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 Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 5:29 am
((I could end this right now or would you people want to have another challenge? It will be a bit easier this time and would only require just one more post from each of you. Depending on how well your post is written, you will receive additional points for it, adding to the points that you have already racked up. Unless of course you don't want to post any more and would have to wait for me to finish renovating our new home base in the main forum before we start. Yes, if anyone asks, that's what I was doing while observing your posts at the same time. Anyway, post your decisions on or before September 17. By the way, here are the scores. Remember that they could still change depending on whether or not you take the challenge.))
Rose - 95/100 + 100 = 195 pts.
Niiro - 82/100 + 70 = 152 pts.
Meluk - 84/100 + 50 = 134 pts.
Powchii - 96/100 + 25 = 121 pts.
Saki - 88/100 + 10 = 98 pts.
> Rose & Powchii become Ravens as soon as this mission is over.
> Rose and Niiro will be able to train for two additional personalized techniques, if they choose to.
> Meluk, Powchii, and Saki will be able to train for an additional personalized technique, if they choose to.
*This will be applied after I have finished renovating our thread in the main forum.
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:05 pm
(Hm.. Point System. Nice.. I don't get it, but nice. Well, I'd feel weird being the lowest guy and I'm always up for an extra post.. Or whatever. I'm for it.. I also don't like being last, so if it takes a biggantic post I'll just.. Get to writing..<-<)
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:46 pm
((I'm all for the extra post. Don't feel weird about it smico. . . I'll have to write a super detailed post too.))
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:19 pm
((What do you expect us to say? No, we're lazy and we don't want to do it? Of course I'm up for whatever you throw at me. ))
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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:28 am
((Before we go through with that, what do you think of our new thread?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewforum.php?f=602921
I want you to evaluate it and tell me if it's okay or not. Post your evaluation here, but so as not to clutter this thread with OOC, I want you to limit your feedback to just one post. Are we clear?
By the way, Saki (smico), this has been long overdue, but would you like to become a Raven as well? Since Kyo's dissolved now, you don't exactly have a place to stay as a rogue shinigami. How about it?))
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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:44 am
((Looks all good. Can't wait to see what gets added to the later update posts.))
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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:33 pm
(Uhh Sure, I guess..DX? As long as I keep that cool "Rogue" title everyone's so jealous of... Or so I tell myself ;D? I just hope I get a cool tattoo on my cheek D<
And the topics cool... I like the cool names you give stuff. Makes me wanna be German AND a breakdancer..<-< "HEILER!")
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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:42 pm
((I like it and I want to take the challenge. I also want ot know what "Facchman" mean? I've been looking on the web and have found nothing. Plus can I learn alchemy for one of my new technique.))
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Ky Die Verrater rolled 20 20-sided dice:
11, 1, 19, 19, 14, 14, 18, 11, 10, 8, 12, 7, 2, 15, 12, 10, 13, 2, 12, 7
Total: 217 (20-400)
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:15 am
((You better fix that crappy grammar of yours first, Niiro. Alchemy requires precise descriptions of reactions and movements. If you can show that to me in your next post, you're free to do so.))
"Hmph, I guess you're all done," muttered Ky, soaked in blood from all of the hollows he had killed and their souls converted into the creation of new Philosopher Stones that Ky kept in another pouch different from the one he kept the hogyouku in. Ky wasn't done yet since more hollows came their way, lusting for the power of the hogyouku. "This is getting annoying, the Bount leader complained and took one of the many Philosoper Stones from his pouch and aimed it at the darkness from where the unearthly screams and wails came from. Ky was sick and tired of dealing with small fry, as did his Ravens, presumably. It was time to get rid of them in one go.
"Rot König Kanone."
The Philosopher Stone in Ky's hand dissolved into his palm and then reappeared in the form of a monstrously powerful wave of energy. Since the walls of the labyrinth were made to absorb reiatsu and limit the usage of reiatsu-based techniques, the attack's power was reduced to one-tenth of its effectiveness. However, it was still powerful enough to spread through every corridor within its range like flowing water, annihilating every last trace of the hollows that were following the trail of the hogyouku, both living and dead, leaving the labyrinth's hallways clear of hollow presence. That was when it came.
As soon as the hallways were clear, a snake-like hollow appeared, one that was powerful enough to survive something of that magnitude. It's reiatsu level was way beyond that of any hollow from before, even going as far as near Espada level, but it was still just a hollow. It was fascinating and Ky thought it would be best to catch it alive. He didn't want to get his hands dirty anymore, in addition to the last bit of exertion he just did took a lot from him, so that was why he decided to leave it to his subordinates. "Take care of that thing will you? Don't kill it though, I want it alive for an experiment I have for the hogyouku," Ky commanded, turning his back and walked away from the hollow serpent in order to rest for a bit while his Ravens took care of it by themselves.
((One more post. Make it detailed so it would be fun to read. Remember that bonus points are on the line here. Do your best.))
[Kills: 217+27 = 244]
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:13 pm
Powchii watched in awe as Ky released a massive amount of energy, so much in fact that it cleaned the labyrinth of all life. His body trembled as Ky's attacked filled the air around him, making it seem think and heavy. He stood back up and applauded Ky, "Amazing! Simply amazing!" Powchii said he still had a hard time grasping the amount of power Ky had. Ky's energy could still be felt all around Powchii, making his body feel light and airy. But the feeling of warmth was abruptly ended as Powchii felt a large amount of reitsu burst from the darkness at the end of the hallway. He looked on as he saw a large snake-like hollow approach, it's body zig-zagged in and out of sight.
Powchii was having a hard time locking onto the hollow as it slithered through the hall towards them. It was a blur, it was moving swiftly and silently and was allmost undectable. Powchii finally caught up to it, his eyes locked onto it. It inched itself closer and closer to Powchii, but Powchii couldn't find it in him to move. His body was frozen, his hands shook, and he broke out in a cold sweat. He could only watch as the monster approached him.
"Move!" Gekko shouted.
"You have to do something!" Genma added, the desperation could be heard in both of their tones.
He looked up at the monstrous hollow, it's lumbering body loomed over Powchii. Their eyes locked: Powchii's stare was pure shock, the hollows was one of question. It eyed Powchii curiously. If it had a voice it would most likely be saying, Are you not afraid? Why do you not run? but Powchii couldn't help it. His body ached, his physical limit had been met. There was no question that he would have to rely on the others to catch it, but he had to slow it down if nothing else.
The monster looked down menacingly, it's breath was warm and it smelled of acrid metal. The silence was broken, Powchii was smashed into the ground by the hollow. He struggled to keep it from biting into him. It's body thrashed about, smashing it's body against the walls of the labyrinth. Pulling on it's mask Powchii managed to get the montrous thing half way over his head before his arms gave out. Crashing to the ground the monster struggled on it's back, it wriggled around before rolling back onto it's belly. Powchii ran back a few feet before hiding behind a large rock. He held onto his arms, he took a few deep breaths.
After taking a few deep breathes he walked out from behind the rock, the beast looked at him, "Master Ky needs you for an experiment. . ." he said, "Consider it an honor he chose you." he held out both of his hands, in his right a large towering shield with a red centre appeared, in his left a small tealish blade of energy was formed the base looked high tech. He prepared himself for an attack as the snake like hollow approached him he held out his shield. The hollow's body smashed into the shield, it twisted and cringed in pain. Then there was a bright flash from the centre of the shield, the hollow was sent back a few feet. Powchii looked at it in amazement as it twisted on the ground in agony.
He looked on with a look of dismay, his body was pounding. He had no feeling in his legs anymore. He could only feel his midsection and his arms. Powchii pointed his blade at the hollow watching, waiting. He dodged the hollow as it came crashing through the ground. He reacted by driving his blade deep into the monsters back. He quickly retracted it and then delt a bone crushing kick deep into it's side, sending the hollow rolling away a few times. He gave a smirk, but his body seized up again.
He tried to move before the hollow could regain it's momentum, but to no avail. He looked to the other bounts, "I'm sorry. I can't keep up anymore." he looked away from them, "The rest is up to you." he said with a hint of melancholy. He was reminded of another time where he said the same exact thing and was in a situation similar to this one, but he didn't want to think about it. The ground trembled, and a crack in the earth appeared between him and the hollow. His body took on a reddish white hue, he exuded a white hot aura. He took a deep breath and released a large burst of reitsu, a large wall of clear red rose from the earth seperating him from the others and the hollow. He did this so it couldn't escape or turn back and attack him. "Do forgive me guys." he said once more, "It's up to you to finish what Ky asked us to do."
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:23 pm
((I hope we weren't to right different versions of our RPC's catching it. . . If so I totally messed up. But my RPC is practically out of energy so I don't think I could of made a decent post about me catching it.))
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:17 pm
((The Raven powers could use updating and Powchii good job. You are going to be a Raven no doubt.))
The young Raven watched Ky and Powchii in awe or amazement. He looked at the way Powchii fights Meluk has doubted his strength once more again. As he walked up to snake and Powchii he began to clap and nodded in amazement. As the hollow appeared from group of dead bodies, he had felt the spiritual pressure. As he felt it, he could not breath for a minute or two.
If anything Ky could have took the hollow down by himself, but he is only his subject. He was not able to reject what he said or he will be killed and bring back with alchemy. This is not a pretty sight to see with human eyes.
"Good job Powchii, maybe you are right. And yes, we need to move fast," Meluk said as if he was the most intellegent man on the Earth, "No problem... Powchii and thanks,"
As for Powchii, he could tell he will be a great addition to the Ravens. He put his hand behind his back and slowly pulled out his Uzi. Since an Uzi is an automatic and easy to shot. It will be challenging for him not to kill the hollow. As Meluk looked at the net Powchii had sealed the hollow in was easy for Meluk to brake.
Meluk got of the subject and studied the hollow, to find, it looked similar to a snake. Since snakes are mostly muscle, but no bone except for the masking of course. Meluk pulled out a bag from his pocket, which has chemical reaction to release all muscles in the body. He opened the bag and poured it gently on the hollow's huge menacing body. As the chemicals began to set it, they began to glow because it is mixed with him own reiatsu.
As for Meluk's reiatsu, it is special. His reiatsu burns any part of the enemies body once released. The hollow's muscles were paralyzed and numbed to the point that it could no longer move. This will only stay for thirty minutes so they must work fast and carefully. Meluk walked to the tail and shot one bullet at the tail.
The thing about the bullets is that, they are thin, but small enough to hold the bones from moving. And still Meluk did not do all the work he only just got the tail. He studied it once more again, to find, the hollow looked calm. Knowing Nirro's full abilities, he took full advantage to tell him what to do. He slowly turned his head to Nirro and Rose.
"Nirro, since you are strong you could simply just lift the hollow up," Meluk suggested in a deep toned voice, "And Rose how about you help him out and use your doll,"
Meluk turned his head back to Powchii and gave him a positive nod thinking head already said enough for the mean time. He hopes Nirro and Rose will take and consider his suggestion or plan. If they do not take and consider his plan, they would have to move fast. As Ravens they must stick together as family and as any family they must have principles. As a family they fight, live and protect one anther from intruders, wrongdoers and what not.
They must stick to Ky's principles as a family.
"Everything is a competition or a struggle. We are always either winning or losing," Meluk thought back to himself.
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:23 pm
[Sorry to break up the mood, but I have to ask-- Panda, are you ok?? Did you get hacked? Do you need gold? *panicsandassumestheworst*]
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:30 pm
((lol. . . No~ Thanks for caring about me though. I was hacked a few months back and Gaia seems intent on not giving me my stuff back.))
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