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 Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:48 pm
Clasion Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel crying love makes people do dumb things... *Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop hehe, you make me smile ^_^
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:50 pm
Nejen Clasion Rainheart Nejen Clasion Rainheart Nejen Clasion Rainheart Nejen Oh, Dori-kun, what did you think of Chapter 6? Guess you forgot to send a reply. whee A writer, eh? o.o; Believe it or not, so am I. >.>; PM me some material if you'd like. ^^. I don't any stories on my comp, but I do have some poetry that somewhat reflects my style. 3nodding Yup. Writer. whee I'm writing "Undead Apocalypse", my survival horror story. whee If you like survival horror, I'll PM the first couple of chapters and see what you think, then if you like, I'll send some more. Ezykiel's comment on the first two chapters : "It's really good. Went straight to my savebox." whee Teh kewl. o.o; Go for it. ^^.; Send me a chapter. 3nodding I wanna see some material from a fellow writer. If you're interested I could send you a poem or two. >.> Alright, then. ^^ Just know that this is my rough draft for the story, and when I finish it, I'm going to go back and make some changes. I'm not all like, uber-descriptive in this draft. I mean, I'm descriptive, but I don't like, emphasize too much. >.> I typically concentrate more on the character actions. 3nodding Alright, I'll send you the first 2 chapters. ^^ Yeah...It's good to put alot of focus on you, but I must say that it's better if you add any kind of descriptiveness on your rough draft. Sometimes the focus gets blurred if you don't. o.o Lol. Yeah, I'm descriptive and all, it's just that I usually don't use like 5 sentences to describe one thing. whee Well, I gotta go, so I'll pm you the first two chapters, then I gotta get off. So just pm me a reply with what you think. ^^ Yeah...My style is a very desciptive one. sweatdrop Alright. I'll read it. ^^.
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Clasion Rainheart Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:51 pm
Midoriku Broken Angel Clasion Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel crying love makes people do dumb things... *Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop hehe, you make me smile ^_^ Awwwww true love crying Darn girl feelings crying
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:51 pm
Satrion-Rainheart Clasion Rainheart Satrion-Rainheart Clasion Rainheart Satrion-Rainheart Clasion Rainheart Satrion-Rainheart eek *Can't resist the urge and snuggles up to her sister and closes her eyes* Can't.....help it.. *Snuggles her, too* Awwwww. heart I never knew you could be so cuddly. whee I'm sorry. *Climbs off her* Must have been the burrito. I'll just sit here if you want. Nyu, ish cute. whee It's not a bad thing. o.o; *Covers the lower half of her face wif her tail, and looksit her from behind it, with curious eyes.* o.o Really? *Jumps on her and cuddles some more* I never knew how fun cuddling was. *Cuddles, too* Awwww. heart ^^. Yer adorable as a girl. whee heart So are you *Snuggles and wraps her tail around her.* ^.^ *Wraps her tail around her as well.* Cyuuuuuute. ^^.
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Clasion Rainheart Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:52 pm
Midoriku Broken Angel Clasion Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel crying love makes people do dumb things... *Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop hehe, you make me smile ^_^ Awww. Dori0kun. ^^. heart Yew make me smile, too. ^^. All teh time. 3nodding *Pulls her over into teh cuddle* Teh three-way cuddle! ^-^
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:54 pm
Satrion-Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel Clasion Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel crying love makes people do dumb things... *Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop hehe, you make me smile ^_^ Awwwww true love crying Darn girl feelings crying aww, is it that time of the month? xp
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:54 pm
This is some pretty weird s**t eek
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:54 pm
*Plays with the chain attached to her collar* Wow. For some reason I'm not scared to be on a chain. Heh Alright.
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:58 pm
Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek Don't get jealous. xd
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:59 pm
Midoriku Broken Angel Satrion-Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel Clasion Rainheart Midoriku Broken Angel crying love makes people do dumb things... *Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop hehe, you make me smile ^_^ Awwwww true love crying Darn girl feelings crying aww, is it that time of the month? xp Guess so. sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:59 pm
Satrion-Rainheart Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek Don't get jealous. xd lol i've seen some weird s**t but this is a very odd love triangle....and illegal..... eek
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:00 pm
Sir Random Hero Satrion-Rainheart Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek Don't get jealous. xd lol i've seen some weird s**t but this is a very odd love triangle....and illegal..... eek Shush yew! xp
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Clasion Rainheart Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:02 pm
Clasion Rainheart Sir Random Hero Satrion-Rainheart Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek Don't get jealous. xd lol i've seen some weird s**t but this is a very odd love triangle....and illegal..... eek Shush yew! xp It's like snuggling World War III Lol *Snuggles in close*
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:03 pm
Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek aww, do you feel left out?? *pulls you into the three way cuddle* ^_^
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Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:04 pm
Midoriku Broken Angel Sir Random Hero This is some pretty weird s**t eek aww, do you feel left out?? *pulls you into the three way cuddle* ^_^ .....actually.....nvm
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