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 Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:54 pm
Zeth heard the voice of A young man behind him, causing him to turn around. This man seemd young, but he felt the dark side around him. He didn't feel much of the aura, but something was strange about him
"I'm....Zeth.......Why does he seem familiar?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:57 pm
Daniel didn't understand what someone would be doing this far outside the temple. He must have just been somone hoping to get in the temple, or maybe he was the thing he was suppose to find.
Are you another Dark Jedi or just a wanna-be?
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:09 pm
"No......I'm a Force user.....but I'm no longer a Jedi"
Zeth shook his head, thinking of all the Jedi back at the temple. He looked back up at the young man, asking
"What is your name?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:12 pm
So you were a Jedi, you must know her, little miss perfect.
Daniel got angry just at the idea of his sister, his life spent with so much pain and suffering. Why was she able to get away from that and have some perfect life, this simple thought inraged Daniel.
Daniel, what do you care?
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:21 pm
"Her?.......You don't mean Kari do you?"
Now that he thought about it, He looked almost similiar to Kari. This man...Daniel, bared a very familiar force presence to Kari
"Daniel.....Are you.....Her brother?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:26 pm
Heh, yes she is my sister. Perfect Kari, being able to live a perfect safe like on coruscant while I had lived in hell-hole of a planet. Beg for ever scrap of food, I should have been the one taken not her. What would you know though, you are a friend of hers and that means your no friend of mine!
Daniel was even more enraged now then before. His hate for his sister was greater then anything else. His life had been hell because of her, and he would make her pay for it one day.
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:30 pm
"I'm sorry to hear that......"
Zeth didn't know what to say to this poor soul. Kari was taken to the Jedi temple, a place that was for saftety and luxery. He had the other side of the litter. He stood there, speechless
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:36 pm
Your Sorry! Oh, that just makes it all better now doesn't it. You shouldn't even be here! I should kill you for coming here and bring the name of my filthy sister with you!
Daniel no longer cared, this person knew his sister and anyone that knew her and was friend with her should die, just like she should. Without a care or and hesitation he drew his saber and activated. The red beam flew from the helt and out from him body as he pointed it at this man, this "Zeth" to show Daniel was stick of him talking about his sister.
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:58 pm
"You wish to fight me.......To prove to your sister that you're better than her?.....Take your anger out on me....."
Zeth took his saber from his belt, then thought long and hard. Kari wanted for sure to see her brother again, but if he killed him now, what would he say to her?. He decided. He dropped his saber and looked up at the boy with a tear in his eye
"I will not fight you........I refuse to fight you.......Strike me down if you must, but I will not kill the brother of the woman I care for so much"
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:06 pm
What!? You wont fight? You think she has any real feelings for you! She left me to die, what did she ever do for you!? You are such a Fool!
Daniel ran right at Zeth, holding nothing back. He just wanted him to stop talking. He would kill him for having feelings fro his sister. When daniel got closer he went for a very simple jab into his gut.
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:17 pm
The sudden impact of the saber pierced his stomach, the heating sensation as his veins and organs singed together to stop the flow of blood. He looked down at the red beam, looking on in wonder at the naievety of what Daniel was saying. He looked back with kind eyes and said to Daniel
"No matter what you've been told.......Your sister is....the kindest....most gentle person I have.....ever known.....she changed.....my once cold heart, and I know......that she'll be so glad......to see you alive."
Zeth coughed up blood onto the ground, but wasn't done talking
"It dosen't matter.....if she cared for me..or not.....what matters is....that the one person....that holds the biggest place in her heart.....is still alive......You...Daniel....are that person"
Zeth, fallen to a saber strike, falls backwards on the ground and lies, dead. On the distant planet of Korriban, the Jedi warrior, Zeth Korr, falls in action. His spirit will forver merge with the ebb and flow of the Force
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:23 pm
Zeth's last words ment little to Daniel, what did he know. If his sister had cared for him she would have gone looking for him long ago. Daniel watched Zeth's body fall to the ground, the thrill of the kill was more then he could have thought of. Looking down he saw Zeth's saber and picked it up, maybe this would be what his master had wanted. Daniel turned and began his walk back up to the temple.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 6:08 am
Travanor had just finished putting together his saber. He liked it. "That will work. Alright, time to go to master.,"he thought. "Master," he said bowing. "I have completed my saber.," he said as he showed her.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:23 am
Reith looked over Travanor's saber, it was well constructed. With his saber now complete it was time to keep his training moving. Reith looked over at the same droids Daniel had used. By lifting her hand she made the small droid lift into the air and activate. With the setting on low this was going to be a test of him and his saber.
Use the saber to deflect the shock from this droid. Let the force flow though you, make it help you. Use it to see the shoting coming before that are shot. Once you feel this droid is no longer a challange return to me.
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 9:00 am
"Yes, my master.," he said. He had already trained on these before. He whiped out his saber and started deflecting bolts right away. One got defelcted after another. "Easy.," he said and smirked. He then was shot by a bolt. "Ow....," he said.
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