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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:43 pm

I approve. This shall prove to be very interesting. ^^

Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:09 am

soul eater luna

Username: soul eater luna
Character Name: Ayame Kaitsagaya
Race: Shimigami/Human
Age: unknown
Birthday (optional): October 31
Height: 4'7
Weight (optional): 59 lbs
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Unusual Features: None
Blood Type (optional): A
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Affiliation: Gotei 14
Squad: 10th division
Rank: 3rd seat
Relatives (optional): none
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Appearance: Black hair in pigtails, verylong . in white ribbons, down to her waist.
Personality: Very serious. can be childish, can be a crybabay, amazing fighter
History: She died at five years old due to house fire her father started. She awoke in the soul society and been taken care of by a family for a long time. She wanted to become a soul reaper and she got her dream. During her training she met Momo and became great friends with her. She dreams of one day becoming a captian of a division.
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Zanpakuto Name: Hi no hana(fire flower)
Sealed State: Katana (link is here http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww296/Jaye-Kaze/RedKata-copyrighthufrodo.jpg )
Zanpakuto Spirit: A little girl of six years old. with fire colored hair and green eyes.
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Shikai Release: Honoo(flame)
Shikai Appearance: Katana with longer blade thats black with a red handle
Shikai Abilities:
1.Kaen senpū(flame whirlwind)-When a tornado of fire is shot at you
2.Yōgan no ame(lava rain)-Lava rain purs down on you
3.Hinotama(ball of fire)-When a ball of fire is shot at you
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Bankai Name (optional):Burakkufaiā(black fire)
Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance:big, red, long blade and the handle is black(looks like Ayame could barley hold it)
Bankai Abilities:Kuroi honoo ryū(black flame dragon)-When a dragon of black fire comes out of the sword. The dragon with breath a very wide and powerful flame at you. It takes about 3 minutes to power up. During this time Ayame could be injured.

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Kido: None
Hado:
31.Shakkahō (red fire cannon)-Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
32.Ōkasen(yellow fire flash)-Fires a wide arc of yellow energy at a target
Bakudō:
1.Sai(restrain)-Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
9.Geki (strike)-Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.

Hoho: flash feet
Other Information: ayame has a huge crush on toshiro. <3 she follows every command

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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:51 pm

Username:SGT Nicol Bolas
Character Name: Nicol Fon
Race: Shinigami
Age: 197
Birthday (optional): January 14
Height: 5' 11"
Weight (optional): 87lbs
Eyes: Emerald Green
Hair: Jet Black
Unusual Features:
Blood Type (optional): O+
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Affiliation: Division
Squad: 2
Rank: Lieutenant
Relatives (optional): Soi Fon
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Appearance: User Image

Personality: Out Going
History: One of five siblings of Soi Fon. All were killed on missions but one. She was sent to investigate a hallow attack and was bombarded by Five hallows. She killed four of them, and was chased by the last one, and escaped it. Then returned to the soul society and gave her report of what happend and that there was one hallow still out there. One day she was asked by Soi Fon to be here lieutenant.
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Zanpakuto Name: ko-ru doragon

Sealed State: User Image

Zanpakuto Spirit: User Image

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Shikai Release: Shine Brightly
Shikai Appearance: User Image

Shikai Abilities: Absorbs light and is sent out of the blade like a lightning bolt.
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Bankai Name (optional): None
Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance:
Bankai Abilities: (Read: shikai abilities paranthesis)
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Kido: Byakurai

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Hoho: none
Other Information: Hakuda

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:02 pm

@SGT: I would a little bit more into her History and into her Shikai State, also the Disintigrate thing? It's a bit of god-moding, well to me,
Also, the Hakudo? I dont get it put more discription into that also. But i Approve.

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@Hime, for soul eater luna: I would kinda change the Lava rain, since Lava can basically burn right through just about anything. But other than that i Approve

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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:10 pm

^^ I approve Nicol's.

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:32 pm

Approved! :3

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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:34 pm

Thank u I worked very hard on it!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:48 pm

SGT Nicol Bolas

Thank u I worked very hard on it!!!!!!!!!

Sorry forgot to say Just add the name of the Hado and what it does so peolpe know, Other than that it's still approved by me ^^

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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:59 pm

SGT Nicol Bolas

Thank u I worked very hard on it!!!!!!!!!

About the "Hakudo" and Gif displayed there,
Its actually called Hakuda, and isn't a form of Kido, its bleach's term for Hand to Hand combat, so it would probably go under other information instead of Kido.

Sorry for being technical, I just thought I should say the correction..

Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:34 pm

Okay thank u for the correction...

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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:36 pm

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Name: Aruya Kenpachi - Captain of Squad 11
Age: Appears 19. Total Age: 30‘s-40‘s
Gender: Female
Birthday: July 13th
Sexual Orientation: Straight

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Appearance: Aruya is a lovely young woman. Mocha colored skin, short dark hair with beads worked into the ends, swept back out of her face. Almost petite, she’s thin but all muscle giving a very athletic frame with a hourglass figure when she’s out of her uniform. The black part of her uniform is pristine and well taken care of though the captain’s coat is tattered and has been sewn to fit her smaller frame, the number on the back visible but faded to a gray instead of a black from years and years of use. She watches the world with a mismatched set of one blue and one red eye. There is a scar above the left eye (the red one) that is mostly faded now but she doesn’t try to cover it up, in fact the way she brushes her hair back one would think she wears it proudly. Her arms and neck also have fading scars littered across the surface of her caramel colored skin. The Zanpakuto she carries has a complex wine colored spiderweb like pattern in the hilt and the prommel is a similar burgundy shade.
Height: 5‘4“
Weight: 132lb
Eye Color: Mismatched Red/Blue eyes
Hair Color: Deep brown/almost black

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Relationships: Mother: Yoruichi Shihōin, Father: Zaraki Kenpachi
Personality: Aruya took on more of her father’s attributes than her mothers. She is capable of stepping back and being patient, but it’s not nearly as fun as getting involved and just moving forward. Oftentimes she’s gruff and demanding, but others she can be thoughtful and clever. She prefers to enjoy herself and often pushes many of her more dull duties to those beneath her in the squadron.
Bio: Aruya’s story starts on a late night where the squads were celebrating the defeat of Aizen and her less than likely parents (Yoruichi and Kenpachi) had gotten so drunk neither of them really thought too much about the other when they separated themselves to enjoy the evening a little further. Neither of them remembered much about it the next day. It was months before Yoruichi even realized she was with child. By the time she realized who the father was, she wasn’t even sure what she could do or say. There were still battles to be done and if she kept the child enemies would attempt to use it against her. So instead she gave Aruya to a family she’d been friends with in the outskirts of the Rukon district for some time. Though she still visited on occasion and tried to be involved in her life.
From a very young age she showed talent toward having spiritual powers, she wasn’t good at Kido but she was quite accomplished with a blade. By the time she was ten she could have taken most full unranked Shinigami in a fight if it only involved melee. It was only natural that she be enrolled in the school at the young age of thirteen. Though she probably could have attended sooner if Yoruichi had allowed it. She didn’t know much of her mother, and no matter how much she asked no one would tell her about her father.
She went through school easily when it came to any sort of usual combat. She was wretched with kido though she’d managed to memorize a few here and there. Mostly ones that would allow her to heal herself to keep fighting. She often managed to break many spells that would otherwise hold her when it came to sparring sessions. Despite the physical harm it would do to her she never willingly gave up on a fight until her body would no longer move or she had won; whichever came first.
For some reason or another she couldn’t contact her zanpakuto at first and despite her amazing prowess in battle she was pushed back for many years. After a while no one could defeat her in the school, including many instructors, but the rule remained that she couldn’t leave until she learned to contact her blade.
That’s what drove her to look into Kenpachi’s past, he’d never known his own blades name but he was a Captain. Her mother walked in on this research and let it slip who her father really was. It made perfect sense though, he was amazingly strong as she was. He’d never learned his zanpakuto’s name but he was a Captain. If the school wouldn’t let her pass, then she would do what he had done and defeat him.
Easier said than done.
She sought him out and lost miserably. She nearly died and was in care for a month but the experience had given her a name. Her zanpakuto’s name. Ousatsu. Her blade released into being a glaive, the long polearm ending in a serrated blade with the same spiderweb ruby patterns. When it cut that same pattern would appear on her enemy and the wounds she caused with it caused incredible pain. Making it more and more difficult for her opponents to focus and slowing the healing process. Multiple cuts on the same limb would often result in it’s losing it’s function.
It was many more years and her blade was a cruel thing that wanted only to inflict pain, she hadn’t yet mastered a Bankai but the school had graduated her at Seventeen. She entered into the 11th Squadron and further honed her skills. She willingly stayed a low level in the Squadron so she could later challenge Kenpachi after she’d worked tirelessly to develop her Bankai as well. She didn’t always agree with her sword’s spirit but she could connect to a point. She wanted to prove she was better than the parents that only had her as an aside. She already knew her mother wouldn’t willingly strike her down, she was weaker than her father. Her father had already nearly killed her once, and that was all he would get.
There was one thing she had in common with him more than anything. Combat was fun, and being the strongest, constantly challenging herself...it was needed if there was to be any meaning in her existence. She may not have been addicted to the field of battle the way Zaraki had been, but she certainly liked it.
She killed him in open challenge of combat, though he’d hesitated, perhaps somewhere he knew who she was? Perhaps her blade had done it’s job and kept him from being able to move, she’d never know...but there were more battles to come now that she’d taken the squadron from it’s longstanding leader.

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Affiliation: The Gotei 13
Division: Squad 11
Rank: Captain

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Zanpakuto Name: Ousatsu
Zanpakuto Appearance: Normal, a blade with red spiderwebs on the hilt.
Zanpakuto Spirit: The spirit of her blade is a smiling child with blood on it’s hands. A young girl with gold hair and mismatched eyes that were red and blue opposite Ayura’s own. How much blood she was covered in varied from time to time when Ayura saw her but she was always grinning past what should be normal for any normal human. She wears a white - or stained red - dress of expensive quality and is barefoot.

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Shikai Release incantation: Shred Ousatsu
Shikai Appearance: Her blade extends into a glaive with a serrated blade that’s covered in the same red spiderweb pattern as the hilt in it’s normal appearance.
Shikai Ability: Wounds caused by her Zanpakuto are all marked by the same pattern that her blade holds. They are incredibly painful to the point that multiple hits in the same marked areas often leave the target unable to use those parts of their body. These same wounds are much more difficult to heal than any other wound, even with magic.
1: Where she can use her sword to cause incredible pain she can also use it to absorb her own pain to a certain degree. This also allows her to fight at full power longer without growing tired. Doing so slowly stains the prommel part of the glaive a deep red until it’s completely this color. Using this is the only way she is able to call on her Bankai.
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(Bankai is only available for shinigami at Captain or Lieutenant rank. 3rd seat and below will have to achieve a total of 100 posts before they can make a Bankai. Once made, send it to the guild captain for approval.)

Bankai Name Become my Pain
Bankai Release Incantaion: Transform Agony Ousatsu
Bankai Wielder Appearance: Aruyu changes and is instead wearing tattered black robes, her eyes both become red and her hair flutters around her face as if it’s absorbing the shadows around her. Her mocha colored skin is instead a deathly pallor around her face and her arms and legs are no longer visible except for barely around the weapon itself.
Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance: Her Glaive extends and turns into an Scythe. It’s shadowed around her hands to the point that what little is visible of her hands seem skeletal. It’s a deep black and the blade is a metallic crimson that seems to be wet.
Bankai Abilities: Her Bankai allows her to revisit all the pain she feels and the wounds her enemy (or enemies) have inflicted upon her back on them. A single slice of the blade copies every wound they’ve caused her and revisits it on those that caused it. She doesn’t cease to have these wounds herself, and she can now feel them all again but she shares her pain with her victim.
1: Promise of Twilight - Ousatsu - If she’s battled to a point that she’s continued to take a lot of damage in her Bankai form she can use that again to her advantage, spreading a field of shadows on the field around her. This darkness augments the senses for a short moment, enough that she could escape or attempt a final blow.
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Random Information: Whee Random. Little else to be said I think. Any questions please feel free to ask.

we have a new Squad 11 Captain. ^^

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:22 pm

((I am aware I have posted this character before. However I revised him and I never actually Rped as him before so I want him to be cleared with his revisions.))

Username: Kilk Nagara

Character Name: Kankei Yokubo

Race: Vizard

Age: Appears to be 20

Birthday: February 12th

Height: 5'11

Weight: 148 lbs

Eyes: Light Pink

Hair: Black

Unusual Features: None

Blood Type: O-

Affiliation: Vizard

Relatives: All Dead

Appearance: User Image

Mask: A mask of a Hollowfied Cat that is smiling.

Personality: Kankei is one of the biggest flirts many will ever meet. He is usually cheery and very overdramatic. If given any opportunity he will flirt with the person before him. He does not care if the person is a guy or a girl, he is just secure enough in his sexuality to flirt with both. He is known as a more medium level Vizard with less strength, but a much better ability to enjoy himself. He will often break orders and spend long periods of time doing monologues that hold no value whatsoever. He can be cocky of his own beauty but won't be arrogant about anything else. He wishes to protect everyone around him emotionally and physically, And while he knows he can not prevent injury, he hopes he can prevent emotional damage. If needed to, he will become very caring like a big brother and very soft towards anyone.

History: Kankei was a spiritually aware man who lived in the world of the living. When he was alive he was a very hopeless romantic. One day after being stood up by a woman, he walked across the riverside to be attacked by a hollow. It had killed him almost immediately. As a soul he was one who enjoyed nothing more than sightseeing. He would take leave from wherever he was and just couldn't move on until he saw all of the places that one could see. Along his journeys he met a Vizard who put him through Hollowfication and he himself became one. He had no idea what this meant but decided to stay with the Vizard who trained him to become decently powerful. He had potential to be much stronger, but was too fun loving and emotional to take it seriously. Then one day when returning to his new home from sight seeing, he saw a sight he never wanted to see. His master was dead against a wall with a blade in his chest. While he should have interrogated, he just ran away. Due to his master's death, he never could finish his training which explains his lack of full power he could achieve. Eventually though, after a long meditation and confrontation with himself, he found inner peace. He went back to sight seeing while occasionally training here and there. While sight seeing, he found the Vizard Warehouse and decided to walk in. ((This is where I will have him start.))

Zanpakuto Name: Sutekina Unmei (Lovely Fate)

Zanpakuto Spirit: User Image

Release: Blossom, Sutekina!

Shikai: User Image

Shikai Abilities: Kankei can manipulate various effects with mist by using his Shikai. He can only use 1 at a time though.

Kyushu No Kaori (Aroma of Absorption) - He holds up his blade and the blade itself turns blue. Then, a blue mist surrounds the blade and moves to a designated area. When either struck by the blade, or in that area, the opponents spirit energy starts getting absorbed. The mist can not be controlled to move areas unless pushed by wind.

Oto No Kaori (Aroma of Sound) - He holds up his blade and the blade itself turns grey. Then, a grey mist surrounds the area. While an opponent is in this area, Kankei can manipulate sound to make it sound like various things. If one leaves the area, the sound won't be altered to them. The mist can not be moved unless by wind.

Suimin No Kaori (Aroma of Sleep) - He holds up his blade and the blade itself turns purple. Then a purple mist leaves the blade. It then goes towards the opponent and begins to make them tired. If they stay in the area for an extended amount of time they will fall asleep. Also, if they are struck by the blade they become tired. It can only stay in one area and can not be moved unless by wind.

Kenko No Kaori (Aroma of Life) - He will hold up his blade and the actual bladed part will turn a grassy green. Then, a bright green mist will come out and surround him and those next to him. The mist will begin to heal wounds and Rejuvenate spiritual energy. He can not be touched while doing this or else it will stop. The mist can not be moved unless by wind.

Mahi No Kaori (Aroma of Paralyzation) - He will hold up his blade and the blade itself will turn yellow. Then a yellow mist will surround the blade. If he strikes the opponent they will become stunned, losing control of the part that was hit. The way to beat it is to inflict pain on the part that was hit and it will regain control. The mist can not be moved unless by wind.

Bankai: None

Bankai Abilities: None

Kido: He can do up to Hado # 73 and Bakudo # 81, He also possesses the ability to use healing Kido.

Hoho: He is an Expert Shunpo user and can perform Senka.

Cero: Pink and Purple

Other Information: He can play the Piano exceptionally and tends to a garden.

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