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 Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 5:01 pm
Quote: Redone, The bolded parts (aside from the Talking) is the added portions.Rpc Name: Hyuuga, Yasukazu, Rai Village: Sand Rank: AS Bloodline or Clan applied for: Main Household Hyuuga (Byakugan stage 1, not a branch family) What you know about the clan/bl: That it has the ability to see 360 degree's around the character except for at the 3rd vertebra at the users neck. The Byakugan has the ability to be used like x-ray and a telescope. Can see the chakra network. Rp Sample: i..i have to use it!! "BYAKUGAN!" Rai unleashes his Byakugan seeing all around him....... Now things were going to get started.. _________________Before that..__________________ Rai had been out on a stroll in the city. It had been a nice day, mostly sunny, small clouds out blocking the sun here and there. Rai decided to go to the training yard and..well, train up a little bit. A mission was up for him in a little and he wanted to test his abilities. As Rai reached the training ground he sat in the middle of the yard meditating as a small rock hit him upside the head with a "thud" "Ouch! What the?" Rai looked around as 4 boys started surrounding him. "Hey there White Eyes. What you doin over here eh? WE'RE training here!" "Yeah, WE'RE Training here!! What give you the right to be around us White Eyes? Heh?!!" The boys said as they all rushed in at Rai. Rai quickly rolled back doing a handspring to avoid them, but was caught by a fifth boy right behind him with a kick to his back. Rai fell forward ducking under one of the boys punches kicking him in the ribs pushing him away. But just as he did so he turned around just to feel a solid fist smack him dab in the chin sending him to his knees. __________________Now_________________ i..i have to use it!! "BYAKUGAN!" Rai unleashes his Byakugan seeing all around him. He jumped up whipping the blood from his mouth. As he looked around at the boys everything was clear, he could see there entire chakra networks, every point in their bodies he could use against them to seal there chakra away, or forcfully help unleash it. The 360 degrees around him, he could feel it all, except for one..small spot, but not many knew about that anyways, so he wasnt worried about it.3 of the 5 boys through kunai at Rai, 1 from the front and 2 from the behind. Feeling the kunai approach him Rai ducked forward, down avoiding all three Kunai just as a 4th boy ran to kick Rai in the face, Rai Barely leaned back in time to avoid the kick. Sensing the 5th boy going for a grapple Rai turned around fast throwing an Elbow to the boys face and thrusting as many blows as he could into the boys stomach using the Hyuuga Clans Gental Fist Fighting Style, cuasing major damage to the boys stomach muscles and his organs. Rai wasnt to good at this fighting style yet so surely death would not come of the boy. But right now Rai was just thinking of trying to fend them off, not about weather they were going to die or not.Just then 2 Kunai were thrown at him and 2 boys came at him. One aiming high for a punch and the other kicking at Rai's ribs. Rai could sense all of this with his Byakugan, but sensing it wasn’t enough, he couldn’t move fast enough in time to dodge it all. Rai Ducked avoiding the Kunai and the fist as all 3 flew over his head, but in doing so the kick from the other boy Smacked right into Rai's head sending him face first into the dirt. Damnit!! Cant.. Got to get up... "Ok boys, lets end this." Crap..crap...i have to get up, it wont end like this! Rai's knees were weak as he tried standing up. "Hey!! You boys knock it off!!!" Just as Rai thought it was all over a nearby Jounin had heard the ruckus and came over just in time to stop the fighting. Rai stop using his Byakugan even though he had plenty of chakra for it, he actually was quite blest in that area. After sending the 5 boys home, but not without a note to there parents and holding them back another year before being able to apply at the Genin Tournament, he helps Rai get stable. "You alright son?" “Yeah.. I’m ok.. I coulda taken them." If I would just practice my Byakugan more.. "Haha, I don’t know.. Looked a little uneven there, even for a Jounin, 5 - 1 isn’t exactly easy.. You gana be ok?"“Yeah.. I’m just going to head home. Its just a few bumps and bruises... Thank you though." The Jounin nodded his head and Rai went off still a little light headed from getting it smacked around so much. Once he got home he cleaned up and looked himself in the mirror with those words running through his head. "If I would just practice my Byakugan more.." That’s it.. I WILL practice my Byakugan more. No more hiding it. I will be the ultimate Byakugan User and everyone will know it! "Yeah!! I'll make sure everyone knows!! I’m Rai Yasukazu HYUUGA!! Know it!!!" I added to my RP sample. Is it ok, better now? Or does it still need work? Or uh...heh *kicks a small rock while waiting*
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:08 pm
Im Sofa King Hard Rpc Name: Jinsoku Fuzen Village: Cloud Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: I know that they use the ablities of animals to fight. At stage 1, one can only use basic things like senses, speed, and other natural abilities. At stage 2, one can actually gain physical attributes. At stage 3, one can transform into the animal, making it somewhat like a shapeshifting abilites. Not completely sure but I think at stage 4 one can use more then one animal ability at a time. Rp Sample: Today was a big day for Jinsoku. He was just accepted into the Cloud Village's Anbu Black Ops and would finally be able to avenge his fallen clan by killing some of bastards that kill them. His mission was simple. He, along with his comrades, had to kill members of the Leaf Village's Anbu and steal valuable blueprints of the village. He couldn't contain his excitement for this mission. The moment he heard about the mission all he did was train and sharpen his skills to a point of absolute perfection. The night was still and Jinsoku sat with his comrades under a large tree in the forest outside of the Leaf village. A cold breeze swept by, kissing each of the ninja lightly on the cheek and easing the tension that was no doubt building. Jinsoku and his twin brother Kajime were assigned to blitz their enemy's frontlines and take down as many opposing Anbu as possible. Jinsoku didn't need his snake sword for this fight, he wanted to kill these warriors with his bare hands. Jinsoku centered himself and opened up his large database of animals in his mind that he had witnessed with his Anigan. He was now at the four stage of the anigan and was considered prodigy of the Anigan. He gained the eyes of an eagle so that he could have better then 20/20 vision. The teeth of a lion, just in case he had to rip someone throat out. He also gained snake venom to add to the bite. The upper body strength of a gorilla and the legs of a kangaroo. Normal he would simply transform into a raven but since this wasn't a stealth mission he figured what would be the point. With his powerful legs he bounce off into action. He quickly swung a haymaker of a punch at an unsuspecting Anbu Op, swiftly knocking him down and most likely out. With his leg strength he jumped in the air once more and drop kicked another hostile whom was running towards him. Now that the element of surpise was gone he need to switch legs. Jinsoku ditched the kangaroo legs and changed into ostrich legs. Using the sharp claws on his feet he performed a roundhouse kick and nearly ripped off the face of an op member who was trying to come from behind. Blood spilled everywhere within a matter of moments and under the moonlight, crimson blood laid on top of the grassy land like a painter had brushed red paint all over it. Jinsoku heard Kajime warn him about reinforcements coming so as soon as Kajime fully transformed into a squirrel, Jinsoku became a raven and took flight. Oh I fixed some of the slight grammatical errors I made.
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 12:57 am
Sofa King: You didn't really show any of the 'weaknesses' involved with the transformations, but ya know, you seem to have a decent grasp on what it means to have and use this bloodline. Just try to make sure you always keep th clan weaknesses in mind.
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:09 am
Awesome! Thanks!  I'll make sure to do everything properly during my roleplay, thanks again.
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:37 am
Rpc Name: Akira Kuromiya
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Suigetsu's Kekkai Genkai/Hydration Technique (Applying to be Head)
What you know about the clan/bl: Well for one, I know it's actually called the Hydration Technique, and it allows the character to completely liquefy their body and reform at will. Naturally becoming water means they are weak against Lightning and being frozen by Ice techniques, another weakness is that if they are sealed inside a container while in liquid form they will be unable to escape. Since their body is water they can also manipulate it's strength and size to accommodate the current situation but the user must constantly drink in order to keep themselves hydrated.
Rp Sample:
Akira normally kept this little ability of his under wraps, but now was not the time to be fluffing around. His dear student Shinji was the only other person there, and he knew he would keep it a secret from prying eyes and ears. Akira had kept back and attacked from a distance with his Suiton techniques but this time as the enemy ninja approached he did not move away and instead allowed the massive cleaver that the enemy wielded to slice straight through him.
"Akira-sensei!" came the startled cry of his student, who had just seen the teacher he so admired cut down before him. The youth unable to understand why Akira didn't dodge, though he would understand shortly. Akira turned his head to look at his student and smiled; his mind currently operating in a more extroverted and fun frame. His body dropped to the ground in two halves, cleanly bifurcated by the attack, and he turned his head back to the enemy who stood triumphantly over him with a smug look, a look which disappeared when Akira's body seemed to melt into water.
Confused, the enemy ninja looked around, trying to figure out what had happened as the water at his feet bubbled quietly. Suddenly, the water burst upwards taking the shape of Akira once more, the Jounin punching his assailant in the face once before delivering a heavy Knee Strike to the man's stomach, sending him backwards.
Akira sped over to the enemy he'd just bowled over, performing handseals as he did, and as the man tried to get up Akira used his Hydration technique to enlarge his left arm to gigantic proportions and grabbed the man's head. His hand easily encircling the entire cranium of his enemy, the man clawed at his arm in a futile attempt to get free; but it was useless.
Having completed the handseals as he made his way over to the man; Akira put his Suiton: Fuuma Mizu Shuriken (Water Release: Evil Windmill Water Shuriken) technique to use in finishing this fight. Small droplets appeared in the air around him, converging in the palm of his outstretched right hand, first becoming a small shuriken made of water but quickly enlarging into a fuuma shuriken. With no hesitation, Akira launched the shuriken at the torso of the flailing man held captive by his monstrous left arm, crashing into him and ending his life in a splash of red and gore.
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 3:42 am
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Rpc Name:Tatsuo Hyuga Village:Kirigakure Rank:Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan What you know about the clan/bl: Byakugan, also known as Evil Eye, is a doujutsu that the Hyuga clan use. A set of white eyes with pop up nerves around the corners. The Byakugan gives the user a vision that can see at very far distances and see a persons Chakra System and Chakra Points. This Doujutsu also gives the User the ability to use the Gentle Fist Taijutsu fighting stance which if hit at the points of their index and middle fingers can cancel out Chakra Points. But their drawback is that since it is a Doujutsu, it requires a lot of their chakra. They also have a 360o vision that cans see incoming attacks, but they do have a blind spot at the back of their neck, so Hyuga members have to be cautious in combat. Rp Sample: Tatsuo felt that his training was still insignificant, keeping his cool as he trains. He stood their with his eyes shut at his Gentle Fist stance, hearing the sound of nature. He felt the wind blow at him and felt calm air, giving him a small smile. He slowly open his eyes as a sound wave of some sort flashed as nerves bulge out at the edges of his eyes. He look around as his vision was white but could also see farther as his vision grew outward. He smirk as kunais and shurikens that was tied to branches lunged out at him. Seeing it coming, he dodged left to right, preforming a couple of spins as he ran to some of his class mates that agreed to help him in his training (sucks to be them XD). It felt like time was slowing down for him but knew it wasn't. He could see his target's Chakra System as they look like a set of nerves all over his body that glow with a blue color. In the middle is the center of his chakra. He then took a kick sweep with his right leg, tripping one of them as he slam his fingers into the target's chest which canceled or sealed 4 of their Chakra Points. The person himself flew back about 5 feet as he turn swiftly to the other guy next to him, slamming the tips of his index and middle fingers in it's left waist, closing yet 3 more. He finished the target off with a back flip kick to the face as he send him flying about 6 feet in the air, landing roughly on the ground. He sighed as this was getting boring to him. His eyes changed back to their normal form as the nerves vanished in a blink of a eye. seeing as both his class mates were done, He pick both of them up as he slump them over his shoulders and turn to where the exit of the ground was and started to walk, heading out of the grounds and back to the village. A smile crept across his face. Alright, I fix it a little bit. Had some minor spelling and grammar mistakes as well. XD Edit: Just in case you did not see this. XD
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:15 am
uh hi....I'm not sure if we creat our profile first or sign up for a bloodline first. sorry sweatdrop
Rpc Name:Sarukin Genkaku
Village:Dont have one yet.... Sand or Rock
Rank:Academy Student, I guess
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Ranmaru Kekkei Genkai
What you know about the clan/bl:
-Similar to Sharingan and Byakugan
-Heightens Genjutsu
-Can locate others by sensing chakra
-Can see someone's life force
-Not as much distance as Byakugan
-Similar to the sharingan, the eyes can predict movements, but does not affect the speed of your body to counter them
Rp Sample: Sarukin struggled to see through the mist. It was fogging out most of his vision, leaving his sight impaired. This isn't good. Not being able to see was a huge disadvantage on his part, especially since he had just attacked a small boar. Although the boar couldn't see either, if the boar was able to smell or hear Sarukin, it would be over for him.
He closed his eyes, focusing on his chakra intently. After a few moments of concentration, he opened them again. This time, however, his eyes illuminated a faint, red glow and he was able to see through this mist. He was using his "special eyes", as his grandfather liked to call it. Sarukin's vision noticeably improved. He glanced around, testing out his ability to see. In the distance, he made out the shape of a large boulder. He looked around for his meal, slightly afraid that it had managed to escape the mist. After scanning the area for a few moments, he finally found the little boar. It was moving about randomly, trying to find its way out of the mist. Sarukin grinned. Time for dinner.
He tiptoed to the boar, careful not to make any audible sounds that could attract the boar's attention. He slowly pulled out a kunai. His grandfather had given this to him and he was rarely caught seen without it. A few feet from the boar, he lunged at it, digging the kunai right in the head. The boar shrieked. He ran around, making unrecognizable noises as Sarukin repeatedly stabbed it with the kunai. After a few tense moments, it finally collapsed, falling to the floor with a violent thud. Sarukin grinned, obviously proud of his hunt. "Well that was easy." He grabbed the corpse and headed home, using his "special eyes" to navigate through the mist.
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:26 am
Auggie: Veyr nice, very clean. the only thing i would have wished to have seen a little more, was a reference to hydrating yourself, or perhaps some kind of show in how the weaknesses pan out. However, I more then fully trust you will do this and are aware of it. Sooo....
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:37 am
Nerdbot: Unfortunately, for the moment, I'm going to have to Deny you. worry not however, I'm sure you can do better. The sample itself was fine, very nice in fact, however, there is so much more to this bloodline then simply being able to see through mist. Try to incorporate the genjutsu, or the red chakra particle jutsu, or even the sensing of life force. Aspects like those are what truly make the bloodline unique among the other Doujutsu.
So For now...
Denied...
But I'm confident that you can turn it around easily enough.
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:42 am
D. Slayer W.: Kind of harsh, and I don't think one hit of a tenketsu is really that devastating... maybe painful, but it took 128 hits to shut Naruto down. That being said however, I feel that you get this. It would have been nice to see a heavenly spin or a 128-palms technique though? would you hate Cobra if he asked you to add those?
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 12:27 pm
You're just trying to make me break my hands huh? XP Alright, I'll do a Heavenly Spin on another target. And then I'll have to find a cure of "Broken Hand Syndrome". lol
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 12:56 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Rpc Name:Tatsuo Hyuga Village:Kirigakure Rank:Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan What you know about the clan/bl: Byakugan, also known as Evil Eye, is a doujutsu that the Hyuga clan use. A set of white eyes with pop up nerves around the corners. The Byakugan gives the user a vision that can see at very far distances and see a persons Chakra System and Chakra Points. This Doujutsu also gives the User the ability to use the Gentle Fist Taijutsu fighting stance which if hit at the points of their index and middle fingers can cancel out Chakra Points. But their drawback is that since it is a Doujutsu, it requires a lot of their chakra. They also have a 360o vision that cans see incoming attacks, but they do have a blind spot at the back of their neck, so Hyuga members have to be cautious in combat. Rp Sample: Tatsuo felt that his training was still insignificant, keeping his cool as he trains. He stood their with his eyes shut at his Gentle Fist stance, hearing the sound of nature. He felt the wind blow at him and felt calm air, giving him a small smile. He slowly open his eyes as a sound wave of some sort flashed as nerves bulge out at the edges of his eyes. He look around as his vision was white but could also see farther as his vision grew outward. He smirk as kunais and shurikens that was tied to branches lunged out at him. Seeing it coming, he dodged left to right, preforming a couple of spins as he ran to some of his class mates that agreed to help him in his training (sucks to be them XD). It felt like time was slowing down for him but knew it wasn't. He could see his target's Chakra System as they look like a set of nerves all over his body that glow with a blue color. In the middle is the center of his chakra. He then took a kick sweep with his right leg, tripping one of them as he slam his fingers into the target's chest which canceled or sealed 4 of their Chakra Points. The person himself flew back about 5 feet as he turn swiftly to the other guy next to him, slamming the tips of his index and middle fingers in it's left waist, closing yet 3 more. He finished the target off with a back flip kick to the face as he send him flying about 6 feet in the air, landing roughly on the ground. He got up, still ready to fight as Tatsuo just grinned. When his target was charging at him, Tatsuo himself had this hidden for just the right time. He got into a weird stance which held one hand down and the other high behind him. A symbol that the Hyugas uses appeared below him and his target as his opponent would face a wide range of pain coming at him. His eyes shut as he could hear his targets steps coming at him. Just when his target was about to strike, Tatsuo open his eyes wide as he slid at the person's side, striking two of his palms into his side, then another four strikes into his back. This continued on as he spoke the words which seems to double on his strikes. His target was grunting in pain from this as when the last words spoke, one hundred and twenty-four, his hands where moving at blinding speed as his opponent was sent back flying to a tree with a loud crushing sound. He look as he could tell his opponent was out cold. A click was then herd off a distance as kunais surrounded him at every side. Escape would be impossible. Quickly getting into his stance again as he started to spin at a very high pace, creating a white chakra barrier. The incoming kunais all were deflected off of the huge barrier that protected Tatsuo. He stop as he felt that he used to much of his chakra already. His eyes changed back to their normal form as the nerves vanished in a blink of a eye. Seeing as both his class mates were done, He pick both of them up as he slump them over his shoulders and turn to where the exit of the ground was and started to walk, heading out of the grounds and back to the village. A smile crept across his face. Phew, done now. Time to dip my hands into some hot water! XD
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:07 pm
D. Slayer W.: Such a Drama Queen.... blaugh
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:15 pm
Lol, why thank you kind sir. XP
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