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 Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 12:51 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji Grand Chevalier Haji
Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Armor of Snow
Rank: C For Learning purposes
Type: Bloodline Jutsu
Element: Snow
Description: The Shinsetsu clan user releases his snow chakra into the air, and condenses into onto his body and hardens it, making it as hard as Ice that protects him from Kunai and Shuriken, Jutsu protection varies on your own rank. If up against a fire jutsu the armor would be able to protect you as long as the rank isn't above your own rank. Then the armor would be melted and you would receive damage. Lasts 15 posts
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 12:53 pm
Lord Edegaru Yo-Ko: Yes, those stats look good for the Hardcore Style.
Jeckel and Hyde Jutsu- Removing the hearts from the body means removing the natural weakness of the Bloodline. Sealing away other organs is suggested. Also, explain the hawk's eye...idea.
Reaper Elyse: I'm not saying that your jutsu is completely void buHardcore Stylet it is simply unheard of. It sounds more like something to discover, research and develop. I think that you should work more on it before placing it to be reviewed. Think about how each sense would transfer to another, that way there will be no space for generalizations.
Azzurro:
Jiongu Wings- Sounds good but remember that Taijutsu techniques and Bukijutsu techniques higher than C rank can penetrate this particular Thread Creation.
Body Poison- Remember that it must enter the bloodstream of the target via a cut or through the eyes and mouth. Also, when the poison is excreted from the mouth, it should not be fired as a projectile or mist, simply generated there as if by the glands.
Nice avatar, by the way.
Black Fruity
Centre of Explosion- Approved on the condition that hand signs are required to focus the two elemental chakras properly.
Volatile- We try to stay away from vague descriptions so that there is not much space for users to take advantage of. If you can state specifically the effects that the jutsu can have, it can be approved.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:02 pm
Reaper Elyse: Yes, please.
Grand Chevalier: Approved.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 2:38 pm
Lord Edegaru Yo-Ko: Yes, those stats look good for the Hardcore Style.
Jeckel and Hyde Jutsu- Removing the hearts from the body means removing the natural weakness of the Bloodline. Sealing away other organs is suggested. Also, explain the hawk's eye...idea.
Reaper Elyse: I'm not saying that your jutsu is completely void buHardcore Stylet it is simply unheard of. It sounds more like something to discover, research and develop. I think that you should work more on it before placing it to be reviewed. Think about how each sense would transfer to another, that way there will be no space for generalizations.
Azzurro:
Jiongu Wings- Sounds good but remember that Taijutsu techniques and Bukijutsu techniques higher than C rank can penetrate this particular Thread Creation.
Body Poison- Remember that it must enter the bloodstream of the target via a cut or through the eyes and mouth. Also, when the poison is excreted from the mouth, it should not be fired as a projectile or mist, simply generated there as if by the glands.
Nice avatar, by the way.
Black Fruity
Centre of Explosion- Approved on the condition that hand signs are required to focus the two elemental chakras properly.
Volatile- We try to stay away from vague descriptions so that there is not much space for users to take advantage of. If you can state specifically the effects that the jutsu can have, it can be approved. so ill explain it like this. I have 5 heart slots. The technique would allow me to assimilate organs/body parts besides hearts into my body at the cost of a heart slot. So assuming i have all 5 hearts, i cannot have a assimilated outside organ inside my body. However, if i decide to have an outside organ, i will only have 4 active hearts. if i deside to assimilate a salamander gland and a hawkeye, i would only have three heart slots. If i decide to assimilate anything else, then i will have 2 hearts left. The hearts that are sealed away are inactive and thus not apart of my body, making it a riskier investment incase a death blow is struck. This better to understand?
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 5:39 pm
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Haikiryou kankaku [Displaced Sense]
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Description: (with use of proper hand signs and any contact with the individual on the plain of the five senses can this be performed) This ability can use knowledge of the chakra channels of the mind to confuse ones senses with one another. Making the relived oran responsible for this sense transmit one of the five sense to the wrong neural receptor making one see sound, or feel a smell. This technique can work to confuse and or aid a fighter who has a failing sensory organ and have another that better works at it's job fill in and insist to improve this senses use in the user. Playing both a benefit and deteriorating role the strength of this Jutsu is according to how fast one can adapt to having your eyes perception of light make you smell that light (a bit of imagination can fit in here as to what light may smell like to ones minds perception) instead of properly seeing it and seeing what abstraction of sight visually seeing smells would hold. In terms of switching any sense with sight, the visual seen will become some surreal abstraction of what lengths that organ perceives the world unlike sight. This can further divert pain into a bad smell or sharp defining sound. Last for three turns
Cross over effects (you refference the two that were switched when affected)
~Sight Crosses; all sight based switches involves replacing normal visions of light becoming blurred or out right muted onto blurry configurations of what you may normally see.
xhearing, sight with hearing consist of losing sight full range of detail when perceiving and object, such as color or visible texture. you're visions range grows to a 360 degree radius, much like your hear and your sight is only in response to sound(imagine your peripheral vision going so much in comes all the way around), looking much like a echolocation device in black and white.
xtastes, aligned with smell taste can be apprehend from the taste of particles in the air,over all you're blind unless you breathing can pick up the particles and help you read whats in the area. each taste coming as a flash of the general lay out of where you are as your mind constructs it.
xsmell, much like taste it goes by what one can smell in the air but it doesn't come in flashes. Colors and shapes come as wavy blurs and motion can be fluently read better than with taste.
xtouch, touch is given to what you might feel and pain or disruptions from how you're body may feel the air or whatever is touching move about can blur or shorten your "vision" which is no more than a grayscale misty reality that has pulsing lines appear where movement or sensations spawn from.
~Hearing Crosses;
xsightit becomes more narrow much like ones sight and what one hears is in reaction to the light, so fishing light or smoke bombs would sound static or white noise. Looking at something from a distance you can hear what it sounds like at distance. all at once.
xtastescripples hearing to what you might taste, such as to say what you inhale or physically move close to to like gains a sound as you taste it.
xsmellWhat you smell gains a sound as you're mind may fabricate it. So if you sense of smell is conflicted you can not longer hear clearly. Also the winds direction may narrow your hearing like such as how smells can be kept hidden when moving down wind.
xtouchwhat you body feels is what you hear, and constant touch is translated as static or a constant low tone. (clothing counts) yet sound or vibrations in the air can act to be taken in much like how you ear works, over all making you hearing much more sensitive though muffled.
~Smell Crosses;
xsightwhat you see has a smell and intensity of light can inflict different levels of what can or can't be smell at distance of sight. (your mind assigns a smell to everything even odorless things, by what you'd expect something to smell. even if you haven't knowledge of it's smell already)
xtastes Smell and taste being closely related the two really don't differentiate much rather than switching to point of where the effect comes across. So what you smell will be experienced with a taste of of equal "texture" and flavor", flavor being closely relating to how pungent or pleasant something is.
xhearingYou smell grows to a point of not being pungent by degree of how load and clearly heard something is. how pleasant a sound is decides scent along with rhythm.
xtouchThe sensation and how you're body reacts to something such as the pain, o pleasure decides on the same scale what you're mind assigns to the smell received from the sensation.
~Touch Crosses;
xsightWhat you feel is what you see in a word, but to be more exact it comes to light sensitivity. your sense of feeling is passed on where you focus your eyes, and the more intense or glaring the image the more painful or softer light makes it more pleasant in sensation. You can also feel view motions as well, like pulses in you skin or pressure cluing you into direction or speed and weight ow what's moving, but ti's all jarring to comprehend at firs.
xtastesWhat you feel is contradicted by what you can taste flavor and contradicts sensation, so the pleasure and pain receptors are primarily what switch as you may breath in foul tasting air particles you will feel pain or or throbbing from the type of stick it may be and the same go's for sweet smelling things.
xsmellSame as taste it all about pain and pleasure and how they're crossed between the senses.
xhearingYou feel what you hear, so your sense of feel is slightly lengthened and more sensitive just as hearing would be effected. sounds that would catch you attention can be felt and tingling or actual forces of pressure on your body load and agonizing sound result in in sharp pain, same go's for pleasant sounds as the inverse effect.
~Tastes Crosses;
xsightTaste into sight is again influenced by the wavelengths of light you see interpreting the flavor and texture of what you might taste. Meaing something that's harsh or conflict your vision or lack of light may have you taste receptors react as if they were becoming numb, while in normal vison you constantly taste the difference in the colors and things you se as what flavors the mind may fill in to it's understanding.
xhearingthe feelings you may get with hearing such as knowing how load something is to distance and so on translates volume into the flavors pungency, and the rhythm or point of how pleasant of bad it is decides flavor.
xsmell These two don't really effect each other so much since smell and taste are closely related already, but the length of how well you taste things you breath in stronger than you are abel to judge the scent.switching them more over changes the focus. of what you can do at distance.
xtouchwell over all you senses of taste kind goes numb unless you're specifically touching something pleasant or painful, where it will give you a texture and a slight sense of flavor.
I think I should point out that no matter how you twist it this is a genjutsu that leaves space for interpretation on what one understands for the mid field on the extremes of pain or pleasure that may be exchanged between the senses and their receptors. I don't think the interpretive side of this technique hinders so much as makes it something that deserves thought on the rp'ers side which I don't think hurts it, it establishes it's goal (confusion and disorientation) and leaves room for someone to truly have to write there way trough the experience. Even with this listing the idea isn't something overcome right away. Which in my opinion is the strength of inventing this jutsu. No mater the level with out strength in dealing with Taijutsu this technique is highly effective in it's goal. Which is the point it twist perception and they may out coordinate yourself. Though if you want I could put a limit on use per fight like maybe a cool down or a number of uses per fight.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:53 pm
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Katon Oni
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Max summons 4 Five foot tall fire demons to do his bidding. They last for 8 post, and obey simple commands. These demons are essentially Gennin with no jutsu, but proficient striking and grappling capabilities. They at composed of fire and obviously cause burns.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Ecstasy Bite
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: Max’s bite triggers orgasmic ecstasy in the bitten, distracting from the actual bite, and making the target much less likely to resist . this can become addictive. The sensation is chemical.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha(when Chunnin)
Technique Name: Ring of Fire Deception
Rank:A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton/Genjutsu
Description: Max catches the the target in a genjutsu with a verbal line and a snap of his fingers. the genjutsu surrounds both Max an the target in a ring of fire 8 feet high. The fire is an illusion, but to the target seems completely real. Causing heat, light, and pain. Max of course can move between these flames ,using the flames as obscuring cover. on Max's discretion, but normally the next post, A pillar of real fire crashes into the entirety of the circle.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Shadow Clone Bite
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: Max makes a handseal, and Through his opponents shadow a shadow clone rises half way to bite down on the calf or ankle, and begin to drain blood. Bite and drain jutsus/attributes can be applied through this clone.
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Shadow Clone Ambush
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: A reflex Jutsu, Max near instantly melts into a shadow, leaving a Shadow clone standing in his place standing in the same position. Max will then quickly rise out of his opponents shadow.
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 2:29 pm
Character: Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Jellyfish Style
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Description: Usually in conjunction with hardcore thread style and thread extension, Sebastian will sacrifice the number of threads for the effect of the threads. By wrapping and forming threads together, the hardened threads get razor sharp barbs that were meant to wrap around and cause extensive damage on the wrapped area, making them difficult to get rid of.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:54 am
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Reshi-ba Hari no jutsu [ Receiver needles Technique ]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton (lightening)
Description: Unlike normal chakra formed needles these specific needles are meant to work on an electromagnetic wave that run similar to ones bioelectrical pulses. Making it work to attune ones brain to the Nin who places said needle into their body to have both their raiton Jutsu's from there own follow this person light a lightening rod, and all genjutsu performed will move faster in taking effect as if their jutsu were hard lined into the opponent from their minds. The over all technique is to form chakra needles that can be embedded in the flesh to have the body receive the users raiton chakra nature home in on them, and Genjutsu working along the opponents chakra with the intrusive receiver helps the Genjutsu along faster and with less effort there after it's application. The needles are very small and can seamlessly puncture light clothing. or flesh with out showing any holes.
Each post of a successfully planted needle mean three turns of the victims body drawing raiton jutsu and Genjutsu to them. There's a two post cool down time after each use.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Kuro Kousetsu: Furakutaru Uwaoui no jutsu [ Black Snow: Fractal Cloak Technique ] (Form one)
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The Black Now Genjutsu art is something of Chisato's specilized technique that introduces a passive genjutsu aura that effcts all five senses that works by the Genjutsu permeating from a physical body the shinobi has to decide specifically to assign this Jutsu to. There are three stages to the "Black Snow" the first is of the Fractal Cloak, where the shinobi can only apply the Genjutsu aura onto a single object. The Aura's genjutsu takes effect by how the opponent experiences the object that is covered in the illusion of a fragmented and flacking black cloaked item that wisp about the shinobi. Upon seeing, hearing as in when it's close by or maybe it fluttering in the wind, smelling (not likely), tasting not likely) or feeing this cloaked item. The will experience a shifting experience as if they were touching something that would draw them into a cold darkness where they have no voice. Yet at this level the cloak only acts to have opponents misjudge the tangibility of the wearer. Having strikes that meet it seem to loose contact with the wearer and leave a chilling sensation on them as the withdraw, not mater what they're wearing. Sometimes if held long enough to the object the opponent will see builds of black flacks that can be called "black snow" that vanish something like smoke.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Waku [ Frames ]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: By using her Genjutsu's use in a powerful and precise focus on a recent series of events, Chisato is capable of reaching into the recesses of someones given memory in a day and have them repeat and action of that day devoid of knowledge of their surroundings. Believing they were back where they were doing what they did. Literally taking them from one framed moment in their day to another and having them uncontrollably repeat it as they become lost to the the notion that they weren't intending on doing so again. More actively in battle chisato can have a fighter repeat an action she'd survived or had faired badly because of her ill preparation and with out their full knowledge repeat said action where she would know their every move and further more be able to react perfectly so to both force them to reuse a certain level of chakra and unwittingly open themselves to a series of counter strikes.
Last for one turn and draws text of repeated moment from one of the old post from opponents past post. The following post after use the opponent must repeat said text of action, but after post ability to respond or adapt doesn't change.
At least three turns must pas before this can be used.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Sosei Koukotsu [ Rejuvenation Trance ]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Focusing on her possible need to rejuvenate her depleted chakra Chisato has developed a Genjutsu trance that can force her body to focus on drawing back lost chakra, but it comes at the cost of her not being able to use both Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu after it's activated. Now the user is restricted to simple and low level (stage three) complex Taijutsu techniques. Yet as their minds are under a trance they're consciousness and susceptibility to Genjutsu drops so low, to physical a point where only physical contact will enter them into it. Moving and acting much like zombies the Genjutsu user would feel as if they have no mind from the depth of the trance. This also means they're a bit more sluggish, but over all as they are in this trance they regain 35 chakra point with in the cap of the cap of their maximum chakra pool. This last for five turns. Can be dispelled by "Echo clarity" even at distance.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:46 pm
I don't know about the first technique, as it sounds like it would be more of a medical technique, and without such knowledge, how would one know the exact results of something so precise, you know? For a C rank, drawing lightning techniques would be pretty outrageous though. I mean, you're making a move which allows auto-hitting, in a sense, and I feel I can't allow a justification for that.
Black snow needs a bit more clarification. Application must be within the users grasp for this "aura", no? Capable of being marked on an enemies clothing? Their weapons?I want a run time on that, too. How long before they start seeing this black snow?
Frames seems just wrong. This is, essentially, another way to auto-hit. If you know what action they are taking, then it's entirely possible to react perfectly, and thus, counter attack in a lethal manner. Denied.
So let me see if I have this trance one right. No techniques, stage three and lower taijutsu techniques, right? In return for 35 chakra, right? Your statement there makes no sense, however. Within the cap of the cap of the max? Depending on what that means, it's hard to say if this is a fair technique.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 6:22 pm
Reaper Elyse
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Reshi-ba Hari no jutsu [ Receiver needles Technique ]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton (lightening)
Description: Unlike normal chakra formed needles these specific needles are meant to work on an electromagnetic wave that run similar to ones bioelectrical pulses. Making it work to attune ones brain/body to the Nin who places said needle into their body to have both their raiton Jutsu's and Genjutsu follow this person like a lightening rod (moving in a straight line and only ever slightly curving). All genjutsu performed will move faster in taking effect as if their jutsu were hard lined into the opponents mind from their minds. The over all technique is to form chakra needles that can be embedded in the flesh to have the body receive the users raiton chakra nature home in on them. The needles are very small and can seamlessly puncture light clothing or flesh with out showing any holes (they do bleed slightly).
Each post of a successfully planted needle means three turns of the victims body drawing raiton jutsu and Genjutsu to them. There's a four turn cool down time after each successful use.
Well the first one is really not meant to crate something that;s infallible to hit, but rather it follows you in a straight line. Meaning if you're you change direction it won't cut the corner too but rather curve as it can at it's speed (where the faster the less likely it can turn) to hit you when it comes to the Raiton jutsu thing, also the precision of the needles aren't really some much based on placement but rather just being able to focus the chakra into said shape so it can be implemented with little signs of it's application.
I think that's fair to say it's mostly chakra control rather than medical knowledge and all too exclusive medical nin control. Since it doesn't disturb the body in any other way rather than marking them with a signal the Jutsu pick up on.
dodging is possible with speed or even defensive Jutsu, so there's no auto-hitting involved with ninjutsu, and with genjutsu it's only meant to give the user an edge in how fast they can apply the jutsu. It still needs to apply to it's restrictions.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Kuro Kousetsu no jutsu [ Black Snow Technique]
Rank: D,B,A (you train according to your rank, having the post for each level add together for the over all technique.)
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The Black Snow Genjutsu art is something of Chisato's specilized technique that introduces a passive genjutsu illusion of an aura that effects all five senses. It works by the Genjutsu permeating from a physical body the shinobi has to decide specifically to assign this Jutsu to. There are three stages to the "Black Snow" the first is of the "Fractal Cloak" (stage one, D-rank), where the shinobi can only apply the Genjutsu aura onto a single object they are touching constantly. The jutsu is applied by first completing the required hand signs and gliding ones hand over the objet they are wearing. The Aura's genjutsu takes effect by how the opponent experiences the object that is covered in the illusion of a fragmented and flacking black cloaked item that wisp about the shinobi. Upon seeing, hearing as in when it's close by or maybe it fluttering in the wind, smelling (not likely), tasting (not likely) or feeling this cloaked item.The visage of the black snow spreads from the point where the item was touched to it's entire form in a turn. The opponent will experience a shifting experience as if they were being drawn in by the sight of this object, and when coming sloe to touching it they feel and imagine a cold darkness where they have no voice. Strikes that meet this item seem to loose contact with the wearer and leave a chilling sensation on the opponent as the withdraw, not matter what they're wearing leaving them with a freeze burn sensation (first degree frostbite). If held long enough to the object the opponent will see builds of black flacks that can be called "black snow" that vanish something like smoke. This can last for up to three turns.
"Translucent Figure" (Stage two, Rank B) spreads the illusionary aura of the black snows ever flowing out flakes of dark ice crystals into the user themselves having their form seem slightly intangible, but still can be hit. Now their entire body can cause the effects of the former ability restricted tot he item. Though now strikes or forward motions from the user will cause an intense feeling of frost "burn" (second degree frostbite) when the user attacks. This form can last for four turns.
"Dark Space" (Stage three, Rank A) Dark space compounds the last two forms and finishes it with a field shift where the air and area around the user and the combatants they're are facing shift as they all are captured with in the Genjutsu. The black snow isn't no longer only permeating from the user but falling from the sky which has gone dark. The snow fall becomes a blizzard which greatly hinders the opponent almost freezing them in their tracks. The blizzard causes third degree frostbite that damages nerves that can carry one after the jutsu ends if the opponents doesn't notice it's a Genjutsu. Falling into the illusion of the blizzard the user is hidden and capable of attacking the enemy in the confusion.
~This last for five turns and all stages cannot be performed one after another, a period of five turns must pass before this jutsu can be used again in any of it's stages.
Black snow is an illusion that's applied to the users clothing, and has to be touching them to work (that is what I mean by "with in the users grasp") and it acts like an aura, but it's a figment that conflicts with all the senses. It only works on clothing no weapons at this level. As for how it comes across and what time it'll take for them to see the black snow i'll elaborate on That. Note that his ability may grow though I think I might just further elaborate on it' different levels in this one Jutsu, so to accretion it's ability across it's three stages. I'd only waned to describe the first levle but to describe it in full length I think it'll make more sense now.
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Waku [ Frames ]
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: By using her Genjutsu in a powerful and precise focus on a recent series of events, Chisato is capable of reaching into the recesses of someones given memory in a day and have them repeat said action of that day; devoid of knowledge of their surroundings. Believing they were back where they were doing what they did. Literally taking them from one framed moment in their day to another and having them uncontrollably repeat it as they become lost to the notion that they weren't intending on doing so again. More actively in battle chisato can have a fighter repeat an action she'd survived or had faired badly because of her ill preparation and with out their full knowledge repeat said action where she would know their every move within said "plan" and further more be able to react efficiently so to both force them to reuse a certain level of chakra and unwittingly open themselves to a series of counter strikes.
Last for one turn and draws text of repeated moment from one of the old post from opponents past post. The following post after use the opponent must repeat said text of action, but after post opponents ability to respond or adapt doesn't change.
At least three turns must pass before this can be used.
The "frame" can only capture three actions with in a post.
note repeating action doesn't stop them from noticing what the user is doing in live battle.
Following post is free for them to react or try to dodge counter.
I'd argue that frames is fair under the understanding that the person though repeating an action to start with and my own actions being aligned to counter it. It still leaves room in the following post as to the response to my actions. The basic form of RP'ing permits the opponent a chance to adapt however they can that maybe outside of my characters knowledge to gain ground or procure a safe recovery from this action. I can't say my attacks hit, I can only set up my attacks with the intention to hit with the slight edge of knowing what might come. There for it's not auto-hitting but rather a tactical play on their minds. Making them think I can see trough their moves and therefore I can claim some ability to respond better, but it doesn't stop their characters from acting past the frame they'd repeat. ThoughI'd suggest my frames may need a limit on the size of said frame. As to say it can only capture three actions the opponent will do in a series (meaning one after the other)
Character: Chisato Ekiguchi
Technique Name: Sosei Koukotsu [ Rejuvenation Trance ]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Focusing on her possible need to rejuvenate her depleted chakra Chisato has developed a Genjutsu trance that can force her body to focus on drawing back lost chakra, but it comes at the cost of her not being able to use both Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu after it's activated. Now the user is restricted to simple and low level (stage three) complex Taijutsu techniques. Yet as their minds are under a trance they're consciousness and susceptibility to Genjutsu drops, where only physical contact will enter them into Genjutsu. Moving and acting much like zombies the user would feel as if they have no mind from the depth of the trance, speed and strength increase slightly. Over all in this trance they regain 35 chakra points per turn of activation with in the cap of their maximum chakra pool (what's listed as you're starting pool on you're profile). This last for five turns. Can be dispelled by "Echo clarity" even at distance.
You're correct about the taijutsu techniques only and pretty much no other techniques. The return is correct as well, but it's 35 chakra each turn it's active which is limited to 5 turns. the cap is the hight of you'r chakra when the fight begun, meaning you can't retain excess chakra from you're normal limits that's found on your profile. I hope that cleared that up.
also note that Genjutsu are less effective at a distance with this technique active.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:02 pm
@ Yoko: Approved.
@ Winter: Katon Oni is approved with the stipulation that the technique creates two clones, not four.
Ring of Fire Deception is on the fence; there is already a Genjutsu that does what you've described, I believe, and the burning could be done with any Katon technique. I would scrap combining them in to a technique and using up a custom slot, but that's up to you. If you decide to use this, it's with the stipulation that the element is Katon, not Maruton.
Ecstasy Bite functions like a drug, and would be Medical if it were approved. Can your character use medical techniques? If so, approved.
There are some questions about Shadow Clone Bite, and we need clarification on what you meant by: "Bite and drain jutsus/attributes can be applied through this clone." Also, it may be brought in to question how the opponent's shadow may be used to form a clone, since your character (I'm assuming) is not a Nara.
Shadow Clone Ambush is firmly denied due to the shadow hopping ability.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:19 pm
Ergo War @ Yoko: Approved.
@ Winter: Katon Oni is approved with the stipulation that the technique creates two clones, not four.
Ring of Fire Deception is on the fence; there is already a Genjutsu that does what you've described, I believe, and the burning could be done with any Katon technique. I would scrap combining them in to a technique and using up a custom slot, but that's up to you. If you decide to use this, it's with the stipulation that the element is Katon, not Maruton.
Ecstasy Bite functions like a drug, and would be Medical if it were approved. Can your character use medical techniques? If so, approved.
There are some questions about Shadow Clone Bite, and we need clarification on what you meant by: "Bite and drain jutsus/attributes can be applied through this clone." Also, it may be brought in to question how the opponent's shadow may be used to form a clone, since your character (I'm assuming) is not a Nara.
Shadow Clone Ambush is firmly denied due to the shadow hopping ability. 1.Thank you Ergo looking at them and taking them over. I'll change the ones as requested. No my character does not have medical techniques, but has the ability to consume the blood of opponents to regain chakra, and the already approved ability to steal jutsu by the draining of blood(usually through bite) This was a further extension of this attribute/jutsu. This explains the "Bite and drain jutsus/attributes can be applied through this clone." There are already shadow clones, and you do not have to be Nara to use them, aside from that there are other shadow jutsus that are not Nara such as the Shadow Swell genjutsu, and I lack the ability to explain chakra manipulation as it is akin to magic. Its a small jump to use my shadow or someone elses as it is the same material. I'm not relying on the shadow to attack, but the clone. How about this instead of the Shadow Clone ambush
Character: Maxwell Uchiha
Technique Name: Lightning clone Ambush
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Description: Max steps away with lightning speed, and leaves in his place a clone made of raiton energy. If struck, this clone delivers a powerful electric similar to a modern taser. Enough to tense and lock the muscles in place. This shock last for two post.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:47 pm
Thank you for your cooperation!
That does not change the fact that the technique would be medical, which it is simply based on its effect.
Where do attributes come in to your character's Jutsu; that's a big question. From what you've described, he has the ability to drain Jutsu, so if you're going to tack on attributes to that, there needs to be more clarification as to the limits of that branch of the technique.
Shadow Clones don't actually utilize shadows, though; they're probably a reference to the way that a shadow mimics the thing that casts it. All of this could likely be solved with a technique that allows for the creation of Shadow Clones anywhere within a set radius.
I could submit that for discussion if you'd like.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:35 pm
Ergo War Thank you for your cooperation!
That does not change the fact that the technique would be medical, which it is simply based on its effect.
Where do attributes come in to your character's Jutsu; that's a big question. From what you've described, he has the ability to drain Jutsu, so if you're going to tack on attributes to that, there needs to be more clarification as to the limits of that branch of the technique.
Shadow Clones don't actually utilize shadows, though; they're probably a reference to the way that a shadow mimics the thing that casts it. All of this could likely be solved with a technique that allows for the creation of Shadow Clones anywhere within a set radius.
I could submit that for discussion if you'd like. The attribute is what allows me to gain chakra through consuming blood. that attribute fuels the jutsu for stealing. and that shadow clone creation would work, but i need them to be linked to me so I gain the benefits of the drained blood. I honestly do not see why that bite technique has to be medical. There are poison maruton techniques, there are sense confusing maruton techniques. It could be a genjutsu that is maintained through the bite. would that work better than a chemical reaction? Genjutsu are pushed through parts of the brain, and it could trigger the center for pleasure. The genjutsu last as long as I maintain the bite, and cannot be kai'ed out of. would that work?
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:59 pm
Ah, the way the technique was being interpreted was that you were draining Jutsu and attributes from the target. That makes more sense, thank you.
The way it is written, the Chakra is not for launching and/or manipulating the technique since it is injected directly in to the target. Based on that, it can only be assumed that the Chakra goes toward the effect and/or distribution throughout the target's body and directly affects health, which makes it medical even if we disregard the actual effects. I'm fine with the Genjutsu aspect, but I'm going to have to ask you to rewrite the techniques that have been tweaked so that they can be looked over once more. If all is well, this won't take nearly as long as earlier!
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