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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:05 am
I just joined, but I already know how the D20 system works and I read through the rules and such.
RP Example
A twelve year old girl stands infront of the old door. She twists the rusted knob and pushes the door softly. The door is tightly shut and she is forced to use two hands to open it. The door is smacked against the wall and the old deserted house made of wood shakes a little. 'Seems like I can spend the night here safely' She thinks while walking inside.
The hallway was filled with statues. Most statues were about elephants, she could tell because of the big ears and the shape of the statues. The statues were dirty and it was evident that this house has been deserted for a very long time.
((I do not have perfect grammar. I'm from a foreign country, sorry. sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:46 am
Busty+Bunny I just joined, but I already know how the D20 system works and I read through the rules and such.
RP ExampleA twelve year old girl stands infront of the old door. She twists the rusted knob and pushes the door softly. The door is tightly shut and she is forced to use two hands to open it. The door is smacked against the wall and the old deserted house made of wood shakes a little. 'Seems like I can spend the night here safely' She thinks while walking inside. The hallway was filled with statues. Most statues were about elephants, she could tell because of the big ears and the shape of the statues. The statues were dirty and it was evident that this house has been deserted for a very long time. ((I do not have perfect grammar. I'm from a foreign country, sorry. sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 12:34 am
Thanks for the advice. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 6:01 am
Any suggestions before I send it off and here is my Rp sample since I already know about the D20 system.
"Can we Just stop for today Father?.......... I'm completely out of chak......ra..." states Rai as he fall unconscious on the ground in front of their small estate.Rai and His father had been Training all mourning with using His Kekkai Genkai to enhance his body.He father looked Down at him and sighs, He wonders why his son had been so eager to start his training today early in the mourning but not being able to keep up."Well I guess we shall go inside for awhile. Lets see what your what your mother cooked for breakfast" states Rai's father as he picks up Rai and puts him over his shoulder and begins to walk back towards their house. Over his shoulder, Rai opens one eye and winks and thinks to himself,Worked like a charm, Mission number 1..... success!!!, he snickers to himself as he is laid down on the couch by his father as he goes to get him and Rai some breakfast.
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:55 am
desean101101 Any suggestions before I send it off and here is my Rp sample since I already know about the D20 system. "Can we Just stop for today Father?.......... I'm completely out of chak......ra..." states Rai as he fall unconscious on the ground in front of their small estate.Rai and His father had been Training all mourning with using His Kekkai Genkai to enhance his body.He father looked Down at him and sighs, He wonders why his son had been so eager to start his training today early in the mourning but not being able to keep up."Well I guess we shall go inside for awhile. Lets see what your what your mother cooked for breakfast" states Rai's father as he picks up Rai and puts him over his shoulder and begins to walk back towards their house. Over his shoulder, Rai opens one eye and winks and thinks to himself,Worked like a charm, Mission number 1..... success!!!, he snickers to himself as he is laid down on the couch by his father as he goes to get him and Rai some breakfast.
pass, although i suggest sticking with one time, preferably the "he walked". you used the past and present times together which can get confusing sometimes. further then that, please use correct interpunction, like spaces after a periods. (<-- like this one). and try to divide it into alinea's if the text becomes somewhat longer, cause that's easier to read as well further then that. congratz on passing 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:08 am
Thanks for passing me and also thanks for the advice. mrgreen mrgreen mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 8:11 pm
Hmm, it looks like it's my turn. Well, I'm not the best, but here goes nothing.
Katare leaned against the gigantic oak tree, like he contentedly did almost every day.. until now.
"Dad?"
"Yes, son?" Katare's father stood next to him, 6 feet tall with a beard that, to Katare, represented his sagacity and wisdom.
"Will I ever be able to see you again?" Katare seemed to be almost crying.
"Of course. Just because you are leaving this town dosen't mean that you can't see me when you finally become a ninja. You'll just... have to wait a while. Stay strong, okay?" Katare's father seemed to be sad as well.
"...Okay, dad. I'll become strong just like grandpa, and make you proud!" The bells of the academy chimed in chorus; it was Katare's time to leave. He straightened himself up and brushed the leaves from his hair. Slowly, he headed towards the academy auditorium.
"My son... You already have."
There it is. Any suggestions?
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:27 am
[Hopefully my skills are up to par with you all.]
In the shadows of the tree a boy sits waiting for his team to come rescue him. He looks up and sees a full moon over head and thinks about how he could escape the Oto-nin trying to capture him for finding out about the attack. He hears a bush move and is instantly frozen. "Which is it friend or foe?" he asks himself as sweat begins to role down his face. Just as he is about to move a shuriken flies towards him hitting him in the shoulder. "Hope you didn't plan on going anywhere," says one of the Oto-nin pulling out a katana. "I really wasn't planning on anything other than leaving," he says sarcastically with a frightened smirk on his face. The Oto-nin raises his blade and swings it at the boy. The boy jumps back nearly being hit. "Hey that was a little too close," he yells as the pain from the kunai finally sets in causing him to grab his shoulder. The Oto-nin swings his blade again but this time it is blocked by another blade. "Its not nice to pick on kids," says a ninja with a green jacket on his hair flowing in the wind......
[I will let you finish the outcome.]
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:41 am
Sword in the Shadows Hmm, it looks like it's my turn. Well, I'm not the best, but here goes nothing. Katare leaned against the gigantic oak tree, like he contentedly did almost every day.. until now.
"Dad?"
"Yes, son?" Katare's father stood next to him, 6 feet tall with a beard that, to Katare, represented his sagacity and wisdom.
"Will I ever be able to see you again?" Katare seemed to be almost crying.
"Of course. Just because you are leaving this town dosen't mean that you can't see me when you finally become a ninja. You'll just... have to wait a while. Stay strong, okay?" Katare's father seemed to be sad as well.
"...Okay, dad. I'll become strong just like grandpa, and make you proud!" The bells of the academy chimed in chorus; it was Katare's time to leave. He straightened himself up and brushed the leaves from his hair. Slowly, he headed towards the academy auditorium.
"My son... You already have."There it is. Any suggestions?
Something like that. Do one more for me.
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 7:42 am
Hissori_Hayashi [Hopefully my skills are up to par with you all.]
In the shadows of the tree a boy sits waiting for his team to come rescue him. He looks up and sees a full moon over head and thinks about how he could escape the Oto-nin trying to capture him for finding out about the attack. He hears a bush move and is instantly frozen. "Which is it friend or foe?" he asks himself as sweat begins to role down his face. Just as he is about to move a shuriken flies towards him hitting him in the shoulder. "Hope you didn't plan on going anywhere," says one of the Oto-nin pulling out a katana. "I really wasn't planning on anything other than leaving," he says sarcastically with a frightened smirk on his face. The Oto-nin raises his blade and swings it at the boy. The boy jumps back nearly being hit. "Hey that was a little too close," he yells as the pain from the kunai finally sets in causing him to grab his shoulder. The Oto-nin swings his blade again but this time it is blocked by another blade. "Its not nice to pick on kids," says a ninja with a green jacket on his hair flowing in the wind......
[I will let you finish the outcome.]
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 12:14 pm
>.> Ok...no clue what the duce is going on here but you know what, IT ROCKS OUT LOUD!! >.> Did I just self respectingly say that...hmmm ummm...ok moving on. No village yet (does that make me a Missing Nin? ninja nin nin! ) Anyway, here we go! (Characters name is Takamichi Roy and I'm goin out for Rock baby!)
Sample
Roy stands atop the roof of the academy gazying off into the sky. The long black trench coat his mom bought him for his potential graduation present fit him like a glove. Riding down his body like it was made for his exact features, it flowed upon the soft currents of wind that blew through the village. The hand stitched mask he ware on his face was lowered so that he could get a clear scent of the air about the town and truly feel at one with nature.
On his back hung the scroll of his family's pride, the Scroll of Skill. This was a scroll passed down from generation to generation with an exact depiction of every jutsu ever seen by a member of the family. And on top of that, a counter measure was added to each jutsu by whoever devised one. This was a scrool that Roy's father heald with such high esteem and pride that it's guarding was only outmatched by the guard of the villages secret scroll. And to that point, it should be noted...Roy still hadn't figured out how to break the damn thing open.
"Great...what good is this stupid thing if I can't even open it to read it...dammit! There goes a perfectly good night's work down the drain..."
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 4:26 pm
(i hope i did this all right because this guild is like the best naruto related thing to ever happen to me ^^. Characters name is Torimaru and i havent chosen a village yet sry.)
Torimaru continued his climb up the steep hill towering above him. "Finaly!" he said with a sigh as he reached the small, flat area covered in the shade of a blooming cherry blossom tree. With a grunt Torimaru sat down at the base of the tree. He knew that the upcoming chuunin exams wouldn't be a cake walk, and he was worrying about his incredibly powerful enemy. Cursing his luck at being paired with the "Chosen One", as some called the gifted ninja hailing from Kumogakure, he fell fast asleep.
(hope its good enough i realy want to do as good as i can with this guild.)
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:10 pm
[Oh, I do hope this is where this goes...]
Character: Taisen Li
As Li gazed out upon the misty horizon, he wondered, 'How did I start this war?' Leaping from the roof of the building he was on, landing with a soft thud. He crouched where he landed, he did not want to stand up yet. An unusual urge, but he couldn't help it. 'Oh yeah, I cut off all of their supply lines and killed off so many of the Xanans. It's no wonder they wanted war after I told them it was Isaac's kingdom that did it.' He stood up slowly with his eyes closed, letting the wind mingle with his hair. 'Isaac better let me join in the war, if he knows what's good for him. And his kingdom.' "I should go tell Mariah and Runelesca where I'm going," he muttered to himself. "I wonder where they went."
[How's that?]
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:33 pm
Carlos Ralfer >.> Ok...no clue what the duce is going on here but you know what, IT ROCKS OUT LOUD!! >.> Did I just self respectingly say that...hmmm ummm...ok moving on. No village yet (does that make me a Missing Nin? ninja nin nin! ) Anyway, here we go! (Characters name is Takamichi Roy and I'm goin out for Rock baby!) SampleRoy stands atop the roof of the academy gazying off into the sky. The long black trench coat his mom bought him for his potential graduation present fit him like a glove. Riding down his body like it was made for his exact features, it flowed upon the soft currents of wind that blew through the village. The hand stitched mask he ware on his face was lowered so that he could get a clear scent of the air about the town and truly feel at one with nature. On his back hung the scroll of his family's pride, the Scroll of Skill. This was a scroll passed down from generation to generation with an exact depiction of every jutsu ever seen by a member of the family. And on top of that, a counter measure was added to each jutsu by whoever devised one. This was a scrool that Roy's father heald with such high esteem and pride that it's guarding was only outmatched by the guard of the villages secret scroll. And to that point, it should be noted...Roy still hadn't figured out how to break the damn thing open. "Great...what good is this stupid thing if I can't even open it to read it...dammit! There goes a perfectly good night's work down the drain..."
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:35 pm
Hidan-Kakuzu (i hope i did this all right because this guild is like the best naruto related thing to ever happen to me ^^. Characters name is Torimaru and i havent chosen a village yet sry.) Torimaru continued his climb up the steep hill towering above him. "Finally!" he said with a sigh as he reached the small, flat area covered in the shade of a blooming cherry blossom tree. With a grunt Torimaru sat down at the base of the tree. He knew that the upcoming chuunin exams wouldn't be a cake walk, and he was worrying about his incredibly powerful enemy. Cursing his luck at being paired with the "Chosen One", as some called the gifted ninja hailing from Kumogakure, he fell fast asleep. (hope its good enough i realy want to do as good as i can with this guild.)
Pass.
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