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 Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:35 am
(( I wont let them kill anyone without permission. smile Hmmm, i want them to attack breezeclan but there is a whole army of them. I will just send Blade and Splinter to the outskirts after them. wink ))
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:18 am
{{Dawwww. I actually kinda wanted spadey to get snatched up. Does sirin still have her? It's such a great plot twist. <3}}
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:23 am
Cometsrain {{Dawwww. I actually kinda wanted spadey to get snatched up. Does sirin still have her? It's such a great plot twist. <3}} ((Valorkit is actually in the forest outskirts. Talon sent Blade and Splinter after them. I edited the target and Sirin snatched up Spadestripe instead. >:3 ))
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:25 am
{{I see, I see. Well, you have my full approval! I'll reply as spadestripe relatively soon. I just saw a lot of editing and got a tad confused.
The one thing on my mind at the moment though:
Sirin must be one strong bird to pick up a half-pregnant she-cat with his talons so easily. :"D}}
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:28 am
Cometsrain {{I see, I see. Well, you have my full approval! I'll reply as spadestripe relatively soon. I just saw a lot of editing and got a tad confused. The one thing on my mind at the moment though: Sirin must be one strong bird to pick up a half-pregnant she-cat with his talons so easily. :"D}} ((A full grown eagle can lift a small goat. A pregnant cat is no problem. you would be AMAZED at just how BIG eagles actually are! .__. And yes, she is strong, she is a trained assassin after all (to the eagles a warrior is called a assassin. ) And dont forget Forsaken's post reply to Dicefoot. smile )
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:30 am
{{a small goat? great starclan D8 wow trixie, that's pretty cool! I'll type it up right now.}}
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:33 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:41 am
I will be the lightning... _____________________________________
[Sirin laughed at the shocked expression on the she cat's face.] "hahahahah dont worry sweetheart, i wont make the pain last like one of the silly he eagles. I promise i will make this quick~" [She flew higher and higher into the sky, carrying her up above the clouds. For a brief moment there was peace, until She started to dive downward to earth like a stray bullet. Splinter watched them as Sirin carried her higher above the clouds. The half blinded medicine eagle squinted his good eye.] Something seems abit different about that she cat... i wonder...
_____________________________________ ...that strikes you out of the sky, Avalon.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:46 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:03 pm
We are the swift... We are the strong...  Pepperpaw[Pepperpaw's purr turned to a deep growl in his throat.]
"Spadestripe! Behi-"
[It was too late, the eagle had already sunk it's claws into Spadestripe. Pepperpaw dashed forward, praying to StarClan that he would be able to do something. He was almost there, another tail-length and he could jump on the bird and force it to release his mate.]
[The eagle was starting to ascend. Pepperpaw decided to try something, anything. He pounced. He extended his claws, hoping to land on the bird or at least Spadestripe. But as he neared, the two went higher and he was barely able to brush his paws against Spadestripe's.]
[Pepperpaw landed on the ground and stared up. His heart and mind running frantic. She was gone, and he couldn't do anything about it.]
"Spadestripe!"
[He yowled as if that would somehow bring her back to him.] We are and always will be... Breezeclan...
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:16 pm
Loyalty means nothing unless it has...  Saltpaw[Saltpaw was jolted awake by yelling in the camp. She jumped to her paws, ignoring the urge to stretch and ran outside the apprentice den. Pepperpaw was looking at something in the sky. Saltpaw followed his gaze and what she saw horrified her.]
"It's back..."
[Saltpaw whispered to herself. The reason that her mentor and friend, Jaywing had died was finally back. Saltpaw was still skinny from refusing to eat, but not as much as she had been directly after Jaywing's death. She had gained a healthy bit of weight in the last little while.]
[Saltpaw ran forward, ready to help in any way. She wanted to kill the bird herself. She was determined to. Though she couldn't do it without the clan's help. She needed them to track her target.]
"Help! Anyone! Birds are attacking!" ...at its heart the absolute principle of self-sacrifice
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:43 pm
 F o r what is it to die, but to stand in the sun..._____________________________[Galestar dashed out of his den, hearing the mad cries of his clanmates in time to see Spadestripe being carried away by an eagle. His blue eyes widened in horror.
He stood there for a few seconds, feeling absolutely frozen. Then he snapped out of it.]
Letting out a yowl, he called, "Everyone get the kits in the nursery! Apprentices, to your mentors! I need warriors to guard the nurseries and apprentice dens! Find a partner and stick with them- don't scatter when they return!"
[Galestar panted. Where was Pebbleheart?! (( She's out with her apprentice or somethign, right? Dx )) Oh, what a time for her to be gone-!
Hissing, Galestar realized some of the kits were missing. He shuddered. He smelled Embergaze's scent following theirs and realized he had to send someone. He looked around, cursing to himself.]
"Warriors, quickly! Gather in the trees near the highbranch so we can make a plan! Bring your apprentices!"
[He skidded into the trees, watching as the Clan cleared. He nodded to himself, hoping the birds would take their time so everyone could get a plan straight.]
_____________________________...and melt in the w i n d ?
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:46 pm
I will be the lightning...  _____________________________________
[Dispite Pepperpaw's cryes Sirin continued her death dive. Right before she was about to deliver the final, killing blow a voice cried out to her.] "Sirin, stop. Bring the she cat to me." [Sirin turned and blsuhed as Fester spoke to her.] "Oh, Fester. Wh.. what would you possibly want with this cat. it s just like any other. right?" [She said, trying to hide her face from the doctor.] "This cat is pregnant. I can tell by her swollen belly. I have never before been able to study them up close." [Siren looked down at Spadestripe, seeing this to be true. Shyly she flew over to the trees where the half blind witch doctor waited.]
__________________
[Talon noticed Saltpaw's cries for help. the cruel eagle narrowed it's blood thirsty gaze.] No, he will give us away! I cant let Galestar have a chance at escape! I will have to silence her myself! [The enormous bird swooped down and landed directly infront of the apprentice. The force of the wind under his wings so strong that it pushed the smaller cat back abit and leaves to flee.] "There is no help coming little cat. No one can save you or you clan. There is no use calling for help. If you do not stop, then i will have to kill you..." [Talon's emotionless, merciless glare pierced through the white she cat, showing no compassion whatsoever.]
_____________________________________ ...that strikes you out of the sky, Avalon.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:58 pm
Pebbleheart “Nobody trips over mountains. It is the small pebble that causes you to stumble."
_________________________________________________________ [Pebbleheart made it to camp, dashing through the clearing. Her vision revealed a complete disaster in BreezeClan. Her pupils were sharp as she glanced at the eagles. Quickly, spotting Galestar, she hurried over to the leader with great speed.] "Galestar! I spotted the eagles from the forest outskirts! What's your orders, Galestar?!" Pebbleheart asked with loud tone, over the crying cats. [Her ears perked up, making sure Ice was in the nursery den.] Good, I don't want Ice to have anymore harm. [Suddenly her eyes grew wider as she noticed something missing.] "Shadekit?!" she yowled. [She turned her gaze frantically around the camp, looking for her dear kits. Not leaving Galestar's presence, until she receive more orders.] _________________________________________________________
"Pass all the pebbles in your path and you will find you have crossed the mountain.” ] 
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 1:00 pm
Loyalty means nothing unless it has... Saltpaw [Saltpaw heard Galestar and was just about to follow his command when Talon landed. She tumbled back, away from the gust of wind coming from the eagle's wings. When she regained her balance she shrunk back in fear. She hadn't thought the bird was this big.]
[Saltpaw took a deep breath and stood in the battle crouch Jaywing and taught her. It had taken her many lessons to perfect it, and she would use it well. Even if Saltpaw wanted to flee, the bird would no doubt kill her. There was only one way. This was her chance, she would avenge Jaywing.]
"Your threats of death are pitiful. They don't scare me."
[Saltpaw said. She bunched her muscles, allowing herself only a moment of preparation. She let her legs push her off the ground and toward Talon's chest. Her claws were extended and she was ready to kill.] ...at its heart the absolute principle of self-sacrifice
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