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 Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:53 am
Trinity_Eclipse MISSION- High Tide TAKE TWO! The moon is out, the tides are swelling, and the fish are jumping! Get down to the shore and catch yourself a water pokemon! Pokemon: Any non-evolved, non-legendary water-type Rewards: 400 ---
"I thought this was a really good mission, especially for someone as new as you. ^^
There was plenty of detail, and you kept things in the realm of reality. You also had little to no spelling/grammar errors.
There is one thing I'd like to point out, though-- Buizel is much faster than Squirtle and would've gotten the first move of the battle. Also, make sure the pokemon isn't completely fainted when you throw the pokeball. (I don't think you did that, but it's hard to tell.) These are both easily looked over since the level of this mission is very low. ^^ Keep the 400 PD and the Buizel~
~Sammy
P.S.- I like the thingymabob at the bottom that says what pokemon was caught and all. ^^"
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:54 am
"PIDGEY!!!" The bird Pokemon howls, plummeting to the ground, burns covering it's body.
"I suppose you're better than I thought..." Dark says to his Charmander. "Still bad you only know three moves but... I suppose I'll have to live with it. Although you should learn Metal Claw soon."
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Blade wanders up from Dark's lab and wanders over to the couch.
"Hello."
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:55 am
"Hiya Blade! And Mr. Ginji!" Sammy waved to both of them, wondering why everyone was getting here just now.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:58 am
Adam looked around at all the other people coming in. "Hey every- Oooh Yay!" he jumped forward sliding across the table and grabbing the sticky note.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:01 pm
Sammy looked at the sticky note, waving goodbye sadly. "They grow up so fast..." she whimpered, wiping the tears from her eyes.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:03 pm
"They do?" Ginji said with confusion, he didn't think so. "Only if you're traveling at double speed." he laughed.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:04 pm
x-cupids arrow-x "Hiya Blade! And Mr. Ginji!" Sammy waved to both of them, wondering why everyone was getting here just now. Blade waves and grabs himself a coffee. "...I should try and battle someone today... I feel like I've been promoted from a soldier to a general..."
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:06 pm
Sammy looked at Mr. Ginji. "It's just... My little sticky note... H-He's gone already..." she muttered, then turning to Blade. "I bet one of my team would want to fight you. Hmm... Probably... Comet maybe? Or Vixen..." she said, trying to remember which pokemon had wanted a battle.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:07 pm
*I get back from doing some tiny administrative work*
Me: Sorry about that.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:13 pm
"Yay!" Adam yelled after reading the mission. "Thanks Sammy!" he crashed down onto the sofa next to her. He'd give her the note back for christmas.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:16 pm
"Don't thank me, thank him," she said, pointing to the sticky note. She then looked around, wondering when she should leave for Slateport.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:19 pm
x-cupids arrow-x "Don't thank me, thank him," she said, pointing to the sticky note. She then looked around, wondering when she should leave for Slateport. Me: So how long are you going to be gone? *I walk by eating a sandwich*
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:19 pm
x-cupids arrow-x Sammy looked at Mr. Ginji. "It's just... My little sticky note... H-He's gone already..." she muttered, then turning to Blade. "I bet one of my team would want to fight you. Hmm... Probably... Comet maybe? Or Vixen..." she said, trying to remember which pokemon had wanted a battle. Blade mumbles, still unsure if he can do it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:22 pm
Sammy looked over at Mr. Brian. "Huh? o.o" she questioned, scratching her head. She had forgotten that he could read minds. She looked at Blade. "Oooh, so you want to have your own team like Mr. Dark?" she asked.
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Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:24 pm
x-cupids arrow-x Sammy looked over at Mr. Brian. "Huh? o.o" she questioned, scratching her head. She had forgotten that he could read minds. She looked at Blade. "Oooh, so you want to have your own team like Mr. Dark?" she asked. Blade ponders.
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