▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Leon Riddler Nickname:
True Age: 23 Birthdate: August 5th Gender: Male Ethnicity: 3/4 German, 1/4Japanese Blood Type: O-
Sexuality: Bi
Height: 5' 8" Weight: 140 lbs Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Black
Life View: None atm Personality: Behaves eratic at times, but is often very calm. He is very Intelligent, and often blabs out random nonsense.)
Likes: -Numbers -Archery -Being with someone he likes. Dislikes -Spicy foods
Side: Neutral Rank:
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Leon was born and raised in Japan. His Father was very secretive about his own life, but nonetheless, he was trained by him in the ways of the Quincy. Leon knew his father was married once, and once had a son. Leon always knew that it made his father sad to look at him, for he reminded him of his first son, and his life before seeking refuge in Japan.
Leon knew very little of what actually happened in Germany, when the main core of the Quincies were attacked, and his Half-Brother, and Step-Mother were killed. Not long after going to Japan, His father had seeked refuge amongst the Japanese Quincy. It was there that his Father met his Mother and after one emotional night, and against what his father truly wanted, Leon was concieved.
Leon's father was the once the Leaders of the Quincies, and He afterwards became the Leader of the Quincies, making Leon the son of the Leader of the Quincies. This made training intense for Leon, as even though his father was not happy about the birth of Leon, he nevertheless loved him as a son, even if it was difficult for his Father to show it. People looking on will always see Leon's father always giving the toughest challenges to Leon. And Leon would always do what he could to impress his father.
Training was not simple. Leon started his training at the age of 6, and had a solid bow, and was a full-fledged Quincy by the time he was 14. For 9 years after that, He worked his way, and earned his place beside his father. Leon, at the age of 15, realized that being the son of the Quincy Commander had its own difficulties, and began to refer to himself by his Middle name, Isshin, and his mother's last name: Nakamura.
When Leon was 17, his father died in a battle against the Espada, being torn apart, as Leon watched in despair. He had lost his father, but He was still alive.
Now, being 23, Leon floats around, not a too powerful quincy, more laid back than anything else, but he still enjoyed shooting his bow.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Black Reiryoku Level:
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: • Air Dash: • Hirenkyaku: Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Grappling: • } Known Weapon Styles: • Quincy Archery: • Quincy Marksmanship: Reiryoku Techniques: • Reishi Absorption: Other Techniques: • Dashing: • Jumping:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow Cross Name: Vibrierende Vogel (Vibrating Bird) Cross Location: Ear Cross Appearance:Quincy Cross Appearance Weapon Type: Bow Cross Type: Earing
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon True Weapon Name: Vibrieren und Verschieben Formen (Vibrate and Shift Forms) True Weapon Type: Bow(s) True Weapon Description: Not one form of bow, but many. The Vibrating Bird Cross is an Artifact that was passed through an old Quincy line. True Weapon Ability: Eagle Form (Power, Strength): The Eagle Form is about the power of the arrow, and the strength of the shot. This Bow fires a single arrow with the Capability of shattering stone like glass, and penetrating dense Armor or Hierro, and can break through Bakudo under a rank of 55, and is on Par with a Hado of a rank of 65. Hawk Form (Accuracy, Precision): The Hawk form focuses on the Accuracy aspect of Archery. It is a smaller bow form that goes over the arm and shapes in a way that is used for sniping with the arrows. The arrows aren't big, but have good penetration after a 40 ft. Falcon Form (Speed, Endurance): The Falcon form is for quick, and difficult to dodge arrows. This bow fires arrows at 240 Km/h, and Leon can fire one arrow for each one of his fingers. Sparrow Form (Defensive, Protected): The Sparrow Form, is a form used for defensive firing. It is used in cases where there are multiple enemies. This Bow can fire up to 15 arrows a second, And do not have extreme penetrative powers, but they make up for it with a burning effect if hit. The Shield can withstand a Kido up to rank 70 without shattering, and can withstand 4 Ceros, every 2 posts before regenerating power. Hummingbird Form: (Quantity, Overwhelming): The Form of the Hummingbird is an overwhelming technique that can fire up to 220 arrows per second. Crow Form: (Manipulation, Control): The form of the Crow emphasizes the Archer's ability to place his arrows anywhere he wants. While in this form, the User can fire one arrow per finger, and whiles in flight, the User can control each arrow individually. These Arrows are special as they are Leon's most trained. They have great Penetrative Power.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Your Technique List ▬▬┤|Quincy Techniques • Basic Blut • Blut Vene • Blut Arterie • Ransōtengai • Keen Eyes • Lock On ▬▬┤|Ginto Techniques • [ ▬▬┤|Custom Techniques •
I hope this character is acceptable, And I was told to ask about keeping the bankai. I went to alot of work designing it. Is there a way I could keep it?
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: William Neil James Nickname: Reverse
True Age: 233 Age Appeared: 23 Birthdate: January 22 Gender: male Ethnicity: American Caucasian. Blood Type: B+
Sexuality: Bi
Height: 5ft 11.5 inches Weight: 220 pounds Eye Color: Hazel green Hair Color: brownish black Appearance: William is fairly average looking man with a complete lack of beard or mustache, a square jaw and chin, and a muscular body. He has large hands and feet, a broad but otherwise normal nose, and he has shoulder length wavy hair. His ears almost look small on his head and his face is fairly thin. His skin is a very light pale white, but not albino. His skin is simply very fair.
Life View: We all will die one day, so it’s best to just live life, but don’t take unnecessary risks. Personality: William is a kind and gentle soul, not really taking joy in fighting. He is honest, doesn’t like to lie, and although occasionally he will do so by accident he always corrects himself if he is lying to someone he cares for or respects. While he does not take joy in fighting he has a tendency to hold a grudge and when he gets mad it’s like his body is on a broken autopilot. He stays mad for a long time, and hates those to steal or hurt others and then lie about it.
Likes: Cherry pie Reading Training new Visored’s Dislikes Fighting life or death battles Losing friends Arrogant pigs
Hollow Mask: William’s hollow mask is something of a mystery and a complicated one at that. His mask is divided into 4 parts. Each side of his hollow mask appears to be a separate mask with a separate set of teeth and eye holes. The two masks are connected by a set of interlocking fang like teeth that signify the two masks are actually a single mask with a complex four part mouth. Each half of the mask has a single wide eye hole that stretches nearly as wide as the side of the mask it is on. This provides a wide field of vision and allows for peripheral vision with the mask on. The dual foreheads of the mask are each adorned with a horn not dissimilar to that of a rhinoceros beetle. The mask is also quite unusual from what a normal hollow mask looks like in that it’s black in color with dark grey teeth instead of white on white. A stark contrast against William’s pale skin. Rank: former Vice Captain/Visored member Side: Neutral (For now)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ William was born in the poorest part of the Rukongai district, and so growing up he had it tough. He had it tougher than others even in the same district because he was small and weak. He was fragile, but to those that knew him he was dangerous. The kid was a scrapper, a real fighter who would use his smaller size to out maneuver those who would with him harm and when he had to this helped him in getting food. He was always hungry, and not because he couldn’t get the food he needed. He was a good thief, and a decent spearman when it came to fishing, but for some reason he could never satisfy his hunger. It wasn’t until he was in his 50th year that he discovered why. He had reiatsu, and a lot of it for a kid his size.
Shortly after this realization dawned on him, he was found by a teacher from the shinigami academy. The old man saw great promise in William, and after doing some research, decided to adopt the boy. In the years that followed William grew into a strong young man who passed one class in particular at the academy better than most, and not because the teacher was going easy on him, but since the teacher was his adopted dad, He had to study just that much harder. William rather quickly found himself developing his powers as a shinigami, and before he even graduated from the academy, he managed to learn his zanpakuto’s name and achieved shikai. This was a fact that was look well upon by his father, but at the same time saddened him. William had gained his shikai quickly, almost too quickly. There was something off about it, something that he couldn’t quite grasp. William’s early achievements didn’t go unnoticed, and soon he found himself being analyzed and wearing a lieutenant badge in one of the Gotei 13. For a while he was happy, But then everything went wrong.
Shortly after becoming a lieutenant in the Gotei 13, William had a terrible accident. An accident in which he almost killed three unseated officers from his own squad…while wearing a black mask over his face and screaming in a voice that was clearly not his own. It was discovered that he had an inner hollow, and rather than be exiled, he left the soul society for earth willingly. He didn’t want to hurt anyone, and he needed to get his inner hollow under control. He sought out a man he had heard about. A Vizored leader. After that he trained and gained the ability to use the mask.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Black with silvery outline Reiryoku Level: High
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level • Air Dash: Practitioner Level • Shunpo: Practitioner Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level • { you may have one more at the same level } Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level • Kendo: Practitioner Level Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Practitioner Level • Kido Spells: Practitioner Level • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level • Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths: • Combat • Stamina Weaknesses: • impatient • can’t see in the dark Fears: • dying • losing his loved ones • afraid of big cats
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: shōgekiha-ō (Shockwave King) Zanpakuto Location: at Williams’ left hip Zanpakuto Appearance: a simple and rather ordinary katana Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: An elderly man, thin faced, and eyes full of rage, dressed in a earthy mossy green kimono with scenes of beautiful mountain ranges and lush forests. Golden rings adorn his fingers, and prayer beads around his neck. An earthy brown sash is draped around his shoulders, and gold bands hold his waist length earthy brown beard in a single braid. Zanpakuto Sword Type: average katana Zanpakuto Type: Vibration
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Doragon shōgekiha-ō (Dragon Shockwave King) Shikai Incantation: Quake the Earth Shikai Description: The katana splits between William’s hands and changes shape, encasing each hand in a glove of steel armor and the finger sleeves tipped with spade like blades. The back of each glove appears molded to resemble the face of a heavenly dragon. Shikai Ability: The shikai is strange in that its ability is to create and sense vibrations, including shockwaves. This strange ability effects William in two ways. Firstly it allows him to move through the ground like a fish in water. Secondly, It enhances his hearing and makes his touch more sensitive to vibrations.
Hellish Shockwave: William creates a shockwave and reinforces it with his reiatsu. This is an attack that can take out small buildings and destroy landmarks. This technique is an almost purely reiatsu-based attack, very similar to Getsuga Tenshou. Has a maximum effective range of 15ft in any given direction, beyond that the destructive power is diminished by over ninety five percent and so is rendered harmless. Cool down of 2 posts
Ripples: William creates a small series of shockwaves to push an enemy back. These shockwaves are the same kind of garden variety shockwaves released when a few pounds of explosives go boom. Each shockwave is accompanied by the sound of an explosion and has a maximum range of 10ft in every direction. This technique is meant only to deter or scare an opponent, and unless the opponent is at point blank range, the technique is harmless. At point blank it can temporarily deafen an opponent. Deafness from point blank lasts 1 post. Total number of shockwaves created is 4, and takes 1 post to create all four. cool down of 4 posts.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Ten no shōgekiha-ō (Shockwave King of the Heavens) Bankai Incantation: Vibrate all enemies to dust Bankai Description: The gloves that were the shikai change shape once more, but retain their hand armor based origins. They transform into a into a pair of gauntlets that cover both his forearms and hands thick, heavy, spade shaped shields. The front end of each shield has four claw like blades not dissimilar to the talons of a dragon. The face of each shield is molded with a golden colored raised image of a heavenly dragon. Bankai Ability: Ten no shōgekiha-ō blinds William to everything except for the vibrations around him. Vibrations in the air, earth, and water all become visible to him in the form of slowly echoing white lines in a sea of darkness. Vibrations in solid objects such as living beings or structures make those things become visible as detailed white outlines that are only visible for as long as the vibrations in the objects persist. He is also able to create vibrations at will that can be used to attack enemies, and is able to travel through the ground as if a fish in water just as his shikai allowed him to. Because of this strange combination of abilities, it is literally impossible to hide from him or move without him noticing.
Hellish Ripples: Considered William’s ultimate attack. William creates a large series of rippling shockwaves that each extend for 30ft in every direction. These are not garden variety shockwaves, as the sounds of explosions that accompany them are significantly louder and the shockwaves are laced and reinforced with William’s reiatsu. Total number of shockwaves created is 8, takes one post to create them, but 2 posts to release them all. Deafness from point blank lasts 2 posts. cool down of 15 posts. This technique heavily drains William’s reiatsu, and is considered a last ditch attack. A last resort if you will. It should also be noted that this is his only bankai technique.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques ( Your mask must be on! ) • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
Posted: Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:55 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Raizen Verensade Yakuzain Nickname: Warrior God, Lightning Flash El Diablo
True Age: 4,300 Age Appeared: 20-25 Birthdate: March 3 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 6'5 Weight: 180 lb Eye Color: Amber Hair Color: White Mask Remnant: Under all his hair are little horns. Hollow Hole Location: Just above Chest near his neck.
Life View: "I see the world how it is... in shades of gray. Nothing is totally clean... or totally dirty"
Personality: Raizen relentlessly drilled himself toward perfection and settled for nothing less from himself or those that once serve him. He believed that power and the ability to invoke awe and respect in his followers are what makes a person strong. He has neither pity nor mercy toward those he's marked as treasonous or inferior.When Raizen enters the battlefield, one should run. Raizen's power and overall presence makes those who are weaker than him faint out of shear terror.
Likes: Giving Advice Good battles Training Relaxing
Dislikes Kiss ups The Hollow Ruler Being called old man Aspect of Death: Solitude Fraccion: { Coming soon }
Rank: Espada = #1
Side:Espada
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ? The Yakuzain Clan were once the biggest mercenary faction in eastern Japan, they were first formed during the Sengoku Era and ruled over the Kantō area. They are a yakuza group with Makai Yakuzain as their leader and use the character for fear (畏) as their symbol. There are about ten thousand martial artist who are considered members of the Yakuzain group, divided into about 70 sub-clans. Born the fifth child of Kirin Suigetsu and Ababa Terumī, he was often taken around on his father's patrols (much to his mother's dismay)..He took over as the Second Head of the Clan do to the defection of his four older siblings.As he got older Makai gained his fame as "Snake Hand Fighter" for defeating a group of fighters from the Moorim Clan .
Soon after that event Makai felt an emptiness inside him a void no amount of success can fill.Not only was his father and mother dead,his current lover suddenly left him to attend to her clan leaving him no comfort during his career. It was during this time he became the ruthless Yakuza he is known to be in the criminal under ground and massacred the Hyaku Monogatari Clan of 100 clan members lead.e Apparently Raizen was sent to Hell for being wicked,but escaped.He found his way to Menos forest and gained hollow powers.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: White Reiryoku Level: Immese
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Master • Air Dash: Advanced • Sonido: Master Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Exspert • Snake Hand:Resshūken ( Lightning Kickboxing): An elegant fighting style that is exsclusive to Raizen. This style relies on fast footwork in order to focus on fending off enemy attacks with the arms and using the legs to counterattack with powerful kicks. By combining his spiritual pressure,Raizen created a new fighting style , which he describes as "energy and style as one". Resshuken often involves him creating orbs of spiritual energy with his hands, which he then kicks toward the opponent, enhancing their offensive force. Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Master • Kendo: Advanced Reiryoku Technique: • Reiryoku Gathering: Master Other Techniques: • Dashing, Expert • Jumping, Expert
Strengths: • Self proclaimed strongest Espada • Sonido:By introducing an additional step into the normal Sonído movement, Raizen can generate a number of clone-like afterimages of himself, do to his speed. Weaknesses: • His high speed regeneration is slow. • His need for souls can cause him to lose his mind if he hasn't eaten. He'd attack anyone and lose sanity. Fears: • Continuing to live his hollow existence with no change whatsoever. • Being purified and reborn • Being forgotten
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Maō Shōkan Buraddihauringu (Demon King Summoning Scream:Bloody Howling) Zanpakuto Location: In his chest. Zanpakuto Appearance:Sword Zanpakuto Type: Melee
▬▬┤|Resurrección Resurrección Name: Buraddihauringu Resurrección Incantation: "O gathering flames of darkness, treat our dear guests to the strains of your terrible song...hellion whose laughter chills the very soul, resound........Buraddihauringu (Bloody Howling)
Resurrección Description: An octagon-like glyph appears under Raizen, and dark flames of hollow energy erupt from the it. The flame cries out an eerie moan immediately.During the wail itself, Raizen's hair is replaced by a exo-skull and he begins to grow a pair of horns from his forehead. His reshi liquifies and covers his arms and legs solidifying into a form of armor. He then proceeds to grab his chest and pulls out his Zanpakutō;causing the flames to dissipate. As the hymn nears its end,his skin turns crimson and he grows a thick red tail. At the end he brandishes his sword and the transformation is complete. Resurrection ]
Resurrección Ability:
Flame Manipulation: His unique spiritual energy now allows him to generate substantial quantities of fire from the surrounding atmosphere and then subsequently manipulate this heated substance into seemingly whatever form he chooses, almost immediately after the flame's initial production. In this manner he is able to quickly form a great variety of fiery structures that are suitable for a diverse range of purposes, no matter if the nature of these circumstances demand offensive or defensive uses
Devils Hellfire: Raizen holds his sword pointed towards the ground with both hands clasped around its hilt while he closes his eyes to focus his thoughts, with several multicolored flower petals falling around him. When he opens his eyes, he creates a field of dark energy around himself, granting himself with a large burst of strength. He begins a mad dash to the enemy, striking his sword down before performing a combo of several slashes. At the end of the combo, he rises into the air and slams the ground with his sword, causing pillars fire to rise from the ground and incinerate the foe.
Shinseina Hi Tenshō (太陽牙天衝, (聖なる日, Sacred Sun Heaven-Piercer): Raizens white reiatsu creates flame-like aura around himself,which can be channeled into an attack or armor.
Bunkai Teleport: is one of Raizen's techniques while in his transformed state. Raizen in this form has the ability to deconstruct and reconstruct his body and teleport by opening small dimensional rifts;similar to Garganta
Howl:A hi-pitch wail that can Hollows and can be used to send them into a frenzied sate by Raizen layering his voice with spiritual pressure at a frequency that resonates with hollows.
Fury Palm Rush: In his frenzied state, Raizen grasps the opponents face in his left palm and forcibly drives them forward. He continues to push back with a massive burst of his spiritual energy, propelling him across the landscape, all the while crushing the opponents head in his grip.
Illusion Smash is a technique used by . While in his first form, Raizen can attack an opponent by punching into small portals big enough for his fists. By doing this, Raizen is able to hit his enemy with a series of punches from a distance away.
Demon Claw:allows the Raizen to extend his arms.
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa Segunda Etapa Name: Maō ( Demon King) Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Feel the Fear and Flee in Terror, Maō "
Segunda Etapa Description: An pentagon-like glyph appears under Raizen, and white-red flames of hollow energy erupt from the ground. The flames cries out an eerie moan immediately followed by the sound of prayer chants in the form of a hymn that echoes throughout the immediate area, often confusing those who witness the transformation process.During the hymn itself, Raizen's body bulks up and his horns turn crimson his skin becomes more armored. As the hymn nears its end,his skin turns golden and his tail become whip-like.Once he channels his spiritual pressure thru his zanpaktou he makes a diagonal swing that causes the blade to shatter like glass and reveal its true beauty. In this state the sword has now transmogrified into a sleek and slender crimson blade.
( no wings or extra arms)
Segunda Etapa Ability: Āoshǎn is Chinese for "Demonic Hollow Flash", which are high-powered fan shaped Cero that can be fired from either his hair, palm or finger,or mouth.These are about as strong as an Orcuras Cero.
Meidō Zangetsuha (冥道斬月波, Dark Path Slashing Moon Wave): Zangetsuha is an immensely strong and powerful offensive technique. The Meidō will takes on the form of a black crescent moon that can work similarly to Raizens Shinseina Hi Tenshō.
Lightning Shower Rain- is a technique used by Raizen in his second form. Raizen traces his finger in the air and creates a streak of green energy light that breaks into sharp, glass-like needles of spiritual energy. Then, he swings his arm back and fires the energy needles at his opponent, inflicting a high amount of damage.
Hell Gate – After generating a field of energy that coalesces into a multituded of tiny energy spheres, Raizen then coalesces the balls into a powerful single energy sphere that he then kicks to his opponent. The scatter shot effect of this technique effectively ensures that the opponent gets hit at least once or more, and appears to display homing capabilities.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques ▬▬┤|Your List
• Bala • Cero • Hierro • Gonzui • Pesquisa • Negación • Garaganta Gran Ray Cero Caja Negación
▬▬┤|Custom Techniques . Cero Lamparos (ゼロライト (白中空フラッシュ), sero ramuparosu; Spanish for "Light Zero", Japanese for "White Hollow Flash") or more grammatically correct Cero Lampara, is a full-powered white Cero with a dark red outline to it. When using this technique, Raizen concentrates his vast spiritual energy with only his index finger into an condensed stark-white Cero with great might. When fired, it shines an immense white light that can burn the surrounding area it comes into contact with, and even leave those who stare at it temporarily blind .
1. The Shikai is not acceptable I'm going to list the reasons why. Refer to the spoiler below.
A Shikai is yes the release of a blade that is known to take shape. However it is much to overpowering, I suggest shrinking the size of your release to half of what you have currently. It is much to large to be considered a Shikai. I'm fully aware Unohana had a blade similar, but I've personally had issues with this..
I cannot allow you to ride inside of your shikai. It leaves it much to open for misuse, complications, and Auto movements. Being besides it and on top of it is fine, but inside I cannot allow that, I'm sorry.
Please pick a define element or attribute to your blade. It is either the Earth Element : Melee -or- Vibration : Melee. if you pick Vibration the shockwave is not needed.
Hellish Shockwave - Please have a defined and acceptable range. What is the radius in which this technique spans out.
Hellish Vibration - Ditto the top, also please explain this technique a bit more.
Heavenly Shockwave - This technique I'm going to have to deny, unless the release is say equipped to your feet to propels you forward with a stream of vibrations, it makes no sense. Not only that realistically a shockwave is an outward burst of energy that his propelled in all directions or in one general directions if at a focal point, in thus completely overruling your ability to change the directions of it in any means using energy or not. There are limits to what you can do. I suggest changing this or removing it all together.
2. Your Bankai is going to be changed as well. Like in the Shikai there is a spoiler below.
Again like in your Shikai I cannot and will not allow you to ride within your Bankai. It could cause too many issues I want to avoid now than have to deal with later. I apologize if this rips apart your concept.
Opposed Reverberation - I'm not sure if this is going to work as I have made it clear that I will not allow you to ride within your Bankai.
Prior Knowledge - If you are getting ride of two techniques than you are only able to the same amount from Shikai for Bankai. Pick those two and put them in a spoiler. You will not be allowed to switch them afterwards.
Overall your blade is not acceptable please fix or change what I have listed. Until this has been done your profile is Denied.
Posted: Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:45 pm
Yokai Yakuza
Okay,
1. Your blade type should be Melee : Fire Element. As the name and abilities seems to imply you are using flames
2. There are issues with your Resurrección. In the spoiler below I have listed them.
Devil's Hellfire - I do hope you are aware that this can be countered, avoid, and etc. To me it seems like it is an all happening suddenly thing, however I if you can quote me and explain that would be great.
Bunkai Teleport - I cannot allow this, I see to many issues with this technique, please remove and replace it.
Howl - As Espada and Arracnar have command over most lower hollows, I don't think there is a need for this technique. Seriously with a snap of a finger it was state that an Espada can call up to 5 Meno Grande. I highly recommend changing this.
Illusion Smash - Your weapons from what I see is a melee class with a sub of Fire element. Please remove this technique as it doesn't match or go with the type of blade and release you have.
3. Your Segunda Etapa also has some issue that you need to address.
Please hyperlink the image of your Segunda Etapa please. It is large and stretches the page.
The Cero is interesting, however please have it fire from your palm, finger or mouth. The Hair is a bit strange and much.
2nd Attack - Please explain in more details....
3rd Attack - Explain in more details and exactly how large these needles? I m having a hard time with this technique
Hell Gate - There are no Auto hitting techniques allowed in this guild. Tracking is fine, but it cannot auto hit them. You must allow your opponent the ability to counter, react, and etc. Not only that this guild also relies greatly on ones RPing abilities to determine the outcome of battles not just power and skills alone. Please remove and change/ replace this technique.
Until these issues are fixed, your profile is hereby DENIED.
Devils hellfire is avoidable in every way. It's basically just a quick rush followed by slashes. It is meant to catch the opponent of guard with the follow up flames,but that aspect can only be used if Raizen is on the ground. The only way I'd have all of it happening quickly is if Raizen were fighting hollow for some reason. Does that clarify your concern?
Posted: Fri Jun 14, 2013 9:55 pm
((Here, my character is now finished, at least for the most part. And yes, It's another vibration based zanpakuto, I'd planned on Katsuo having a vibration zanpakuto since I had applied for the visored position, so it was a coincidence that the others had done the same.))
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Takizawa, Katsuo Nickname: Taki
True Age: 275 Age Appeared: Early-twenties Birthdate: February 13 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O+
Life View:"People say make love, not war. I say, can't we do both?" Personality: Katsuo is best described as oversexed, flirtatious and lustful. He has a overactive imagination in which he always thinks or hopes things will lead to ecchi scenes. On the outside Katsuo seems cool, calm, and collected, but on the inside he is wild and perverted. He is not ashamed of licentious habits, which involve highlighting sexual terms in the dictionary, collecting eroge's and erotic magazines which he keeps in his room. Despite his inner pervert Katsuo is an avid brawler, having been known to greatly respect those who can defeat him in a fight and those who can push him to his limit. Katsuo sometimes contradicts his own logic in fighting. On one hand, he wishes to increase his own personal power. While on the other hand, he conceals his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. In spite of his two passions, Katsuo doesn't enjoy fighting seriously at all with women, often using the fight as a way to "cop a feel" or "sneak a peek".
Likes: • Women • Eroge • Battling • Ramen Dislikes • Cruelty Towards Women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Katsuo was raised in a largely populated section of North Rukongai, District 50, His father worked as a blacksmith for the district making them armor and weapons, since there was always a criminal presence. One day, a massive riot took place, one which substantially overwhelmed the town guards. Growing up in a crime infested town, Katsuo witnessed the death of many innocents; his own family included, this destruction caused by both the guards and the criminals. Seeing the destruction and chaos that both sides were willing to put into motion Katsuo left the district for Seireitei, knowing that if the shinigami had wanted to prevent this, they easily could have, but instead are to turn a blind eye to the situation . Entering the Seireitei with the goal of becoming a powerful shinigami capable of changing the matter with the Rukongai Districts, Katsuo entered into the Shin'o Academy. Upon entering, Katsuo was praised for his peerless Hakuda as well as Hoho skills, yet rebuked for his pitiful Zanjutsu skills, repeatedly failing the Zanjutsu portion the exams, which would have prevented him from becoming a Shinigami had it not been for his brilliance in other subjects.
After leaving the Shin'o Academy Katsuo was placed into the 12th division, first having his doubts about his division placement, he pictured himself as a fighter, not a scientist. Desiring a position in a more combat oriented division, Katsuo requested transfers, getting denied each time. However as he raised rank in the 12th division, going from an unseated to a seated officer, becoming more than just an errand boy, becoming an active participant in the experiments and research. As Katsuo began participating in these experiments, he realized that he actually enjoyed being in the Science division, it consisting of more than just running back and forth between areas obtaining materials for the Captain's research which he had been doing for a long time. With a new desire for knowledge, he quickly raised in ranks because of his skills, going from seat to seat an obsession growing within him, an obsession with hollows.
Katsuo gained the title of Captain after the previous 12th division Captain vanished suddenly, leaving behind little trace of what happened or would have caused him to flee the Soul Society. However, as Captain Katsuo did examine some of the previous captain(s) research which had been done, one of which involved a process called 'Hollowfication'. Having an obsession with Hollows, the idea immediately sparked Katsuo's interest. As he dug deeper into the older experiments, he came to learn that for those who underwent this 'Hollowfication'; the process of inserting a Hollow's soul into a normal soul, then breaking the boundary between them to try and turn the original soul into something more powerful; got their soul mixed up with the Hollow soul, becoming a monster unable to reason. In the end not only the boundary between souls, but also the soul itself and the external world is disrupted and the soul, regardless of its own will, self-destroys. This is called "Soul Suicide". Theorizing that under the proper circumstances, the 'Soul Suicide' could be properly prevented, resulting in tremendous power being given to a survivor, Katsuo began his experiments.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Cordovan Reiryoku Level: High { Start at this level }
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Air Dash: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Shunpo: Practitioner { start at this level } Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • { you may have one more at the same level } Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kendo: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kido Spells: Practitioner Level { starting at this level } • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Jumping: Practitioner Level { start at this level }
Strengths: • Hakuda • Hohō Weaknesses: • Katsuo will not fight seriously with women. • Zanjutsu Fears: • Cruelty towards women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Shindō (Vibration) Zanpakuto Location: Shindō is a set of dual Tantō's, which Katsuo keeps fastened to his back, just above his waistline. Zanpakuto Appearance: The Zanpakuto Shindō is two tanto's 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa'. 'Shinku Hana' an average length Tanto, with a red and black Ito, a golden kashira, and tsubaki menuki on the hilt, as well a glossy black saya marked with pinkish flowers, and a red and black sageo. As well as 'Ranfa', a Tanto with a similar design but a purple and black color scheme. Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:Image Zanpakuto Sword Type: Tantō (Dual Tantō's) Zanpakuto Type: Vibration
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Kami sori Shindō (Razor Vibration) Shikai Incantation: "Graze, Shindō" Shikai Description: When released, 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa' both change shape, their single bladed tantos transforming into conformed double-edged steel knifes, the tsubas bend around Katsuo knuckles in the form of a knuckle-duster made from a strong durable metal, designed for close combat, strongly resembling Mark 1 WWI Trench Knifes. The blades reinforced by a powerful alternating current and resonates at extremely high frequencies, allowing it to loosen the atomic bonds between atoms and easily cut through most materials with ease. Shikai Ability: • Sōdatsu (Scramble): Being a vibration type Zanpakutou, 'Kami Sori Shindō' is capable of inducing a high vibration state upon touch, in which molecules begin oscillating erratically increasing the spacial distance between them, forcing objects into a gaseous-like state. Causing physical matter to dismantle completely, permanently breaking the bonds between them. However in Reiatsu-based matter; Shinigami, Zanpakutou, Hollow, Etc. the Reiryoku acts as a catalyst for molecules to re-bond, causing them to only temporarily stay in this state (1 post in Shikai, 3 posts in Bankai). While in shikai extremely high Reiryoku levels can completely counteract this ability; such as a Captain's Bankai, however while in Bankai it no longer has it's Reiryoku restrictions. • Furu torikeshi (Wave nullification): Using Furu torikeshi Katsuo can absorb vibrations that make contact with or are emitted by him and neutralize any potentially harmful effects. This can be used to easily sneak up on enemies, preventing himself from making sound, or negate other sound and vibration based abilities. • Sakiboso ejji (Tapered Edge): Katsuo can control the sharpness in any object he touches by causing objects to vibrate at high or low frequencies, either imbuing or taking the quality of sharpness away. Sharp edges cut better, while non-edged surfaces, objects, like hands, can be imbued to cut through nearly anything. He can imbue an item as a trap, such as making blades of grass actually 'blades of grass'. Katsuo can also remove sharpness from things, turning knives and other edged weapons into awkward bludgeons against the user. • Mabataki (Blink): Vibrating his atoms at alternating frequencies, Katsuo is able to quickly move through objects and ignore most physical effects in their way, this is done by vibrating his atoms at the right frequencies to pass his atoms through the empty space of other atoms. However, blink does not ensure Katsuo will be unharmed by an attack, when used the Rp'er must role a 6 sided die, an even number being a successful blink while an odd means Katsuo failed to 'blink' or evade the attack. •Tsuruoto Shindō (弦音震動, Vibrating Tremors): Similar to the previous ability, using the vibrations from Shindo, Katsuo will stick the ground, sending violent vibrations coursing through the ground towards a target, causing several tremors to erupt in the ground. This can effectively throw the opponent off balance, giving Katsuo a chance to attack them. • Tokubetsuna Saundo (Specialized Noise): Katsuo vibrates the air at such a speed that it begins to create friction, between the air molecules, that he can contain the energy from the friction around his blade or other specified area. With a swing of his sword he can release the stored energy causing a violent explosion in the area.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: 'Bōgu shindō' (Protective Gear Vibration) Bankai Incantation: "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Bankai Description:Image: With the words "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Katsuo releases surge of reiatsu; As the bankai releases Katsuos knives began to radiate reiatsu, spiritual energy flowing from them over his arms, taking on the form of metal medieval gauntlets which run all the way up his arms into shoulder guards; his kosode and shitagi vanishing, his obi turning a crimson red. When it comes to vibration based zanpakuto Shindo is the equivalent to Hyōrinmaru compared to ice based zanpakuto, making Shindo is the strongest of all vibration type Zanpakutō in Soul Society. Bankai Ability: • Ryōshi Mabataki (Quantum Blink): An amplified version of 'Shindō's' blink ability, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' is similar, but instead of dealing with vibrations on a molecular it deals with them on a quantum level. Vibrating the sub-atomic particles which make him up at alternating frequencies, Katsuo quantumly tunnels though space; Quantum tunneling refers to the quantum mechanical phenomenon where a particle tunnels through a barrier that it classically could not surmount. Tunneling is often explained using the Heisenberg uncertainty principle and the wave–particle duality of matter. Unlike Blink, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' doesn't cause atoms to pass around other atoms, but literally through the atoms themselves, can be sustained for a limmited period of time(2 post) before requiring a cool down period(1 post), and does not require a die roll to succeed. • Bakufū (Blast Wave): Katsuo begins concentrating reitsu into both of his hands which begin to excite the air and cause it to vibrate extremely fast. Upon slamming the two separate vibrations together and releasing them, it creates a powerful technique sending out a Blast Wave though the air. The ears are most often affected by the overpressure, followed by the lungs and the hollow organs of the gastrointestinal tract, which sustain grave injury if the target is within a range of 50 meters, tearing the internal organs to shreds. •Fukuin Ganma (Gospel: Gamma): This causes his zanpakuto to ring at a certain frequency, which directly affects the brain. The ringing disrupts the opponents vestibular system, which contributes to balance in most mammals and to the sense of spatial orientation. Together with the cochlea, a part of the auditory system, it constitutes the labyrinth of the inner ear in most mammals, situated in the vestibulum in the inner ear . As movements consist of rotations and translations, the vestibular system comprises two components: the semicircular canal system, which indicate rotational movements; and the otoliths, which indicate linear accelerations. The vestibular system sends signals primarily to the neural structures that control eye movements, and to the muscles that keep a creature upright. So disrupting the system using this ability in-turn causes the target lose their motor skills and balance. • Hanshaha Shijima (Echoing Silence): When released by the phrase "Cancel Out", Katsuo's blade if already released reforges itself and takes an appearance of his unreleased tanto's, except for the difference of being in top notch condition. After it reforms the blade starts to hum as it starts to vibrate at super high speeds, reverberating at about 500,000 times per second allowing him to create a buzzsaw-like effect much stronger and faster then his shikai's similar ability. This high speed blade is virtually unblockable as its molecules are moving far to fast. As an application of this power, he is able to rapidly extend his blade at high speeds, using the principle of Superposition making his sword occupy several places at once in order to catch his opponents off guard.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques ( Your mask must be on! ) • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
1. Your blade type should be Melee : Fire Element. As the name and abilities seems to imply you are using flames
2. There are issues with your Resurrección. In the spoiler below I have listed them.
Devil's Hellfire - I do hope you are aware that this can be countered, avoid, and etc. To me it seems like it is an all happening suddenly thing, however I if you can quote me and explain that would be great.
Bunkai Teleport - I cannot allow this, I see to many issues with this technique, please remove and replace it.
Howl - As Espada and Arracnar have command over most lower hollows, I don't think there is a need for this technique. Seriously with a snap of a finger it was state that an Espada can call up to 5 Meno Grande. I highly recommend changing this.
Illusion Smash - Your weapons from what I see is a melee class with a sub of Fire element. Please remove this technique as it doesn't match or go with the type of blade and release you have.
3. Your Segunda Etapa also has some issue that you need to address.
Please hyperlink the image of your Segunda Etapa please. It is large and stretches the page.
The Cero is interesting, however please have it fire from your palm, finger or mouth. The Hair is a bit strange and much.
2nd Attack - Please explain in more details....
3rd Attack - Explain in more details and exactly how large these needles? I m having a hard time with this technique
Hell Gate - There are no Auto hitting techniques allowed in this guild. Tracking is fine, but it cannot auto hit them. You must allow your opponent the ability to counter, react, and etc. Not only that this guild also relies greatly on ones RPing abilities to determine the outcome of battles not just power and skills alone. Please remove and change/ replace this technique.
Until these issues are fixed, your profile is hereby DENIED.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Raizen Verensade Yakuzain Nickname: Warrior God, Lightning Flash El Diablo
True Age: 4,300 Age Appeared: 20-25 Birthdate: March 3 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 6'5 Weight: 180 lb Eye Color: Amber Hair Color: White Mask Remnant: Under all his hair are little horns. Hollow Hole Location: Just above Chest near his neck.
Life View: "I see the world how it is... in shades of gray. Nothing is totally clean... or totally dirty"
Personality: Raizen relentlessly drilled himself toward perfection and settled for nothing less from himself or those that once serve him. He believed that power and the ability to invoke awe and respect in his followers are what makes a person strong. He has neither pity nor mercy toward those he's marked as treasonous or inferior.When Raizen enters the battlefield, one should run. Raizen's power and overall presence makes those who are weaker than him faint out of shear terror.
Likes: Giving Advice Good battles Training Relaxing
Dislikes Kiss ups The Hollow Ruler Being called old man Aspect of Death: Solitude Fraccion: { Coming soon }
Rank: Espada = #1
Side:Espada
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ ? The Yakuzain Clan were once the biggest mercenary faction in eastern Japan, they were first formed during the Sengoku Era and ruled over the Kantō area. They are a yakuza group with Makai Yakuzain as their leader and use the character for fear (畏) as their symbol. There are about ten thousand martial artist who are considered members of the Yakuzain group, divided into about 70 sub-clans. Born the fifth child of Kirin Suigetsu and Ababa Terumī, he was often taken around on his father's patrols (much to his mother's dismay)..He took over as the Second Head of the Clan do to the defection of his four older siblings.As he got older Makai gained his fame as "Snake Hand Fighter" for defeating a group of fighters from the Moorim Clan .
Soon after that event Makai felt an emptiness inside him a void no amount of success can fill.Not only was his father and mother dead,his current lover suddenly left him to attend to her clan leaving him no comfort during his career. It was during this time he became the ruthless Yakuza he is known to be in the criminal under ground and massacred the Hyaku Monogatari Clan of 100 clan members lead.e Apparently Raizen was sent to Hell for being wicked,but escaped.He found his way to Menos forest and gained hollow powers.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: White Reiryoku Level: Immese
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Master • Air Dash: Advanced • Sonido: Master Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Exspert • Resshūken: ( Lightning Kickboxing): An elegant fighting style that is exsclusive to Raizen. This style relies on fast footwork in order to focus on fending off enemy attacks with the arms and using the legs to counterattack with powerful kicks. By combining his spiritual pressure,Raizen created a new fighting style , which he describes as "energy and style as one". Resshuken often involves him creating orbs of spiritual energy with his hands, which he then kicks toward the opponent, enhancing their offensive force.
Strengths: • Self proclaimed strongest Espada • Sonido:By introducing an additional step into the normal Sonído movement, Raizen can generate a number of clone-like afterimages of himself, do to his speed. Weaknesses: • His high speed regeneration is slow. • His need for souls can cause him to lose his mind if he hasn't eaten. He'd attack anyone and lose sanity. Fears: • Continuing to live his hollow existence with no change whatsoever. • Being purified and reborn • Being forgotten
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Maō Shōkan Buraddihauringu (Demon King Summoning Scream:Bloody Howling) Zanpakuto Location: In his chest. Zanpakuto Appearance:Sword Zanpakuto Type: Melee:Fire
▬▬┤|Resurrección Resurrección Name: Buraddihauringu Resurrección Incantation: "O gathering flames of darkness, treat our dear guests to the strains of your terrible song...hellion whose laughter chills the very soul, resound........Buraddihauringu (Bloody Howling)
Resurrección Description: An octagon-like glyph appears under Raizen, and dark flames of hollow energy erupt from the it. The flame cries out an eerie moan immediately.During the wail itself, Raizen's hair is replaced by a exo-skull and he begins to grow a pair of horns from his forehead. His reshi liquifies and covers his arms and legs solidifying into a form of armor. He then proceeds to grab his chest and pulls out his Zanpakutō;causing the flames to dissipate. As the hymn nears its end,his skin turns crimson and he grows a thick red tail. At the end he brandishes his sword and the transformation is complete. Resurrection ]
Resurrección Ability:
Flame Manipulation: His unique spiritual energy now allows him to generate substantial quantities of fire from the surrounding atmosphere and then subsequently manipulate this heated substance into seemingly whatever form he chooses, almost immediately after the flame's initial production. In this manner he is able to quickly form a great variety of fiery structures that are suitable for a diverse range of purposes, no matter if the nature of these circumstances demand offensive or defensive uses
Devils Hellfire: Raizen holds his sword pointed towards the ground with both hands clasped around its hilt while he closes his eyes to focus his thoughts, with several multicolored flower petals falling around him. When he opens his eyes, he creates a field of dark energy around himself, granting himself with a large burst of strength. He begins a mad dash to the enemy, striking his sword down before performing a combo of several slashes. At the end of the combo, he rises into the air and slams the ground with his sword, causing pillars fire to rise from the ground and incinerate the foe.
Shinseina Hi Tenshō (太陽牙天衝, (聖なる日, Sacred Sun Heaven-Piercer): Raizens white reiatsu creates flame-like aura around himself,which can be channeled into an attack or armor.The attack would be like a getsuga Tenshō when used by his sword.
Magōshinjū: (でもにく ろありんぐ ごづ "Demonic Roaring God"):Raizen's blade gains a mouth that opens wide screaming out a loud sound wave. This sound wave can be used by the sword internally and cause the sword to vibrate like an electric saw, increasing its cutting power.
Bloody Howling: This attack is very similar in comparison to Magōshinjū , as it also assumes the form of a mouth, but it is instead connected to the sword movements. The attack itself follows either an upwards or downwards slash, taking the form of a large mouth that follows the arc of the preceeding sword swing, vastly increasing the range of effect of the slash. The attack is dark black with a crimson aura and outline.
Explosion of Laughter:This attack is very similar in structure to Its predecessors, as it also assumes the form of a mouth, but it is instead launched at the enemy as a projectile. It grinds through the floor, causing heavy destruction as it does so, while heading towards the enemy and will explode at any time when it makes contact along its path. The majority of the attack features a dark black color surrounded by a crimson aura. The attack itself though is not confined solely to the ground but can also be launched as an aerial projectile as well. Under these conditions the attack will literally try to "consume" the opponent, using its mouth, encompassing as much of their body as possible before detonating emitting a slight "Heheheheheheh" afterwards.
Fury Palm Rush: In his frenzied state, Raizen grasps the opponent head or throat in his left palm and forcibly drives them forward into a nearby structure (a building or a wall) . He continues to push back with a massive burst of his spiritual energy, propelling forward, all the while crushing the opponents head or throat in his grip.The weakness in this is the close proximity to his opponent,even if caught of guard a skilled opponent might still be able to cast Kido.
(This is another move below which can be substituted for fury palm rush if you still don't approve of it)
Needle Hell:By extending his hair around his body, Raizen shoots multiple hardened needle-like hairs towards the enemy.Spiritual pressure grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a cheap counter.Raizens preference is to spin around rapidly and unleash a barrage of these needles. They are fairly weak against armor and elements.
Demon Claw:allows the Raizen to extend his arms.
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa Segunda Etapa Name: Maō ( Demon King) Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Feel the Fear and Flee in Terror, Maō "
Segunda Etapa Description: An pentagon-like glyph appears under Raizen, and white-red flames of hollow energy erupt from the ground. The flames cries out an eerie moan immediately followed by the sound of prayer chants in the form of a hymn that echoes throughout the immediate area, often confusing those who witness the transformation process.During the hymn itself, Raizen's body bulks up and his horns turn crimson his skin becomes more armored. As the hymn nears its end,his skin turns golden and his tail become whip-like.Once he channels his spiritual pressure thru his zanpaktou he makes a diagonal swing that causes the blade to shatter like glass and reveal its true beauty. In this state the sword has now transmogrified into a sleek and slender crimson blade.
Segunda Etapa Ability: Āoshǎn is Chinese for "Demonic Hollow Flash", which are high-powered fan shaped Cero that can be fired from either his , palm or finger,or mouth.These are about as strong as an Orcuras Cero.
Garra del Diablo( Claw of the Devil) :By extending his hand Raizen uses the rawest form of his hollow energy to form arms, which he can freely manipulate to attack his foes. The arms,like Raizens ,are clawed while the rest of the arm seems to lack any kind of joint, thus allowing them to have flexible movements that will generally be impossible for normal arms. They can also serve other purposes such as grappling hooks, to either grab onto objects or enemies from great distances, for offensive means, as merely touching one of these can cause fatal burns.
Lightning Shower Rain- is a technique used by Raizen in his second form. Raizen traces his finger in the air and creates a streak of green energy light that breaks into sharp, glass-like needles of spiritual energy similar to Senbon needles. Then, he swings his arm back and fires the energy needles at his opponent, which can easily pierce thru building structures .
Hell Gate – After generating a field of energy that coalesces into a multitude of tiny energy spheres, Raizen then coalesces the balls into a powerful single energy sphere that he then kicks to his opponent. The scatter shot effect of this technique could keep multiple enemies at bay, and appears to display slight homing capabilities and explode on impact.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques ▬▬┤|Your List
• Bala • Cero • Hierro • Gonzui • Pesquisa • Negación • Garaganta Gran Ray Cero Caja Negación
▬▬┤|Custom Techniques . Cero Lamparos (ゼロライト (白中空フラッシュ), sero ramuparosu; Spanish for "Light Zero", Japanese for "White Hollow Flash") or more grammatically correct Cero Lampara, is a full-powered white Cero with a dark red outline to it. When using this technique, Raizen concentrates his vast spiritual energy with only his index finger into an condensed stark-white Cero with great might. When fired, it shines an immense white light that can burn the surrounding area it comes into contact with, and even leave those who stare at it temporarily blind .
I hope this is better
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 2:28 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Eneigh Horimo Nickname:
True Age: 137 Age Appeared: 20's Birthdate: July 17 Gender: male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: 0-
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 5'11" Weight: 135 Eye Color: Green Hair Color: White Mask Remnant: It sits between his eyes arcing above and over to his ears like a circlet. Hollow Hole Location: Left shoulder
Life View: "As long as you survive it counts." Personality: Eneigh is a very calm individual, he is focused and disciplined. Seeming calm masks the severe cruelty that lies beneath the surface. Unlike many of his king Eneigh likes to pick a single target and make it suffer until it can take no more.
Likes: Duels tea Seizing power when available Dislikes Open conflict Fire
Aspect of Death: Rank: Side: Espada
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Eneigh understands the cruelty of the world better than most and is a reflection of that very aspect. Born and abandoned at a young age he had to learn to fend for himself. Learning from failure by starving is not a pleasant thing, and teaches you quickly about what you are willing to do to survive. Eneigh killed, stole, and fought for everything he could get. In his early twenties you could say that he had established enough of a reputation that he didn't need to resort to such petty things. He as a minor king in a small part of a big city.
Eneighs death was nothing more than a show for the people when he was beaten by some new thugs who had moved in and claimed his territory as their own. In the middle of the day Eneigh was beaten to death to simply send a message to the other folks living in the squalor. A message that Eneigh took with him into the after life.
As a hollow Eneigh avoided Shinigami and focused on sending messages, some as simple as piling bodies where shinigami had left through Senkai gates to simply show them they weren't good enough. Eneigh is a horribly thorough individual when it comes to demoralizing and finally destroying his opponents. In Hueco Mundo he was nothing though, in this cruel world there was nothing to take from anyone because there was nothing to be had. Eneigh had to adapt and become something more.
Eneigh needed something to make him more powerful, he needed a driving force to push him to keep getting better and he found it in the Queen of Hollows. An individual who had things to lose like no other. After Eneigh's first attempted a bleeding away what she had built he was beaten within an inch of his life. The only thing that saved him was prostrating himself at her feet and swearing an oath of fealty. Eneigh began as nothing more than an insignificant fly and has raised himself up to the Queens Fraccion. He is her dagger and shield when necessary, and he performs his duty with a deadly precision.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Light Blue Reiryoku Level: Average
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Novice Level • Air Dash: Novice Level • Sonido: Adept Level Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level • Aikido: Practitioner level Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Novice Level • Kendo: Practitioner Level Reiryoku Technique: • Reiryoku Gathering: Novice Level Other Techniques: • Dashing, Practitioner Level • Jumping, Practitioner Level
Strengths: • Disarming • Grappling Weaknesses: • Physical Strength • Large scale combat, he cant focus Fears: • Being erased • Fire •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Numachi Junin Zanpakuto Location: On his back Zanpakuto Appearance:My sword Zanpakuto Type: Elemental: Water
▬▬┤|Resurrección Resurrección Name: The black mist Resurrección Incantation: "Drag down deep the fools who tread your waters Numachi Junin!" Resurrección Description: Mist begins pouring out of his blade surrounding a ten foot circle as his form is changed. He now has light armor and his sword gives off an mist. Resurrección Ability:
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa Segunda Etapa Name: Segunda Etapa Incantation: Segunda Etapa Description: Segunda Etapa Ability: { Hollow Ruler = 5 techniques } { Espada = 4 techniques }
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques ▬▬┤|Your List • Bala • Cero • Hierro • Gonzui • Pesquisa • Negación • Garaganta ▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
Aurelius Pendragon
Diablo en Musica 92
Eneigh
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 3:01 pm
Eneigh
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Eneigh Horimo Nickname:
True Age: 137 Age Appeared: 20's Birthdate: July 17 Gender: male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: 0-
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 5'11" Weight: 135 Eye Color: Green Hair Color: White Mask Remnant: It sits between his eyes arcing above and over to his ears like a circlet. Hollow Hole Location: Left shoulder
Life View: "As long as you survive it counts." Personality: Eneigh is a very calm individual, he is focused and disciplined. Seeming calm masks the severe cruelty that lies beneath the surface. Unlike many of his king Eneigh likes to pick a single target and make it suffer until it can take no more.
Likes: Duels tea Seizing power when available Dislikes Open conflict Fire
Aspect of Death: Rank: Side: Espada
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Eneigh understands the cruelty of the world better than most and is a reflection of that very aspect. Born and abandoned at a young age he had to learn to fend for himself. Learning from failure by starving is not a pleasant thing, and teaches you quickly about what you are willing to do to survive. Eneigh killed, stole, and fought for everything he could get. In his early twenties you could say that he had established enough of a reputation that he didn't need to resort to such petty things. He as a minor king in a small part of a big city.
Eneighs death was nothing more than a show for the people when he was beaten by some new thugs who had moved in and claimed his territory as their own. In the middle of the day Eneigh was beaten to death to simply send a message to the other folks living in the squalor. A message that Eneigh took with him into the after life.
As a hollow Eneigh avoided Shinigami and focused on sending messages, some as simple as piling bodies where shinigami had left through Senkai gates to simply show them they weren't good enough. Eneigh is a horribly thorough individual when it comes to demoralizing and finally destroying his opponents.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Light Blue Reiryoku Level: Average
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Novice Level • Air Dash: Novice Level • Sonido: Adept Level Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level • Aikido: Practitioner level Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Novice Level • Kendo: Practitioner Level Reiryoku Technique: • Reiryoku Gathering: Novice Level Other Techniques: • Dashing, Practitioner Level • Jumping, Practitioner Level
Strengths: • Disarming • Grappling Weaknesses: • Physical Strength • Large scale combat, he cant focus Fears: • Being erased • Fire •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Numachi Junin Zanpakuto Location: On his back Zanpakuto Appearance:My sword Zanpakuto Type: Elemental: Water
▬▬┤|Resurrección Resurrección Name: The black mist Resurrección Incantation: "Drag down deep the fools who tread your waters Numachi Junin!" Resurrección Description: Mist begins pouring out of his blade surrounding a ten foot circle as his form is changed. He now has light armor and his sword gives off an mist. Resurrección Ability:
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa Segunda Etapa Name: Segunda Etapa Incantation: Segunda Etapa Description: Segunda Etapa Ability: { Hollow Ruler = 5 techniques } { Espada = 4 techniques }
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques ▬▬┤|Your List • Bala • Cero • Hierro • Gonzui • Pesquisa • Negación • Garaganta ▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
No Abilities for your Release? Just Put in 2 for now. At least until you Can Achieve it. I'll let you leave your Reiryoku Level at Average, but you'll have to get your Stats generated by Diablo en Musica. Send him a PM, Tell him you are the Fraccion of the Queen of the Hollows, and that Aurelius Pendragon has allowed you to keep a Reiryoku Level of Average. Also, Tell him what your character will be specializing in (Hollow Abilities, Zanpakuto Abilities, Physical Abilities, etc.)
Other than that, If you don't want to add anything to your Ressurecion, you are approved. (Note: If you do add something in the future, Post the Technique you are adding here: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=23191433 )
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 3:32 pm
Shishawoikasu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Takizawa, Katsuo Nickname: Taki
True Age: 275 Age Appeared: Early-twenties Birthdate: February 13 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O+
Life View:"People say make love, not war. I say, can't we do both?" Personality: Katsuo is best described as oversexed, flirtatious and lustful. He has a overactive imagination in which he always thinks or hopes things will lead to ecchi scenes. On the outside Katsuo seems cool, calm, and collected, but on the inside he is wild and perverted. He is not ashamed of licentious habits, which involve highlighting sexual terms in the dictionary, collecting eroge's and erotic magazines which he keeps in his room. Despite his inner pervert Katsuo is an avid brawler, having been known to greatly respect those who can defeat him in a fight and those who can push him to his limit. Katsuo sometimes contradicts his own logic in fighting. On one hand, he wishes to increase his own personal power. While on the other hand, he conceals his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. In spite of his two passions, Katsuo doesn't enjoy fighting seriously at all with women, often using the fight as a way to "cop a feel" or "sneak a peek".
Likes: • Women • Eroge • Battling • Ramen Dislikes • Cruelty Towards Women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Katsuo was raised in a largely populated section of North Rukongai, District 50, His father worked as a blacksmith for the district making them armor and weapons, since there was always a criminal presence. One day, a massive riot took place, one which substantially overwhelmed the town guards. Growing up in a crime infested town, Katsuo witnessed the death of many innocents; his own family included, this destruction caused by both the guards and the criminals. Seeing the destruction and chaos that both sides were willing to put into motion Katsuo left the district for Seireitei, knowing that if the shinigami had wanted to prevent this, they easily could have, but instead are to turn a blind eye to the situation . Entering the Seireitei with the goal of becoming a powerful shinigami capable of changing the matter with the Rukongai Districts, Katsuo entered into the Shin'o Academy. Upon entering, Katsuo was praised for his peerless Hakuda as well as Hoho skills, yet rebuked for his pitiful Zanjutsu skills, repeatedly failing the Zanjutsu portion the exams, which would have prevented him from becoming a Shinigami had it not been for his brilliance in other subjects.
After leaving the Shin'o Academy Katsuo was placed into the 12th division, first having his doubts about his division placement, he pictured himself as a fighter, not a scientist. Desiring a position in a more combat oriented division, Katsuo requested transfers, getting denied each time. However as he raised rank in the 12th division, going from an unseated to a seated officer, becoming more than just an errand boy, becoming an active participant in the experiments and research. As Katsuo began participating in these experiments, he realized that he actually enjoyed being in the Science division, it consisting of more than just running back and forth between areas obtaining materials for the Captain's research which he had been doing for a long time. With a new desire for knowledge, he quickly raised in ranks because of his skills, going from seat to seat an obsession growing within him, an obsession with hollows.
Katsuo gained the title of Captain after the previous 12th division Captain vanished suddenly, leaving behind little trace of what happened or would have caused him to flee the Soul Society. However, as Captain Katsuo did examine some of the previous captain(s) research which had been done, one of which involved a process called 'Hollowfication'. Having an obsession with Hollows, the idea immediately sparked Katsuo's interest. As he dug deeper into the older experiments, he came to learn that for those who underwent this 'Hollowfication'; the process of inserting a Hollow's soul into a normal soul, then breaking the boundary between them to try and turn the original soul into something more powerful; got their soul mixed up with the Hollow soul, becoming a monster unable to reason. In the end not only the boundary between souls, but also the soul itself and the external world is disrupted and the soul, regardless of its own will, self-destroys. This is called "Soul Suicide". Theorizing that under the proper circumstances, the 'Soul Suicide' could be properly prevented, resulting in tremendous power being given to a survivor, Katsuo began his experiments.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Cordovan Reiryoku Level: High { Start at this level }
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Air Dash: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Shunpo: Practitioner { start at this level } Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • { you may have one more at the same level } Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kendo: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kido Spells: Practitioner Level { starting at this level } • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Jumping: Practitioner Level { start at this level }
Strengths: • Hakuda • Hohō Weaknesses: • Katsuo will not fight seriously with women. • Zanjutsu Fears: • Cruelty towards women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Shindō (Vibration) Zanpakuto Location: Shindō is a set of dual Tantō's, which Katsuo keeps fastened to his back, just above his waistline. Zanpakuto Appearance: The Zanpakuto Shindō is two tanto's 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa'. 'Shinku Hana' an average length Tanto, with a red and black Ito, a golden kashira, and tsubaki menuki on the hilt, as well a glossy black saya marked with pinkish flowers, and a red and black sageo. As well as 'Ranfa', a Tanto with a similar design but a purple and black color scheme. Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:Image Zanpakuto Sword Type: Tantō (Dual Tantō's) Zanpakuto Type: Vibration
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Kami sori Shindō (Razor Vibration) Shikai Incantation: "Graze, Shindō" Shikai Description: When released, 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa' both change shape, their single bladed tantos transforming into conformed double-edged steel knifes, the tsubas bend around Katsuo knuckles in the form of a knuckle-duster made from a strong durable metal, designed for close combat, strongly resembling Mark 1 WWI Trench Knifes. The blades reinforced by a powerful alternating current and resonates at extremely high frequencies, allowing it to loosen the atomic bonds between atoms and easily cut through most materials with ease. Shikai Ability: • Sōdatsu (Scramble): Being a vibration type Zanpakutou, 'Kami Sori Shindō' is capable of inducing a high vibration state upon touch, in which molecules begin oscillating erratically increasing the spacial distance between them, forcing objects into a gaseous-like state. Causing physical matter to dismantle completely, permanently breaking the bonds between them. However in Reiatsu-based matter; Shinigami, Zanpakutou, Hollow, Etc. the Reiryoku acts as a catalyst for molecules to re-bond, causing them to only temporarily stay in this state (1 post in Shikai, 3 posts in Bankai). While in shikai extremely high Reiryoku levels can completely counteract this ability; such as a Captain's Bankai, however while in Bankai it no longer has it's Reiryoku restrictions. • Furu torikeshi (Wave nullification): Using Furu torikeshi Katsuo can absorb vibrations that make contact with or are emitted by him and neutralize any potentially harmful effects. This can be used to easily sneak up on enemies, preventing himself from making sound, or negate other sound and vibration based abilities. • Sakiboso ejji (Tapered Edge): Katsuo can control the sharpness in any object he touches by causing objects to vibrate at high or low frequencies, either imbuing or taking the quality of sharpness away. Sharp edges cut better, while non-edged surfaces, objects, like hands, can be imbued to cut through nearly anything. He can imbue an item as a trap, such as making blades of grass actually 'blades of grass'. Katsuo can also remove sharpness from things, turning knives and other edged weapons into awkward bludgeons against the user. • Mabataki (Blink): Vibrating his atoms at alternating frequencies, Katsuo is able to quickly move through objects and ignore most physical effects in their way, this is done by vibrating his atoms at the right frequencies to pass his atoms through the empty space of other atoms. However, blink does not ensure Katsuo will be unharmed by an attack, when used the Rp'er must role a 6 sided die, an even number being a successful blink while an odd means Katsuo failed to 'blink' or evade the attack. •Tsuruoto Shindō (弦音震動, Vibrating Tremors): Similar to the previous ability, using the vibrations from Shindo, Katsuo will stick the ground, sending violent vibrations coursing through the ground towards a target, causing several tremors to erupt in the ground. This can effectively throw the opponent off balance, giving Katsuo a chance to attack them. • Tokubetsuna Saundo (Specialized Noise): Katsuo vibrates the air at such a speed that it begins to create friction, between the air molecules, that he can contain the energy from the friction around his blade or other specified area. With a swing of his sword he can release the stored energy causing a violent explosion in the area.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: 'Bōgu shindō' (Protective Gear Vibration) Bankai Incantation: "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Bankai Description:Image: With the words "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Katsuo releases surge of reiatsu; As the bankai releases Katsuos knives began to radiate reiatsu, spiritual energy flowing from them over his arms, taking on the form of metal medieval gauntlets which run all the way up his arms into shoulder guards; his kosode and shitagi vanishing, his obi turning a crimson red. When it comes to vibration based zanpakuto Shindo is the equivalent to Hyōrinmaru compared to ice based zanpakuto, making Shindo is the strongest of all vibration type Zanpakutō in Soul Society. Bankai Ability: • Ryōshi Mabataki (Quantum Blink): An amplified version of 'Shindō's' blink ability, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' is similar, but instead of dealing with vibrations on a molecular it deals with them on a quantum level. Vibrating the sub-atomic particles which make him up at alternating frequencies, Katsuo quantumly tunnels though space; Quantum tunneling refers to the quantum mechanical phenomenon where a particle tunnels through a barrier that it classically could not surmount. Tunneling is often explained using the Heisenberg uncertainty principle and the wave–particle duality of matter. Unlike Blink, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' doesn't cause atoms to pass around other atoms, but literally through the atoms themselves, can be sustained for a limmited period of time(2 post) before requiring a cool down period(1 post), and does not require a die roll to succeed. • Bakufū (Blast Wave): Katsuo begins concentrating reitsu into both of his hands which begin to excite the air and cause it to vibrate extremely fast. Upon slamming the two separate vibrations together and releasing them, it creates a powerful technique sending out a Blast Wave though the air. The ears are most often affected by the overpressure, followed by the lungs and the hollow organs of the gastrointestinal tract, which sustain grave injury if the target is within a range of 50 meters, tearing the internal organs to shreds. •Fukuin Ganma (Gospel: Gamma): This causes his zanpakuto to ring at a certain frequency, which directly affects the brain. The ringing disrupts the opponents vestibular system, which contributes to balance in most mammals and to the sense of spatial orientation. Together with the cochlea, a part of the auditory system, it constitutes the labyrinth of the inner ear in most mammals, situated in the vestibulum in the inner ear . As movements consist of rotations and translations, the vestibular system comprises two components: the semicircular canal system, which indicate rotational movements; and the otoliths, which indicate linear accelerations. The vestibular system sends signals primarily to the neural structures that control eye movements, and to the muscles that keep a creature upright. So disrupting the system using this ability in-turn causes the target lose their motor skills and balance. • Hanshaha Shijima (Echoing Silence): When released by the phrase "Cancel Out", Katsuo's blade if already released reforges itself and takes an appearance of his unreleased tanto's, except for the difference of being in top notch condition. After it reforms the blade starts to hum as it starts to vibrate at super high speeds, reverberating at about 500,000 times per second allowing him to create a buzzsaw-like effect much stronger and faster then his shikai's similar ability. This high speed blade is virtually unblockable as its molecules are moving far to fast. As an application of this power, he is able to rapidly extend his blade at high speeds, using the principle of Superposition making his sword occupy several places at once in order to catch his opponents off guard.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques ( Your mask must be on! ) • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
Issue wise, I only have an issue with Fukuin Ganma (Gospel: Gamma) and Ryōshi Mabataki (Quantum Blink) We'll start with Kukuin Ganma. It is OP. It's an instant win against those with the ability to hear. And that is probably everyone. Use this move, and it is instant Game over, practically. While it would be cool to have something like that on my side, It will cause way too many problems.
As for Ryōshi Mabataki, the only thing I have an Issue with is the Cooldown time. Make it 2 and 2. Something like scrambling your atoms may be a neat ability, but it is still something that would require too much focus to do every turn. And the required focus would not be something attainable in a battle.
Other than that, Move your Reiryoku level from High to Great.
Once you have fixed these things, resubmit. Diablo might want to add some things in about the Zanpakuto. (Although The biggest issue might be with the self-proclamation of your Zanpakuto being the most powerful Vibration-type.
Life View: "Don't keep frowning. Remember, people who smile more live longer!" "It's all about having fun and doing your best, that's what counts! Personality: Rose is very shy at first glance. She is usually very timid around people she never met before and she is very sensitive to comments. Once you first meet her, she will seem soft and closed up. It will take her a while to share herself, or open up purposely. But, when you get to know her more, she's energetic and outgoing. She is always playing around and is usually very calm. When in battle, she becomes very serious, but playful as well. Just because she fights doesn't mean she has to be too serious.
Likes: Cute dogs. Cats. The color blue. Kawaii things. Penguins. Birds. Animals, in general. Having fun. Video Games. Sweets. Food. Dislikes Mean people. Bullies. Grumpy people. Dangerous Animals. Better looking girls. Dead animals. No fun.
Hollow Mask:Mask Rank: Unseated { start at this } Side: Vizards, Gotei 13
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ As a human, Rose was born into a rich family. She was born loud and adventurous, and her parents just loved her. She was pudgy when she was young, but as she grew up, that pudginess helped her to develop the other parts of her body. As she grew up she went to school and graduated with A's. She was usually very shy, and didn't really have much friends, but the friends she did make were very supportive of her. She was shunned for being too quiet, and she would usually become depressed, but her friends would quickly pull her back to being her happy courageous self.
As she grew up and went to collage, she went to work as a delivery nurse. Besides the blood and stuff, it was nice to work among cute babies. It was adorable, and it made her happy to see lives being created by Mother Nature. She worked happily, going to school, and going home to live with her parents. Since she was an only child, it was alright if she lived with them. But, she also had her advantages of being rich. Since she was rich and she got whatever she wanted, she was able to get all the video games she wanted. She may not seem like it, but she was one hell of a gamer. She loved gaming, and she used to battle lots of people. She wouldn't win all the time, but she won a good majority of times. She had fun with it all the same.
But her fun never lasted.
When she had just turned 21, she was at work when she was told that her parents have died and that all their riches belong to her. She was sad and distressed. They were presumably her only family. How could she have lost them now? Sad and in dismay, she made her way home after her work to see that there were no police or anything. She was informed by a police officer that had come here recently that the bodies weren't discovered, but they were able to find prints and blood, but that's about it. Confused, but still depressed, she went upstairs to her room and slept that night. But she never woke up. In her sleep, she was killed by a Hollow, one that she did not sense. The patroling Shinigami could not rescue her in time, but quickly killed off the Hollow. He soon helped her pass her soul through to the Soul Society.
Waking up in the Soul Society was strange. She didn't know anyone and she was sure that had no true recollection of her life before. She wondered aimlessly, still being proud in her parts and making lots of friends with the locals of the Rukongai. It was then that she was informed about the Shinigami school that was gonna accept new students. Smiling, she decided to join, but on the day she joined, she was attacked by a hollow. This time, she was able to escape and hide, but she was badly wounded in the struggle before a Shinigami was able to save her. It was the same that saved her before. Smiling, he soon decided to bring her into his home, soon letting her stay with him when she felt better and proposed she joined the Shinigami Academy. With a smile, she obliged, soon going for a full 5 years.
After the five years, she was told that with her fighting style, they found Hollow like particles in her Spiritual Pressure as well. Knowing what this would cause through lots of reading, she took another year to control her Powers, soon resulting in the affect of her Inner Hollow being formed. She hasn't over come it yet, but she will make sure to try her best to overcome it. Meanwhile, she was given the ability to choose a rank of her choice. She was sure she wanted to be part of Gotei 13. For now, she stayed unseated, not sure where to start. But, seeing as she could choose a different role, she soon became a member of the Vizards.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Sky blue. Reiryoku Level: High
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Expert • Air Dash: Advance • Shunpo: Expert Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Advance • Judo: Advance Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Expert • Kendo: Adept Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Expert • Kido Spells: Advanced • Reiryoku Gathering: Advanced Other Techniques: • Dashing: Adept • Jumping: Expert
Strengths: • She is a good planner, despite her overactive personality. • She is considered well thought out and actually a good cook. Weaknesses: • Has a rough sense of direction. • It's hard for her to hide when she's hyper, so she tends to be caught more often. Fears: • Crawling insects. • Needles. • Scary things.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Gādian· Enjeru | ガーディアン·エンジェル Zanpakuto Location: Around the waist, with a sash attached to it. Zanpakuto Appearance:Double swords {Instead of black and red, it's white and blue.} Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:Spirit Zanpakuto Sword Type: Two Nodachis. Zanpakuto Type: It's a Melee weapon. The elements it holds is Water and Light.
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Kami no Tenshi Shikai Incantation: "Let the light purify, Kami no Tenshi!" Shikai Description: When released into Shikai, Gādian· Enjeru will form together. Stabbing the buts together, the ribbons rap around the opposite weapon and it's consumed in light and white feathers. Once the feathers disperse and scatter, it will soon become a double-edged spear, looking like the one as seen in the picture used. The dagger part will look to be of a diamond, but is much longer than what it seems in the picture, probably by a few centimeters, or two or three inches. Shikai Ability: • Kuiaratameru {Repent}: The edges of the staff will brighten up and she will be surrounded by feathers. The feathers she touches with her staff will harden, and she can manipulate them to send them flying which way she wants. But, the downfall to this attack is that the more the feathers she uses, the more she must concentrate on them. Just concentrating on them will leave her vulnerable up close, or she will be left vulnerable if she is more distracted in the feathers she manipulates. • Kami no kōi {God's Favor}: With her staff, she is able to heal herself. Spinning her staff above her, a blue-like sphere will form around here. In it, she could heal others or the barrier itself heals her. It doesn't stay up for too long, but it usually stays up for at least 2 posts. • Howaitohebunshūtā {White Heaven Shooter}: Her staff on the top starts to glow brightly. Aiming it at her opponent, it would become brighter and brighter until a ball starts to form from the tip. It soon shoots out like a cero. In it's wake, it will spread out white feathers as it shoots out. This move won't be used for at least 5 posts each. • Hitsujikai no sutaffu {Shepard's Staff}: Her staff will brighten up, and she will tap it hard on the ground. In this sense, she will be able to call upon snow-white angel guardians to fight alongside her. She could only some 4 every 5 posts. It will drain her if she tries to overexert herself. When one is defeated, it will disperse into feathers, soon disintegrating into nothing. • Tenshi no raito {Angel's Light}: Light will form onto her staff, soon she will be able to heal all of her allies in battle. Being kind, she usually also heals her opponents, unless they are the enemy on purpose.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Saishūjōka Bankai Incantation: "this is our last stand, Saishūjōka!" Bankai Description: The lance will form break apart to form two large hand guns. She could carry them with ease, despite their heavy posture. They are blue, and the designs on it are white. They glow by the handles, signifying her Spiritual Connection to it. Bankai Ability: • Howaito shotto {White Shot}: She could shoot three Reiatsu bullets per second. She can fire fast, and she could boost their speed by adding in some of her Spiritual Pressure. If pushed to an extent, can drain her repeatedly throughout the fight.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 8:55 pm
Majestic Sugar
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rose Katosanji Nickname: Rose, Kato, Sanji.
True Age: 184 Age Appeared: Early 20s. Birthdate: August 23rd Gender: Female Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: BO
Life View: "Don't keep frowning. Remember, people who smile more live longer!" "It's all about having fun and doing your best, that's what counts! Personality: Rose is very shy at first glance. She is usually very timid around people she never met before and she is very sensitive to comments. Once you first meet her, she will seem soft and closed up. It will take her a while to share herself, or open up purposely. But, when you get to know her more, she's energetic and outgoing. She is always playing around and is usually very calm. When in battle, she becomes very serious, but playful as well. Just because she fights doesn't mean she has to be too serious.
Likes: Cute dogs. Cats. The color blue. Kawaii things. Penguins. Birds. Animals, in general. Having fun. Video Games. Sweets. Food. Dislikes Mean people. Bullies. Grumpy people. Dangerous Animals. Better looking girls. Dead animals. No fun.
Hollow Mask:Mask Rank: Unseated { start at this } Side: Vizards, Gotei 13
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ As a human, Rose was born into a rich family. She was born loud and adventurous, and her parents just loved her. She was pudgy when she was young, but as she grew up, that pudginess helped her to develop the other parts of her body. As she grew up she went to school and graduated with A's. She was usually very shy, and didn't really have much friends, but the friends she did make were very supportive of her. She was shunned for being too quiet, and she would usually become depressed, but her friends would quickly pull her back to being her happy courageous self.
As she grew up and went to collage, she went to work as a delivery nurse. Besides the blood and stuff, it was nice to work among cute babies. It was adorable, and it made her happy to see lives being created by Mother Nature. She worked happily, going to school, and going home to live with her parents. Since she was an only child, it was alright if she lived with them. But, she also had her advantages of being rich. Since she was rich and she got whatever she wanted, she was able to get all the video games she wanted. She may not seem like it, but she was one hell of a gamer. She loved gaming, and she used to battle lots of people. She wouldn't win all the time, but she won a good majority of times. She had fun with it all the same.
But her fun never lasted.
When she had just turned 21, she was at work when she was told that her parents have died and that all their riches belong to her. She was sad and distressed. They were presumably her only family. How could she have lost them now? Sad and in dismay, she made her way home after her work to see that there were no police or anything. She was informed by a police officer that had come here recently that the bodies weren't discovered, but they were able to find prints and blood, but that's about it. Confused, but still depressed, she went upstairs to her room and slept that night. But she never woke up. In her sleep, she was killed by a Hollow, one that she did not sense. The patroling Shinigami could not rescue her in time, but quickly killed off the Hollow. He soon helped her pass her soul through to the Soul Society.
Waking up in the Soul Society was strange. She didn't know anyone and she was sure that had no true recollection of her life before. She wondered aimlessly, still being proud in her parts and making lots of friends with the locals of the Rukongai. It was then that she was informed about the Shinigami school that was gonna accept new students. Smiling, she decided to join, but on the day she joined, she was attacked by a hollow. This time, she was able to escape and hide, but she was badly wounded in the struggle before a Shinigami was able to save her. It was the same that saved her before. Smiling, he soon decided to bring her into his home, soon letting her stay with him when she felt better and proposed she joined the Shinigami Academy. With a smile, she obliged, soon going for a full 5 years.
After the five years, she was told that with her fighting style, they found Hollow like particles in her Spiritual Pressure as well. Knowing what this would cause through lots of reading, she took another year to control her Powers, soon resulting in the affect of her Inner Hollow being formed. She hasn't over come it yet, but she will make sure to try her best to overcome it. Meanwhile, she was given the ability to choose a rank of her choice. She was sure she wanted to be part of Gotei 13. For now, she stayed unseated, not sure where to start. But, seeing as she could choose a different role, she soon became a member of the Vizards.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Sky blue. Reiryoku Level: High
Strengths: • She is a good planner, despite her overactive personality. • She is considered well thought out and actually a good cook. Weaknesses: • Has a rough sense of direction. • It's hard for her to hide when she's hyper, so she tends to be caught more often. Fears: • Crawling insects. • Needles. • Scary things.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Gādian· Enjeru | ガーディアン·エンジェル Zanpakuto Location: Around the waist, with a sash attached to it. Zanpakuto Appearance:Double swords {Instead of black and red, it's white and blue.} Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:Spirit Zanpakuto Sword Type: Two Nodachis. Zanpakuto Type: It's a Melee weapon. The elements it holds is Water and Light.
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Kami no Tenshi Shikai Incantation: "Let the light purify, Kami no Tenshi!" Shikai Description: When released into Shikai, Gādian· Enjeru will form together. Stabbing the buts together, the ribbons rap around the opposite weapon and it's consumed in light and white feathers. Once the feathers disperse and scatter, it will soon become a double-edged spear, looking like the one as seen in the picture used. The dagger part will look to be of a diamond, but is much longer than what it seems in the picture, probably by a few centimeters, or two or three inches. Shikai Ability: • Kuiaratameru {Repent}: The edges of the staff will brighten up and she will be surrounded by feathers. The feathers she touches with her staff will harden, and she can manipulate them to send them flying which way she wants. But, the downfall to this attack is that the more the feathers she uses, the more she must concentrate on them. Just concentrating on them will leave her vulnerable up close, or she will be left vulnerable if she is more distracted in the feathers she manipulates. • Kami no kōi {God's Favor}: With her staff, she is able to heal herself. Spinning her staff above her, a blue-like sphere will form around here. In it, she could heal others or the barrier itself heals her. It doesn't stay up for too long, but it usually stays up for at least 2 posts. • Howaitohebunshūtā {White Heaven Shooter}: Her staff on the top starts to glow brightly. Aiming it at her opponent, it would become brighter and brighter until a ball starts to form from the tip. It soon shoots out like a cero. In it's wake, it will spread out white feathers as it shoots out. This move won't be used for at least 5 posts each. • Hitsujikai no sutaffu {Shepard's Staff}: Her staff will brighten up, and she will tap it hard on the ground. In this sense, she will be able to call upon snow-white angel guardians to fight alongside her. She could only some 4 every 5 posts. It will drain her if she tries to overexert herself. When one is defeated, it will disperse into feathers, soon disintegrating into nothing. • Tenshi no raito {Angel's Light}: Light will form onto her staff, soon she will be able to heal all of her allies in battle. Being kind, she usually also heals her opponents, unless they are the enemy on purpose.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Saishūjōka Bankai Incantation: "this is our last stand, Saishūjōka!" Bankai Description: The lance will form break apart to form two large hand guns. She could carry them with ease, despite their heavy posture. They are blue, and the designs on it are white. They glow by the handles, signifying her Spiritual Connection to it. Bankai Ability: • Howaito shotto {White Shot}: She could shoot three Reiatsu bullets per second. She can fire fast, and she could boost their speed by adding in some of her Spiritual Pressure. If pushed to an extent, can drain her repeatedly throughout the fight.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
Approved! Just Message Diablo en Musica to get your Stats generated. Tell him your Reiryoku level is High, and make sure to tell him what you are aiming more towards with this character.
Other than that, as long as you aren't looking to pick a fight, you can start RPing. My Character is currently in Karakura, at the Amusement Park.
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Takizawa, Katsuo Nickname: Taki
True Age: 275 Age Appeared: Early-twenties Birthdate: February 13 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O+
Life View:"People say make love, not war. I say, can't we do both?" Personality: Katsuo is best described as oversexed, flirtatious and lustful. He has a overactive imagination in which he always thinks or hopes things will lead to ecchi scenes. On the outside Katsuo seems cool, calm, and collected, but on the inside he is wild and perverted. He is not ashamed of licentious habits, which involve highlighting sexual terms in the dictionary, collecting eroge's and erotic magazines which he keeps in his room. Despite his inner pervert Katsuo is an avid brawler, having been known to greatly respect those who can defeat him in a fight and those who can push him to his limit. Katsuo sometimes contradicts his own logic in fighting. On one hand, he wishes to increase his own personal power. While on the other hand, he conceals his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. In spite of his two passions, Katsuo doesn't enjoy fighting seriously at all with women, often using the fight as a way to "cop a feel" or "sneak a peek".
Likes: • Women • Eroge • Battling • Ramen Dislikes • Cruelty Towards Women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Katsuo was raised in a largely populated section of North Rukongai, District 50, His father worked as a blacksmith for the district making them armor and weapons, since there was always a criminal presence. One day, a massive riot took place, one which substantially overwhelmed the town guards. Growing up in a crime infested town, Katsuo witnessed the death of many innocents; his own family included, this destruction caused by both the guards and the criminals. Seeing the destruction and chaos that both sides were willing to put into motion Katsuo left the district for Seireitei, knowing that if the shinigami had wanted to prevent this, they easily could have, but instead are to turn a blind eye to the situation . Entering the Seireitei with the goal of becoming a powerful shinigami capable of changing the matter with the Rukongai Districts, Katsuo entered into the Shin'o Academy. Upon entering, Katsuo was praised for his peerless Hakuda as well as Hoho skills, yet rebuked for his pitiful Zanjutsu skills, repeatedly failing the Zanjutsu portion the exams, which would have prevented him from becoming a Shinigami had it not been for his brilliance in other subjects.
After leaving the Shin'o Academy Katsuo was placed into the 12th division, first having his doubts about his division placement, he pictured himself as a fighter, not a scientist. Desiring a position in a more combat oriented division, Katsuo requested transfers, getting denied each time. However as he raised rank in the 12th division, going from an unseated to a seated officer, becoming more than just an errand boy, becoming an active participant in the experiments and research. As Katsuo began participating in these experiments, he realized that he actually enjoyed being in the Science division, it consisting of more than just running back and forth between areas obtaining materials for the Captain's research which he had been doing for a long time. With a new desire for knowledge, he quickly raised in ranks because of his skills, going from seat to seat an obsession growing within him, an obsession with hollows.
Katsuo gained the title of Captain after the previous 12th division Captain vanished suddenly, leaving behind little trace of what happened or would have caused him to flee the Soul Society. However, as Captain Katsuo did examine some of the previous captain(s) research which had been done, one of which involved a process called 'Hollowfication'. Having an obsession with Hollows, the idea immediately sparked Katsuo's interest. As he dug deeper into the older experiments, he came to learn that for those who underwent this 'Hollowfication'; the process of inserting a Hollow's soul into a normal soul, then breaking the boundary between them to try and turn the original soul into something more powerful; got their soul mixed up with the Hollow soul, becoming a monster unable to reason. In the end not only the boundary between souls, but also the soul itself and the external world is disrupted and the soul, regardless of its own will, self-destroys. This is called "Soul Suicide". Theorizing that under the proper circumstances, the 'Soul Suicide' could be properly prevented, resulting in tremendous power being given to a survivor, Katsuo began his experiments.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Cordovan Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Air Dash: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Shunpo: Practitioner { start at this level } Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • { you may have one more at the same level } Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kendo: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kido Spells: Practitioner Level { starting at this level } • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Jumping: Practitioner Level { start at this level }
Strengths: • Hakuda • Hohō Weaknesses: • Katsuo will not fight seriously with women. • Zanjutsu Fears: • Cruelty towards women
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Shindō (Vibration) Zanpakuto Location: Shindō is a set of dual Tantō's, which Katsuo keeps fastened to his back, just above his waistline. Zanpakuto Appearance: The Zanpakuto Shindō is two tanto's 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa'. 'Shinku Hana' an average length Tanto, with a red and black Ito, a golden kashira, and tsubaki menuki on the hilt, as well a glossy black saya marked with pinkish flowers, and a red and black sageo. As well as 'Ranfa', a Tanto with a similar design but a purple and black color scheme. Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:Image Zanpakuto Sword Type: Tantō (Dual Tantō's) Zanpakuto Type: Vibration
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Kami sori Shindō (Razor Vibration) Shikai Incantation: "Graze, Shindō" Shikai Description: When released, 'Shinku hana' and 'Ranfa' both change shape, their single bladed tantos transforming into conformed double-edged steel knifes, the tsubas bend around Katsuo knuckles in the form of a knuckle-duster made from a strong durable metal, designed for close combat, strongly resembling Mark 1 WWI Trench Knifes. The blades reinforced by a powerful alternating current and resonates at extremely high frequencies, allowing it to loosen the atomic bonds between atoms and easily cut through most materials with ease. Shikai Ability: • Sōdatsu (Scramble): Being a vibration type Zanpakutou, 'Kami Sori Shindō' is capable of inducing a high vibration state upon touch, in which molecules begin oscillating erratically increasing the spacial distance between them, forcing objects into a gaseous-like state. Causing physical matter to dismantle completely, permanently breaking the bonds between them. However in Reiatsu-based matter; Shinigami, Zanpakutou, Hollow, Etc. the Reiryoku acts as a catalyst for molecules to re-bond, causing them to only temporarily stay in this state (1 post in Shikai, 3 posts in Bankai). While in shikai extremely high Reiryoku levels can completely counteract this ability; such as a Captain's Bankai, however while in Bankai it no longer has it's Reiryoku restrictions. • Furu torikeshi (Wave nullification): Using Furu torikeshi Katsuo can absorb vibrations that make contact with or are emitted by him and neutralize any potentially harmful effects. This can be used to easily sneak up on enemies, preventing himself from making sound, or negate other sound and vibration based abilities. • Sakiboso ejji (Tapered Edge): Katsuo can control the sharpness in any object he touches by causing objects to vibrate at high or low frequencies, either imbuing or taking the quality of sharpness away. Sharp edges cut better, while non-edged surfaces, objects, like hands, can be imbued to cut through nearly anything. He can imbue an item as a trap, such as making blades of grass actually 'blades of grass'. Katsuo can also remove sharpness from things, turning knives and other edged weapons into awkward bludgeons against the user. • Mabataki (Blink): Vibrating his atoms at alternating frequencies, Katsuo is able to quickly move through objects and ignore most physical effects in their way, this is done by vibrating his atoms at the right frequencies to pass his atoms through the empty space of other atoms. However, blink does not ensure Katsuo will be unharmed by an attack, when used the Rp'er must role a 6 sided die, an even number being a successful blink while an odd means Katsuo failed to 'blink' or evade the attack. •Tsuruoto Shindō (弦音震動, Vibrating Tremors): Similar to the previous ability, using the vibrations from Shindo, Katsuo will stick the ground, sending violent vibrations coursing through the ground towards a target, causing several tremors to erupt in the ground. This can effectively throw the opponent off balance, giving Katsuo a chance to attack them. • Tokubetsuna Saundo (Specialized Noise): Katsuo vibrates the air at such a speed that it begins to create friction, between the air molecules, that he can contain the energy from the friction around his blade or other specified area. With a swing of his sword he can release the stored energy causing a violent explosion in the area.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: 'Bōgu shindō' (Protective Gear Vibration) Bankai Incantation: "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Bankai Description:Image: With the words "Stand watch, Bōgu Shindō." Katsuo releases surge of reiatsu; As the bankai releases Katsuos knives began to radiate reiatsu, spiritual energy flowing from them over his arms, taking on the form of metal medieval gauntlets which run all the way up his arms into shoulder guards; his kosode and shitagi vanishing, his obi turning a crimson red. When it comes to vibration based zanpakuto Shindo is the most powerful of it's kind, or so Katsuo likes to boast; even if it is not indeed true. Bankai Ability: • Ryōshi Mabataki (Quantum Blink): An amplified version of 'Shindō's' blink ability, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' is similar, but instead of dealing with vibrations on a molecular it deals with them on a quantum level. Vibrating the sub-atomic particles which make him up at alternating frequencies, Katsuo quantumly tunnels though space; Quantum tunneling refers to the quantum mechanical phenomenon where a particle tunnels through a barrier that it classically could not surmount. Tunneling is often explained using the Heisenberg uncertainty principle and the wave–particle duality of matter. Unlike Blink, 'Ryōshi Mabataki' doesn't cause atoms to pass around other atoms, but literally through the atoms themselves, can be sustained for a limited period of time(2 post) before requiring a cool down period(2 post), and does not require a die roll to succeed. 'Ryōshi Mabataki' only has a 1 post cooldown if only sustained for 1 post. • Bakufū (Blast Wave): Katsuo begins concentrating reitsu into both of his hands which begin to excite the air and cause it to vibrate extremely fast. Upon slamming the two separate vibrations together and releasing them, it creates a powerful technique sending out a Blast Wave though the air. The ears are most often affected by the overpressure, followed by the lungs and the hollow organs of the gastrointestinal tract, which sustain grave injury if the target is within a range of 50 meters, tearing the internal organs to shreds. •Fukuin Ganma (Gospel: Gamma): This causes his zanpakuto to ring at a certain frequency, which directly affects the brain. The ringing disrupts the opponents vestibular system, which contributes to balance in most mammals and to the sense of spatial orientation. Together with the cochlea, a part of the auditory system, it constitutes the labyrinth of the inner ear in most mammals, situated in the vestibulum in the inner ear . As movements consist of rotations and translations, the vestibular system comprises two components: the semicircular canal system, which indicate rotational movements; and the otoliths, which indicate linear accelerations. The vestibular system sends signals primarily to the neural structures that control eye movements, and to the muscles that keep a creature upright. So disrupting the system using this ability in-turn causes the target to lose their motor skills and balance for a single post. (5 post cooldown) • Hanshaha Shijima (Echoing Silence): When released by the phrase "Cancel Out", Katsuo's blade if already released reforges itself and takes an appearance of his unreleased tanto's, except for the difference of being in top notch condition. After it reforms the blade starts to hum as it starts to vibrate at super high speeds, reverberating at about 500,000 times per second allowing him to create a buzzsaw-like effect much stronger and faster then his shikai's similar ability. This high speed blade is virtually unblockable as its molecules are moving far to fast. As an application of this power, he is able to rapidly extend his blade at high speeds, using the principle of Superposition making his sword occupy several places at once in order to catch his opponents off guard.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • { start with none unless told otherwise } ▬▬┤|Hollow Techniques ( Your mask must be on! ) • Cero • Bala • Sonido • Mask Protection
