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 Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 9:54 am
YoungFlame kouri-chan_xx Oh... Kitsune right? xD Well, it's okay then >.> Lol. @YoungFlame: Wall of text... @_@ If you post long can you try to paragraph it? Lol. So um, paragraph that for me >.> Thank you.. Yea sorry, entirely my fault. I edited it so that it breaks at good points in the story.
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:34 pm
Character: Kanaka Mako
Village: Sunagakure
As Mako hid in the bushes of the academy waiting
for the teacher to come by he saw a butterfly and chased
after it with curiosity. He chased it for as long as he
could, sweat mixed with dissapointment lingered in
the air as Mako walked back to his spot in the
bushes.
As Mako tried to hold his eyes up he heard the teacher
a block away he suddenly fell into asleep. As the
academy teacher passed the bushes he heard a a loud growl
and through a kunai into the spot. "AAAAAHHHHH, Mako screamed in agony as the kunai buried itself into his leg."Why would you do that
sensai" he cried. The teacher picked up the crying boy and brought
him to the medical ward reassuring him he was going to be alright.And saying to himself quietly"how does Mako snore so loud."
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:40 am
Norian reached the meadow rather quickly it wasent a long walk from the acadimy. He sat down then laid back his hands under his head and his knees up. He looked up at the sky and watched the clouds for a bit then he closed his eyes and went into a deep state of thought. He became distant to the world and dove into his memory, each one seemed vibrant and vivid as if it had just happened yesterday. He thought of his parents and things he did with his dad and friends. He kept thinking for a long time he hoped that he might just leave the world behind and become a memory himself. The only thing keeping his attached to this world was the this piece of metal attached to cloth he was holding tightly in his right hand.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 8:57 pm
What_are_you_doing Character: Kanaka Mako Village: Sunagakure As Mako hid in the bushes of the academy waiting for the teacher to come by he saw a butterfly and chased after it with curiosity. He chased it for as long as he could, sweat mixed with dissapointment lingered in the air as Mako walked back to his spot in the bushes. As Mako tried to hold his eyes up he heard the teacher a block away he suddenly fell into asleep. As the academy teacher passed the bushes he heard a a loud growl and through a kunai into the spot. "AAAAAHHHHH, Mako screamed in agony as the kunai buried itself into his leg."Why would you do that sensai" he cried. The teacher picked up the crying boy and brought him to the medical ward reassuring him he was going to be alright.And saying to himself quietly"how does Mako snore so loud."
Woa, you're thoughts and actions are waaay to jumbled. I also need a better dialouge piece. Try not to do so many actions in one post. You rushed everything and it was really hard to understand. One more.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 8:58 pm
Norian Darkeyes
Norian reached the meadow rather quickly it wasent a long walk from the acadimy. He sat down then laid back his hands under his head and his knees up. He looked up at the sky and watched the clouds for a bit then he closed his eyes and went into a deep state of thought. He became distant to the world and dove into his memory, each one seemed vibrant and vivid as if it had just happened yesterday. He thought of his parents and things he did with his dad and friends. He kept thinking for a long time he hoped that he might just leave the world behind and become a memory himself. The only thing keeping his attached to this world was the this piece of metal attached to cloth he was holding tightly in his right hand.
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:11 pm
Etsu walked up to a blooming sakura tree, looking at the ninja academy. After a few moments she sighed. "I wish mom never died..." She whispered to herself, "maybe then dad would of let me become a ninja." She felt hot tears rolled down her face. Then heard a thump on the cherry tree, a kunai knife pieced the wood. She quickly turned. "Ryu?" She quickly wiped away her tears, "what are you doing here?" Ryu approached her slowly. "I saw you crying," He took the kunai out of the tree, "So...Are you going to let your dad control your destiny?" He held the kunai at her, wanting her to take it. She hestitaed then took the blade out of his hands. "I choose the way of the shinobi."
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:44 pm
Itizuki had finally graduated and had gotten his list of who was in his groupe. Charles Dikens lol was in his group and so was Tenchiku. These were people who he had been friends with since forever. He was glad that he was in a groupe with them. Also, as he looked closer, he noticed that there was a time and place where it says their new sensei wanted to meet them. It was tomorrow at the old park at 3:30 A.M. sharp.
The next day, Itizuki sprinted to the meating place.Oh man! I am going to be late. As he ran into the old park he noticed no one was there.
"OH NO!," Itizuki cried,"don't tell me they already left with out me!."
"Relaxed Itizuki," it was Charles. "we just got here."
"Whew! I thought for sure I was late,"
"Nope," this time it was Tenchiku,"anyways, the sensei said that we are suppose to start are first mission."
"Without him?" Itizuki asked.
"I geuss so." So after they consulted, they took off.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 8:35 am
Tyranitar45 Itizuki had finally graduated and had gotten his list of who was in his groupe. Charles Dikens lol was in his group and so was Tenchiku. These were people who he had been friends with since forever. He was glad that he was in a groupe with them. Also, as he looked closer, he noticed that there was a time and place where it says their new sensei wanted to meet them. It was tomorrow at the old park at 3:30 A.M. sharp. The next day, Itizuki sprinted to the meating place. Oh man! I am going to be late. As he ran into the old park he noticed no one was there. "OH NO!," Itizuki cried,"don't tell me they already left with out me!." "Relaxed Itizuki," it was Charles. "we just got here." "Whew! I thought for sure I was late," "Nope," this time it was Tenchiku,"anyways, the sensei said that we are suppose to start are first mission." "Without him?" Itizuki asked. "I geuss so." So after they consulted, they took off. I'm not the instructor, but I'm pretty sure she'll be more willing to pass you if you space things out a bit more between your actions and your dialogue. Crystal-Destiny Etsu walked up to a blooming sakura tree, looking at the ninja academy. After a few moments she sighed. "I wish mom never died..." She whispered to herself, "maybe then dad would of let me become a ninja." She felt hot tears rolled down her face. Then heard a thump on the cherry tree, a kunai knife pieced the wood. She quickly turned. "Ryu?" She quickly wiped away her tears, "what are you doing here?" Ryu approached her slowly. "I saw you crying," He took the kunai out of the tree, "So...Are you going to let your dad control your destiny?" He held the kunai at her, wanting her to take it. She hestitaed then took the blade out of his hands. "I choose the way of the shinobi." Same thing here.
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 1:13 pm
Crystal-Destiny Etsu walked up to a blooming sakura tree, looking at the ninja academy. After a few moments she sighed. "I wish mom never died..." She whispered to herself, "maybe then dad would of let me become a ninja." She felt hot tears rolled down her face. Then heard a thump on the cherry tree, a kunai knife pieced the wood. She quickly turned. "Ryu?" She quickly wiped away her tears, "what are you doing here?" Ryu approached her slowly. "I saw you crying," He took the kunai out of the tree, "So...Are you going to let your dad control your destiny?" He held the kunai at her, wanting her to take it. She hestitaed then took the blade out of his hands. "I choose the way of the shinobi."
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 1:16 pm
Tyranitar45 Itizuki had finally graduated and had gotten his list of who was in his groupe. Charles Dikens lol was in his group and so was Tenchiku. These were people who he had been friends with since forever. He was glad that he was in a groupe with them. Also, as he looked closer, he noticed that there was a time and place where it says their new sensei wanted to meet them. It was tomorrow at the old park at 3:30 A.M. sharp. The next day, Itizuki sprinted to the meating place. Oh man! I am going to be late. As he ran into the old park he noticed no one was there. "OH NO!," Itizuki cried,"don't tell me they already left with out me!." "Relaxed Itizuki," it was Charles. "we just got here." "Whew! I thought for sure I was late," "Nope," this time it was Tenchiku,"anyways, the sensei said that we are suppose to start are first mission." "Without him?" Itizuki asked. "I geuss so." So after they consulted, they took off.
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 11:43 am
Caeral walked through the woods and noticed a bear one hundred yards away. This will be a great chance to see what I have learned, he thought to himself.
Quietly, Caeral climbs a tree that the bear will pass by soon. He waits for a while when finally the bear walks under the tree. Heh heh. Perfect, Caeral thought as he leaped from the tree onto the bear's back, only to thrown twenty feet into the trunk of a nearby tree. The bear looked at Caeral, sniffed, and walked away, not even wasting its time with Caeral.
"Owww. I guess that's why I'm still in the Academy," Caeral said with a groan as he slowly got up and went back home.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:47 am
I was wondering if I could skip, I'm fairly sure I can RP well enough, and this game system is just D20, so there's not really anything to learn.
RP Sample:
Sitting in a tree eating mixed peanuts from a small pouch, Magnes spies on a group of adults who have likely already noticed him, considering his long scarf is swaying from side to side as he kicks his legs. Suddenly Magnes feels a joking sensation, then finds himself pulled to the ground by his scarf with a loud thump. One of the adults are holding the end of the scarf, and tells him, "You're a few years too early to be spying on adults." Then they laugh and walk off as Magnes rubs his head with a sigh.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 12:15 pm
angelof_eternity Caeral walked through the woods and noticed a bear one hundred yards away. This will be a great chance to see what I have learned, he thought to himself. Quietly, Caeral climbs a tree that the bear will pass by soon. He waits for a while when finally the bear walks under the tree. Heh heh. Perfect, Caeral thought as he leaped from the tree onto the bear's back, only to thrown twenty feet into the trunk of a nearby tree. The bear looked at Caeral, sniffed, and walked away, not even wasting its time with Caeral. "Owww. I guess that's why I'm still in the Academy," Caeral said with a groan as he slowly got up and went back home.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 12:16 pm
Magnes V I was wondering if I could skip, I'm fairly sure I can RP well enough, and this game system is just D20, so there's not really anything to learn.
RP Sample:
Sitting in a tree eating mixed peanuts from a small pouch, Magnes spies on a group of adults who have likely already noticed him, considering his long scarf is swaying from side to side as he kicks his legs. Suddenly Magnes feels a joking sensation, then finds himself pulled to the ground by his scarf with a loud thump. One of the adults are holding the end of the scarf, and tells him, "You're a few years too early to be spying on adults." Then they laugh and walk off as Magnes rubs his head with a sigh.
Pass. Eventhough you know D20, please take a look at the system. It is quite different from your normal system. And please note, that skipping this academy doesn't mean you skip time as an Academy Student in the rp.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 2:05 pm
ok im not really sure if i`m supposed to post here yet, but i want to get ten post`s in before i get banned for not really knowing what to do. i`m currently trying to get into a village and i`m learning the game system. Jake woke up to a song that he didn't know,it annoyed him, so without thinking he made a swiping move at his alarm-radio and knocked it to the floor. A moment later when Jake had actually woken up he noticed what he had done and quickly looked at the floor. There layed his radio kinda smashed from the drop, luckily it was in that bad of a condition that it wouldn't work anymore. Jake lay back against his pillow which was propped up against his wall, in fact all he really had was two mattress stacked on each other since he didn't have enough money to afford a bed. He heard screamimg comeing from the room next door to him, the couple never seemed to got along with each other.
"bloody hell, cant they give it a rest for one day"
Jake said rolling out of his bed not being able to sleep anymore,he looked at his clock and noticed it was nine O` clock in a half an hour he would have to be at work. He jumped u[ and rushed for the bathroom remembering his clock was off be ten minutes. He quickly ripped off his paints and jumped into the shower not waiting for it to warm up. he then jumped out, found some cloths, grabbed a cold pop-tart and ran out the door and down the street not having a car.
when he finally arrived at the music store, which was nothing more then a big room with instruments in it, he went throw the door breathing hard had many eyes looking at him.
"what, i`m only a minute late"
He said to the customers who continued to stare at him, but then went back to there shopping. Jake grabbed a magazine from a stand and jumped behind the counter to sit on his comfortable chair and just read, since no one really bought anything. Everyday it was the same he would be late, his partner would yell at him for making him wait longer before he could clock out,and he would just read the day away. Thats from a diffrent rp, i just didn`t want to write a whole new one out. But if you want be to please just tell me so.
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