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 Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:31 pm
That's no way to talk about your sister! Didn't need to say 'wench', 'vile' was a good enough adjective.... domokun
Of course I kid... 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 9:07 am
Dante! I can't believe you said that! O_O
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:03 am
Well... of course they through out my idea of having Virtra dismember her piece by piece throughout the fight until shaak ti was a armless, legless torso on the ground and THEN bury the lightsaber up to the hilt in her mouth.... but NO! They wouldn't do it.
But still... getting through through burning ship wreckage and then pulled back through... just think of the ripped flesh and blood!! And then the lightsaber through the mouth... THAT was a nice piece o work.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:46 pm
I'm thinking of making a good character. :]
Tell me, is there chance of him being Jedi or would it suit the plot better if he was just someone who choose to align himself with the Jedi.
If it is the latter I have a neat character idea.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 9:36 am
I'd say that it would be better if he wasn't a Jedi. We've got no real way of making more of them come out of nothing... and we have Jedi and we have force sensitives to be trained... and I think we have a couple of others coming later on... but it would be better to talk to Star or a mod abotu something like that. sweatdrop All most of us in here can offer is opinion...
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:10 am
Pfft, speak for yourself. My word is law. I'm takin' over this taco stand. *crosses her arms and glares at V*
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:40 am
I might have something to say about that... stare
By the way... I finally got to read Star's story today, sorry eBook. It is AMAZING!! Everyone in here must read it just because of how wonderful it actually is... not to mention, even though she denies it, I think it offers a little insight into the members of her family. Maybe just a little.
But the story is awesome and she says that all I'm going to get is four chapters unless more people start reading. stare which sucks... cause I only have Sarai and Triskal right now and she wants ten people.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:58 pm
You don't scare me, missy. Hostile take over. Sarai said I could.
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:00 pm
Of course we could!! twisted And it's going to happen!!
By the way... I added another... yes... ANOTHER poem to my journal!! ninja
BTW I hope i didn't sound harsh in my final comment on your story... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:14 pm
Eh, you did, but I didn't take it to heart. You were right and I knew you weren't trying to be mean. Some of that stuff I already knew and I Just haven't figured out how to fix it yet...
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:18 pm
Sorry... I become overtly critical when it comes to critiquing literature. Perhaps I should become a teacher? But then I'd have to go to college and that would suck... stare But I am sorry... I need to learn to sound nicer.... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:21 pm
No worries, like I said, I knew you didnt' mean it to be harsh. I understood.
I'd recommend sounding nicer before becoming a teacher though, lol.
Poor kids...I can just see how many complexes you'd cause. XP Jk...Seriously though. I appreciated the critique. That story was a venting thing. It just came out accidentally one day. I thought I was writing a blog update until I went back to read over it again. I honestly didn't know I had even written it at first.
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:28 pm
You should see the stuff I write to Star.... girl has skin as thick as diamond. The stuff I write in TRUTH would not be appropriate to post in her journal... xd So... note to myself: be nicer sounding even if you aren't nice. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:34 pm
Sarai... a teacher... HA!! rofl rofl rofl rofl
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:40 pm
You... madam.... are mean! blaugh *santa hobo ninja attack!!*
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