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 Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:36 pm
ℱoxpaw Let those tears fall
You gave it your all
It's all you can do
I'll be here for you
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εїз [Foxpaw looked at her mentor as she, aggressively, put her down. She began to do some serious moves and talked and talked and talked.] ''No, I won't do that." [She said firmly.]
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And there goes your pride
Crushed on the ground.
Sometimes it takes a wall to tumble down,
For you to see who's gonna stick around.
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:50 pm
Sharks are as strong.. SHARKHAIL _______ [Sharkhail grew angry with her apprentice. Never in her life has she been this angry!]"Fine then, your learning how to swim if you can't do the basics."[She snarled, Grabbing her apprentice by the scruff and hauling her to the side of the river.]"Do this again, I'll keep dropping you in the water."[She said, before letting go of her scruff. She watched as Foxpaw fell to the river, prepared to dive in if she could not swim.] As the wind during hail...
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 4:08 pm
 xxxlet me be your freedom, let daylight dry your tears...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXɴo мoʀe тalk of daʀkɴess, foʀɢeт тнeѕe ѡide eyed feaʀs,
i'м нeʀe, ɴoтнiɴg caɴ нaʀм you -
мy woʀds will waʀм aɴd calм you... ＜＜ Ｉ＇ｍ ｈｅｒｅ ｗｉｔｈ ｙｏｕ ｂｅｓｉｄｅ ｙｏｕxxx
Ｔｏ ｇｕａｒｄ ｙｏｕ ａｎｄ ｔｏ ｇｕｉｄｅ ｙｏｕ ＞＞x x x x x x xxx▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ Ravenwing // Seaclan // Warrior // Flirtatious and Easygoing (@Cupcakes: Just a reminder, 5 sentences minimum per post razz )
"So Cherrypaw's the one huh? A good choice, she's a real beauty."
[Ravenwing licked Desertpaw's head encouragingly, and it certainly was good that his apprentice has found love. Now, the most important thing for him is not to lose it.]
"No worries, try again...and remember: aim small, miss small."
[He nudged his apprentice next to the river bank, his eyes scanning the water. He saw a small carp starting to swim in his direction, and he bunched up his muscles...and without any warning, he shoved Desertpaw into the water.]
"Now!"
[Timing was crucial, and this was something Desertpaw had to learn through experience. Hopefully he would regain himself quickly enough to catch that carp.] ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃xxx x x x x x xsay you'll sнaʀe wiтн мe oɴe love, oɴe lifeтiмe x x x x x x x xxтнaт's all i ask of you... 
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 4:30 pm
I am the sand that whispers under the blazing sun. Desertpaw _______________________________
[Desertpaw felt more encouraged once he praised him for liking Cherrypaw. He remembered the night before, the warmth of her fur.]
She is beautiful...
[Before Desertpaw knew it, he was being pushed by Ravenwing back into the cold water, Desertpaw quickly spotted the fish Ravenwing wanted him to catch.]
This is the fish I shall catch for Cherrypaw.
[Determined, Desertpaw let gravity take hold, and he was in the water; the fish was quick, but Desertpaw was quicker. He grabbed the fish by its head; it was dead instantly, but small reflexes still pulsed through the fish. Desertpaw swam to the shore, tightly clenching the fish between his jaws. He set the fish next to his mentor, shook the water off his pelt, and nodded to his mentor for further instruction.]
I am Desert.
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:11 pm
 M o s s t a r ----------------------------------------------------------- ((@iZann: Sorry Zann, were going to have to postpone it, but let me know if i have any mistakes in my post ))
[Mosstar's rage grew as her warrior informed her about their preys being dripped in venom scent. Those vile snakes...how much their selfish nonsense disturbed the leader. This is just the opposite of how the leader wanted to spend her time after that dreadful war. Just relax and feel nothing but pure bliss. Was that too hard to get? Did StarClan simply prevented Mosstar from reaching that peace she desired? Its not just the time she wanted to spend in camp, her son, Freezeshadow seemed to be too dedicated to his clan. He doesn't seem to have any interest in bonding with his mother...how much that hurt the old, elderly heart.
With an exhausting sigh, Mosstar made her way over to the river with Foxfire by her side. Her golden eyes cautiously scanned the area for any sight of limp, venom scented prey that Foxfire mentioned to her. Her tail lashed angrily, hoping those vile serpents learned their lessons.
But what was this? The leader's eyes grew as she noticed something strange.
No preys or venom scents were detected.
A slight frown was noticeable on Mosstar, she she looked away from Foxfire. Could her vision be lying to her? Has she gone mad? Just to make sure, the jet black she-cat looked around the area once more, peering her head into small bushes or holes where the preys could be hidden. But nothing was in sight. Mosstar only spotted small sharp rocks on the rough floor she stood on and the salty scent that lingered in the air, which didn't contain a single scent of venom. She raised her chin high in the air, standing still in her position. Her tail stood still as well, she was paralyzed with suspicion. Could this be a trickery?
Mosstar turned around and kept her firm gaze locked with Foxfire's. Of course she couldn't judge the warrior right away, but she felt like she was being deceived. Is all her possible predictions false?]
"Foxfire...my poor vision does not spot a single lifeless prey that carries the scent of venom..." Mosstar said, over the rush of water. [Her golden eyes went into a deeper frown.] "What kind of-"
[Mosstar's eyes grew wide as she picked up a unfamiliar scent. It was very, very stale and hard to pick up, as if the source of the scent was located far away. The jet-black elderly she-cat turned her alert gaze around her surroundings, not knowing where the scent could be coming from. She was too far from camp, maybe it was coming from camp. But...it was deffinately not the scent a SeaClan member would carry.
The leader quickly pushed her nose up in the thick air, trying to catch the scent again. Alas, it was gone. Her frown relaxed, golden eyes filled with more curiousity yet a hint of excitement. It was a very warm scent, if only she wasn't so far from camp, she could've grasp onto the scent longer. Mosstar didn't bother glancing at Foxfire, too distracted by this unknown scent, that could indicate either innocense or danger.] "Do you smell that?" Mosstar asked her warrior, desperately trying to catch that scent once more.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:51 am
xxxlet me be your freedom, let daylight dry your tears...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXɴo мoʀe тalk of daʀkɴess, foʀɢeт тнeѕe ѡide eyed feaʀs,
i'м нeʀe, ɴoтнiɴg caɴ нaʀм you -
мy woʀds will waʀм aɴd calм you... ＜＜ Ｉ＇ｍ ｈｅｒｅ ｗｉｔｈ ｙｏｕ ｂｅｓｉｄｅ ｙｏｕxxx
Ｔｏ ｇｕａｒｄ ｙｏｕ ａｎｄ ｔｏ ｇｕｉｄｅ ｙｏｕ ＞＞x x x x x x xxx▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃Ravenwing // Seaclan // Warrior // Flirtatious and Easygoing "Very good, you'll make a great hunter in no time!"
[Ravenwing purred as he brushed his tail against Desertpaw's flank. He padded to the side of the river, his tail tip twitching to beckon Desertpaw over and watch.]
"Now watch this carefully, you probably won't be able to do this yet. For smaller fish, you don't have to dive in and get wet all the time. If they're swimming in shallower water, you can just swipe them out of the water...like this!"
[Ravenwing's paw shot in and out of the water so quickly that it was almost too fast for Desertpaw to see. Immediately there was a small splash, and a small carp was sent flying over Desertpaw's head and onto the pile of fish.]
"Go on, you give it a try, but don't be gutted if you can't do it yet, the most important thing is not to let your shadow fall over the water. When you've perfected it though, be sure to bring Cherrypaw along for a hunt, she'll definitely be impressed."
[Ravenwing gave him an encouraging wink as he stepped back, letting his apprentice give a try.]
(Raven's going to teach him how to flirt later XD) ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃xxx x x x x x xsay you'll sнaʀe wiтн мe oɴe love, oɴe lifeтiмe x x x x x x x xxтнaт's all i ask of you...
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:34 am
 ғ ѳ җ ғ i я є
______________________________ "Evil is often much closer...than one would expect." (Nope it's all good, I don't know how to respond to the scent though so I hope this is ok XD He doesn't smell anything but he wants to keep her occupied, and away from camp as long as possible. Is it Griffon she smelled?)
[Foxfire turned to face his leader, his amber eyes glittering with malice, hatred and ambition. At last, all his goals were going to be fulfilled, and he was going to take his rightful position as clan leader! Seaclan would be his, finally! Before he could say anything, however, Mosstar started sniffing the air and claiming that there was something she could smell. Foxfire lifted his nose to sniff the air uncertainly: no, he definitely did not smell anything. Was the old, feeble leader going mad? Still, he might as well play along with her games, change of plans - he couldn't kill her yet until he found out what she smelled.]
"Mosstar, on my life and on my honour as a Seaclan warrior, I swear I saw prey strewn carelessly around the river bank just now, reeking with the stink of venom...I would never lie to you Mosstar, I swear I saw the prey and snakes!"
[A hint of desperation picked up in his voice as he walked after his leader, sniffing the air uncertainly. No, still no scent. What was she talking about? Might as well play along, to see what she was seeking.]
"Yes...it's very faint, but I think I do smell it. It smells...unfamiliar though. Very different."
[He hoped he had hit the description right. If not, then he would be forced to kill her and silence her right now.] ______________________________
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:24 pm
~ Minnowkit ~
[ Minnowkit let out a growl as everyone padded away. ]
Why does everyone ignore me?
I KNOW MY VOICE IS HIGH AND IM SMALL, BUT SERIOUSLY!
Can they NOT see or hear me?
[ In temper, Minnowkit started stomping in circles. After two rounds of stomping, she started running in rage. She felt her temper flare, and she felt too frustrated. Minnowkit felt as if everything was cramping up.. And she started a tantrum. ]
" IM ALIVE! EXISTENT, A CAT, AND I DONT LIKE TO BE IGNORED!
SOMEONE HEAR ME! ONLY JAYKIT CAN, IT SEEMS!!!!
MY NAMES MINNOWKIT, SHEESH! WHY DOESN'T ANYONE WANT TO PLAY WITH ME!!
... I'm fun! "
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:37 pm
ℱoxpaw Let those tears fall
You gave it your all
It's all you can do
I'll be here for you
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εїз [Foxpaw looked at her mentor in horror. Sharkhail was going to DROP her into the RIVER. She began to squirm, trying to get away from her horrible mentor.] ''Sharkhail! Stop! Stop!" [She howled. Suddenly, she felt her pelt get heavier and heavier.] ''Shark-" [Foxpaw couldn't see anything anymore. She was drowning. She began to struggle against the currents, which made her body go further down the river. This was all her mentor's fault. She was going to drown and it was all Sharkhail's fault.]
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And there goes your pride
Crushed on the ground.
Sometimes it takes a wall to tumble down,
For you to see who's gonna stick around.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:13 pm
M o s s t a r ----------------------------------------------------------- ((@iZann: Haha yeah don't worry about it. Sorry about the random sniffing, but yes she does detect Griffon's scent ))
[The leader was too focused on tracking down that unfamiliar yet sweet scent. Her ears slightly perked as she started to recognize something hidden behind this scent. It was a bit familiar, yet Mosstar couldn't catch the answer. What is it about this scent that causes Mosstar to jump and get all excited? Again, there were many questions that didn't contain a single, speck of an answer. However she won't rest until she finds the answer to this one small mystery she desperately want to solve, quickly!
After taking some time trying to catch the scent, Mosstar decided to give up...for now. The leader felt slightly disrespectful for interrupting Foxfire, but still had that suspicion. She couldn't tell his true reaction, yet his firm tone seemed to partially reason with the she-cat. Mosstar wanted to believe him, but she will keep an eye on her warrior.]
"I believe you, Foxfire." Mosstar said, lying a bit. "However the venom scent in the air is very scarce, I will watch for any serpents but the chances of finding some are very low." Mosstar finished, quickly swiping her tongue across her paw.
[Her ears fluttered rapidly as she listened to Foxfire's next set of words. Quickly, she raised her snout in the air to try and catch the scent again, her golden eyes shimmering under the rays of light.] "You smell it too?" Mosstar asked with relief. "So i'm not the only one.." she purred. [The leader tried to find the scent once more, still not being able to grasp onto that smell.]
[She frowned as she looked in the distance, towards the direction of where her camp was located.] "It is very different...yet it's somehow familiar. I'm probably going insane, but i'm excited to know what the scent is...yet i'm afraid at the same time." Mosstar murmured. [Her frown grew deeper as her patience started to lose control.] "We're too far from camp..." she growled. "Quick, Foxfire, we must head back to camp to find that mysterious scent." Mosstar ordered, running back to camp.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 2:35 pm
I am the sand that whispers under the blazing sun. Desertpaw _______________________________
((Haha, this will get interesting once Desert hears Raven's advice razz ))
[Desertpaw watched Ravenwing intently; he listened to every word that poured out of his mentor's mouth. Desertpaw was astounded at his mentor when he gracefully swept the fish onto the shore with his paw. Desertpaw nodded to Ravenwing once he told him to give it a try.
Reluctantly, Desertpaw walked up to the edge of the shallow part of the river. Being careful to not let his shallow not to fall on the water, Desertpaw saw a good-sized fish at the edge. He leaned over to get a better look, the fish saw him and swam a little farther down into deeper water.]
"Really?!"
[Desertpaw sighed and tried not to think about what Ravenwing might be thinking. Still eyeing the same fish, Desertpaw found a narrow place andvleaped to the other side of the river.
He saw the fish once more; Desertpaw started running; he quickly leaped over the river again, and the fish, having no notice of Desertpaw, was swept by Desertpaw's fiery-orange paw and flung to the growing fish stack of prey. Out of breath, Desertpaw ran back to his mentor.]
"Do you think Cherrypaw would be impressed by that?"
I am Desert.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:11 pm
xxxlet me be your freedom, let daylight dry your tears...XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXɴo мoʀe тalk of daʀkɴess, foʀɢeт тнeѕe ѡide eyed feaʀs,
i'м нeʀe, ɴoтнiɴg caɴ нaʀм you -
мy woʀds will waʀм aɴd calм you... ＜＜ Ｉ＇ｍ ｈｅｒｅ ｗｉｔｈ ｙｏｕ ｂｅｓｉｄｅ ｙｏｕxxx
Ｔｏ ｇｕａｒｄ ｙｏｕ ａｎｄ ｔｏ ｇｕｉｄｅ ｙｏｕ ＞＞x x x x x x xxx▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃Ravenwing // Seaclan // Warrior // Flirtatious and Easygoing ["Definitely, if I were a she-cat I'd be swooning over you right now."
[Ravenwing brushed his tail tip over Desertpaw's head fondly, looking proudly at his apprentice. He was growing to a good size, and soon he would be as big as Ravenwing himself. It might even be time for his warrior ceremony soon, and Ravenwing was sure that he was going to turn out to be one of the best hunters of the clan. Now all that's needed, is to pass on his sweet talking skills to his apprentice.]
"Right then, let's get these fish back to camp. We've got a fine catch today, Seaclan's definitely going to be proud of you!"
[He said as he grasped two of the biggest fish by the tail tip, dragging both of them back. He left the two smaller fish for Desertpaw, since the apprentice was smaller than himself.]
"Right, you want to give both of your fish to Cherrypaw right? You can't just dump it at her paws, you've got to surprise her. Put it next to her when she's sleeping, or put it in her nest when she's away and wait till she comes back. Oh and try to make it look pretty, clean the mud and blood off...or maybe put a flower next to it to make it look special. Make sure you're hidden somewhere waiting for her...and when she sees the fish, walk up to her from behind, standing tall and looking cool. Oh, and when you talk, you've got to make yourself sound soft and romantic."
[Ravenwing stopped before he gave any more advice on how to sound "soft and romantic", waiting for Desertpaw to ask him on what to say. Romantic words? Ravenwing had plenty of those in store in his brain.]
(Ravenwing the second is going to be born soon XD) ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃ ▃xxx x x x x x xsay you'll sнaʀe wiтн мe oɴe love, oɴe lifeтiмe x x x x x x x xxтнaт's all i ask of you...
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:26 pm
I am the sand that whispers under the blazing sun. Desertpaw _______________________________
((I was thinking the same thing! xP I can see it now, when Desertpaw is a warrior, hed be sweet talking all the she-cats as well xD ))
[Desertpaw picked up the smaller of the two fish as Ravenwing had instructed. He listened intently while his mentor told him of how to impress Cherrypaw, or all lady cats in general.]
"Soft and romantic? Why just give it to them? Why be so secretive about it?"
[He mumbled through the fish. Desertpaw was confused; even though he wanted to know how to attract the opposite gender, it just did not make any sense to him yet.]
I am Desert.
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:31 pm
Sharks are as strong.. SHARKHAIL _______ [Sharkhail stared down at Foxpaw. She couldn't swim? How pathetic. The large she-cat dove into the water and grabbed Foxpaw by the scruff, gently dragging her on the banks of the river.]"Next time I tell you to do something, listen."[She said in a never before heard tone. It was a mixture of sadness, anger, frustration, and joy.]"We'll train tomorrow. Or do you want to learn how to swim?" As the wind during hail...
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Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:40 pm
ℱoxpaw Let those tears fall
You gave it your all
It's all you can do
I'll be here for you
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εїз [Foxpaw looked at Sharkhail in horror.] ''I-I hate you!" [She screamed at her mentor. She hated her and she meant it.] ''No wonder nobody likes you! You're a horrible cat! I don't want you as a mentor anymore! I hate you!" [Foxpaw yelled with anger. She never felt so angry in her life, well except when Badgerpaw did something wrong. She looked at her mentor one last time, before running back to camp.]
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And there goes your pride
Crushed on the ground.
Sometimes it takes a wall to tumble down,
For you to see who's gonna stick around.
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