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It seemed to Ritsuka that time had slowed down. He knew the katana would hit him; there was no way that he would be able to avoid it. He vividly remmebered what he had last said to his daughter, "Don't worry. Daddy will come back to you tonight." He prayed his daughter would forgive him for not being able to be there. A smile appeared on his lips just before the katana cut him in half; his daughter understood.

Hey, this is my first try. If it's not interesting enough, I'll gladly rewrite it. This is just what first came to my head:

Character Name: Mavi Kewakun

Mavi hid behind a tree, breathing hard. A competitive smile came across his face when he could hear his friends searching for him, their feet crunching fallen leaves in the distance.

"Come on Mavi! You know we'll find you sooner or later!" one of them called.

"Not if I can help it," he thought as he looked up. The tree's bark looked rough enough and the lowest branch wasn't too far up. He reached back into his belt pouch for a kunai to help him climb. As he did, he felt another hand grab his wrist. Turning around, he found his friend, Etoa, grinning.

"You're getting sloppy, Mavi. Now you're it!" she said, dashing off before he could say a word. With a frown, Mavi put his head up against the tree, shielded his eyes, and began to count down from ten.

Lovely! Pass! Join Sunagakure! twisted (same for the locke guy as well!)

(Uh...I got on a roll and could not stop writing...sorry for whomever has to read this...)

Jayden while on one knee tried to catch his breath, he was losing this battle..fast. His opponent saw through his basic jutsus, and his pathetic genjutsu. Jayden doesn't favor close range tijutsu, and is more of a medium to long range fighter, but for a good reason. Jayden got up from his knee and saw a shadow moving fast on the ground heading for him, his opponent was practically flying at him. He crossed his arms and caught the foot that his opponent brought o-so hard on him, knocking him back a good five feet after making a in air whirlwind kick with his other foot.

The very large scroll Jayden carries on his back digging into his shoulders. Jaydens head was at the base of a tree, one that started miles and miles of forest. He struggle to form a hand seal and as his opponent saw that he was trying to perform some sort of ninjutsu he charged in with a powerful slam that would be jaydens end. Yet luck...no time was on Jayden's side. He completed his hand seals and a puff of smoke covered him.

His opponent had seen this maneuver before in this battle and knew it was a basic henge jutsu. So bringing his fist down he was caught off guard when Jaydens hand caught his hand with a unbearable grip, with no intention to let go. As if Jayden had fully healed himself some how he began to gain the offensive smashing this opponent his with own fist and kicks, still with his fist captured.

His opponent had no choice but to use a special tijutsu that spun the body at rapid speed,forcing Jayden to let go. As a fast moving 'tornado' moved towards Jayden he simply leap onto a near by tree branch. The tornado stopped and his opponent had once again figured out Jaydens strategy for recovering that fast, and all thanks to the sun. With his opponent wide eyes Jayden realized that being so high in the air made his shadow revile that five 'string' like shadows trailed into the forest. He was indeed, fighting a puppet.

And the real Jayden was recovering in the forest. He couldn't let him pull ahead while he fought this scrap of wood. That now still disguised with the henge jutsu, could spring any amounts of traps from any direction. He had to end this fast, and at the same time he had to not let Jayden escape. He leap up with a rising uppercut to the puppets jaw. With little hesitation, once in reach the puppets right arm smashed into his frontal elbow causing his arm to bend back to his shoulder.

As he fell down the transformation jutsu faded and the true appearance of the puppet was seen. Just a basic marionette with a large scroll on its back; no blades coming from anywhere, no bombs, no face, no extra arms, or a large cloak to conceal it. But before the man could hit the ground, the puppet grabbed and unraveled the scroll it was charring. Now puppets are lifeless and thus shouldn't be able to use summoning scrolls but this particular puppet was built to go around that rule and was installed with a vial of jaydens blood in its thumb that would leak out and summon whatever was bound by the huge scroll. So with a swipe of his wooden thumb a large cloud of smoke was already formed high in the air, where the puppet stood on the branch. A monsterious shadow fell on the poor man who laid helpless on the ground below.

A tug on the strings pulled the one smaller summoning puppet back into the forest and all ten chakra strings than connected to a new puppet, a large puppet...with eight arms. The fear in his eyes aloud him to know that this was his end, and that he had lost.What the monster puppet did to the man is unknown but he never reported back to his village after that mission.

Edit: paragraphed!

Oh... Kitsune right? xD Well, it's okay then >.> Lol.

@YoungFlame: Wall of text... @_@ If you post long can you try to paragraph it? Lol. So um, paragraph that for me >.> Thank you..

Fail D:

1) That is like story telling, not RP.. You are controlling your friend... RP is all about controlling only yourself (unless they are NPCs)

2) We don't like asterisks here >.> This is a semi lit guild, we prefer proper sentences, like

'He threw a smoke bomb and watched as the smoke cleared.'

That reminds me, we also do third person in here ^-^

Also you are godmodding >.> Your kunai could have been dodged by the girl but you made her get hit.. just some tips... read the scrolls for more info.. thank you and good night..