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8 ball: Ok so what rank are we looking at for just that skill then? Can i form it like i did with the hardcore thread style. E=active this many posts, ect?

Hardcore thread style: Well...i meant iron like. So i guess its like having an armor active? it gains a defensive rank equal to the rank that it was trained to, like and other defensive techniques. Offensively, the tips are now edged like needles or threads. better?

Hmmmmm....well i wanted it to act like Hanzo's jutsu a little. I will still have to activate it, but at chuunin i was going to by a gas mask to protect others from me and so on and so forth XD so thats one grey area i would like to work out.

Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. Once/if active He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Those affected by speech need to be within 5 meters, and directly infront of him to be affected. Speech toxins can be affected by wind jutsu

better?


Character: Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Hardcore thread style
Rank: null. Each rank must be trained seperatly.
Type: Bloodline
Description: The user focuses chakra into their tendrils and make them harden, causing the tendrils to harden like steel. This gives the user added striking damage/defense for [x]turns. The Iron like Tendrils are as strong meaning that they cannot be cut by a simple blade, yet are flexible as wire. It requires a buki/ninjutsu rank equal to the rank of this technique to cut the threads. The threads act like an armor, and the tips are needle like and sharp.
e=1 post duration, d=2, c=4, b=8, a=16, S=20 S+=25

thank you for your patience, help, and timely response. I appreciate it all ^_^

I think it's all about perspective and actually having to think on how you experience the world. I've already emplaned the general idea of how it would work and of coarse with use I'd go over it each time just to make clear how it would work, but this Jutsu i think is completely possible just difficult to plan your way out of. Really Just let me try it other than it possible impracticality we haven't any idea how it would be received or reacted to and it's on such a base level anyone with some Genjutsu sensing abilities can dispel it right away.

With this jutsu I aimed for complexity in simplicity because it calls both writer and RPC to figure out how their sense actually work. It's not outside of someones ability to do this it's just takes some thought and a level head to think things trough. also what's switched is only on group and the rest remain safe. So you do have three other senses to work on. I in a genjutsu someone can make you feel like paper that's slowly burning away, what leap of the imagination or practicality would it be for someones senses to cross?

I'm asking for a test run.

Character: Akane Hakura
Technique Name: Ito Souken: Uingusu [Thread Creation: Wings]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bloodline: Jiongu
Description: The threads occupying the users shoulders, and back will begin to open forcing out a vast amount of Threads that seem to spread out and contract within a blink of an eye. The wings are strong enough to stop Taijutsu and Bukijuts techniques, and it tightly weaved to stop projectiles like Senbon and Kunai's. The Wings may also be able to give temporary flight for [2] Posts, this can be added on by giving another dose of C Rank Chakra. Sharp weapons are able to cut through the threads.



Character: Akane Hakura
Technique Name: Karada no Doku [Body Posion]
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By connecting into the Kidney's and Stomach of the user, via chakra, waste from the body can be channeled into a potent poison within the user. The Poison itself is not corrosive or flammable, but highly toxic if put into the bloodstream of a victim. The user is immune since he is the one to create the poison and releases it, thus creating antibodies for it as well. The Poison can be excreted through pores in the skin, the mouth, or can cover any part of the body, even Threads from the Jiongu Bloodline. The Poison will create double vision and after a while [3 posts after infection], a sudden feeling of sickness and the need to release their bowels [vomit, urinate, stool, etc.]. The Poison has a back side though, after use the user must remove all of it from their body, or it could undoubtedly create a recoil within the user, causing inner damage to organs.

Yo-Ko: Yes, those stats look good for the Hardcore Style.

Jeckel and Hyde Jutsu- Removing the hearts from the body means removing the natural weakness of the Bloodline. Sealing away other organs is suggested. Also, explain the hawk's eye...idea.

Reaper Elyse: I'm not saying that your jutsu is completely void buHardcore Stylet it is simply unheard of. It sounds more like something to discover, research and develop. I think that you should work more on it before placing it to be reviewed. Think about how each sense would transfer to another, that way there will be no space for generalizations.

Azzurro:
Jiongu Wings- Sounds good but remember that Taijutsu techniques and Bukijutsu techniques higher than C rank can penetrate this particular Thread Creation.

Body Poison- Remember that it must enter the bloodstream of the target via a cut or through the eyes and mouth. Also, when the poison is excreted from the mouth, it should not be fired as a projectile or mist, simply generated there as if by the glands.

Nice avatar, by the way.

Black Fruity

Centre of Explosion- Approved on the condition that hand signs are required to focus the two elemental chakras properly.

Volatile- We try to stay away from vague descriptions so that there is not much space for users to take advantage of. If you can state specifically the effects that the jutsu can have, it can be approved.

Thank you and will do ^^

Good and approved, all.