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 Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:32 am
Diablo en Musica 92 Okay,
- Please leave your status levels blank until you are accepted by the Zero Division Captain and given the approval of Auto Rank by me.
- Your Sealed Zanpakuto must be a Katana, Nodachi, Kodachi, Tento, or katana like blade of some kinda. What you have is unacceptable.
- You may only learn up to the Lt. number of Kido Spells listen in the Shinigami Race Listing. Please change you Kido Spell List.
- Your Shikai must be changed, most releases will not have a futuristic feel or use to them. Therefore it is denied. Not only that your techniques are highly debatable at this moment, I recommend changing the entire thing.
- Your Bankai is in the same boat as your Shikai, please change it until than it is denied. Not only that your techniques are highly debatable, I recommend changing the entire thing.
Until these issues are fixed and you have been approved for the auto rank your profile is hereby Denied. I was going for something like Kisuke's or Yamamoto's sealing their zanpakuto into something else but okay ill fix it. Kido spells, i hardly use them but alright ill fix it. How... does my shikai have a futuristic feel? Wait because its a chainsaw, since when do zanpakuto have to be common or old age? My techniques are debatable... lets debate. Whats wrong with them? The Captain of squad Zero said he wants me as his Lt. so yeah... i can't change them unless i know whats wrong... The lightning thing? Or what the chainsaw blade.. i actually thought the chainsaw sword was pretty original....
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 11:00 am
- Zanpackuto from my standpoint usually have something that makes sense with their nature, element, or property. These properties usually define the overall shape, use, and etc. However I have yet to see a Zanpakuto that was even close to something real time material other than Soi Fon's Baknai watch was literally a freaking missile.My issue is that I just can't see it working in the guild as a practical shikai. However that can change.
- Your Shikai ability or technique ::
1st Technique - Denied on the basic that it does not match your element. Not only that techniques that give increased abilities are not approved. Very, very few release augment the users own combat status inward and out.
2nd Technique - Denied, again the augment of speed cannot be massive or even in there. Not only that your one hundred strikes based upon the guilds standards are unrealistic.
3rd Technique - The third one I'm having overall sense in grasping, how is it related to your overall element or type of your blade?
4th Technique - Makes sense because it relates directly to your element.
5th Technique - When lightning is just compresses air and energy particles moving at high speed. So really you don't need to air you can just say firing a streak of lighting. Also remember Shikai is only 35-50% of a Zanpakuto's released power, careful not to make an attack overpowering. In which case I feel is overpowering.
- Bankai Techniques ::
1st Technique - Denied. Again how does this related to your element or zanpakuto type. It is simply augmenting your status.
2nd Technique - I'm confused to how to relates to your overall Bankai...
3rd Technique - Makes sense based upon the nature of lightning. HOWEVER you still have to be careful that you are not entirely over doing it for yourself and others. Don't get me wrong interest idea, but you have to be careful still.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 11:28 am
Diablo en Musica 92
- Zanpackuto from my standpoint usually have something that makes sense with their nature, element, or property. These properties usually define the overall shape, use, and etc. However I have yet to see a Zanpakuto that was even close to something real time material other than Soi Fon's Baknai watch was literally a freaking missile.My issue is that I just can't see it working in the guild as a practical shikai. However that can change.
- Your Shikai ability or technique ::
1st Technique - Denied on the basic that it does not match your element. Not only that techniques that give increased abilities are not approved. Very, very few release augment the users own combat status inward and out.
2nd Technique - Denied, again the augment of speed cannot be massive or even in there. Not only that your one hundred strikes based upon the guilds standards are unrealistic.
3rd Technique - The third one I'm having overall sense in grasping, how is it related to your overall element or type of your blade?
4th Technique - Makes sense because it relates directly to your element.
5th Technique - When lightning is just compresses air and energy particles moving at high speed. So really you don't need to air you can just say firing a streak of lighting. Also remember Shikai is only 35-50% of a Zanpakuto's released power, careful not to make an attack overpowering. In which case I feel is overpowering.
- Bankai Techniques ::
1st Technique - Denied. Again how does this related to your element or zanpakuto type. It is simply augmenting your status.
2nd Technique - I'm confused to how to relates to your overall Bankai...
3rd Technique - Makes sense based upon the nature of lightning. HOWEVER you still have to be careful that you are not entirely over doing it for yourself and others. Don't get me wrong interest idea, but you have to be careful still.
I'll give you the 1 of my shikai and bankai as a freebie because i agree that they do not belong. If i fix it to half of that, would it be better? It's not so much a speed increase as it is using more of his own ability. By which i mean your not always swinging as fast or as hard or as precise as your could be, this allows him to do so for short bursts, sound better now? 3rd technique i agree with, i was planning on taking it out for something a kin to "Pain is strength" More pain more power though i have yet to work out the specifics. Tech 5: i've been given half the green light for squad zero, i wouldn't want someone underpowered to protect the soul king, would you? Bankai tech one, agreed, bankai tech 2 it's the augumentation of his reaction time through electrical stimulation to the neural receptors. In short it makes the time that elapses between the signal sent by the brain to the body shorter as well as increasing his perception. His vision is hieghtened to see everything very clearly, absorb information much quicker and become hyper focused, the same goes for shikai but to a lesser extent. Okay now what to replace them with, giving him the ability to augument his battle prowess through lightning charged attacks, then being able to project lightning... i couldn't quite think of much else to use. Lightning enhancement and projection, so i gave him reflexes and... im not sure what else. Thats three of 6 and i only had five to start. I need to replaced 1, 3 for shikai and 1 for bankai... Lightning chainsaw swordsman... hmm i have a small idea. He charges up his lightning into light body armor, light relative to heavy and when fully charged will project a small bubble of electricity to stop a single attack medium-low but well.. that would fall under covering his body with lightning so he can do so already... hmm Realyl any suggestions?
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 12:59 pm
Time for a little Luci to chime in.
Slevin Corpse, I believe the overall point Diablo is making is that your Zanpakuto has to many corresponding types and abilities. If it is an Elemental Type Zanpakuto then all of it's abilities must correspond with that said Element. Since you have decided to use the Element of Lightning then your Techniques/Abilities must be in complete correlation with Lightning. If it's augmenting the Characters physical abilities then it would be considered a Kido Type Zanpakuto. You can't combine the two.
I'd comment on the Techniques/Abilities but I think firstly you should decided what KIND of Zanpakuto you want, an Elemental Type or Kido Type. If your going for Elemental remove everything that mentions character change, if your going for Kido then remove anything mentioning Lightning and fix it to match the Guilds System. That's all I have to say on this matter.
Now on to another point. I don't think having a Futuristic looking Zanpakuto should be an issue. Considering modern Technology has been seen and used. A Chainsaw Blade isn't really that futuristic anyways. He could even have it where the Blade itself runs on the Lightning it produces. The friction of it running causing Sparks of power which allows for that said Lightning to be released outwards and so. I would just note that in it's sealed form the Blade of the Chainsaw wouldn't be functional until it's power is called forth.
I mean thinking about and really looking back, Starrk's release was Hand Guns. It's not so far off. But again this is Diablo's call in the end. I'm just giving my two cents.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:07 pm
THANK YOU! You saved my brain from my void of nothingness and momentary stupidity. Also I see you point Luci and I guess I can live with a chainsaw blade now that you kinda put it in that sense. I just wasn't really understanding the concept of it really. ( O 3 O )
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:21 pm
Luciania Time for a little Luci to chime in.
Slevin Corpse, I believe the overall point Diablo is making is that your Zanpakuto has to many corresponding types and abilities. If it is an Elemental Type Zanpakuto then all of it's abilities must correspond with that said Element. Since you have decided to use the Element of Lightning then your Techniques/Abilities must be in complete correlation with Lightning. If it's augmenting the Characters physical abilities then it would be considered a Kido Type Zanpakuto. You can't combine the two.
I'd comment on the Techniques/Abilities but I think firstly you should decided what KIND of Zanpakuto you want, an Elemental Type or Kido Type. If your going for Elemental remove everything that mentions character change, if your going for Kido then remove anything mentioning Lightning and fix it to match the Guilds System. That's all I have to say on this matter.
Now on to another point. I don't think having a Futuristic looking Zanpakuto should be an issue. Considering modern Technology has been seen and used. A Chainsaw Blade isn't really that futuristic anyways. He could even have it where the Blade itself runs on the Lightning it produces. The friction of it running causing Sparks of power which allows for that said Lightning to be released outwards and so. I would just note that in it's sealed form the Blade of the Chainsaw wouldn't be functional until it's power is called forth.
I mean thinking about and really looking back, Starrk's release was Hand Guns. It's not so far off. But again this is Diablo's call in the end. I'm just giving my two cents. Thankyou for restating the point i already got. I know that type should relate to each other and i went off track. I know now that lightning means element, kido buff character... like shunko... Lightning mean's i can't use that element to increase my characters speed or reflexes right? I can't give him electrical armor or fistycuffs. Only throwing bolts of electricity? Then i'd definetly change it.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:25 pm
Diablo en Musica 92 THANK YOU! You saved my brain from my void of nothingness and momentary stupidity. Also I see you point Luci and I guess I can live with a chainsaw blade now that you kinda put it in that sense. I just wasn't really understanding the concept of it really. ( O 3 O ) Sorry bout the technobabble i'll keep it simple next time. But Yeah it was just a chainsaw made into a broad sword, electrically powered and what not.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:35 pm
Hon, let me tell you no one is against you and being biased towards you. So the attitude can be dropped. I don't need it nor does anyone else. As crew it is our JOB to judge and assist. We are being respectful towards you, all we ask is that you do the same towards us. Now I don't care to indulge on this, so I'm going to let it drop.
Element refers to as it's description. It is the power to call upon a preexisting power produced naturally. So yes, Element does in fact mean it cannot increase or enhance your characters physical powers and abilities as physical powers and abilities do not have any connection to the Elements. Now that you have come to understand this, we can move on.
For an Armour of Lightning, yes that is allowed as it corresponds with the Element of Lightning. However that said that Armour would only be able to use it's Lightning ability to repeal attacks thus giving your Character a layer of added defense. It wouldn't increase the Characters natural physical defense only act as a tool to protect. You are free to get creative with the Lightning, which can go beyond throwing bolts of Electricity. It just has to make sense and correspond with it's type.
If you want an Abilitiy that allows your character to get a short boost of power, then you can do so by making Custom Kido Spells, as Kido would allow for such thing.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:51 pm
Luciania Hon, let me tell you no one is against you and being biased towards you. So the attitude can be dropped. I don't need it nor does anyone else. As crew it is our JOB to judge and assist. We are being respectful towards you, all we ask is that you do the same towards us. Now I don't care to indulge on this, so I'm going to let it drop.
Element refers to as it's description. It is the power to call upon a preexisting power produced naturally. So yes, Element does in fact mean it cannot increase or enhance your characters physical powers and abilities as physical powers and abilities do not have any connection to the Elements. Now that you have come to understand this, we can move on.
For an Armour of Lightning, yes that is allowed as it corresponds with the Element of Lightning. However that said that Armour would only be able to use it's Lightning ability to repeal attacks thus giving your Character a layer of added defense. It wouldn't increase the Characters natural physical defense only act as a tool to protect. You are free to get creative with the Lightning, which can go beyond throwing bolts of Electricity. It just has to make sense and correspond with it's type.
If you want an Abilitiy that allows your character to get a short boost of power, then you can do so by making Custom Kido Spells, as Kido would allow for such thing. Ehh ive just had some crappy mod's in the past. forgive me, Luci im a bit jaded. Anyway, i'd have to disagree that controlled bursts of electricity can stimulate the neurolgical impulses and the electrical singals sent from the brain to-okay screw science this is bleach. So i can throw lightning, coat myself in it to repel attack's and flow it through my chainsaw sword. Hm... well what can a kido type zanpakuto do? Because i've always enjoyed speed increases and strength buffs and what not. Though i'd lose the lightning element if the trade offs are good enough i'd be okay with it. Hmm throwing lightning, buffing body... throwing lightning... buffing physical capabilites to be an awesome warrior... but not of lightning. Oh but wait. You said i could make my own kido? Such as removing the restraint that the brain has placed on the mind to limit ones muscle useage or instill increased adrenaline flow, reflexes that slow time to a crawl, forgot the scientfic wording for that and lastly increasing muscle reaction timing for very fast striking in short bursts.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 2:09 pm
It's all good.
I do agree. Electrical zaps can cause impulses in the brain that would allow for a person to achieve enhanced feets, however Lightning itself would be powerful a charge, if pure Lightning itself was used to do such a thing it would only melt your brain. It's not that we don't see the logic, it's that it's wildly debatable and can cause conflict during RP with other users. We prefer to avoid the conflicts before they start.
An example of a Kido Type Zanpakuto would be Yumichika Ayasegawa's Ruri'iro Kujaku which has the power to steal an enemies strength and power. Another would be Retsu Unohana's Minazuki which has the power to heal others. Kido Type Zanpakuto's primary ability is to augment or change the status of their owners of objects around them. So if you do make a Kido Type Zanpakuto it would only be able to alter a single aspect of your character, however the shape and appearance of your weapon would have to correspond with that it's capable of. So if you wanna make a Zanpakuto that when released increases your character speed, your Zanpakuto would likely take on the appearance of Leg/Shin Guards. Then it's Techniques would detail short bursts of speed increases. I hope this helps.
Lastly, if you so want. It just has to be limited with the Guilds System.
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 2:23 pm
Hm... a single aspect... not exactly worth it. Lightning feels better for my chainsaw but i do enjoy large amounts of strength and speed and wielding huge weapons with one hand. So melee would be more my style of course but damn if lightning doesnt compliment it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:00 pm
better?  ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Lance Lawiet
Nickname: Reaper.
True Age: 301
Age Appeared: 22
Birthdate: Nov. 28
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Blood Type: 0+
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 5’8
Weight: 170 in muscle
Eye Color: Fiery Silver
Hair Color: Dark Silver
Life View: He peers through the eyes of a jaded soul. Someone born through battle, bred in blood, he’s a warrior at heart. He strives in conflict and battle, he’s at his best with a blade in hand and a million bodies to carve into. If he’s not training with blade and fist/fist then he’ll be meditating, studying new ways to kill and fight or drinking sake. He believes that mind craves conflict otherwise how can one grow? Shinigami are creatures of instinct and war, instead of hiding this fact he revels in it.
Personality: In a social setting he’s quiet, he says what he needs to then goes on about his day. He takes no interest in hobbies beyond cleaning and edging his weapons or practicing martial arts or some other form of shinigami combat. He is cold to some but to those that are close to him he is quite warm and even a bit friendly if the situation is right but mostly uninterested.
Likes:
Swords
Hand wraps
Blindfolds
Weighted armor/clothing
New fighting styles
Strong opponents
Fighting against armies
WEAPONS!
Dislikes
You
That guy
That dude over there
Him
Okay he’s cool
And Spiders.
Division: Zero
Rank:
Side: Good-ish
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ There was one significant day in history, in the rukongai 80 district west that a thousand died from causes unknown. They all simply dropped, everyone within miles of his birth were erased from existence. The only survivors were he and his mother, the strongest one in that district, now put in second place by her son. He grew up in the worst of conditions, crime, killing, murders. This district was full of scum that were just waiting to be wiped off the face of the soul society and he was their reckoning. At an early age he was born into the life of crime, careful to keep his spirit energy from running rampant he was born with great power and his mother taught him to use it against evil; despite his instincts to kill everyone he met. He was thirteen when the entire rukon district of 80 and a few others took up arms: they wanted to kill this boy for the dangerous power he held. He was outnumbered two thousand to one, maybe exaggerated but it felt that way if not more!
He only had his fist’s, they were an army of criminal’s, survives some would say but as he liked to call them. “The dead.” Just as the first of many went to attack him a piercing blue streak of lighting crashed around him, blinding light as he finally stopped holding back. His mother had been long dead from a disease he knew nothing about and without any restraints he had free reign on the murders of this planet. That was the day his spirit called out to him, it was magnificent. Standing before the army and the warrior was almost an illusion, an angel born of battle just as his future host would be: they were a perfect match. He spoke the name of his spirit and gained an immeasurable power, combining it with his own spirit energy and he wiped out half the entire army by just awakening his spirit power. He harmonized with his zanpakuto through battle, the perfect situation: outnumber but never outmatched. The only thing he could have possible found better was the captains of the soul society: his dream fight.
A flicker of lighting ran through the long edge of his Nodachi, then like a raging storm the blade was roaring with power. Streaks of electricity poured off of his blade, the ground around him was breaking to pieces. An enormous circle of bodies laid out before him, all dead but it was a sign to the rest of them of their soon to become fate. The day he was thirteen he maliciously slaughtered two thousand people; criminals but they were still people and from that day on he traveled the world seeking out powerful opponents one day he would challenge the gotei 13 but that was another day and another story. Before joining the royal guard he had grown too powerful to leave alone, he was approached by the royal guard and offered a job in the promise of greater and grander fights, he quickly accepted and began a new life, hopefully one of more battles to come.
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Reiatsu Color: A dense silver aura.
Reiryoku Level: Great.
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert
• Air Dash: Advanced
• Shunpo: Expert
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Adept
• Shunko: Expet
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Master
• Kendo: Advanced
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Kido Spells: Expert
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Advanced
• Jumping: Advanced
Strengths:
• Bloodlust: Immense stamina.
• His skill in swordsmanship is very great, he has a certain affinity for killing and he has shown this through his sword-chainsaw.
Weaknesses:
• Hardheaded: It is very hard to get him to stop fighting, even if he’s losing, actually especially when he’s losing.
• Long Range battling.
Fears:
• Spiders to an extent, he’ll still crush it, its just creepy.
• Losing his conviction.
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Wokui Tsukusu Kaminari
Zanpakuto Location: A simplistic katana in which he wears on behind his back, on his waist with the handle readily available.
Zanpakuto Appearance: http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/x329/Markseal1/dothack_Broad_Legged_pt2_by_Darkangel_shin_zpsf1e46284.jpg
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/x329/Markseal1/Knight_zps532b9401.jpg
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Chainsaw Broad Sword
Zanpakuto Type: Melee
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: “Katta Ejji”
Shikai Incantation: “Join me in the slaughter, Katta!”
Shikai Description: Starting from the ground up, the handle is three feet long and etched with a dragon wrapping around the handle with a body of lightning. The cross guard is a giant metal chunk in the shape of half the cross, the arm and head part. It hides all of the pieces of his blade, just like how a katana is put together but for a chainsaw that runs on spirit energy. The giant cross guard is pure black with a silver Triskelion marking smack dab in the center. It glows and fills up the more energy is put into it. The frame is the other half of the cross, which the chain of the saw runs on. The teeth resemble swords, the blade facing straight up with a sharp pointed edge sticking out. It doesn’t matter though, when he starts it up the blade will spin so fast it appears to be standing still, so it appears as an enormous double edged broad sword ending in a tip.
Shikai Ability:
Technique #1: “Slice through my enemies, Katta!” The teeth of his sword will make contact with an object and begin to slice into the object at hundreds of rps (Rounds per second.) There are one hundred and twelve teeth on one edge from top to bottom, it makes a full rotation in less than one tenth of a second, so given a full second to cut through it will have spun 1,000 times. The teeth on this blade are highly indestructible, being 200% harder than diamond which mean’s it would be very hard to break even a single tooth on this blade. The real effect of this is to charge his blade with reishi or spirit energy and doing so will allow it to cut at the atomic level, so given enough time it can slice through even the hardest materials.
Technique #2: “Edge Armor” Upon activation he gains reishi armor in the form of five pieces, greaves, gauntlets and a chest piece. They all absorb small amounts of reishi around him in order to fix broken pieces and stop damage. When maximum, when all five pieces are fully charged they will produce a single barrier, invisible to the opponent except when struck. It will have the attack bounce off and the barrier destroyed. He would have to absorb the reishi from the ground or fuel it with his own spirit energy to charge them.
Technique #3: “The weight of the world” The armor that he wears allows him to withstand any amount of pressure. If the sky was falling he could hold up it up and even throw it back up in place. The same goes for blocking; being like a stone wall he won’t be pushed back by the force of anyone’s blows. This doesn’t increase his striking power or his strength but simply allow him to withstand pressure to a great extent; this can be extended into his sword.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: “Kattaa ejji no subete no mono”
Bankai Incantation: “Cut down the evil in your path.”
Bankai Description: His blade stays mostly the same, but now when fully charged and spinning, being a chainsaw his blade will glow white hot, then ignite the air causing a stream of fire to flow outward from the front edge. His chainsaw sword will now be connected to a chain that’s connected to his wrist via bracelet. The chain can be broken but depending on if he wants it to regenerate it will do so, very quickly. Other than that his blade is the same.
Bankai Ability:
Technique #1: “Clear My Path.” His weapon is further upgraded, doubling in toughness, cutting power and speed. The blade creates dozen’s of sparks even at half speed. The blade will glow with reishi burning with a silver aura, like an extra layer. This layer is made from complete spiritual energy and can spin half as fast as his weapon, it also spins in the opposite direction, so the blade will cut horizontal, it will first cut vertical and mark the path, like the first cut into something hard to open, then you can just rip apart with your bare hands. The blades teeth and the frame are made 4 times as strong as diamond, spin at 2000 rounds per second and use spirit energy to give an extra layer of cutting power. It is the unstoppable force.
Technique #2: “Tank You Never.” The armor appears more bulky, with a second layer of plating, the joints of his body still remain uncovered but the five pieces will grow slightly, gaining small spikes or edges, as well as absorbing reishi faster it can produce a stronger barrier, allowing to tank kido and projectiles for a short amount and block two medium attacks or four weak moves and one strong attack. The armor itself is dense and will act like normal armor the only benefactor is it regens with spirit particles and fully charged will produce a kido/projectile shield and a good tanking shield for a single attack.
Technique #3: “The weight of the world and 7 other planets to take.” A simple upgrade, allowing the pressure he can withstand to increase ten times that of his shikai. He will not be moved by force, he is like a stone that no force will be able to move, crush, and knock him away. He can lift and throw enormously heavy objects with relative ease, feeling no strain on his muscles when lifting or when struck he will not be moved, sort of a kin to hacking away at something; doesn’t move still takes damage though.
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▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells
▬▬┤|Hado Spells
• 1-30
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
• 1-30
▬▬┤|Other Spells
• N/A
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 8:32 pm
Please put next to your Bankai :: [ Not Achieved ]. Vice Captains must doing the required amount of training post and report it in to achieve Bankai.
After that change you are approved.
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 9:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 11:11 am
I revoke approval on the basis of error.
1st) For your Strengths. They can not be attributes, as such it cannot be wirten as Immense. If you've referenced my profile, then you should note Above-Average is an acceptable answer as it details your skill in the area but not so much so it becomes an attribute.
2nd) Lastly for your Hado and Bakudo, it actually have to list the ones your character posses. By just putting Lieutenant as an answer could be a problem as you could just easy use more then your character possess for as I mentioned it's not listed which Kido Spells you possess.
Just fix those things and then you will be approved.
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