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 Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:31 pm
Seeing the target just sit there it soon breaks up into pieces as the blood all splashes out on my feet and blood ninja's as he is impressed with my bone breaking attacks into one great combo he sees my great progress as he know's I must have alot of bloodrage in my body as I can feel the rage inside of me go down looking at the blood I can tell this village is very hardcore and very tough to get into as the atttack's are fierce and disgusting the other ninja here must be pretty blood thirsty as I now go back trainning as the blood nin went back and brought back another target putting it on a bloody hook attatched to the ceiling
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:33 pm
I look the target up and down as I can see that this one is a little tighter and a little stronger than the first one I broke as I can see it with my sharinagan as I try to get angry I can see the shadow ninja again as he had me beaten infront of a crowd of everyone as I could only be more angry from my first fight lost in only one move I fall on the ground being shocked and paralyzed on the floor as I switch my attention to when I mastered the 4th gate and then 5th from the pain and suffering my body went threw and the torture I endored feeling my bloodrage rise and my body charge back up with power
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:33 pm
Knowing I have the power now I yell as my power rises and my muscles grow veins all over them and so does my head and legs as my blood rushes through my body I hit the target furiously as my attacks barley touch it and my attacks make loud clasping sounds off the bag of blood as I kick it to from short range and quickly tap the attack with my hands I finishes the combo with double punch from top to bottom at the same time as the bag explodes with blood I look into it as I can see my dark side I look back at him as I he congragulates me and shakes my hand as I say goodbye carrying my bag out with me as the blood ninja yell out to me as I walk out covered in blood with a smile on my face "I'm pretty badass arne't I."
10/10
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:02 pm
Nyu got off the boat at the Hidden Blood docks.Nyu had heard rumors about the hidden blood but never actually beleived that is was real.How would Nyu find a teacher to teach him the powerful taijutsu of the Hidden Blood Village he had heard so much about.Nyu decided to just give it a try.When Nyu entered th main entrance of the village he saw that it seemed to be normal enough as any other village.Then he saw the citizens of the town making cuts and making thmselves bleed like it was nothing to do everyday tasks.Nyu said"what kind of village is this even 5 year old are cutting themselves up.
1/7 Explosion Fist
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:09 pm
Nyu went up to the closest citizen he saw in the village and said"um excuse me can you show me where i could find someone to teach me any taijutsu from this village?"The lady turned around then Nyu noticed that she didn't have a left arm.She seemed nice enough by the tone of her voice.She said"oh hello you must be new to this village you must go to the huge dojo at the end of the village that's where all the trainers are."Nyu noticed how friendly these people were but they were a little weird.Nyu said"ok thanks mam i highly appreciate it."Nyu saw the huge dojo and made his way to it.
2/7
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:20 pm
Nyu noticed all the buildings were red as the color of blood.Nyu noticed that there was no Ichiraku ramen shop in this village.Although that was a sad sight Nyu arrived in the dojo with confidence in him self.Nyu opened the door and saw many people in front of him in a straight line.Nyu asked"What's the line for?"The kid infront of him said"there are three lines the line on the left is ninjutsu training the line we are in is clan techniques and the line to the left is the taijutsu line."Nyu said"Ok thanks what's the teachers name?"the kid said" Kisame Renamaru bhe teaches taijutsu."Nyu said"Ok thanks cya."
3/7
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:30 pm
Nyu noticed that this line only had three people in front of him.When it was Nyu's turn to talk with Kisame Renamaru.Kisame Renamaru said"Hello from your ninja headband i see that you're not of the hidden blood village."Nyu said"Yes im from the hidden haze village im here to learn some taijutsu."Kisame Renamaru said"Well you came to the right place.What taijutsu move would you like to learn here are your choices."Kisame Renamaru looked at his list and said"Explosion Fist and Blood Clots."Nyu heard there weren't many choices so he just went with the first one he said.
4/7
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:37 pm
Nyu said" I'll try to learn explosion fist.Kisame Renamaru said" ill tell you what it does then i'll give you a teacher.A strong Techinque which Enables a user to hit one opponet and blow back many others with an explosion type force."Nyu said"ok then who's my teacher?"Kisame Renamaru looked at his clip board again and said"hmmmm it seems we don't have a teacher avalable for you right now."Nyu began walking away when Kisame Renamaru said"Wait! I'll teach you after all I'm the original owner of the Explosion Fist."Nyu said" Wow i get to be taught by the original owner."
5/7
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:44 pm
Kisame Renamaru said"ok we'll go to learn rkight now but first im required to tell you the explanation again it is A strong Techinque which Enables a user to hit one opponet and blow back many others with an explosion type force."Nyu said"ok let's go learn it."Kisame Renamaru said' let's go to the training part of the dojo."When Nyu and Kisame Renamaru got to the training area Kisame Renamaru asked by curiosity are you a taijutsu specialist?"Nyu said"how'd you know?"Kisame Renamaru said" that doesn't matter right now let's get to it.Now the first thing you have to do is gather chakra in your fist.
6/7
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:50 pm
Nyu said"ok i can do that easily so what do i do now?"Kisame Renamaru said" ok now turn it into a sort of combustible chakra then try to make some thing explode in the training arena may i suggest thos wooden logs?"Nyu said" alright"He went up to a wooden log and said"ok."He then gathered some chakra in his hand and manipulated it into a explosive chakra then jabbed his fist into a wooden log and completely blew it up.Nyu said" Holy crap that's cool!"Kisame Renamaru said"Wow that technique usually takes a day to master.Nyu wasn't suprised that he had progressed faster than usual.
7/7 Explosion Fist mastered
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:55 pm
After mastering explosion fist Nyu said"I think i mastered this one so can i learn another taijutsu attack?"Kisame Renamaru said"yea we could learn the other taijutsu attack or........."Nyu looked suprised and said"what what what what!"Kisame Renamaru said" uh ok since your so excited i suppose i could teach you one of our village's secret techniques."Nyu said" Wow really what made you want to teach me?"Kisame Renamaru said"this is a perfect technique for a taijutsu specialist as yourself.It may not be your style but i'm going to show you how to stop the flow of blood in someone.
1/8 Blood Seal
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:00 pm
Nyu said"Wow that would be cool but how that seems like ninjutsu..."Kisame Renamaru said"Well it's not because you have to make contact with the opponent in order for this tehnique to work you see this technique is Able to Stop a flow of Blood from one place on the body. The attack is performed with an odd number of fingers to attack the user to start the flow of blood again an even amount of fingers must be used to hit the target to start the blood flow again."NYu asked"It's as easy as that?"Kisame Renamaru said"no that would be impossible to do it by touch without knowing what's going on.
2/8
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:05 pm
Nyu asked"ok but how do i do it?"Kisame Renamaru said"Ok first of all you need to become familiar with the blood flow of the body to know where your stopping it."Nyu asked"OK so are you goi ng to show me?"Kisame Renamaru said"sort of."Kisame Renamaru went to the bookshelf in the training arena and removed a giant book and was carrying it with a pinky then dropped it in Nyu's lap.When it made contact with Nyu you could hear a huge BOOM!!!Nyu said"So i have to read this whole thing?"Kisame Renamaru said"You're not going to read it but you're going to learn it.
3/8
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:10 pm
Kisame Renamaru then did some handsigns for like two minutes then opened a scroll and read the ancient writing.Then a blue light ame out of the roof that wasn't covered and then the blue light reflected of the book at Nyu.Nyu then began learninng gradually and subconciously.When it was over Nyu felt smarter and said"wow that was cool how did you do that?"Kisame Renamaru said" it's my secret that i don't share with anyone else."Nyu noticed that this guy probably was a legendary shinobi as a child befor he became all old.Kisame Renamaru said"ok now tell me the miost vital stopping flow."
4/8
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:15 pm
Nyu responded without even being sure of the ansewer.Nyu said"The heart!"Kisame Renamaru said"good good my technique worked to tell you the truth that was the first time i used that technique most of my other students had to read the book because i was afraid that i would mess up and drain their memory."Nyu lookded suprised and said"and you took that risk on me?" Kisame Renamaru said"yep beause i knew you were strong enough to with stand it."Nyu said"ok now show me how to do it."Kisame Renamaru said"the safest way to do it is for me to use rebirth and you use it on that."
5/8
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