glanced down at him, surprised to see him so moved to this sudden anger. He usually didn't care about anything, being a sloth and all. She suddenly grinned herself, showing her own pearly whites, which were actually stained red from the gum and lollipop. Why was she even defending herself against him? She wasn't really sure, but she didn't take any crap from anybody, THAT she was sure of.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:20 pm
Meluk gazed at her doll. For some weird reason it was standing up for her, but why? Why take insults from a rube, weird, red teethed monster. As he thought he thought back she can have reminded him of Masato Yin, his old rival. Where is Masato these days?
At that second he could see Masato and her together, a perfect couple. Meluk nodded his head in disappointment. She didn't know what Meluk was capable or he didn't know what she was capable of. Either way they were both clueless, but that’s what made it interesting.
"I can take you out with out my doll wit my hands only," Meluk said with confidence.
As Meluk squeezed his hands his hands began to glow light blue. He had the most evil smile on his face as if he was going to kill. Unfortunately, Powchii was first on the list, but she is defiantly next.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:11 pm
Powchii Stared at the two. . . "Easy you two." he said cautiously. Powchii looked at Rose, then Meluk. . . Young ones, they're so naive. . . he sighed a breath of annoyance. "Meluk you shouldn't be sticking your nose in her business. The way she treats her doll is her worry and her worry only." he said, there was no hidden meaning behind it or any hint of rudeness. "Every doll is different, some respond to kindness, some respond to strictness." he looked at the large sloth. "And Rose," he said looking back at her eyeing her attire curiously, "Maybe you should learn to have a little more discretion." he said this trully and kindly. He viewed her as cocky and rude, but she couldn't help it because it was in her nature.
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:37 am
((Those of you who are finished with posting, you are free to go to the KyCorp Main Branch thread in the main forum and make your NESTs and train for the awards you've received. As I said before, however, there will be a bonus, but since we're still waiting for two, they won't be given out until all of you finish. I'll give Saki and Niiro until Sep. 25 to complete the mission or you three will split the maximum bonus points that the two of them would have garnered if they had posted.))
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:07 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:22 am
Meluk gazed at Powchii and turned his head. He thought on what he said and thinks he could be right, but he won't admit it. As a portal opened in front of Death Sama, Meluk's grip began to release.
Meluk looked back at Nirro, Powchii, Ky and Rose see if they were coming as well. He slowly walked into the portal with Death Sama.
[Exit]
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:54 am
smico [I'ma go last, Seeing as though I have to think. I can't kill it, but I also can't subdue it with an explosion of mines calibre... Its confusing! DX]
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:49 pm
Rose said nothing, merely snorting in response. Seeing that this little trip was over, she decided to leave. She was still angry she didn't get to speak to this boss man, but she would hunt him down later. She patted Tragheit's shoulders and he grunted, lumbering forward and out of the Labyrinth.
[Exits]
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:00 pm
((Sorry it has taken me so long to post back.))
Nirro yawned as he rested on his skate board. He found it useless to stop Meluk and Rose from fighting. Most likely they where going to act like children: able to get along by force, but only for the time being. It was quit bothersome really with the feuding between them both. The Raven watched his comrades leave, not saying another word to each other.
"Shouldn't we be leaving now?" Zen-su asked Nirro also feeling bored, hoping that something interesting would happen to them on Earth rather than Las Noches. Even thought Nirro was some what powerful she knew he couldn't fight all of the hollows in Los Noches. "Yah, I guess we should," Nirro replies to his doll as he rose up quickly. He felt a little dizzy from doing that, but still he didn't say a word to her about it since it was not a large problem. "Ok lets move Nirro," She says to him.
He nodes at her. The romaine numeral "V" appeared on the boys’ forehead. It was flashing the colored orange as he revered back to black repeatedly. A gate appeared in front of the Raven and his doll. Suddenly a pulsing vibration had come from the floor and a powerful spiritual pressure. He and his doll could easily feel it as the vibrations became stronger.
"Hurry up Nirro," The doll says to her master, pushing him. Obviously she was already nervous from the spiritual pressure. Nirro was nervous as well, but being the master he had to show a little more control than his doll. The gate had closed in front of them. "Why in the hell would you do that? We need to get out of here," She says to him angrily. "What ever that spiritual pressure is coming from I don't want it to enter the Soul Society," The boy says to as he turn to the direction of the strong spiritual pressure was coming from.
Needless to say, Zen-su would have expected less from Nirro. He cared about other people’s well being than his own, not wanting anyone to get hurt. "Ok Nirro just hurry up," Zen-su said to him as she disappeared. The boy smiled as she left. The shadow of the hollow engulfed Nirro's shadow as it approached him. The hollows head was almost similar to a snake except the lower part had the same features as human. The hollow chuckled as it could see the ravens’ heart beating faster by the second.
Nirro quickly touches the ground with his right hand. The blood of the already dead hollows had changed into steam less than ten seconds. Making the blood the same temperature as his own body temperature had made it easy to mask himself. Suddenly Nirro appeared in front of the hollows and punches it, easily sending the hollow crashing through walls.
The hollow was amazed. Although Nirro may appear weak he was really strong and faster, despite his body physical appearance. Most of his enemies would think that, but it only gives him the upper hand on a fight. The romaine numeral "V" reappeared on the boys’ forehead once more. A gate appeared in front of the Raven. "Would fight you later on, but I really have to leave," Nirro says to himself as he walked through the portal.
[Exits]
((Was this post good enough for me to learn alchemy?))
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