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((LOL ... I was gonna have him come down naked but figured that would have been too much. xd .... come on Ky, get off your a** and lets get going! I have a test for the next rank yet and training for a new ability. Just waiting on you for this test. twisted ))

((iam not close to the place)) Ichiro was 75 yards away from a giant black blob he sites down on the ground and sighies he put on his all gray and black iPod with medium sizes DJ head phones that matches with my wrappings put on full blast listening to chop suey "hey Dum a** hurry up "kinshin with that voice ichiro with a creepy smile "shut up kinshin" says to kinshin Ichiro sighies "we only have 75 yards left just put on your head phones and listens to coming undone or b.y.o.b i don’t give a crap what you listens to just shut the hell up".

Ichiro sighies "i guest that blob over there is where that person with the white hair told us to go" kinshin smile "i hope there a girl there" Ichiro "KISHIN" "what?" Ichiro " shut the hell up" "fine fine then just don’t be gay ok" Ichiro" I m not gay at lease i did not have sex with a man" kinshin" ugh it was one night" Ichiro "yaaaaaaaaaaa one night" kinshin with tears "man shut up".

((Okay I'm going to ignore Sick Kid's post.))

As Yori came up the walk way his jaw dropped. He couldn't believe the damage the Mansion had tooken. There was debree everywhere. Then he turned his head slighlty to the left to realize there was a giant crater where the giant fountain once stood. Yori had allways wanted to just jump
into that wonderfull fountain one day.

Afew seconds later the Raven walked through what was left of the front door with a frown on his face. He began to walk up the half wrecked stairs up to the bathroom.He took off his clothes and started a nice hot shower.
At first he just let the warm water hit his back, but soon he started washing all the grime he felt from his past mission. About an hour later Yori's shower was over.

He grabed one of the elagent towels set up in the bathroom to dry off. He wrapped it around him and the young
Raven and walked to his room. Thankfully the second floor was untouched, and that was the floor Yori's room was on. So when he went in he closed the door behind him. He came out in clean, fresh black shorts, and an ironed black shortsleeve shirt.

As the Bount primped himself in the fullsized mirror his stomach began to growl. He thought to himself Well the kitchen is in terrible condition, but im sure I can find something around town. Next Yori ran to his second story window and jumped out onto the smashed concrete. As he ran toward the smell of delicious pastries he let the strong winds hit his face...

[Exits to Yungh's Pastry Shop]

((Sorry, I know there is no good detailing))

((Sorry Ky Sicks Kid is my cousin. Plus you should delete that post.))

{Sorry, Master Ky this is also my cousin. Honestly I understand it a little bit. All you have to do is replace the some of the right words wit the right one and BOOM, you got it, but, one thing that is pointed out is the grammar, EWW. I'm a have a little more experience with his writing because I'm in his English class. It also shift's from first person to second to third, a lot. Sorry, cousin. I didn't really understand the mission you gave me, I really did get a mentor, but, he doesn't answer me and I'm going to use Microsoft word, but, it isn't going to be as good because it's 2003 version.}



The young Raven flies over the half beautifully done mansion. He does notice that it really hasn't changed since he was last there. His doll, Death Sama, carries him on his back, while they fly. "Don't you notice that young man with the weird looking doll," Death Sama asks, Meluk. "Yes, I do. Just ignore him," Meluk respond's. They land on the ground softly, noticing it still looks the same. "We should have fired those worker's, they can't even build a building." Meluk says.

((Well I try my best.))
[Enters from the park.]

Nirro slowly walks to the gate of the mansion. "I was gone for hours and they still didn't finish the mansion," Nirro said to himself. "Well they are making good progress," Zen-su said trying to defend the workers. Nirro jumps over the gate, instead of walking through it like a normal person. "Hey Meluk," Nirro said cheerfully.

He and Zen-su looks at the man with the strange looking doll. "Nirro can you feel it," Zen-su whisper to Nirro so the new Bount couldn't hear him. "Yes I do. I can feel the insanity inside him...it's more powerful than mine," Nirro said aloud not caring if any one else heard him ",Keep a close eye on him he can become a threat to not just me, but to every one else around us." “I feel as if I seen that man back in my past,” Nirro thought to himself as took one last look at the man

((How was my post Ky and it could really help if you can also tell me what I did wrong in this post.))

"I completely understand Nirro," Zen-su said. Nirro directs his attention to the construction work who where rebuilding the mansion. They appeared to have difficulty trying to move a heavy peace of metal. Nirro examined the piece of metal. It didn't look like the correct size, as it looked to short.

He soon noticed that the piece of metal was the right size to build only one story of the incomplete mansion, but still they couldn't lift it. Nirro walks over to the worker. "Hey can I try," Nirro said politely. "Shore kid...but don't brake anything," The construction replied ", Hey Jim let this kid borrow your machine for a minute." The constructer nodded and get out of the machine.

Nirro looks puzzled as he didn't know how to use on of these two hundred pound monster. "I rather not use that," Nirro said as he walks over to long piece of metal. "Then how are you going to move it?" The construction worker asked as he was some what puzzled by how Nirro was going to move it. Nirro lifts the metal with both of his hands with ease. "So where do you want me to put it," Nirro asked.

The men where surprised and speechless by Nirros display of strength. "Wow kid how many hour do you work out," The constructor finally said. Nirro forgot that he wasn't a human so it would be stronger than them.

Before Nirro could reply Meluk was gone. He directs his attention back to astonished construction worker how asked him a question a couple of second ago. "Well I ummmm...I don't remember," Nirro said to the construction worker ",I just do as many push up as I can before my arms start to hurt." Zen-su walks behind Nirro and pulls on his pants, so he can get his attention. "Nirro I'm hungry," Zen-su said as puts his hand on his stomach.

Nirro places the large piece of metal on the small red X on the floor. "Is that where it has to go?" Nirro asked the construction workers. He didn't want to put it on the wrong spot hand have them move it, although it was there job. "That's ok kid," The construction worker said politely. Nirro gives the man a very angry look, grabs him by the collar of his shirt and lifts him up.

"Call me kid one more time and I'll be drinking milk from the bottom of your skull," Nirro said ",I've been living for over four hundred years, so I think you should treat me with more respect." He drops the man. “HEY,” Zen-su shout “,I SAID I’M HUNGRY.”
Nirro kneels down to Zen-su and give him a smile. “Ok lets go get something to eat,” Nirro said as gets up. He walks into the mansion just remembering that the refrigerator was on the side the mansion other half was destroyed.

Zen-su groans. “Don’t worry I’ll call for some pizza,” Nirro said as he grabs the phone.