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 Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:58 pm
alright i went back and edited it rather than reposting simply because i'm a perfectionist, and it's bothering me that i don't have rank filled out correctly trust me, it is. it's driving me up a freaking wall! but i'll try to be calm. anyways i eddited it because i'm a perfectionist and i don't want to see it all wrong. it was this or.... just deleat and then repost..... and the second one bothers me because then the posts are out of order because one is missing. so ya.... this way is easier for me to handle..... anyways let me know what you think.
Sai/Dezy
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 4:14 pm
alright he said it was fine.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:16 pm
I re-read everything over again and ran through it with a fine-tooth comb.
I changed a bunch of the spacing and corrected spelling, punctuation, and capitalization here and there for you. everything should be in order, but take a look and let me know if I missed anything!
HOWEVER, I need you to choose one of the following for your Secondary Strength :
•Intelligence
•Cunning
•Strength 
Full Name: Herusu, Deza
Nicknames: Dez, Ezy, BoomBoom, Boom
Age: 19
Birthdate: November 10th
Gender: Female... unless i have this biology thing wrong.
Ethnicity: Japanese
Nindo: 'Live for the now not the then be it past or future'
Personality: Really depends on her mood, however for the most part she has a very... explosive personality. For the most part though she's very sweet and smiley... not to mention pleasant.
Behavior: She's very out going and people pleasing. She loves to smile and even when angered, she maintains that same pleasant smile. However when you see that and you know you should be mad, watch out. That's when you should be most fearful of her. She is willing to be respectful to anyone, who respects her. She's not just some pushover.
Biography: She doesn't really have one. She was born and raised in a small village not far from sound. She was trained in the medical ways and then moved to sound itself. Once there she trained to be a medical nin, and eventually worked her way up the ladder and now stands where she is. That's really all there is to it. no tragic background, nothing like that... she's just a young Shinobi that worked hard at what she did and works hard to get better. That's it.
Village: Sound
Rank: ANBU - Medical Corps nin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: none
Bloodline: none
Curse Mark: none
Weapon of Choice: A simple staff with no special powers it's just... well, a stick... that looks cool.
Ninja Class: Medical
Strengths:
● Chakra Control
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● Agility
Weaknesses:
● Weak Bodied
● Cunning
● Is poor with distance fighting
● Very susceptible to Element jutsu
Shinobi Skills:
● A well practiced medical nin possibly the best of her generation
• No limit to Medical Jutsu known.
• Learning Medical Ninjutsu takes 2 less post than normal
• Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to enhanced chakra control.
• Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Healing (Pure)
- Secondary: Water
Chakra Color: Green Sousen Healing chakra
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
→ Chakra no Mesu - Chakra Scalpel {{Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.}}
→ Inyu Shometsu - Secret Healing Injury Destruction{{Inyu Shometsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Kabuto. Focusing his chakra to an area to be hit, he can begin the cell creation process the moment the area becomes injured.}} (this takes quite a bit of chakra and is rarely used)
→ Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique {{Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.}} (this is actually concidered a very LOW rank jutsu. it's actually E-rank >>> http://leafninja.com/ninjutsu-07.php#Kakuremino }}
→ Shousen Jutsu - Mystical Hand Technique{{Shousen Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to their hands. If the ninja is highly skilled, they are able to heal more critical injuries. Highly skilled medical-Nins such as Tsunade can use their techniques to perform surgeries that otherwise would not be possible. however it takes a lot of chakra and is used sparringly}}
→ Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique{{Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.}}(also low ranking jutsu it's D-rank check if you like >>>> http://leafninja.com/ninjutsu-16.php#Shunshin )
→ Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall{{Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.(defence move poor for attack and if not used at the right time, pointless)}}
→ Water Shark Projectile Technique{{Suikoudan no Jutsu-Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target. (close range attack-(0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m))}}
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu Styles Known: none
Primary Style: does not have one
Maneuvers none
Abilities none
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: Just a staff. it doesn't do anything! it's just a fancy long stick. That's it.
Weapon Type: Staff
Weapon Range: 5' 10"
Weapon Description:
Special Properties: None
Weapon Location: Usually tied to her back
Associated Weapon Style: None
Maneuvers Can be used to block basic physical attacks such as kunai, shuriken, so on and so forth but that's it as I've said before, there is nothing special about it.
Techniques None
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: neck and worn like a collar in some ways is a leafy green
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: doesn't really wear one
Kunai Holster Location | Color: right ankle, pink. only ever carries 5-7 kunai at a time
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: right hip, yellow
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: right lower arm, in sleeve, pink
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: none
Makibishi: none
Shuriken: 13
Flash Bombs: 3
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 1o7.3 lbs
Body Build: very thin and frail looking
Eye Color: a dark turquoise
Hair Color: silverish gray
Family: mother and a father
Theme song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v71usEmKU0U
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank: 2
A Rank: 4
B Rank: 17
C Rank: 43
D Rank: 75
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:31 pm
 Full Name: Crystal Mays
Nicknames: Star
Age: 14
Birthdate: july,11
Gender: female
Ethnicity: alaskan eskimo
Nindo: 'I love the coldness, but not from you"
Personality: friendly
Behavior: extremely shy
Biography: (Back Story)Cyrstal was raised the the highest mountains so coldness dosen't affect her at all from resistance she moved to the sound village to become a ninja she got to the sound village and to her surprise the kage was a really nice man not so serious like other kages! but her past has more effect on her social abilities having been abandoned at 5 years old she dosen't take to authority quite well or lets say 'disrespect her no matter who you are your gona get the same right back!' but she rarely speaks so no one really knows her past unless they read her file but only the otokage has access to that!
Village:Otogakure
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning)
Bloodline: Oragami No Dara (Paper Body Bloodline)
Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice: SUNFLOWER SEEDS OF DOOM!!! just kidding!! rofl
Ninja Class: Ninjustu
Strengths:
● Great Chakra Control
● Intelligence
● Cunning
Weaknesses:
● Elemental Vulnerability: Earth
● Shyness
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● onigami
● stealth
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Chakra Element(s):Earth,water and lightnen
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Earth (learned at : Chuunin)
- Tertiary: Lightning (learned at : Jounin)
Chakra Color: golden
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
→ Earth - Doton
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
| Neck | Normal | Black
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
White fuzzy hooded jacket| white!!!
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| leg | white
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| in shoulder bag | black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| same as projectile
Exploding Smoke Grenade:3
Makibishi: 4
Shuriken: 5
Flash Bombs: 2
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height:5.0
Weight: 80 pounds
Body Build: Skinny but strong
Eye Color: blue in right and hazel in left
Hair Color: white and short
Family: none
Theme song:Home by Three days grace!
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:49 pm
Full Name: Renkai Kuri
Nicknames: Paint Master
Age: 15
Birthdate: 2/5
Gender: male
Ethnicity: black
Nindo: Paint the world in your own image
Personality: Renkai is laid back and a little pain sometimes. But he is caring. He tends to visualize the world for what is worth
Behavior: Lazy
Biography: Renkai was born in a small tourist village filled with music and art. Renkai's job was to attract customers. He soon got bored of his job and went to another area.
Village: sound
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning)
Bloodline:http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=17216313&page=3- Kuri Blood Art Manipulation
Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice: Giant paint brush, with scroll inside
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
●Tertiary Strength- cunning
●Secondary strength- Intelligence
●Primary strength- High- Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
●Elemental Vulnerability
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●can bring art to life
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Earth
- Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: Silver graish
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Element - Japanese Element Name
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Head,Hood,Black
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: Thigh,Black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Back, Black
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Back leg, Black
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10
Makibishi: 10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5'11
Weight: 175
Body Build:
Eye Color:brown
Hair Color:Black
Family:
Theme song:________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:03 pm
Jenpachi Full Name: Renkai Kuri
Nicknames: Paint Master
Age: 15
Birthdate: 2/5
Gender: male
Ethnicity: black
Nindo: Paint the world in your own image
Personality: Renkai is laid back and a little pain sometimes. But he is caring. He tends to visualize the world for what is worth
Behavior: Lazy
Biography:
Village: Mist
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning)
Bloodline:http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=17216313&page=3
Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class:
Strengths:
●Tertiary Strength
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Weaknesses:
●Elemental Vulnerability
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Shinobi Skills:
●can bring art to life
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Earth
- Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: Silver graish
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Head,Hood,Black
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: Thigh,Black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Back, Black
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Back leg, Black
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Exploding Smoke Grenade:
Makibishi:
Shuriken:
Flash Bombs: ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5'11
Weight: 175
Body Build:
Eye Color:brown
Hair Color:Black
Family:
Theme song:________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank: Several problems... 1) You need to choose a Ninja Class. 2) Your strengths and weaknesses are stated in each class, so depending on what class you pick place the strengths and weaknesses in the proper order. 3) biography needs to be filled out 4) your bloodline....what is it? You have a link but no name of the bloodline? 5) Your tools like shurikens and what not. You have nothing? Are you aware this would mean you cannot use any of them? 6) Weapon of choice....since your an ink artist judging from the nickname so you could put art or something of that nature 7) Kirigakure is closed to new Genin, please choose a different village... either Sand, Cloud, or Sound.
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:15 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:22 pm
lol minty thats cobra's stuff. Besides I dont know if your bloodline is approved yet. So once it is then your profile will probably be judged. But no worries if cobra needs help I'll be more then happy to do so
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:38 pm
Minty:
1. Your Backstory could provide a bit more about your character, other then the fact that she has a resistance to cold weather and that she wants to be a ninja.
2. You need to supply a link to your Bloodline.
3. You cannot have a Custom weapon as a 'Ninjutsu Class' based character.
4. Your strengths and weaknesses need to be selected from the lists provided within the Ninjutsu class lists.
5. Your shinobi skills are a function of your Ninja class' special abilities and your bloodline. (needless to say Stealth is not one of your Shinobi skills as you are not of the assassin class.)
6. If you are of the ninjutsu class, you have to choose 3 elements.
7. You didn't fill out 'Body Build'
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:45 pm
you expect me to know what body build even is? confused i never fill in that thing...and i did with the bloodline>_> changed the weapon thing my strengths and weakness thing will stay the same cause THERE IS NO LIST!.....i can enver find those dum things>_< got th third element
the stealth thing was cause turning into paper is pretty stealthy in some case...my backstory stays the same i will fill it out more if i want to it's not your bio it's mine 4laugh anymore?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:47 pm
little mintchan you expect me to know what body build even is? confused i never fill in that thing...and i did with the bloodline>_> changed the weapon thing my strengths and weakness thing will stay the same cause THERE IS NO LIST!.....i can enver find those dum things>_< got th third element the stealth thing was cause turning into paper is pretty stealthy in some case...my backstory stays the same i will fill it out more if i want to it's not your bio it's mine 4laugh anymore? body build....like fat. skinny, athletic body, muscular bound, thin and weak. so on and so forth. And there is a list, ninjutsu strength and weaknesses is there. Stealth ok but its not a skill from your class, but jutsu wise you can make it so. and your bio make it a tad interesting. For me? Im your kage so why not make it fun for me ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:50 pm
much better tenshi you gave me a reason to edit some more xD
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:52 pm
mrgreen thankies ^_^ look forward to rping with you in ♪ Sound ♪
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:54 pm
little mintchan you expect me to know what body build even is? confused i never fill in that thing...and i did with the bloodline>_> changed the weapon thing my strengths and weakness thing will stay the same cause THERE IS NO LIST!.....i can enver find those dum things>_< got th third element the stealth thing was cause turning into paper is pretty stealthy in some case...my backstory stays the same i will fill it out more if i want to it's not your bio it's mine 4laugh anymore?
There is a thread specifically called 'NINJA CLASSES' ...which contains the lists for strengths and weaknesses.
Body Build is your body type: Thin? Slender? Delicate? Fat? Well-toned? Muscular?
Your Bio is lack luster and shows no depth to your character. However, if you wish to have a lack luster character with no depth, I suppose that is your choice (but why bother RPing at that point?...)
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:54 pm
where is the list? i can enver find it...and i fixed everything else except that
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