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Kazzoh has agreed to temp for me during my vacation. I would've asked my jonin but I no longer consider him an Rper in konoha and possibly this guild. I actually know him in real life and If he can't contact me in anyway to inform me that he'll be posting soon, I see no reason to pretend that he is going to continue.

Well, first... You're building it like how the old styles used to. You're going to have to make training for increasing chakram. xD

Second, don't worry about mounted stuff.

Third, when it comes down to chakra, you could even operate it like the seven swords style. "Complex with X kind of chakra".

You might wish to think of stances, for terms of throwing or melee, later on.

Then possibly, I'd suggest working on things that could only be done utilizing chakra.

Mana: Okay... wait, how are the old styles like and training for increasing chakram? How do I do that? XP

By mounted stuff do you mean placing the chakrams on the person's arms?

I don't know how the seven swords style works.

What kind of stances? Examples of terms?

And how do I utilize chakra?

'Ruhi; I mean like the old formats, but I realize it isn't completely fixed up yet. You're keeping it general right now. n.n

"Able to use X number of chakram" needs a sort of training session. So the person must practice with X number of chakram, for so long.

If you look, there's some complex techniques that are actually complex only if you have raiton chakra.

By mounted, I mean via horseback or animals.

Say you could ready it for some extra ricochets or something.

Say like... A defensive stance, a melee stance or a ranged stance.

Mana: General... like... I'm not being specific?

Ohhh, just like with the one sword style where you have to post a certain number of times to learn the techniques.

Oh, you just mean that you should make it that only people with certain chakra can use the moves? Or that they can only use certain techniques if they have the right chakra?

Oh yeah, that.

So ready stances to get ready for ricochets?

I dunno if they really used any special stances in the video but... okay.

So just have two chakrams? Or start off with all ten?

Mmm... okay, so if person does not have the futon element, then the moves stay simple. I need to look at the seven sword style.

I also need to look at the Akira Arts.

Well I'm not creative I guess. I mean it's supposed to be simple since I've only seen it in real life, go for a sense of realism.

So, stage one two chakram, the stage three four chakram, then maybe stage six eight or ten chakram?

I did look over the Seven Sword style and I have a better idea of what you mean. This was the same advice I got before to use wind chakra... I think I could work with that.

I looked at the first stage of Akira style. That's all well and good for being pretty but... it is in no way practical, why not just do the whole thing instead of wasting time going step by step? And on the second stage, the Akira Snap, it's just a normal dodging maneuver anyone would do.

And if they do the stages one at a time, they could only do about two, maybe three attacks per post. I know my character would have kicked the Akira user's knee hard enough to pop the cap out of place. Or would have jumped out of the way before the chakra blast was used since there was already a slicing maneuver.

It's just... so... very unpractical and it seems like a waste of time. If they're going to fight with fans shouldn't they better study the fan fighting styles used in real life or something? Or change it to how fans used to be used as maybe a form of assassination with hidden blades in the fans.

Bleh... I don't even watch or read Naruto anymore. I do watch Avatar the Last Airbender though, so that's probably where I'll draw inspiration from.

This is a universe where people can, potentially, lift several hundred-ton turtles, spout fire from their mouths, vomit clean, clear spring water, walk on water, and turn into gigantic tailed monsters. No. Realism.