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 Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:35 am
Well it ain't really random as opposed to simple opening slap-stick. Because there's not much else one can do in an opening post involving a desert. Although I could have made the opening longer by involving his prior doings before returning to Hueco Mundo... crap. Anyway - Thine thread
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:36 am
Meh. It's about if what you write is important. Any old sod can go off on a tangent and pad their words with useless information.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:40 am
Then at least does it's job of getting Zan in the right location. Mind you it points out his defects with intelligence and problems with flight, but those are always fun =D
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:44 am
It does that marvellously. You wrote what was important and that's what mattered.
Also. Is this a fight or just a meeting? It could go either way really.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:50 am
It could even be a mystery caper! lol
Well since it's suppose to be a decision if Pamba thinks Zan is scary or not - It could be anything *shrug*
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:51 am
Well she doesn't find him scary yet.
It might change when he stands up proper or when she sees his eyes.
I found the point about Yoru that made Pamba hate him were his eyes. They were dead.
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:54 am
Well Zan's eyes aren't really dead more like excited. Not to mention there a nice blue colour XD
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:13 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:17 am
They taste like... eyes? lol
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:30 am
How do you know they're not pearls?
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:52 am
Umm... good point... Wanna try eating them? lol
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:53 am
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:10 pm
Come on, you know you want to!
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:12 pm
Nygrngh! No, no I don't. Absolutely not. I'd never want to be involved in something like that. 
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:14 pm
What's with the picture of Rin?
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