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 Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:22 pm
[[That's great, Hippi. biggrin We'll be here to help you get better.]]
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:32 pm
((OK. And you don't have to use quote when the post you are quoting is on the same page.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:32 pm
After a long walk the angel had just about made it to the city but he had noticed the man brutally killing a couple of people. Instinctively he ran up and unsheathed his sword and asked him In a very low toned but lowed and angry voice: what is the meaning of this brutality?!?!
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:35 pm
((You did it again.
Don't OOC in here anymore, If you need me, PM me. OOC with me in PM's or in the OOC thread k? Answer there not here))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:42 pm
Seeing Saki's sad face, he sighed and smiled, walking up to her and stroking her hair without warning. All the blood that got stuck on her, from her hair to her hands, and to her shoes, were attracted into his hand, and formed a small globe over his palm, which he pointed downwards for the blood to drop on the ground. He smiled cheerfully over her, though a little worried somehow. These... feelings began blooming all of a sudden, he had no way of knowing why.
"What is the meaning of this brutality?"
Kin looked over to the source of the voice, and raised a brow of interest at the man's... outfit. "All white, with seemingly soft feathery wings. Cool. You must be a purifier like us," he said it all so cassually, walking leisurely to the man and raising his hand for a hand shake.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:48 pm
Ryn had fallen half asleep after arriving at the hotel room, and it took him several seconds to realize that Nendir had arrived. However, he quickly picked up the smell of fish, and came out of his dazed stupor reaching over, and begining to eat it quickly, saying to Nendir,"Perfect. You got a lot of food, and the more I eat the faster I'll be able to get back up for flying."
He smiled, his teeth spattered with bits of fish, before returning to the food, chewing quickly, and sometimes swallowing great chunks whole in his hurry to eat.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:50 pm
Kind Stranger Seeing Saki's sad face, he sighed and smiled, walking up to her and stroking her hair without warning. All the blood that got stuck on her, from her hair to her hands, and to her shoes, were attracted into his hand, and formed a small globe over his palm, which he pointed downwards for the blood to drop on the ground. He smiled cheerfully over her, though a little worried somehow. These... feelings began blooming all of a sudden, he had no way of knowing why. "What is the meaning of this brutality?"Kin looked over to the source of the voice, and raised a brow of interest at the man's... outfit. "All white, with seemingly soft feathery wings. Cool. You must be a purifier like us," he said it all so cassually, walking leisurely to the man and raising his hand for a hand shake. The Angel was aww struck after hearing the man call him that name. he had dropped his arms and asked, what is a purifier?
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:59 pm
"Aren't you glad I asked for fish with no bones?" Nendir said with a smile before plopping down near the balcony window. He was sick to death of running, sooner rather than later he would fight, perhaps not till the death, but either he or his opponent was going to be left licking their wounds.
The Elven armor Nendir he wore was draining his strength, he needed food and rest, a bath could come later. Regardless, he slipped out of the white outer layer of the armor and placed it over the arm of a nearby chair. "What are we going to do?" He asked out loud, but completely by accident.
The moon lit up the night sky, aided by thousands of stars who seemed to worship the moon in it's splendor. Nendir couldn't help but think of home. He pushed his food to the side, reached over and grabbed an extra pillow from the foot of the bed and curled up in a ball, hugging the pillow to his face. He wasn't crying, far from it in fact, he was simply lost in thought.
He would more than likely eat right before they left. But for the time being it seemed his body didn't have the will to even attempt to hold something down. "I know you don't like it Ryn, but we need another car once we get to Canada. You'll kill yourself carrying us around like a stork with to babe bundles."
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:13 pm
((I can't do anything until Jewel does something. /_ ))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:15 pm
Kin smacked himself in the forehead at the de ja vu, somehow annoyed at having had two supernaturals ask him the same question. Still, he didn't particularly answer Saki's question before, did he? Unable to remember, he merely sighed and gave in to answering, turning his posture to include Saki and Amati as the audience, "'To purify this world of its abomination, the human race, and to bring billions of deaths, for me to become the god of deat,' bla bla bla," Kin rolled his eyes as he quoted that hooded mask he first met years back, then continued, "So that's why we're here, the purifiers." He gave a cheerful grin as to find yet another companion, though his lust for challenging preys was still on, ready t pounce if the winged being was to do anything fishy.
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:27 pm
duckie_mamoru [[I start college on the 27th]] ((mines starts teh same day where are you going to college))
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:34 pm
The Angel had been lost in a deep thought after hearing what he was, he had thought to him self, is that why all those names were carved into the trees is that why I have been sent here, then he remembered why he was here. He had a flash back of how the council sent him to destroy them. But first he had to destroy all the defenders, that was his mission, It is his duty as a Warrior and purifier to stop this infection and restore the perfection that was taken away. After he came out of thought, He said to the man in a low and rumbling voice, I am Shoten Zodiak, head angel sent by the Gods to come and round up the purifiers so we may go and destroy thees traitors called the defenders, you must help me find them. Then he had also asked the man to come and help him find them.
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