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Nero turned to Arekku, "Nice Venomoth." he said studying the talking giant purple moth.

Just as Arekku was about to thank Nero for the complement Roddy stummbled into the room sounding drunk, "I'll get you you flat eyed Wailord bloat!" He rolled a few times and hit his head on the table. "Oi me head!" he fell on his back and huffed a few times, "Wow Ven... you got him pretty good... now, Thank you Nero." Ven nodded at him as well, "Yes, Nero, Thank you!" She flew to the back of the couch and started watching TV. Arekku noticed Brian walk in, "Oh, hello sir!"

*I see the little commotion*
Me: So how's it going?

*I look at my watch*
Me: Tonight no. And myself, I got a project mostly done, nothing much else though.

Me: No, just screwing with some Pokedex 'additions'.
*I close my TADS*

Me: Later.
*I plop down on the couch*

MISSION- Birch's First Break-in
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Prof. Birch's lab in Littleroot and steal one of his three pokémon (Treeko, Torchic, or Mudkip). You must sneak in at night. But don't get caught by Prof. Birch or his assistant. At some point you must battle the pokémon you stole/are stealing, if you want to catch it.

Pokémon:
Treeko
Torchic
Mudkip

Funds upon completion: 300


I was relaxing on the beach below the Petalburg Forest. Then I heard a few excited children saying that Prof. Birch got a few more Hoenn Starter Pokémon. The little kids said they were going to get one. Little did they know that there was going to be one Starter Pokémon missing before they could say,”Come on out Pokémon” I had to creep in at night and swipe one of them.


Twilight….

“I knew I should have stayed on the main road! Wait, do I already go that way?” I said frustratingly. Finally, after several tense hours I found myself at the exit from Odale Town to Littleroot Town. According to the time on my TADS, I arrived in Littleroot Town at 11:30. Excellent, it shouldn’t take more than 30 minutes to be at Prof. Birch’s laboratory. First I needed to find that best, safest, and most concealed route to the lab. After finding a map of Littleroot Town on my TADS, it was complicating finding a course. At last, a perfect path was found. I went into the woods surrounding Littleroot Town. I emerged from them ten yards away from the lab. I threw my Shinx’s Pokeball carefully. “Shinx use Spark on that street light.” I whispered. The street light caused an explosion making the area hazy. I saw two people appear from the lab. Those two must be Prof. Birch and his assistance. Perfect the diversion was going according to plan. I sneaked inside the lab.

I only had a matter of seconds before they come back. I made sure that all security cameras were destroyed by using Shinx’s Thunderbolt. I looked room after room but no sign of Torchic, Mudkip, or Treeko. When I looked inside the kitchen I found a Torchic getting a midnight snack. Great it is already tired but I still needed it to be weaker. When Torchic saw that I was not Prof. Birch or the assistant it used Ember on my Shinx.

“Shinx use Charge”

The Torchic used Ember once more.

“Now Shinx use Thunderbolt”

Oh no it was a bit louder than I thought it would be. I had to think fast before Prof. Birch and the assistance came back.

While the Torchic saw that I was distracted it used Scratch.

“Shinx, No! Use Thunderbolt”

Yes, Torchic got paralyzed!

“Go Pokeball”

The Pokeball tilted for a few then it was captured.
The Mission wasn’t over yet though. I still needed to bust out.
I returned Shinx back in the Pokeball. I ran around the lab until I found an exit. Then I saw the doorknob turning. No they are using that door! I locked that door all the way before running across the halls another time. I returned to the kitchen wear I found a window broken because of the battle. There was no one near it so I jumped out of it. I returned to the woods once more. Now the Mission was over. I can just relax now.

Prof. Birch must hate us by now, eh? Always sending our rookies out to swipe one of his starters....

Ah, but you want the grade, no? Very well. *Gets out grading pen*

The mission was a little on the short side, but all the basic elements are there. It's got some story, a battle, good spelling, and only a handful of punctuation errors. One thing you might consider doing is putting your thoughts in italics. Like this: Oh no! It was too loud! I had to think fast....

Since it's a level 1 mission, there's no reason not to pass it. Just keep refining your style and always strive to improve as a trainer. Torchic and P$300 can help with that. ^_^