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 Posted: Fri May 22, 2009 5:29 pm
Could I get some help with my character profile? I've done a good bit of work on it already, but there are a few points on which I'm pretty vague.
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Posted: Fri May 22, 2009 6:01 pm
Why don't you post it in the approval thread and I'll take a look?
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Posted: Fri May 22, 2009 6:39 pm
Err, I haven't written the whole thing up quite yet. I will when it is, but I was hoping to iron a few things out beforehand.
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 6:58 am
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 11:43 am
Age and history. I'm trying to anchor my character's history and that of her clan into the storyline. Also, I'm trying to figure out what the requirements would be for her clan abilities. I think I may have what I need now, though.
Edit: I've finished my rough draft for her clan. If the techniques are too much, Chiri, Kiri, and Shindou can go--those are remainders from when I was trying to figure out what I wanted to do with the clan.
Edit Edit: My profile's also up now. I'd really appreciate feedback.
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 9:11 pm
I'd personally recommend joining an already existing clan. It gives you a good starting point if you are linked to other characters.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 7:09 am
Hmm... I'll think about it, but I'd have to come up with a different history--or at least make major changes to it. Besides, I've never really cared for doing things the "easy way". razz
I'll give it some thought. In the mean time, how is the work I've submitted so far?
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 8:34 am
It's not about being easy. IF you want difficulty theres plenty of fighting and training to do. It's just that most people that join up and make their own clans tend to leave.
I'm not sure I don't approve the clans I just know you can only make four techniques.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 9:03 am
I had a few extra techniques in there that I had written down while I was still in the brainstorming phase. I fixed that now, so the clan's techniques should be more cohesive.
Also, I'm FAR too much of an RP addict to leave. Trust me, I'll be around for a while. wink
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 4:33 am
My suggestion would be, keeping the background you created in the approval thread for your character. However, I think you can tie all that background in with the Tenmoki Family. Baylu hasn't explored any further than the immediate family in that clan and the way your character utilizes chakra with expertise control, the Tenmoki family would be a great clan to be a part of. Then your character would have two wonderful mentors. You could also keep the two techniques I've approved for the character and just explain to Baylu that you'd like your character to invent those.
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:58 am
Can someone please make me training exercises to learn Kawaii no Jutsu?
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:58 am
Kawaii no jutsu [Cuteness Technique]
The user of this technique has perfected pulling at people's heart strings by using cute looks and adorable faces. They use their genjutsu to accent cute features such as watery eyes, pouty lips, sakura pinks cheeks and soft baby like giggles. It's a combination of sight and sound that allows the user to put on that adorable act in order to get what they want.
Cp Cost: 10 + 2 per holding post
Damage: None.
Requirement: Charisma 20 ranks, Genjutsu 15 ranks
Seals: Serpent, Tiger, Ram, Dog
Avoid: Sense
Special: + Intel Mod to Persuade, Seduce, and Lie
Training I
Study people to see what makes a person 'cute.' Spend time with the young children of Shimagakure and be sure to pay attention to what facial expressions, physical traits, etc tug at your heartstrings most. Also notice how adults react to the cuteness.
DC: 15
1d20 + Focus
Train: 0/3
Set Rewards: +1 Focus, +3 xp
Training II
Try this next exercise in front of a mirror. Using what you learned from the children, try to transpose those same characteristics onto yourself. Don't go overboard or people will know it's a genjutsu!
DC: 35
1d20 + Genjutsu + Charisma Mod
Train: 0/5
Cp Cost: -5 per attempt
Set Rewards: +1 Genjutsu, +1 Charisma, +5 xp
Training III
Cast Kawaii no Jutsu on yourself until you're satisfied with the result (1d20 + Genjutsu), then go out into the world to test your next jutsu out. Find a partner and convince him/her to do or believe something. You could make him/her give you a kiss, candy, or believe that he/she failed out of school, etc.
DC: Partner's Sense
1d20 + Persuade/Seduce/Lie + Int mod
Train: 0/3
CP Cost: 10 + 2 per holding post
Set Rewards: +1 Persuade/Seduce/Lie, +3 xp, +Kawaii no Jutsu
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 11:03 am
Although I dont have the stats for it, after the time skip would the hair requirement be fulfilled?
Hari Jizo (Needle Guardian)(not invented)
The user causes their long, spiky hair to wrap around him and harden, in a manner similar to a hedgehog's or porcupine's quills, defending against any physical attacks. This is effective as a method for forcing someone away, or stopping a powerful strike.
Cp cost: 60 + 20 per holding.
Damage: 30 to 50 + Chakra Mod + 1 per 10 ranks Ninjtutsu
Requirements: Ninjutsu 60, Control 30, Long Hair [Two RP Years to Grow Out.]
Special: Cannot Move when when using technique. User takes 1/4 damage for blocking instead of 1/2. Cannot block block most ninjutsus. + Chakra Mod to escape when escaping grapples or being tied up.
Counter: Don't Touch
Owner: Tategami Karite
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 11:56 am
Can I customize a wooden weapon?
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 12:13 pm
It depends on the customization. If you are adding something as simply as a hand grip then of course. If you are cutting sections out for speed purposes yes. Stuff like that. It just has to be realistic to a wooden weapon. Nothing like hoking an end to make more powerful.
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