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Chuujitsu: Uh.... Well, it's because there are other techniques later on that make use of this and they don't make sense if Chuujitsu doesn't exist? For instance, Hakken (discovery), won't have anything to point towards if you don't first use Chuujitsu on an enemy. If you meant why create it at such a low rank, it's because it doesn't do much by itself so its chakra cost should be really low.

Chikara: Understood. It's alright to add in that the user can use lower ranks to save chakra, right? (Ex: User is a chuunin, but the C-rank version isn't needed, so they use just the D-rank version for a D-rank amount of chakra.)

Kuza: What's wrong with telepathy?
Rather than all of those limits, can I simply put in a distance limit? If needed, I'll also (grudgingly) add in that chakra needs to be used somehow or other. I could also specify that speaking through telepathy is going to be slightly more distracting than just talking. I could even (once more, grudgingly) up that distraction even more. It's just that, I can't really see how telepathy requires a duration, limit, or a cool-down period.

Magen: Shikarou {Mirage}: Alright, it can be kaied out of. Although, I don't really see why that's necessary since more people probably would try and attack a retreating opponent rather than checking to see if they're in a genjutsu. Either way, since Kai is allowed, can I take out that last sentence about the Genjutsu breaking after the target uses a projectile jutsu of the user's rank?

Oh, and just in case you're going to check what few changes were made, no I didn't edit any of the changes in, yet. At least, not on Gaia.

Alright. Since the changes mostly revolve around only a few jutsus, I've posted the ones that were edited below as well as changing my original post.

Some notes:
Kuza: I'm not sure if you wanted me to implement all of those changes or not so... I went halfway sweatdrop ?

Name: Chikara {Power}
Description: The user will write 'Chikara' in the air as a force of condensed chakra will fire from the user. As the user becomes stronger, so does this jutsu. Each version costs chakra equal to their respective ranks, and the user is free to use lower ranks. At Academy Ranked,the chakra will be the size of a small fist. At Genin Ranked,the chakra will be the size of a small ball. At Chuunin Ranked, the chakra will be further condensed and will have a little explosion after impact (no size change). At Jounin Ranked,the chakra will be the size of a beach ball and can split itself four times to widen the range of the attack. The explosion of the chakra is that of an explosive tag except without the burns. At Sannin level,the chakra is that of a small child and is fired off in higher speeds. The user will also be able to fire it into the air and let small condensed and unstable chakra balls rain down on the opponent for one post.

Name: Kuza {Bond}
Description: The user will write 'Kuza' in the air through Kanji and place it on a team mate and themselves. Once the symbols merge fully with their chakra,the two will be able to communicate telepathically within a set distance. This will not work on opponents,as 'Kuza' only will work on those that are willing to have it to work. The distances that Kuza can work at increases as the user's rank increases: five meters at Academy Ranked, ten meters at Genin Ranked, twenty meters at Chuunin Ranked, one thread at Jounin Ranked, and one village at Saanin Ranked. Speaking telepathically is just as distracting as speaking verbally, sometimes even more so as telepathy is not something that is normally done. In battle, anyone who speaks telepathically must pay one chakra point per post unless they have some chakra control bonus, in which case no chakra cost needs to be paid.

Name: Magen:Shikarou {Mirage}
Prerequisites: Magen:Genkaku
Description biggrin uring this genjutsu, the user will write,after saying 'Magen', Shikarou in which the opponent will be surrounded by multiple 'mirrors' of illusion. These mirrors will make the 'captured' opponent see the user running away from them.If the opponent tried to give chase,they will continue to see the user simply running away from them,which will can become quite hazardous if the opponent isn't careful. In closed spaces they will bump into things or in some areas fall from great heights as the world outside of the 'mirrors' will be the true hazard for them.

Erm, just to be on the safe side, am I supposed to post up the clan myself when it's approved or will a crew member take care of it sweatdrop ?

Clans cannot be tied to an exclusive summon, and vice versa.

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Name:
Paladins of the Holy Blade
Description:
This clan came into being around the time of the first demon attacks, during the time of the Six Paths Sage. This self ordained holy order claims to have served next to the Sage himself in defeating the demons that roamed the land at that time. They now claim to be the ones who vanquish the demons should they arise now, and imprison them inside the bodies of shinobi, not to use as weapons, but to keep them under control until the day a new Sage arises and can once more retain the demons so that peace can be achieved for another lifetime.
Strengths:
Capable of utilizing Tenton ( Divine Technique )
Unaffected by bright light.
Weaknesses:
Must have the Medical, or the Weapon Master Class.
Can not do any evil, such as killing without reason, or even stealing.
Must follow Moral Codes.
Must fight against a host to suppress the demon within should a cloak or transformation become active, unless it would aid an evil force greater than that of a demon. ( I.e. If against lesser evils like theft, the user must suppress the host before dealing with the thief. If against someone who is attempting to kill an innocent, be it one or a thousand, then they may choose to ignore the demon until the greater evil has been stopped. )
Some techniques are reversible with mirrors.
Ability:
Capable of sensing a demon within a certain area based upon the presence of the demon.
Genin Ranges:
Stage 0 ( Sealed without chakra cloak ) - 5 feet
Stage 1+ - 15 feet
Chunin Ranges:
Stage 0 - 10 feet
Stage 1 - 20 feet
Stage 2+ - 50 feet
Sp. Jounin ranges:
Stage 0 - 20 feet
Stage 1 - 30 feet
Stage 2 - 55 feet
Stage 3+ - 90 feet
Jounin Ranges:
Stage 0 - 25 feet
Stage 1 - 40 feet
Stage 2 - 60 feet
Stage 3+ - 100 feet
Sannin Ranges:
Stage 0 - 50 feet
Stage 1 - 100 feet
Stages 2-3 - Within the same Thread
Stage 4 - Within the same Subforum
Kage Ranges:
Stage 0 - Within the same thread
Stage 1 - Within the same thread
Stage 2+ - Within the same subforum
Tenton:
E
Light Aura
Type:
Ninjutsu | Supplementary
Description:
This technique is utilized in order to use other techniques quickly without having to string through several hand signs and condensing the surrounding light. This technique makes a portion of the user's chakra become fluorescent and coats the user's body giving off a glow that is the same color as their own chakra color. This makes it impossible to hide from site.

D
Blade of Light
Type:
Ninjutsu | Offensive
Description:
The user of the technique goes through a series of hand signs, ending in a single sign and swinging the sign at the opponent. Then light solidifies into a semi-solid object that slashes at the opponent. This blade of light is capable of cutting through hardened cloth, but not metal. If metal is used to block this technique, then a break is formed in the blade of light that expands as the slash travels.

C
Armament of Light
Type:
Ninjutsu | Defensive
Description:
Solidifying the light around the user, the user creates a set of armor capable of absorbing up to a B rank amount of damage from light. This technique takes 2 posts to use, one gathering light around the user, and one creating the armor itself. This can be reduced to one post by using the Light Aura jutsu. This armor lasts for 2 posts at D-C rank, 3 at B-A, and 4 at S rank.

B
Halos of the Seven
Type:
Ninjutsu | Supplementary
Description:
The user condenses light into a series of seven halos, one around the head, one around each wrist, one around each ankle, one around the neck, and one around the midriff of the body. These halos can be used to block a single weapon technique, or expended by uttering " Saint of the Seven, blind my foes! " creating the light of ten flash tags.

A
Light of Suppression
Type:
Ninjutsu | Supplementary
Description:
This jutsu requires that the Light Aura jutsu be in effect. By multiplying the effect to blinding proportions, the user produces enough light to temporarily blind a demon and any other beings in the area. Then they get within the range of a Demon and force this blinding aura to surround and solidify on the host themselves. Then the aura begins to sever the output of chakra to the cloak, and close up completely severing the host from the outputted demon chakra. This does not remove the demon from the host, but holds it within, while the chakra already emitted still remains active. While the target is severed from the emitted chakra, they slowly begin to heal any wounds they have suffered due to the stage they have accessed. The target awakens once they have been fully healed ( Takes about 6 posts for stage 2-3, 10 for stage 4. ) and is removed from the demon chakra if it is still active. The user is unable to use any other technique requiring chakra or focus at this time.

S
Angelic Transfiguration
Type:
Ninjutsu | Supplementary
Description:
The user surrounds themselves with a blinding amount of light, so much so that not even another Clan member can look directly at them. Then by drawing all of the light into their own bodies, they transform their appearance into that of themselves once they reach the prime of their life. They also have four wings made of light sprouted from their backs, seven halos, and golden glyphs shining all over their body. Once they are in this state, they obtain the ability to passively expend chakra to use any B rank and below Clan technique they know without hand signs, and use a single hand sign for any A rank clan technique. They also gain the ability to glide over short periods of time, allowing for prolonged aerial combat.

If you stare at bright lights long enough it won't hurt anymore. They train in exceedingly bright lights to be closer to "holy" as they can get. Plus some of their techniques require that they emit vast amounts of light, so they'd blind themselves without it.


By killing without reason, I mean that unless that person has committed an undeniably evil act you are not capable of killing them. I could edit that, I just thought it was a bit wordy.

Minds eye of the Kagura can do the exact same thing.


Okay, I thought that the ranges were a bit too high.


The attack has to hit them directly, but the halos take the form of rings around the user, so they are movable. Basically if a slash attack is made, then the user could block with one of the halos and block the technique. It doesn't have a duration since the halos remain until all used. It can be canceled though.


You didn't read it correctly... The jutsu covers the host in light, and removes them from the expelled chakra. Then the healing portion of the jutsu takes 6-10 posts, no medical technique can automatically heal all of a human's skin after it has been burned away in less posts than that. It serves to stop the target from reaching any higher stages, and is only usable when the target loses consciousness, which takes place around stage 3&4. It doesn't seal the demon, just makes it unable to gain more power. It isn't as over powered as you think it is, but if need be, I'll make it so that it doesn't heal the target and they just lay on the ground bleeding out since their skin is gone.


Yes, roughly the equivalent of staring at the sun for an entire hour, all condensed into a single second. While that should instantly blind everyone, I'm going to chalk it up to ninja magic that it doesn't as long as you don't look directly at him. Think of when angels are revealed in the Bible, how they say they are revealed in a blinding light. That is the basis for the sheer amount of light that this jutsu produces.

I'll make edits to it, but it'll take a while. I just wanted to see what was functional and what wasn't.

I think that should be specified then, because from that, it seems like they'd be able to tell who it is that has the demon inside of them. I'll edit it so that they have a similar effect, however it only pertains to the demon chakra while it is being emitted. Is that acceptable?


Yes, they are only capable of receiving one hit, as is stated by the jutsu already. And I'll add in the capability of being cancelled.


Okay, I'll edit it into about 3 techniques. The healing process will also take 8-10 posts.


I'd have only thought so, or at least you'd have relative knowledge of some biblical occurrences.
How about... 10 posts with a 3 post cool down, and during the cool down it makes it so that the user is weakened by an entire rank?

Okay?

I thought you were going to let me edit it, but I guess not... Well, that character design is completely turned to s**t now.