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 Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:00 pm
Scorpio looks only to see the red eyes still following him. He was unsure of what to do. Then he sees a vent up ahead. He quickly tries to unskrew it but does not have enough time. There also was not enough room to throw a bomb ahead. Only thing to do is try to circle back till he finds one ove the vents he has already unskrewed. SO he heads deaper into the vents.
Somwhere else: A few erasers notice smoke comming from the vents. They went up to investigate.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:04 pm
jake looked over at the person adressing him
"hi, jake mentioned me? he didnt mention you, wait, did you guys meet here?"
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:44 pm
((Jake looked over? What? Don'tcha mean Seth? lol))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:58 pm
(First I would like to say, that last post was great! Keep posting like that and you will have no problems with other people reacting to your posts biggrin ! Secondly, forgive me for taking control of your character in this last post. PS: don't take control of other people's character as a note, this is a one time exception.... ninja )
Scorpio turns down the air ducts, and travels his way down the maze of vents, till he suddenly finds himself at a dead end. He turns slowly, his heart beat is the only thing he can hear, and its so loud it would seem the whole world should be able to hear it. Then he sees those retched orbs again! 'Will this thing ever leave me alone?' he thinks to himself as he calms himself for the fight up ahead. He pulls out his trusty six shooter from its holster and fires at the quickly approaching orbs, but it doesn't seem to be having any effect! In the dim light he sees the crude steel slowly rising and reflecting the light, then it swings down in a savage swing!
A rat squeaks in protest as Scorpio jolts awake, beads of sweat all over his face.... (take it over from here my friend)
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Nathien Bloodguard Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:22 pm
One of the School's nurses and other medical crew members arrived in the safe room and started looking over Twila.
The nurse was examining her & Twila just groaned. The nurse said softly, "We just need you to stay awake for a few more moments okay?"
Twila still lay there trying to open her eyes, unsuccessfully. So she just responded with, "I'll try."
The medical crew members told Skylar & River to step back.
"Is she going to be okay?"
The tall man from the med crew thought for a few seconds before answering, "We're going to try & make her better."
God, am I really that bad? Twila thought.
The nurse stood up & said, "Obviously she's lost a lot of blood. The bullet wounds aren't too serious but we need to get her bandaged now. We have to get her to my office so she can be treated efficiently. Dammit no one brought the stretcher! There's no time to go get one! Will one of you Erasers help?"
The Eraser nodded and picked Twila up carefully.
"Can we come?"
The nurse wanted to say no but she couldn't resist the boys' innocent & worried eyes, "Fine you can follow along. But we do need someone to inform your parents about this."
Skylar & River nodded, "We'll go to the office then go tell them."
The nurse, the twins, and the Eraser carrying Twila started walking away.
"Good job, Rick. We'll get someone to clean all of this up," the tall man said pointing to the blood on the floor before walking away with the rest of the group.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:22 pm
(Oh and i realy only read the book Maximum Ride: Saving the world and other extreme sports so i dont know to much about erasers, becouse in that book they were replaced by robotic erasers that wer a bit differents.)
This night mare is new to Scorpio. (This sort of reminds me of my nightmare last night where i was being chased by a cereal killer. Weird.)
"I need to get back to work, i need to think of my next move."
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:46 pm
Red was shocked at their reaction. "I'm sorry you even had to go through all that, and to answer your question, yes. I have been shot by one of those bullets. They are suppose to knock you out, but you must have been hit by a weak one. You weren't suppose to feel that."
"I do regret that I have been caught, but from what I heard, I don't regret that you escaped those schools." Red thought of things for a moment. Then, despite his anger, grew silent, into a brooding thoughtful moment. The chip in the head concerned him, as he would not doubt it possible from what he heard about the Southern School.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:07 pm
Chance stepped forward.
"Seth..he was going to tell me more about you but then apparently he never got the chance to!"
She wondered for a moment.
"Oh! I'm Chance! Jake and I along with Ragdoll escaped from a school, we ended up here...well Ragdoll is somewhere I don't know. And I don't know where Jake is at all!"
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:09 pm
(( *sigh* Sry, I was so happy with the fact I could actually say something that I forgot to sign on! Lol Saving the world and other Extreme Sports is what I have!! 8D I luv it! lol I also read the first one! >w< ))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:18 pm
((Lolz Looks Like We're All Saying Which Books We Have! I Have: Angel Experiment, School's Out Forever, Saving the World and Other Extreme Sports, and The Final Warning. So I've Got All 4 8D. I've Read the First 3 But Haven't Read the 4th Yet.))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:21 pm
(Errr... if your talking about the Maximum Ride Series, I don't have any of them. What kind of book are they. Novel? Graphic novel? What author, or authors? I take fantasy or Sci-fi section. I'll have to pick it up and read them then... ninja )
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:27 pm
((*Le Gasp* You've Never Read Maximum Ride! Well I Guess it's Considered Science Fiction. They Are Novels But it Just Actually Got Turned Into a Manga!))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:33 pm
((Well... I will have to look into the novels and the manga. Imagine, I haven't read them and I'm in charge of the schools. mrgreen Just makes things interesting, right? And creates our own version of things, without complete influence from the books.))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:36 pm
((True Very True. Good That You Get What's Going On Though Even Though You Haven't Read Em! Oh & the Author's James Patterson.))
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:12 pm
Dude they made a manga, thats just freakin cool. just like how they turned artemis fowl into a comic book. (THough i did not like how some charecters turned out.)
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