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Clasion Rainheart
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:36 pm


Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart


eek *Can't resist the urge and snuggles up to her sister and closes her eyes* Can't.....help it..
*Snuggles her, too* Awwwww. heart I never knew you could be so cuddly. whee


I'm sorry. *Climbs off her* Must have been the burrito. I'll just sit here if you want.
Nyu, ish cute. whee It's not a bad thing. o.o; *Covers the lower half of her face wif her tail, and looksit her from behind it, with curious eyes.* o.o
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:39 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Midoriku Broken Angel
eek *falls*
*Catches her* ^^.

Midori-kun ish in teh secks mode, too. >.>; Can I be both your's and Satrion's mistress? whee


You've bought me everything I own *Sniffles* I'm yours. *Hands her a chain and collar* Be gentle sad
W00t! whee *Attaches the collar* I'll try. >.>


I've never been a little slave girl before....I feel violated redface Lol.
You're not violated...... ....Yet. >.>


Yet huh? In that case be rough.....Touche

Satrion-Rainheart


Midoriku Broken Angel

PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:40 pm


crying love makes people do dumb things...
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:41 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Oh, Dori-kun, what did you think of Chapter 6? Guess you forgot to send a reply. whee
A writer, eh? o.o; Believe it or not, so am I. >.>; PM me some material if you'd like. ^^. I don't any stories on my comp, but I do have some poetry that somewhat reflects my style. 3nodding
Yup. Writer. whee I'm writing "Undead Apocalypse", my survival horror story. whee

If you like survival horror, I'll PM the first couple of chapters and see what you think, then if you like, I'll send some more.

Ezykiel's comment on the first two chapters : "It's really good. Went straight to my savebox."

whee
Teh kewl. o.o; Go for it. ^^.; Send me a chapter. 3nodding I wanna see some material from a fellow writer. If you're interested I could send you a poem or two. >.>
Alright, then. ^^ Just know that this is my rough draft for the story, and when I finish it, I'm going to go back and make some changes. I'm not all like, uber-descriptive in this draft. I mean, I'm descriptive, but I don't like, emphasize too much. >.> I typically concentrate more on the character actions. 3nodding
Alright, I'll send you the first 2 chapters. ^^

Shoukei


Satrion-Rainheart

PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:41 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart


eek *Can't resist the urge and snuggles up to her sister and closes her eyes* Can't.....help it..
*Snuggles her, too* Awwwww. heart I never knew you could be so cuddly. whee


I'm sorry. *Climbs off her* Must have been the burrito. I'll just sit here if you want.
Nyu, ish cute. whee It's not a bad thing. o.o; *Covers the lower half of her face wif her tail, and looksit her from behind it, with curious eyes.* o.o

Really? *Jumps on her and cuddles some more* I never knew how fun cuddling was.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:41 pm


Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Short Stories With Tragic Endings

Here you stand seething with guilt.
Silence only justifies this act of cowardice.
The look stapled on your face cries out for forgiveness,
the one thing that I cannot give.

(Did you ever see that one person
and the way they do these things
and it hurts you so much it's like choking choking choking
down the embers)

I can give you freedom from your guilt,
with a flick of my wrist onto yours.
I can give you peace of mind with a forced smile.
I can give you death with the look upon my face.

This is your freedom in a life of fallacy,
with no last kiss and no regrets;
you don't deserve good bye.
This is your freedom in a life of fallacy,
with no last kiss and no good bye.

Here you stand seething with guilt.
Silence only justifies this act of cowardice.

With a short story, the one you add to daily, you are the tragic loss.
No story book ending for this fairy tale of you.
Just the one composed with blood taken from your pen that you hold in your
lifeless hand.
Cry for you. Shed tears. Mourn. Wish the end.
Cry for you. Shed tears. Mourn. Wish the end.

(Did you ever look, did you ever see that one person,
and the subtle way that they do these things and it hurts so much?
So much like choking down the embers of a great blaze.
It's that moment when your eyes seem to spread aspersions
and to scream confessions at the insipid sky parting clouds.
You let this one person come down in the most perfect moment.
And it breaks my heart to know the only reason you are here now is
A reminder of what I'll never have
I'll never have... I'll never...
Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe you in.
Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe you in.
But this table for one has become bearable.
I now take comfort in this, and for this, I cherish you.
Did you ever look, did you ever see that one person
and the subtle way that they do these things and it hurts so much?
So much like choking down the embers of a great blaze.
It's that moment when your eyes seem to spread aspersions
and to scream confessions at the insipid sky parting clouds.
And you let this one person come down, come down.
I cherish you...I cherish you.
Just say you would do the same for me.
Just say you would do the same for me.
Say you would do the same...
Just say you would do the same for me.
For as much as I love Autumn,
I'm giving myself to Ashes.)

There ya go, Sate. o.o;


eek LONG! I haven't seen anything that long since I looked down when I was naked. biggrin Heh Alright.
Lol. Not anymore, what with your gender change. xd Nice lyrics, though, ne?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:42 pm


Sir Random Hero
Clasion Rainheart
Short Stories With Tragic Endings
Quote:



Haven't heard that song in forever sweatdrop
Yeah...I love it. ^^.;
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:43 pm


Midoriku Broken Angel
crying love makes people do dumb things...
*Looksit yew and runs into a wall* Yes....It does.... sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:43 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Short Stories With Tragic Endings

Here you stand seething with guilt.
Silence only justifies this act of cowardice.
The look stapled on your face cries out for forgiveness,
the one thing that I cannot give.

(Did you ever see that one person
and the way they do these things
and it hurts you so much it's like choking choking choking
down the embers)

I can give you freedom from your guilt,
with a flick of my wrist onto yours.
I can give you peace of mind with a forced smile.
I can give you death with the look upon my face.

This is your freedom in a life of fallacy,
with no last kiss and no regrets;
you don't deserve good bye.
This is your freedom in a life of fallacy,
with no last kiss and no good bye.

Here you stand seething with guilt.
Silence only justifies this act of cowardice.

With a short story, the one you add to daily, you are the tragic loss.
No story book ending for this fairy tale of you.
Just the one composed with blood taken from your pen that you hold in your
lifeless hand.
Cry for you. Shed tears. Mourn. Wish the end.
Cry for you. Shed tears. Mourn. Wish the end.

(Did you ever look, did you ever see that one person,
and the subtle way that they do these things and it hurts so much?
So much like choking down the embers of a great blaze.
It's that moment when your eyes seem to spread aspersions
and to scream confessions at the insipid sky parting clouds.
You let this one person come down in the most perfect moment.
And it breaks my heart to know the only reason you are here now is
A reminder of what I'll never have
I'll never have... I'll never...
Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe you in.
Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe you in.
But this table for one has become bearable.
I now take comfort in this, and for this, I cherish you.
Did you ever look, did you ever see that one person
and the subtle way that they do these things and it hurts so much?
So much like choking down the embers of a great blaze.
It's that moment when your eyes seem to spread aspersions
and to scream confessions at the insipid sky parting clouds.
And you let this one person come down, come down.
I cherish you...I cherish you.
Just say you would do the same for me.
Just say you would do the same for me.
Say you would do the same...
Just say you would do the same for me.
For as much as I love Autumn,
I'm giving myself to Ashes.)

There ya go, Sate. o.o;


eek LONG! I haven't seen anything that long since I looked down when I was naked. biggrin Heh Alright.
Lol. Not anymore, what with your gender change. xd Nice lyrics, though, ne?


Really cool.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:45 pm


Nejen
Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Oh, Dori-kun, what did you think of Chapter 6? Guess you forgot to send a reply. whee
A writer, eh? o.o; Believe it or not, so am I. >.>; PM me some material if you'd like. ^^. I don't any stories on my comp, but I do have some poetry that somewhat reflects my style. 3nodding
Yup. Writer. whee I'm writing "Undead Apocalypse", my survival horror story. whee

If you like survival horror, I'll PM the first couple of chapters and see what you think, then if you like, I'll send some more.

Ezykiel's comment on the first two chapters : "It's really good. Went straight to my savebox."

whee
Teh kewl. o.o; Go for it. ^^.; Send me a chapter. 3nodding I wanna see some material from a fellow writer. If you're interested I could send you a poem or two. >.>
Alright, then. ^^ Just know that this is my rough draft for the story, and when I finish it, I'm going to go back and make some changes. I'm not all like, uber-descriptive in this draft. I mean, I'm descriptive, but I don't like, emphasize too much. >.> I typically concentrate more on the character actions. 3nodding
Alright, I'll send you the first 2 chapters. ^^
Yeah...It's good to put alot of focus on you, but I must say that it's better if you add any kind of descriptiveness on your rough draft. Sometimes the focus gets blurred if you don't. o.o

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:46 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Sir Random Hero
Clasion Rainheart
Short Stories With Tragic Endings
Quote:



Haven't heard that song in forever sweatdrop
Yeah...I love it. ^^.;




sweatdrop *humps*
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:46 pm


Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart


eek *Can't resist the urge and snuggles up to her sister and closes her eyes* Can't.....help it..
*Snuggles her, too* Awwwww. heart I never knew you could be so cuddly. whee


I'm sorry. *Climbs off her* Must have been the burrito. I'll just sit here if you want.
Nyu, ish cute. whee It's not a bad thing. o.o; *Covers the lower half of her face wif her tail, and looksit her from behind it, with curious eyes.* o.o

Really? *Jumps on her and cuddles some more* I never knew how fun cuddling was.
*Cuddles, too* Awwww. heart ^^. Yer adorable as a girl. whee heart

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:47 pm


Sir Random Hero
Clasion Rainheart
Sir Random Hero
Clasion Rainheart
Short Stories With Tragic Endings
Quote:



Haven't heard that song in forever sweatdrop
Yeah...I love it. ^^.;




sweatdrop *humps*
*Jumps away, a abit* o.o;;; Feeling lonely, are we? xd Erm.......o.o....Vybrus needs someone to cuddle wif. ^^. Hint hint. >.>
PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:48 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Clasion Rainheart
Nejen
Oh, Dori-kun, what did you think of Chapter 6? Guess you forgot to send a reply. whee
A writer, eh? o.o; Believe it or not, so am I. >.>; PM me some material if you'd like. ^^. I don't any stories on my comp, but I do have some poetry that somewhat reflects my style. 3nodding
Yup. Writer. whee I'm writing "Undead Apocalypse", my survival horror story. whee

If you like survival horror, I'll PM the first couple of chapters and see what you think, then if you like, I'll send some more.

Ezykiel's comment on the first two chapters : "It's really good. Went straight to my savebox."

whee
Teh kewl. o.o; Go for it. ^^.; Send me a chapter. 3nodding I wanna see some material from a fellow writer. If you're interested I could send you a poem or two. >.>
Alright, then. ^^ Just know that this is my rough draft for the story, and when I finish it, I'm going to go back and make some changes. I'm not all like, uber-descriptive in this draft. I mean, I'm descriptive, but I don't like, emphasize too much. >.> I typically concentrate more on the character actions. 3nodding
Alright, I'll send you the first 2 chapters. ^^
Yeah...It's good to put alot of focus on you, but I must say that it's better if you add any kind of descriptiveness on your rough draft. Sometimes the focus gets blurred if you don't. o.o
Lol. Yeah, I'm descriptive and all, it's just that I usually don't use like 5 sentences to describe one thing. whee Well, I gotta go, so I'll pm you the first two chapters, then I gotta get off. So just pm me a reply with what you think. ^^

Shoukei


Satrion-Rainheart

PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 10:48 pm


Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart
Clasion Rainheart
Satrion-Rainheart


eek *Can't resist the urge and snuggles up to her sister and closes her eyes* Can't.....help it..
*Snuggles her, too* Awwwww. heart I never knew you could be so cuddly. whee


I'm sorry. *Climbs off her* Must have been the burrito. I'll just sit here if you want.
Nyu, ish cute. whee It's not a bad thing. o.o; *Covers the lower half of her face wif her tail, and looksit her from behind it, with curious eyes.* o.o

Really? *Jumps on her and cuddles some more* I never knew how fun cuddling was.
*Cuddles, too* Awwww. heart ^^. Yer adorable as a girl. whee heart


So are you *Snuggles and wraps her tail around her.* ^.^
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