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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:42 pm
((yes thank you so much that was...um wonderful))
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:43 pm
((lol Nikki Bael is already talking to your char. thats why your supposed to read up to here. just go back a few pages and read what i wrote))
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:44 pm
((repost...kinda busy with other thing cant read that far back and comp slow))
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:50 pm
Jeohin Monevorix Shina Nichole Denieers Jeohin Monevorix Bael just decided to stroll the grounds and came upon burnett haired women in a kimono. he felt an emotion he was not familiar with. he just had to talk to her. this time his hateful glare actually went away sa'uki smiled wen she saw bael and walked over to him"hi" for the first time since Bael could remember he smiled. he reached his hand out and said "hello. my name is Bael."
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:00 pm
((Haha of course.))
Shei smiled over to Nathanel, her body rested against his. She looked over at him, her ruby eyes searching. "So what's your story, Nathanel?" Shei knew this was not the order in which most learned about one another, but ordinary was something she was not.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:01 pm
Jeohin Monevorix Shina Nichole Denieers Jeohin Monevorix Bael just decided to stroll the grounds and came upon burnett haired women in a kimono. he felt an emotion he was not familiar with. he just had to talk to her. this time his hateful glare actually went away sa'uki smiled wen she saw bael and walked over to him"hi" for the first time since Bael could remember he smiled. he reached his hand out and said "hello. my name is Bael." she smiled and took his hand"im sa'uki"
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:12 pm
Rak walked out of his personal training room. He needed to do something he couldnt just keep walking around. He felt as if nobody was around him. Like nobody else existed, he hadnt seen another face since he saw his wife. Sweat drained from his face, he sighed as he dried his face off with a towel as he walked towards his shower. He needed to get stronger, the high council had warned him of a war. Not like the war of Lucifer but an even worse war. HEavens angel would come down and eradicate everything, but they would allie with some demons greedy for power. THey would bring forth the eradication of Hell and all of its inhabitants. Rak walk into his room. He sighed softly as he walked into his shower. He took off his clothes and began to take a shower. He enjoyed the water raining down on him. He just stood there thinking about what was to come.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:41 pm
((What the hell,you are making easy a** spelling errors.Even a freaking 5th grade can do better.Like making the first word CAPITALIZED.Also on adding periods on end of your sentence,yes there more exclamation marks, and question marks.By the way before you start correcting other peoples spelling and grammer make sure your spelling is perfect.Set an example confused .Look at here.))
((wow<--((Capital)) so many grammer and spelling errors along with words you forgot to put it<-- ((To put it?)). well<--((Capital.)) i'd post with ya but all my characters are a litttle<--((Misspelled.)) tied up with someone else. i <--((Again.I is always Capital if it's by it self.))swear im going to make one character for every girl in this guild and go after every single one of them lol ((Puncutation?))
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:34 pm
((lol i think u got beat to it...im tired whenever i come on here and dont care much bout my grammar....and jeohin I SPENT GOD KNOWS HOW LONG CORRECTING ALL YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ERRORS ON YOUR GUILD SO U NEED TO JUST SHUT UP....excuse me i thinkim finished now lol))
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:35 pm
Shina Nichole Denieers ((lol i think u got beat to it...im tired whenever i come on here and dont care much bout my grammar....and jeohin I SPENT GOD KNOWS HOW LONG CORRECTING ALL YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ERRORS ON YOUR GUILD SO U NEED TO JUST SHUT UP....excuse me i thinkim finished now lol)) ((dont forget your spaces lol))
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:41 pm
(HAHA wow ok that was funny yea he doesnt have that good spellin either, btu oh well i dont really care bout grammer and spellin and what not gaia isnt my first period english class so...)
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:42 pm
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Sweetest Sacrifice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:43 pm
((i have pe...thank god...haha i feel sorry for u))
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:16 pm
(Everyone seems to post more when I'm gone. I can feel the love here, lol)
Charon reached the school and crawled back up to the roof. He suddenly caught the scent of many people. "Hmm. Something must be going on if there all around here. Oh well." He lied on the roof, bathing in the sun.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 5:29 pm
Tsubasa Obata (Everyone seems to post more when I'm gone. I can feel the love here, lol) Charon reached the school and crawled back up to the roof. He suddenly caught the scent of many people. "Hmm. Something must be going on if there all around here. Oh well." He lied on the roof, bathing in the sun. [[Haha, you think you got it bad? The guy I was rping with has ignored me for like the past 2-3 pages. lol xd ]]
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