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 Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:40 pm
Sammy walked in with her normal grin on her face. "Hey everyone," she greeted, sitting down on the couch.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:43 pm
"Hey Sammy. Hey, look at my new Scizor!" exclaimed excitedly, knowing that she had a Scyther.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:45 pm
Sammy waved, looking at the Scizor. "I would evolve Dasher now... I have the Metal coat, but... BUGS SCARE MEH!" she wailed, stuffing her head into the pillows. Dasher popped out of his pokeball, his eyes flaming. He wanted to be a Scizor veeeery badly, it seemed.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:48 pm
"aw man, i gotta go..." Tommy wailed as he read the message on his TADS. "ugh, you couldn't have been any slower... well, bye!" Tommy saluted as he and his pokemon dissapeared.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:49 pm
Sammy sweatdropped. "Bye..." she sighed, being bored out of her mind.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:51 pm
Falling Comet MISSION - That's the Spirit! Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Mt. Pyre and catch a ghost pokemon. {Text blob} Well, unfortunately, I can't pass this mission yet. The main reason is that your battle was too short. A single Bite attack is not enough to weaken a Duskull into catching range. Make the battle longer when you retry the mission. Okay, with the main issue out of the way, I do have a few other things I want to say. For starters, please include the entire brief in your report. (Mission title, description, pokemon catchable, and rewards) You did include at least part of the brief, which is more than some people do. And for that, I'm glad. Next, your mission is very hard to read. You've got good spelling, but everything is just blobbed together. If you have a program with a spelling/grammar check, be sure to use it. And don't be afraid of spacing out your paragraphs, since that makes it easier to read too. Don't be discouraged, this was your first mission, and no one should expect perfection right away. The important thing is that you're trying. So just extend the battle, and post the mission again, and we'll take it from there. Welcome to the team! cool
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:54 pm
Sammy waved. "Hi Mr. Thard-y-kins. Wassup?" she questioned, tipping her head to the side. Dasher sighed, feeling like chopping his trainer's head off with his own scythes at the moment.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:04 pm
"Oh, not too much, Sammy." I wave back. "Actually I was about to leave when I spotted that mission report."
Noticing Dasher's demeanor, I add, "Uhm... is your Scyther feeling okay? He seems a little agitated."
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:07 pm
"Aaaaw, you've gotta leave? Crappit, I scared everyone off," she snickered. She then gestured to Dasher with a point of her head. "He's just mad because I'm not lettin' him evolve-- No need for a bug being bigger than that," she sighed. Dasher folded his scythes.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:11 pm
"So, five feet is about your maximum tolerance for bugs?" I ask, half-jokingly.
"Anyway, take care."
*Teleports out with Xatu*
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:15 pm
Sammy frowned a bit, then waved goodbye. "See ya later," she said, leaning her head back. What to do, what to do.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:18 pm
Blade wanders up from the lab and looks around. He's missing his trainer, not that he'd admit that.
"Hello."
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:22 pm
"YAY! I DIDN'T SCARE EVERYONE AWAY! HELLOOOO!" She yowled, throwing herself towards Blade. This didn't work very well, though, because she hadn't accounted for the Tyranitar's size. Dasher just shook his head, thinking even less of his trainer.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:27 pm
x-cupids arrow-x "YAY! I DIDN'T SCARE EVERYONE AWAY! HELLOOOO!" She yowled, throwing herself towards Blade. This didn't work very well, though, because she hadn't accounted for the Tyranitar's size. Dasher just shook his head, thinking even less of his trainer. Blade asks as Sammy lunges towards him. "Uh... Hi Sammy..." He says nervously.
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:28 pm
Sammy stuck out her bottom lip. "When I got here everyone suddenly had to go... It made me feel like an anti-people deoderant and I was considering suicide, but YOU'RE HERE! YAY! Now it's not just me and buggy~" she grinned, feeling Dasher's angry gaze destroying the back of her head.
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