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 Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:47 pm
Kameko XxJennessaxX Ah-ha!  Better? Hmm... it looks kind of weird. Go back to the shading on the first one, I think, and make the outlines darker on the tan parts of the top so it's got more definition. And add some darker shadows on the triangular bit. 3nodding Ah... I do that sometime when I'm not so lazy xd In the mean-meantime, Quistis! Everything by me. Comments and Criticism?
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:52 pm
I've decided to do the Elemental Hair, too.  Essence of Life! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:13 pm
Edit trade with Razorsharpkisses. some guy from the band Gazette
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:25 pm
Ray Valentine Edit trade with Razorsharpkisses. some guy from the band Gazette I like how the shadow falls over his hair and face... but there's something about that shirt that just doesn't look right...
Other than that, it's awesome, Ray-ray!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:40 pm
A better Selphie *ugh*: Outfit: Me, Hair: Tinelle. I swear, I really don't like Selphie as a character. And she's too possesive over poor Irvine! gonk Bu-u-u-u-u-ut, the edit looks better than that actual Selphie. Why? Because her 5-year-old looks fit in the Gaia's chibi bases! pirate Old Selphie:
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:54 am
I'm not expecting crit./comments on this, seeing as how my last edit I posted (Gluttony) got none whatsoever, but after this is posted, if no one comments on it, I don't intend to go around bugging people to give me critism over and over until they do.
So yeah, critisism appreciated.
I know the robe looks weird.
.2/.7 Deadly Avatar Edits : Lust
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:44 pm
Library Girl who likes Zell form FF8. Comments and Criticism, please?
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:04 am
Curly Brace, who I am so gay for is one of my favorite characters in Cave Story. Which you should play, even if it is hard at some points. (It probably doesn't help that I'm completely insane and did all the hard stuff on my first playthrough...) And it's free! Freee! [/shameless plug]  Those are the best pants I've ever done. heart [Juice.Box.Whore] I'm not expecting crit./comments on this, seeing as how my last edit I posted (Gluttony) got none whatsoever, but after this is posted, if no one comments on it, I don't intend to go around bugging people to give me critism over and over until they do.
So yeah, critisism appreciated.
I know the robe looks weird.
.2/.7 Deadly Avatar Edits : Lust Add some shading to the bright red undies and widen the mouth a bit? Hm... and maybe snip a pixel or two off the end of the front of the shoes so they'll be a bit less sharp at the end? For the robe... well, I tried to type out an explanation but it came out really jumbled and confused, so I sketched it out instead. sweatdrop  I wasn't sure if you meant for it to be backless or not, but I added the bit behind the legs anyway. I added a little bit more on the right side (her left) since it looked a bit uneven. My folds aren't the best, so... I tried holding out my jacket in that pose (no really, I did. XD; ) and the arm's position is kind of weird. I sketched out a vague outline for a pose that'd be a bit more natural. XxJennessaxX Library Girl who likes Zell form FF8. Comments and Criticism, please? I like the shape on it, and when I look at it close up it's really nice, but it's a little dark so I have to squint to see the details. Maybe make the blue bits a little lighter and darken the outlines on them? And the ponytail-thing is kind of weird, but I don't know what the character looks like. I'd move it right and down a bit, but I'm not sure if it should be there or not.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:26 am
I am compelled to answer! I just finished my sins project. whee [Juice.Box.Whore] I'm not expecting crit./comments on this, seeing as how my last edit I posted (Gluttony) got none whatsoever, but after this is posted, if no one comments on it, I don't intend to go around bugging people to give me critism over and over until they do.
So yeah, critisism appreciated.
I know the robe looks weird.
.2/.7 Deadly Avatar Edits : Lust [Juice.Box.Whore] I'm working on a project. "The Seven Deadly Sins." I shall make an avatar edit for each of the deadly sins.
Starting with Gluttony:
Gluttony is #1 out of 7 Deadly Avatar Edits. n________n
I think the pants came out awesome, along with the hamburger. The Doughnut needs some touching up, but overall I'm very proud of myself.
(She's SUPPOSED to be not-wearing-shoes..Just FYI)
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:27 am
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:38 am
I have taken both of BattleAxe's and Kameko's suggestions to heart.
New and improved Lust:
Smaller eyes. Changed the eyebrows to give a 'come hither' look. Widened the lips, and DEFINATLY changed the robe.
I also gave her a bit of cleavage..well..a cleavage LINE. ^-^
I gave Gluttony some crumbs and chubbier cheeks.
The critique REALLY helped. Thanks SO much. <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:41 am
I love the hair, and the dress. <3
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 6:42 am
Kameko Curly Brace, who I am so gay for is one of my favorite characters in Cave Story. Which you should play, even if it is hard at some points. (It probably doesn't help that I'm completely insane and did all the hard stuff on my first playthrough...) And it's free! Freee! [/shameless plug] Those are the best pants I've ever done. heart
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:56 am
[Juice.Box.Whore] I have taken both of BattleAxe's and Kameko's suggestions to heart.
New and improved Lust:
Smaller eyes. Changed the eyebrows to give a 'come hither' look. Widened the lips, and DEFINATLY changed the robe.
I also gave her a bit of cleavage..well..a cleavage LINE. ^-^
I gave Gluttony some crumbs and chubbier cheeks.
The critique REALLY helped. Thanks SO much. <3 I simply adore those eyebrows whee And the chubby cheeks are a great touch.
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:47 pm
Kameko XxJennessaxX Library Girl who likes Zell form FF8. Comments and Criticism, please? I like the shape on it, and when I look at it close up it's really nice, but it's a little dark so I have to squint to see the details. Maybe make the blue bits a little lighter and darken the outlines on them? And the ponytail-thing is kind of weird, but I don't know what the character looks like. I'd move it right and down a bit, but I'm not sure if it should be there or not. Yeah, the pigtail is supposed to be hanging from the middle of her head. ^-^ Is this better? It's for Tinelle's Final Fantasy Collection! heart
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