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 Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:49 pm
Vincent Darkholme -purrs- squeeee chapter two is about halway done, im writing it as we speak *melts* Oh. My. God. You said you could write, but you never said you could write so well. Its so ******** awesome... You'd better tell me the second chapter 2 is finished because GUH! I have to read it.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:56 pm
Draupnir2005 Vincent Darkholme -purrs- squeeee chapter two is about halway done, im writing it as we speak *melts* Oh. My. God. You said you could write, but you never said you could write so well. Its so ******** awesome... You'd better tell me the second chapter 2 is finished because GUH! I have to read it. the funny thing is this isnt even my best writing, im about to finsih chapter two, but theres a good section of it posted now that explains the plot a little better which character do you liek the best by the way? it may be too early to tell
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:07 pm
Vincent Darkholme eek the funny thing is this isnt even my best writing thats not your best writing. Woah... But yeah, my favouraite character has to be Eliath the catboy. Not -JUST- because hes a catboy either. He just seems more real to me than the others do. But yeah sweatdrop catboys rock
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:13 pm
Baalia doesnt seem real?!
-cries- damnit
oh well maybe when more of her personality opens up in chapter two you'll like her, shes like Eliaths big sister, they wereboth raised by the same man.
but you'll see that soon enough
oh and a forshadowing quote
"ever kissed someone with a forked tounge?" xp
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:28 pm
Vincent Darkholme Baalia doesnt seem real?! -cries- damnit oh well maybe when more of her personality opens up in chapter two you'll like her, shes like Eliaths big sister, they wereboth raised by the same man. but you'll see that soon enough oh and a forshadowing quote "ever kissed someone with a forked tounge?" xp No she seems real. She just seems slightly akward at times, wheras Eliath just fits better. You see this is why I'll never be a critic - as far as explaining things go, I blow. But oooooh. I wonder what kissing someone with a forked tounge -is- like. whee
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:29 pm
oh i was wondering if i should go fully into detail with this story, im very good at graphic sex scenes (i read alot of smut, sue me) but im also good at tasteful ones
what do you say? hot devil girl lesbian sex? it WILL happen, trust me.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:39 pm
Vincent Darkholme oh i was wondering if i should go fully into detail with this story, im very good at graphic sex scenes (i read alot of smut, sue me) but im also good at tasteful ones what do you say? hot devil girl lesbian sex? it WILL happen, trust me. I say yummy. Smut rocks, so go for it ^________^
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 3:55 pm
alright, skin deep chapter two is up, it feels good to write again after so long
feel free to leave comments!
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 4:03 pm
I'll coment on Chapter 2 when its done. 3nodding Its so ********' awesome though.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:07 pm
O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:18 pm
wicked_lady O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying Yeah I missed the guild too... I don't generally post outside the guild, but when I do... Its basically anywhere on Gaia.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:28 pm
Draupnir2005 wicked_lady O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying Yeah I missed the guild too... I don't generally post outside the guild, but when I do... Its basically anywhere on Gaia. Normally I live on Welcome to Gaia, but lately I've been hanging around Charity/Quests
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:40 pm
wicked_lady Draupnir2005 wicked_lady O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying Yeah I missed the guild too... I don't generally post outside the guild, but when I do... Its basically anywhere on Gaia. Normally I live on Welcome to Gaia, but lately I've been hanging around Charity/Quests i hang around the ED forum laying the mental smackdown on morons
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:43 pm
Vincent Darkholme wicked_lady Draupnir2005 wicked_lady O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying Yeah I missed the guild too... I don't generally post outside the guild, but when I do... Its basically anywhere on Gaia. Normally I live on Welcome to Gaia, but lately I've been hanging around Charity/Quests i hang around the ED forum laying the mental smackdown on morons I bet thats fun. I spent today on the Computer Fourm thing, helping people chose what program to download stuff with =/ Some random stranger kissed me as well.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2004 5:54 pm
Draupnir2005 Vincent Darkholme wicked_lady Draupnir2005 wicked_lady O thank crist! I was going to sue someone if the guilds didn't come back soon.... I was having withdrawles and I didn't know where you guys normally hung out so I couldn't get in contact with you crying Yeah I missed the guild too... I don't generally post outside the guild, but when I do... Its basically anywhere on Gaia. Normally I live on Welcome to Gaia, but lately I've been hanging around Charity/Quests i hang around the ED forum laying the mental smackdown on morons I bet thats fun. I spent today on the Computer Fourm thing, helping people chose what program to download stuff with =/ Some random stranger kissed me as well.[/quote it has its moments, oh and ive been kissed by like twenty random people eek
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