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 Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:04 pm
Character: Max Uchiha
Technique Name: Katon Oni
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Max summons 2 Five foot tall fire demons to do his bidding. They last for 8 post, and obey simple commands. These demons are essentially Gennin with no jutsu, but proficient striking and grappling capabilities. They at composed of fire and obviously cause burns.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Ecstasy Bite
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Max’s bite triggers a Genjutsu that orgasmic ecstasy in the bitten, distracting from the actual bite, and making the target much less likely to resist . this can become addictive because of the brains release of serotonin. The genjutsu last as long as the bite is maintained, and because of it's direct feed it cannot be kai'ed out of.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha(when Chunnin)
Technique Name: Ring of Fire Deception
Rank:A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon/Genjutsu
Description: Max catches the the target in a genjutsu with a verbal line and a snap of his fingers. the genjutsu surrounds both Max an the target in a ring of fire 8 feet high. The fire is an illusion, but to the target seems completely real. Causing heat, light, and pain. Max of course can move between these flames ,using the flames as obscuring cover. on Max's discretion, but normally the next post, A pillar of real fire crashes into the entirety of the circle.
Not sure if we counted this out or not....
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Shadow Clone Bite
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: Max makes a handseal, and Through his opponents shadow a shadow clone rises half way to bite down on the calf or ankle, and begin to drain blood. Bite and drain jutsus/attributes can be applied through this clone.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:45 pm
Reaper Elyse
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Haikiryou kankaku [Displaced Sense]
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: (with use of proper hand signs and any contact with the individual on the plain of the five senses can this be performed) This ability can use knowledge of the chakra channels of the mind to confuse ones senses with one another. Making the relived oran responsible for this sense transmit one of the five sense to the wrong neural receptor making one see sound, or feel a smell. This technique can work to confuse and or aid a fighter who has a failing sensory organ and have another that better works at it's job fill in and insist to improve this senses use in the user. Playing both a benefit and deteriorating role the strength of this Jutsu is according to how fast one can adapt to having your eyes perception of light make you smell that light (a bit of imagination can fit in here as to what light may smell like to ones minds perception) instead of properly seeing it and seeing what abstraction of sight visually seeing smells would hold. In terms of switching any sense with sight, the visual seen will become some surreal abstraction of what lengths that organ perceives the world unlike sight. This can further divert pain into a bad smell or sharp defining sound. Last for three turns
Cross over effects (you refference the two that were switched when affected)
~Sight Crosses; all sight based switches involves replacing normal visions of light becoming blurred or out right muted onto blurry configurations of what you may normally see.
xhearing, sight with hearing consist of losing sight full range of detail when perceiving and object, such as color or visible texture. you're visions range grows to a 360 degree radius, much like your hear and your sight is only in response to sound(imagine your peripheral vision going so much in comes all the way around), looking much like a echolocation device in black and white.
xtastes, aligned with smell taste can be apprehend from the taste of particles in the air,over all you're blind unless you breathing can pick up the particles and help you read whats in the area. each taste coming as a flash of the general lay out of where you are as your mind constructs it.
xsmell, much like taste it goes by what one can smell in the air but it doesn't come in flashes. Colors and shapes come as wavy blurs and motion can be fluently read better than with taste.
xtouch, touch is given to what you might feel and pain or disruptions from how you're body may feel the air or whatever is touching move about can blur or shorten your "vision" which is no more than a grayscale misty reality that has pulsing lines appear where movement or sensations spawn from.
~Hearing Crosses;
xsightit becomes more narrow much like ones sight and what one hears is in reaction to the light, so fishing light or smoke bombs would sound static or white noise. Looking at something from a distance you can hear what it sounds like at distance. all at once.
xtastescripples hearing to what you might taste, such as to say what you inhale or physically move close to to like gains a sound as you taste it.
xsmellWhat you smell gains a sound as you're mind may fabricate it. So if you sense of smell is conflicted you can not longer hear clearly. Also the winds direction may narrow your hearing like such as how smells can be kept hidden when moving down wind.
xtouchwhat you body feels is what you hear, and constant touch is translated as static or a constant low tone. (clothing counts) yet sound or vibrations in the air can act to be taken in much like how you ear works, over all making you hearing much more sensitive though muffled.
~Smell Crosses;
xsightwhat you see has a smell and intensity of light can inflict different levels of what can or can't be smell at distance of sight. (your mind assigns a smell to everything even odorless things, by what you'd expect something to smell. even if you haven't knowledge of it's smell already)
xtastes Smell and taste being closely related the two really don't differentiate much rather than switching to point of where the effect comes across. So what you smell will be experienced with a taste of of equal "texture" and flavor", flavor being closely relating to how pungent or pleasant something is.
xhearingYou smell grows to a point of not being pungent by degree of how load and clearly heard something is. how pleasant a sound is decides scent along with rhythm.
xtouchThe sensation and how you're body reacts to something such as the pain, o pleasure decides on the same scale what you're mind assigns to the smell received from the sensation.
~Touch Crosses;
xsightWhat you feel is what you see in a word, but to be more exact it comes to light sensitivity. your sense of feeling is passed on where you focus your eyes, and the more intense or glaring the image the more painful or softer light makes it more pleasant in sensation. You can also feel view motions as well, like pulses in you skin or pressure cluing you into direction or speed and weight ow what's moving, but ti's all jarring to comprehend at firs.
xtastesWhat you feel is contradicted by what you can taste flavor and contradicts sensation, so the pleasure and pain receptors are primarily what switch as you may breath in foul tasting air particles you will feel pain or or throbbing from the type of stick it may be and the same go's for sweet smelling things.
xsmellSame as taste it all about pain and pleasure and how they're crossed between the senses.
xhearingYou feel what you hear, so your sense of feel is slightly lengthened and more sensitive just as hearing would be effected. sounds that would catch you attention can be felt and tingling or actual forces of pressure on your body load and agonizing sound result in in sharp pain, same go's for pleasant sounds as the inverse effect.
~Tastes Crosses;
xsightTaste into sight is again influenced by the wavelengths of light you see interpreting the flavor and texture of what you might taste. Meaing something that's harsh or conflict your vision or lack of light may have you taste receptors react as if they were becoming numb, while in normal vison you constantly taste the difference in the colors and things you se as what flavors the mind may fill in to it's understanding.
xhearingthe feelings you may get with hearing such as knowing how load something is to distance and so on translates volume into the flavors pungency, and the rhythm or point of how pleasant of bad it is decides flavor.
xsmell These two don't really effect each other so much since smell and taste are closely related already, but the length of how well you taste things you breath in stronger than you are abel to judge the scent.switching them more over changes the focus. of what you can do at distance.
xtouchwell over all you senses of taste kind goes numb unless you're specifically touching something pleasant or painful, where it will give you a texture and a slight sense of flavor.
I think I should point out that no matter how you twist it this is a genjutsu that leaves space for interpretation on what one understands for the mid field on the extremes of pain or pleasure that may be exchanged between the senses and their receptors. I don't think the interpretive side of this technique hinders so much as makes it something that deserves thought on the rp'ers side which I don't think hurts it, it establishes it's goal (confusion and disorientation) and leaves room for someone to truly have to write there way trough the experience. Even with this listing the idea isn't something overcome right away. Which in my opinion is the strength of inventing this jutsu. No mater the level with out strength in dealing with Taijutsu this technique is highly effective in it's goal. Which is the point it twist perception and they may out coordinate yourself. Though if you want I could put a limit on use per fight like maybe a cool down or a number of uses per fight.
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Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:22 pm
Name: Awshume Buk-et
Rank: C
Type: Awesomeness? Personal/Unique [Supplementary]
Description: A round bucket of crimson and white to match Rufio’s attire. Within the bottom is a dimensional contract where he can summon a various sorts chicken, ribs, and BBQ ham. Awesome in the palm of his hand.
Name: Sumō no tsuyo [Sumo Strength]
Rank: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Description: A unique progression of weight training: Similar to the same property absorbing materials as chakra knifes utilized by the Nara clan, these paper tags, identical in size to that of exploding seals are fitted around the wrist like bracelets. Special sealing’s have been written on them to function as a passive collection box for Rufio’s excess chakra while in an idle state. It operates by him funneling chakra into the seals, which will then simulate a great multiplication of pounds (max: 250lbs) attached to his limbs without actually increasing their physical mass, making them practical for everyday use. Once ripped off, Rufio is granted a massive increase in strength unmatched by routine weight training methods.
Name: Shinkansen
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: A rapid form of moment forged from the understandings and mastery of the wall and water walking skill along with the basic application of utilizing chakra to enhance the rate of movement. In masterful synchronization, Rufio alternates powerful chakra charged footwork while adhering himself to the terrain once arriving to the estimated destination, granting him outstanding control and speed as he can move in short distances that extend beyond the rate of a common shunshin (0-10meters), In addition it produces a delayed image to the untrained or inexperienced eye, making tracking the user’s movements exceedingly difficult.
(shun) = moment, second, instant
(kan) = interval, space, between
(shunkan) = instant, moment, second
(i) = move, shift, change
(do) = move, shift, change
(ido) = movement, migration, removal
Name: Tetsubou Zenrei [Iron Soul]
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: This technique involves Rufio shunting a substantial amount of chakra inward. His chakra penetrates the skin, flesh, bone, and also saturates the blood stream in order to exponentially augment both his defensive and offensive capabilities for 1 second. The technique is wrongly named, for it is actually Rufio's physical body that takes on a natural state stronger than steel which is more than effective as it grants Rufio twice his previous durability.
Requirements: With such large amounts of chakra being diverted into his body, It requires a cool down time of [3]post because of the complex utilization of chakra.
Name: Eshi [Necrosis]
Rank: B complex
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Given the year of training and grueling body regimens to even prepare one to have the physical fortitude to even utilize an even higher level of Onslaught of The Crow. Chakra may be used to focus on the physically pummeling the outer body and bone structure in the methods of sending tremors through the body via concentrated chakra strikes. This allows the damage of a single strike spread further along the body rather than stay secluded to the point of impact. As a signature to this method of Taijutsu each strike is recognized by a discerning clap whether the blow lands or not.
A devastating chakra based attacked forged from the principles of his punch and capable only by Rufio with a mastery of martial art and naturally immense or trained strength. Utilizing the full principles of Fujin (Power issuing/discharging methods) in short form or one inch power common to in-fighting martial arts forms where devastating momentum is focused by merely an inch width of distance between the opponent and striking limb. While Rufio immediately disperses a quick shock of chakra at the moment of impact, he produces a punch that can obliterate a small area of his opponent’s flesh a inch wider then his fist due to the grand amount of force and generally leaving a cavity therein.
Needless to say unlike the typical manner of fortifying objects or oneself, the way Rufio’s chakra is manipulated in this technique allows its impact to actually weaken and attack the structural resistance aggressively, severally weakening durability and solidity in an object. Thus, adding a slight impact to the physical body also, even if he does not have the overwhelming physical strength to perform such on a natural basis.
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:36 am
Character: Sora Kobayashi
Technique Name: Hone no tō (Tower of bone Google tells me)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bloodline
Description: Sora focuses an immense amount of chakra into his feet, and pushes bones into the ground. He then feeds all of the built of chakra into these bones, causing them to grow at an incredible pace, creating a tower of bone that rises into the sky. Sora can traverse through these bones, and launch lightning based ninjutsu from different parts of the tower, without being there. Each level of the tower appears like a lotus flower, held up by thirty bone spikes. Each level is about ten feet high, with a width of 15 feet, with a total of six levels.
Character: Sora Kobayashi
Technique Name: Etheral Serpent
Rank: Null (B/A/S)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Sora uses a low level of form manipulation, to create a serpant from pure chakra. Sora builds up a large amount of chakra, then molds it into a serpentine shape. He uses his chakra control to move the chakra rapidly to through the serpent, in a form manipulation pattern. The snake can deflect small projectiles, and block less focused chakra attacks. The snakes teeth can tear apart anything they can sink into with ease, similar to rasengan, but on a much lower level.
B Rank: The serpent is about 3.5 inches wide, and 8 feet long.
A rank: The serpent is about 1 foot wide, and 17 feet long.
S Rank: The serpent is 5 foot wide, and 46 feet long and can be ridden.
Character: Sora Kobayashi
Technique Name: Pyrimid of Bone
Rank: Null (C/B/A)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Sora builds up chakra in his hands, then forces bones into the ground from his palms. These bones travel quickly around an opponent, and then grow forty spikes which try to entrap an oppoent by closing at the center to form a bone shaped pyramid.
C Rank: Circle around the opponent is ten feet in diameter, and the spikes go 15 feet high in the air, before closing.
B Rank: Circle around the opponent is 15 feet in diameter, and the spikes go 25 feet high in the air, before closing.
A Rank: Circle around the opponent is 20 feet in diameter, and the spikes rise 40 feet high, and close as they leave the ground.
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 9:13 am
Apologies for the delay in judgments. Many of our approval crew have been off working on other parts of the guild; as of right now, all Jutsu posted since Winterwolf's posting last Thursday have been submitted for discussion.
@ Winter: Apologies for the delay of your customs. We're working on it.
@ Reaper Elyse: Feel free to do so! We will no longer consider your technique unless you wish to resubmit it.
@ Codejunky: Just for clarification, what do the notes after Shinkansen do? Are they just notes on the name, or what?
@ ImKotsu: I do not believe that Google has lied this time.
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:21 am
Character: Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Frankenstein monster
Rank: B
Type: Medical
Description: Sebastian, taking a dead corpse, uses his extensive medical knowledge to modify and reenforce the corps, adding in (steel plates, knives, claws, ect). Once this is done, Sebastian will restart the heart of the body, allowing it movement. At a higher level, the ninja can expand a higher chakra to allow for more sophisticated, more articulate, and more powerful movements.
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 12:14 pm
Reaper Elyse
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Kuro Kousetsu no jutsu [ Black Snow Technique]
Rank: D,B,A (you train according to your rank, having the post for each level add together for the over all technique.)
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The Black Snow Genjutsu art is something of Chisato's specilized technique that introduces a passive genjutsu illusion of an aura that effects all five senses. It works by the Genjutsu permeating from a physical body the shinobi has to decide specifically to assign this Jutsu to. There are three stages to the "Black Snow" the first is of the "Fractal Cloak" (stage one, D-rank), where the shinobi can only apply the Genjutsu aura onto a single object they are touching constantly. The jutsu is applied by first completing the required hand signs and gliding ones hand over the objet they are wearing. The Aura's genjutsu takes effect by how the opponent experiences the object that is covered in the illusion of a fragmented and flacking black cloaked item that wisp about the shinobi. Upon seeing, hearing as in when it's close by or maybe it fluttering in the wind, smelling (not likely), tasting (not likely) or feeling this cloaked item.The visage of the black snow spreads from the point where the item was touched to it's entire form in a turn. The opponent will experience a shifting experience as if they were being drawn in by the sight of this object, and when coming sloe to touching it they feel and imagine a cold darkness where they have no voice. Strikes that meet this item seem to loose contact with the wearer and leave a chilling sensation on the opponent as the withdraw, not matter what they're wearing leaving them with a freeze burn sensation (first degree frostbite). If held long enough to the object the opponent will see builds of black flacks that can be called "black snow" that vanish something like smoke. This can last for up to three turns.
"Translucent Figure" (Stage two, Rank B) spreads the illusionary aura of the black snows ever flowing out flakes of dark ice crystals into the user themselves having their form seem slightly intangible, but still can be hit. Now their entire body can cause the effects of the former ability no longer restricted to single the item. Now strikes or forward motions from the user will cause an intense feeling of frost "burn" (second degree frostbite) when the user attacks. This form can last for four turns.
"Dark Space" (Stage three, Rank A) Dark space compounds the last two forms and finishes it with a field shift where the air and area around the user and the combatants they're are facing shift as they all are captured with in the Genjutsu. The black snow isn't no longer only permeating from the user but falling from the sky which has gone dark. The snow fall becomes a blizzard which greatly hinders the opponent almost freezing them in their tracks. The blizzard causes third degree frostbite that damages nerves that can carry on after the jutsu ends if the opponents doesn't notice it's a Genjutsu. Falling into the illusion of the blizzard the user is hidden and capable of attacking the enemy in the confusion.
~This last for five turns and all stages cannot be performed one after another, a period of five turns must pass before this jutsu can be used again in any of it's stages.
Black snow is an illusion that's applied to the users clothing, and has to be touching them to work (that is what I mean by "with in the users grasp") and it acts like an aura, but it's a figment that conflicts with all the senses. It only works on clothing no weapons at this level. As for how it comes across and what time it'll take for them to see the black snow i'll elaborate on That. Note that his ability may grow though I think I might just further elaborate on it' different levels in this one Jutsu, so to accretion it's ability across it's three stages. I'd only waned to describe the first levle but to describe it in full length I think it'll make more sense now.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Waku [ Frames ]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: By using her Genjutsu in a powerful and precise focus on a recent series of events, Chisato is capable of reaching into the recesses of someones given memory in a day and have them repeat said action of that day; devoid of knowledge of their surroundings. Believing they were back where they were doing what they did. Literally taking them from one framed moment in their day to another and having them uncontrollably repeat it as they become lost to the notion that they weren't intending on doing so again. More actively in battle chisato can have a fighter repeat an action she'd survived or had faired badly because of her ill preparation and with out their full knowledge repeat said action where she would know their every move within said "plan" and further more be able to react efficiently so to both force them to reuse a certain level of chakra and unwittingly open themselves to a series of counter strikes.
Last for one turn and draws text of repeated moment from one of the old post from opponents past post. The following post after use the opponent must repeat said text of action, but after post opponents ability to respond or adapt doesn't change.
At least three turns must pass before this can be used.
The "frame" can only capture three actions with in a post.
note repeating action doesn't stop them from noticing what the user is doing in live battle.
Following post is free for them to react or try to dodge counter.
I'd argue that frames is fair under the understanding that the person though repeating an action to start with and my own actions being aligned to counter it. It still leaves room in the following post as to the response to my actions. The basic form of RP'ing permits the opponent a chance to adapt however they can that maybe outside of my characters knowledge to gain ground or procure a safe recovery from this action. I can't say my attacks hit, I can only set up my attacks with the intention to hit with the slight edge of knowing what might come. There for it's not auto-hitting but rather a tactical play on their minds. Making them think I can see trough their moves and therefore I can claim some ability to respond better, but it doesn't stop their characters from acting past the frame they'd repeat. ThoughI'd suggest my frames may need a limit on the size of said frame. As to say it can only capture three actions the opponent will do in a series (meaning one after the other)
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Sosei Koukotsu [ Rejuvenation Trance ]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Focusing on her possible need to rejuvenate her depleted chakra Chisato has developed a Genjutsu trance that can force her body to focus on drawing back lost chakra, but it comes at the cost of her not being able to use both Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu after it's activated. Now the user is restricted to simple and low level (stage three) complex Taijutsu techniques. Yet as their minds are under a trance they're consciousness and susceptibility to Genjutsu drops, where only physical contact will enter them into Genjutsu. Moving and acting much like zombies the user would feel as if they have no mind from the depth of the trance, speed and strength increase slightly. Over all in this trance they regain 35 chakra points per turn of activation with in the cap of their maximum chakra pool (what's listed as you're starting pool on you're profile). This last for five turns. Can be dispelled by "Echo clarity" even at distance.
You're correct about the taijutsu techniques only and pretty much no other techniques. The return is correct as well, but it's 35 chakra each turn it's active which is limited to 5 turns. the cap is the hight of you'r chakra when the fight begun, meaning you can't retain excess chakra from you're normal limits that's found on your profile. I hope that cleared that up.
also note that Genjutsu are less effective at a distance with this technique active.
[edit] 8/30
I removed Receiver needle because I think i've got a better way to make them than having it act as a ninjutsu effect. So yeah it's down to three jutsu I need looked over.
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:49 am
Winter
Katon Oni is approved with the stipulation that it be made A-Rank.
Ecstasy Bite is approved as long as the user is immobilized while using it.
Ring of Fire is disapproved because it is too complicated to be one technique and because the probability for auto-hitting to occur is too high.
Shadow Clone Bite is approved as long as it is altered so that it clearly states that it can only steal techniques that the user can naturally use (original two elements, Maruton, etc.).
Codejunky
Awshume Buk-et (if we assume that it wasn't a joke) would be approved as long as there is a limit to the food that can be summoned (i.e. it has to be prepared beforehand or there's a limit to the amount.)
Sumo Strength is approved.
Shinkansen is approved with the stipulation that it be treated like Shunshin.
Iron Soul is complicated: it could be disapproved because of its similarities with the Steel-release, but could be approved if it is bumped up to S-Rank.
Necrosis: This technique is disapproved because it is essentially a repeat of the canon Taijutsu technique Oukashou.
Imkotsu
Tower of Bone is approved if it is bumped up to A-Rank and if the user can only launch Raiton techniques while in direct contact with the tower.
Ethereal Snake is disapproved until better limitations are placed on its defenses and offenses. A ranking on the techniques it can block (say, up to one rank lower) and a better description of its teeth ("tear apart anything" doesn't fly, and the way you phrased the bit about the Rasengan makes it sound like that technique is necessary to use this one) are needed.
Pyramid of Bone is approved.
Elyse and Yo-ko
Your requests are being handled as we speak. Apologies for the delay!
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:00 am
Ergo War Winter
Katon Oni is approved with the stipulation that it be made A-Rank.
Ecstasy Bite is approved as long as the user is immobilized while using it.
Ring of Fire is disapproved because it is too complicated to be one technique and because the probability for auto-hitting to occur is too high.
Shadow Clone Bite is approved as long as it is altered so that it clearly states that it can only steal techniques that the user can naturally use (original two elements, Maruton, etc.).
Codejunky
Awshume Buk-et (if we assume that it wasn't a joke) would be approved as long as there is a limit to the food that can be summoned (i.e. it has to be prepared beforehand or there's a limit to the amount.)
Sumo Strength is approved.
Shinkansen is approved with the stipulation that it be treated like Shunshin.
Iron Soul is complicated: it could be disapproved because of its similarities with the Steel-release, but could be approved if it is bumped up to S-Rank.
Necrosis: This technique is disapproved because it is essentially a repeat of the canon Taijutsu technique Oukashou.
Imkotsu
Tower of Bone is approved if it is bumped up to A-Rank and if the user can only launch Raiton techniques while in direct contact with the tower.
Ethereal Snake is disapproved until better limitations are placed on its defenses and offenses. A ranking on the techniques it can block (say, up to one rank lower) and a better description of its teeth ("tear apart anything" doesn't fly, and the way you phrased the bit about the Rasengan makes it sound like that technique is necessary to use this one) are needed.
Pyramid of Bone is approved.
Elyse and Yo-ko
Your requests are being handled as we speak. Apologies for the delay! I appreciate the heads up, and once again thanks for the dilligent work.
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:14 pm
Character: Sora Kobayashi
Technique Name: Etheral Serpent
Rank: Null (B/A/S)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Sora uses a low level of form manipulation, to create a serpant from pure chakra. Sora builds up a large amount of chakra, then molds it into a serpentine shape. He uses his chakra control to move the chakra rapidly to through the serpent, in a form manipulation pattern. The snake can deflect small projectiles and weaker jutsu. The snakes has needle like fangs with a large amount of piercing power.
B Rank: The serpent is about 3.5 inches wide, and 8 feet long. Can block up to C rank lightning, fire, wind, and earth jutsu, and up to B rank water jutsu.
A rank: The serpent is about 1 foot wide, and 17 feet long. Can block up to B rank Lightning, Fire, and Earth Jutsu, and up to A rank water and wind Jutsu.
S Rank: The serpent is 5 foot wide, and 46 feet long and can be ridden. Can block up to A rank Lightning, Earth, and Wind Jutsu, and can block S Rank Fire and Water Jutsu.
(Sorry, I had a certain idea of what the snake could and couldn't do in my head, and I didn't really get what i wanted to say across. When i said block, I had a certain kind of attack in mind, well a general kind anyway. Honestly a month ago i probably would have made it more like what you have suggested. When i thought up how the teeth acted I immediately thought of Naruto's rasengan training, and what the incomplete version of the technique could do. With only one type of chakra spin into it, it could still do a deal of damage to the tree it was used on. But I guess I was probably a little dreamy on that one.)
(Not Finished! I have no idea what Im going to do for the fangs size or strength yet... Please feel free to chime in.)
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:11 pm
Ergo War
Elyse and Yo-ko
Your requests are being handled as we speak. Apologies for the delay!
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:15 pm
@ Imkotsu: Any reason for the change in the elements that the snake is good against? It would make more sense if it were just all one rank lower. The fangs stuff is looking lots better, but what does "large amount of piercing power" mean? Can it chomp through steel and rock?
@ Elyse: 'Tis no problem.
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:13 am
Ergo War Winter
Katon Oni is approved with the stipulation that it be made A-Rank.
That's a rip off, considering canon techniques for clones at A rank either explode or have the full capabilities of the user. They need to at least be Chunnin for the jutsu to be worth it.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20201015&page=2
have the crew read Azeiel's clone technique. they are weak, but you could make an unlimited number if you pay the chakra and they deliver shock.
my guys are tougher, but there are only two of them, and if I'm going to pay that much then they need to burn the hell out of people.
Ecstasy Bite is approved as long as the user is immobilized while using it.
please define immobilized, because Its hard to bite someone without grappling them, but if they need to be tied up or knocked out then that completely defeats the jutsu's intended purpose of ending resistance. They are immobilized then why do i need to further disable them?
Ring of Fire is disapproved because it is too complicated to be one technique and because the probability for auto-hitting to occur is too high. So it was approved, and then I made a small requested change, and now its disapproved. And people can alter there genetic makeup in crazy ways and shoot three dragon heads they can directly control but my combination is to complicated. genjutsu apparently has not been analyzed well , considering almost all of it auto-hits in the description itself. The ring of fire is not real, and anyone with balls is going to run out of it. It burns out the inside of circle, they don't have to stay in it.
Shadow Clone Bite is approved as long as it is altered so that it clearly states that it can only steal techniques that the user can naturally use (original two elements, Maruton, etc.).
Shadow Clone bite is not the actual jutsu stealing technique, and was only intended to be a way to sneakily close the gap for blood draining and delivering the Ecstasy bite and Chakra Vampire Assimilation. I already had CVA approved before this big list
If we are going to have some big committee of crew look over these jutsus for two weeks at a time can they at least consider the already active jutsus and techniques. I dare you to go read the customs list and look for the name "Satetsu" and call anything I have ever written too powerful or complicated. When people are walking around stealing souls, turning into giant eight headed snakes that can still shoot jutsu, shooting electromagnetic launchers that blast kunai faster than sound, and punching a quarter of a mountain out the words "overpowered" and "too complicated" are delusional cowardice, naivety, and/ or a lack of creativity.
I'm not meaning to rant at you directly Ergo and thank you for the help, but if I type this here than the people involved should see it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:55 am
Winterwolf78 That's a rip off, considering canon techniques for clones at A rank either explode or have the full capabilities of the user. They need to at least be Chunnin for the jutsu to be worth it. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20201015&page=2have the crew read Azeiel's clone technique. they are weak, but you could make an unlimited number if you pay the chakra and they deliver shock. my guys are tougher, but there are only two of them, and if I'm going to pay that much then they need to burn the hell out of people.
Chakra is obviously a limiter in all cases; without worrying about Chakra, you could make an infinite amount of regular Lightning Clones anyways. Azeiel's technique functions exactly the same way that Tajuu Kage Bunshin does.Winterwolf78 please define immobilized, because Its hard to bite someone without grappling them, but if they need to be tied up or knocked out then that completely defeats the jutsu's intended purpose of ending resistance. They are immobilized then why do i need to further disable them? Winterwolf78 So it was approved, and then I made a small requested change, and now its disapproved. And people can alter there genetic makeup in crazy ways and shoot three dragon heads they can directly control but my combination is to complicated. genjutsu apparently has not been analyzed well , considering almost all of it auto-hits in the description itself. The ring of fire is not real, and anyone with balls is going to run out of it. It burns out the inside of circle, they don't have to stay in it. Winterwolf78 Shadow Clone bite is not the actual jutsu stealing technique, and was only intended to be a way to sneakily close the gap for blood draining and delivering the Ecstasy bite and Chakra Vampire Assimilation. I already had CVA approved before this big list.
As valid as your argument at the end may be, no one will listen to it seriously if it sounds like it's meant to aggravate the situation or be an attack on someone.
For every technique we look at, we have to ask ourselves several questions before we debate it. If there are any concerns, we then have to work a resolution out. Naturally, even with only a few people, this takes some time. This most recent length of time (a week) was due to circumstances in real life that came up for several of us, and we have apologized for the delay.
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 10:38 am
Then I don't see the point of having a separate technique for this. A regular Shadow Clone will do exactly the same thing, only it will start out near you and have much more versatility beyond just being able to bite.
Surprise is the point of the technique. tell me one person who would ever expect there shadow to jump up and bite them. Its the attack vector that is not possible to a normal shadow clone, and the fact that if he garbs the leg and bites out if nowhere then who is going to dodge? once the leg is immobilized then it channels my other bites.
I'm not trying to aggravate the situation or attack anyone, and I have no idea who looks these jutsu over, I assumed you were the messenger, and not the harbinger. Hard to attack someone when you don't know who they are. I used the evidence I found for the situation and meant nothing personal to anyone, but I wanted to make my points. I apologize if you thought I was attacking you, because that was not my intention at all. I wanted to give specific examples to make the best argument.
I'm not trying to be troublesome, but just bowing and saying ok when I don't see something as right is not in my nature.
so here is the list
I'll add a note to Katon Oni that touch causes severe burns. It is A rank
Add "immobilized" to Ecstasy Bite
Scratch the Genjutsu/Ninjutsu technique
I have not found a canon ring of fire Genjutsu so.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Ring of Fire
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: with a taunting word and he snap of a fingers;Maxwell catches his opponent in a genjutsu that creates a 7 foot ring of fire around Max and His target. The fire takes on a red hue, Matching Max's clothes and allowing him to walk back and forth out of the "flames" Max can control the height and color of the flames as long as the Genjutsu is maintained. Last 4 post
Sorry and thanks again let me know if i missed anything.
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