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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:03 am
I just caught up on the chapters . Well as too which version was best then i would say the first version.The second version is too censored . Well I find myself wanting more as always , I love the chapter . 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:07 am
Woot! I was actually quoted and everything! The ominous ragged figure was... a little girl? Just great, now I know we're boned. Whenever a creepy little girl tries to kill a group or lead them to "safety" the whole lot of them is boned. Told ya, Davey-boy, you can do better than her.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:34 am
Add me to your subscribers.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 11:12 am
surprised crazy-coughing person is a little girl? and she's asking us to follow her right after she tried to kill us? hmmmmm ..... something about this doesn't smell right.
xd wow. Silverman is actually serious? surprised WOW!
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 11:15 am
Koosei surprised crazy-coughing person is a little girl? and she's asking us to follow her right after she tried to kill us? hmmmmm ..... something about this doesn't smell right. xd wow. Silverman is actually serious? surprised WOW! Thanks for the vote of confidence in the male population 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 11:16 am
Allwing Koosei surprised crazy-coughing person is a little girl? and she's asking us to follow her right after she tried to kill us? hmmmmm ..... something about this doesn't smell right. xd wow. Silverman is actually serious? surprised WOW! Thanks for the vote of confidence in the male population 3nodding xp wink you're welcome.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 11:22 am
Koosei xd wow. Silverman is actually serious? surprised WOW! ninja
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 11:23 am
Add me to the subscribers list, please.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 12:27 pm
Subscribe Me Please
Alright I am caught up now. Nice work. Great worekl I could go into further detail but I think you know my feelings on your story 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 3:21 pm
SUBSCRIBE ME, PLEASE.
I liked the "sex" scene. This is meant to be a story, not a child's picture book!
I am now going to read CH.28.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 3:28 pm
Do-do-double post! This chapter is a gossip chapter! xd And that "He loves him" and "I don't love them" stuff. Reminds me of current age middle school! xd Also, James Tyler “Kill her!” said Tyler, “Before she kills us!” Tyler is quite fast to shoot blame here! But anyone would be if they were walking in a place full of traps at every corner! Awesome chapter thus far.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:12 pm
Welllll..... I guess it's time for me to start reading this story. I'll tell you when to add me to the subscribers list. I don't want to go onto it without reading the story yet >.<
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:52 pm
Say hi to Chapter 29!
We are roughly 11 chapters from the end now. I might have to go over 40 chapters, but it shouldn't be by too much.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:57 pm
Great chapter, FS basic and yet very captivating. Time to play the Hell Roulette twisted
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