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 Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:40 pm
(( this is the only game I dont do cause I just cant catch up gonk ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:04 pm
((This one really requires if you know what's going on from the last few pages. Just to let you know, this is a new story))
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:28 am
((okee, I can try))
Naruto had been ambarrased about the seal, But when with Sasuke, It wasnt even there. He just loved the warm touch of Sasuke's hands on his body. Sasuke was always in control and naruto loved it. He thought of himself as such a little boy, But Sasuke made it different for him. Sasuke loved him no matter how stupid he really was.
"Snap out of it, I'm only here for so long" said Sasuke in Naruto's ear.
"yes sir" said Naruto and leaned back and enjoyed.
((was that good))
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 1:51 pm
((They're gonna do it!!! And yeah, that's nice for a fisrt time. Just try and go back cause I saw some misspeled words and a a sentence a little confussing. But not bad.))
Naruto closed his eyes rather tightly as he prepeared to brace himself. He never would have thought he would be with the raven-haired heart throb. Within moments Naruto's sences went into overdrive. It semed like his belly had an aching fire inside.
Sasuke groaned slightly as he moved slightly, holding in his groan by bitting his lower lip. On occasion he would have a little moan escape his lips. Naruto was absolutly beautiful. There no words to discribe his beauty. He was just... Naruto. And he was his.
Naruto slowly cracked an eye, feeling his body melt into Sasuke's figure. Naruto could feel the very same blush overpowering Sasuke reach his cheeks. Sasuke looked compleatly diffrent in this new shade of light. Sasuke didn't look like that strong cerismatic ninja all the girls went crazy for. He looked more like an insecure child, wanting to give love and be loved in return. He could see a part of himself.
Time seemed to slow doaw for them as they continues thier dark ride. What would the others think if they knew? Would they think it was fine? More likely they'd think he tried to defile the perfect child with his toch. Maybe they'd think Sasuke was only showing pitty to the outcast. They wouldn't see that they both performed an act of taboo on their own free will.
Before they both knew it, the passion ended as Sasuke colapsed onto Nauto. Both replaying wht ust happened in their minds. From every cute little noises the other made to the sweetness of how the other cried their names.
"I love you." Naruto whispered as he tangled his fingures in the black mass of Sasuske's locks.
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 11:42 am
alitza17 ((They're gonna do it!!! And yeah, that's nice for a fisrt time. Just try and go back cause I saw some misspeled words and a a sentence a little confussing. But not bad.)) ((Everyone has misspelled words, there's no point in correcting them.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 3:15 pm
paradoxal_gemini alitza17 ((They're gonna do it!!! And yeah, that's nice for a fisrt time. Just try and go back cause I saw some misspeled words and a a sentence a little confussing. But not bad.)) ((Everyone has misspelled words, there's no point in correcting them.)) ((I know, but I ment that they were mispelled because of typing to fast. That was all. It happens to eveybody. Oh and my account got hacked last night... Now I'm on a quest to get my tems back. Help me get my things back it you want. It'[s on my dig. Once I'm done getting my things I am gonna post on my About Me those who have helped me on my time and need and what I plan to do to show their kindness. This is after I compleat my quest for fairy wings though.Already I got more than the gold I lost back from the kindenss of a fellow Gaian, one of my MC's, and some other things.))
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 12:16 pm
((Well since nobody won't update, and I've been waiting forever, I'll just update it...))
Sasuke lifted himself off of Naruto's warm body. He could feel Naruto's eyes on his glorified body. Part of him felt embarrassed that he was now pariding in his bear flesh, but an other part of him felt a ceritain pride fill in him.
Sasuke turned toward Naruto, a blush on that tanned face warmed his heart. He could tell there was a certian hunger in the dobe's eyes. And Sasuke knew he was the igniter to the fule of Narto's fire.
Sasuke slowly walked back up to Naruto and sat on the floor next to him. Sasuke grabbed Naruto's hand. "I have a story to tell you, but I need your hand." Sasuke flatly said.
"What?' Naruto said as he took his hands away in surprize.
"Give me your hand so I can say the dam story." Sasuke said.
"Ok..." Naruto was a little confused, but followed Sasuke's order.
Sasuke took Naruto's hand and traced some of the lines for a few moments and egan to speak,
"There once was a group of rabits with one bunny. And they all had to cross a river," Sasuke spoke as he traced one of the lines of Naruto's palm. "The rabits jumped over the river with little or no effort. But the bunny had a problem. The bunny couldnn't jump the river since it was too wide.
"The bunny would run and ump right at the edge of the river only to come up short. The bunny had to swim to get back to the origional side since that was the closest, and the bunny really couldn't swim well.
"So how do you think the bunny got to the other side?" Sasuke asked.
"I don't know? Didn't the bunny ask help?" Naruto asked.
"No, the bunny was alone."
"Well then how?"
Sasuke paused for a minute or so before he spoke again, "I don't know either, I just wantd to hold your hand."
Naruto just staired at Sasuke with his jaw droped. What kind of story was that? What was the point of telling the story when Sasuke could have just held his hand without even telling such a crapy pick up line.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 1:55 pm
(( sweatdrop I think you can actually carry this fanfic well on your own...))
"That was lame, Sasuke." Naruto uttered flatly. "You know fully well you could just hold my hand without... making up some story."
The other boy chuckled. "I know..." He gave a peck on Naruto's lips. "I just felt like it...."
Naruto playfully shoved Sasuke at how randomly stupid he just acted. "You know, you're really the dobe, not me." The blonde stuck his tongue out at his rival.
Sasuke's eyes were soon transfixed on Naruto's tongue. "Is that an invitation?" He inquired as he accepted it and slowly pushed Naruto down.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 7:49 pm
"Maybe it is, and maybe it isn't." Naruto said smuggly.
Sasuke sighed as he got up again, ignoring the fact that Naruto was blushing at his bear body. Sasuke could have sworn he heard something during their taboo.
He reached over to the phone and was right, Sakura had called him, and askeing him out again. He didn't really know why Sakura thought he liked her like that. Of corse Sasuke liked Sakura, but they were too late into doing anything. They were too close in doing the boyfriend girlfriend thing now. He just wished Sakura could realize that.
"Dobe, let's go to bed. We got training tommorrow." Sasuke smirked as he helped Naruto up from the floor.
Inside Sasuke was happy knowing that they both would be together, both giving a part of themselves to the other. Officially they both elonged to the other.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:06 pm
(( gonk Isn't anyone else posting?))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:05 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:35 pm
((Alright... Dx I fear of posting after you.))
"Okay fine..." Naruto replied as he grabbed Sasuke's hand and got up. "You better not do anything to me while I'm sleeping, Teme." He was happy to finally get close to the one person who cared for him all this time. Even when they trained or argued, he knew there was love intertwined in their words.
Sasuke chuckled again. "I can't guarantee anything." He whispered into Naruto's ear as he hugged him around the waist.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:25 am
((Don't fear posting after me. Like Gaara, I won't harm you.... lol, jk. But really don't be scared to post after me. I've done this stuff with people who were better writers than me. Thi is mearly a writing exercise to get beter.))
Morning arrived like it always did. The sun always arrived slowly and lazily to the sky. Sasuke slowly streached his limbs as he awoken from slumber. Sasuke turned over seeing Naruto's body draped in the blanket they shared.
"Dobe, get up." Sasuke gentally nudged Naruto, his words filled with warmth.
"No... I just went to sleep..." Naruto groaned.
"What? Your kidding. But we went to bed early."
"I thought you were going to molest me..." Narto muttered through his pillow.
"You have got to be shiting me."
"I'm not..."
"And when did you realize that I was reallky asleep?
About an hour ago..."
"Baka dobe..." Sasuke muttered as he ruffled the blond's hair.
"Cut it out."
Sasuke laughed slightly as he got up, anouncing that he was going to shower.
Naruto really wanted to sleep. But it seemed that his body wouldn't let him. Naruto wanted to shower but was unsure if Sasuke would apritiate him getting in while he was occuping the restroom.
Naruto decided to just skip the shower for the time being and just try to get more sleep.
"Really, just try and sleep." Naruto muttered to himself.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:18 pm
((>w< I fear your awesome writing skillz.))
After Sasuke had finish showering, he opened the door with nothing but a towel wrapped loosely around his waist.
"Naruto......? Are you still sleeping? C'mon, wake up already." The wet male nudged the snoring blonde.
"Nggh.... five more minutes, Teme." Naruto rolled over on his side and went back to snoring.
"I guess I'll have to wake you up myself, hm?" Sasuke tosses his towel on the ground and climbed on top of Naruto's sleeping form.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:41 pm
"Noo, I'm up!" Naruto cried out as he attempted to escape from Sasuke's grip.
Both young boys giggled as they squermed in each others grasps. After what seemed like an endless amount of their heavy action, Sasuke layed next to a panting Naruto.
"Gees, Dobe, and I just took a shower too..."
"I wasn't the one who wanted to bang, remember?"
"But you didn't complain."
"My butt hurts." Naruto said into his pillow.
"Too bad, now we both have to head over to training. I wouldn't be surprized if we arrived around the same time as Kakashi."
"Sasuke..." Naruto spoke in a seriouse tone.
"Yeah?" Sasuke asked, a little concerned for the blond.
"I'm not ready to come out. So can we keep us a secret?"
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