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 Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 5:25 pm
All are accepted, thanks for updating! For future reference, please post the finished profile...I'll have to keep checking to see when you're done. Accepted. I'll take care of listin' him and all that. :3 Whooooaaa hang on there. That's a pretty intense appearance. You could just call it 'multi-colored'. 'Neon' green isn't exactly correct; cat eyes are really only 'neon' with bright light shined upon them. So we'll change it to 'bright green'. Her pawpads/tongue cannot be blue. Also, 'purplish and bluish tints' to her fur would sum up all the coloring. As a last note, 'Sunsetkit' is not an acceptable name. >w> Please apply these changes and quote me when you're done.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 5:35 pm
I think I fixed it, but. I worked so hard on the description D: WAGHHH Jk, it's an old character i've had for two years ._.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:01 pm
Thistleclaw I think I fixed it, but. I worked so hard on the description D: WAGHHH Jk, it's an old character i've had for two years ._. Alright! Much better. Haha, it's your character. Must be fun to type up. :3 Okay, I'll get her listed. Thank you!
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:30 pm
Haha, xD Thanks, and you're welcome also.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:54 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is Pebblefoot.
I'm a proud member of Seaclan.
I'm a she-cat, I should know.
I'm twenty moons old.
I'm a warrior.
My kin include Willowheart and wetclaw and sunshine.(all deceased). . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
My least favorite things...
And, my fears.
. : Getting Personal : .
I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
No matter what I will always have a big heart. I will always be energetic.I don't judge other cats even if they are from different clans or if they are not even in a clan. I am also very determined to help other clanmates. I try to keep their spirits up even in the clan's darkest times. I can get very nosy sometimes and annoying.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Pebblefoot's pelt is gray.Pebblefoot's tail is very long and fluffy. Her eyes are a dark green. Her teeth and claws are much sharper than her clanmates claws and teeth. Pebblefoot's hearing is very good.
My history, don't go poking around!
Pebblefoot was the only kit of Willowheart and Wetclaw. When Pebblefoot was only 2 moons old Willowheart died due to an illness. Her father, Wetclaw did his best to raise Pebblefoot. He found another mate to help him raise Pebblefoot.Her name was Sunshine. Sunshine was very kind to Pebblefoot and spoiled her a little. Pebblefoot's father went on patrol one day but when he came back, his clanmates had to help him. They said he got attacked by a rogue. He was in the medicine den for 5 days. At some time during the night he died. The next day Pebblefoot was made an apprentice. Her mentor was Sharptooth. During the time she was an apprentice nothing major happened.The day she was made a warrior, Sunshine died of old age.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:09 pm
WTNC Mule For future reference, please post the finished profile...I'll have to keep checking to see when you're done. Accepted. I'll take care of listin' him and all that. :3 Im done i had to go like super quick before i finished it oh and im gonna fix my player profile in a bit too im sorry i just didnt know what format to use on it and i saw yours
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:20 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is The Forsaken One, but you can call me Forsaken.
I live proud life of a Rouge.
I is a demon, I should know.
I am unknown moons old.
My kin include no one . . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
twisted when everything falls into place. kekeke
twisted i like no one... you can go now. *shifty eyes*
My least favorite things...
evil getting personal
evil Blood... all of my hate, ALL OF IT!
evil crowds/hugs. i... i have a claustrophobia. >.>
evil starclan!
And, my fears.
eek did i mention my claustrophobia? No? well good, cuz it a lie. >.>
eek Puresun... getting hurt again
eek don't you find it a little unsettling that starclan is always watching? . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Forsaken is a clever, smooth and cunning shadow, taking the form of a cat so to guide the unfortunate. It lurks in the dark hunting for those who are just as lost and unfortunate as it, usually targeting those who are grieving or power hungry so that it can make a contract, which is how it traps it's pray. Forsaken cannot hurt another cat physically, due to being a spirit unless they are already bleeding. Due to this flaw it creates contracts to get others to do it's dirty work for it. Little is known about it seeing as not many have been close enough to understand. It usually apears befor a war or a disaster, if you are lucky it has come to warn you. Forsaken cares little for others except for a select few who have earned it's respect, Puresun, Bluemoon, and Slasher. It is under a curse, you can try to break it if you can. ;3
It's what I am, like it or not.
long, lanky shadow with bright glowing red eyes. It has a white crack in it's head that forms the shape of a slasher smile stretching from ear to ear. It it is usually slithering within a puddle of shadow, touching the ground at all times. No light reflects off of it's from, making it pitch black at all times.
My history, don't go poking around!!( past that has been reviled so far)
Many moons ago, when it was a normal cat, Forsaken had been a part of a group of rouges who believed themselves to be a small clan. Forsaken was the medicine cat but was unable to contact Starclan like a normal medicine cat due to the small group not being an actual clan under the stars.
Dispite this Forsaken was very skilled with herbs and was able to perform many medical advances in his group. Unfortunately when a strange desias called the creeping death had infected the rouges Forsaken was unable to find a cure, so had lost many of those who had depended on it.
Forsaken often prayed to starclan to help aid it in it's mission to find the cure and save it's band of cats, but they never answered. Over time, as more and more lives slipped through i's claws Forsaken instead became known as an omen of death instead of a beckon of hope when it traveled in search for a cure. Cats grew to fear Forsaken, seeing as where it traveled, so did the creeping death. Only one cat still cared for Forsaken, Cyotesong. Cyotesong was Forsaken's most and now only trusted freind.
Unfortunately time revealed that Cyotesong was just a spy for an enemy, collecting information for the coming attack and also to kill the medicine cat so that it's clan could not care for their casualties and fall to the bitter fight. Cyotesong was sentenced to death. Once he was gone Forsaken slowly grew more and more insane, detesting it's leader for taking it's only freind. Later that night Forsaken set the forest on fire, using a camp fire of a two leg traveler, letting it spread and wiped out the cats out, along with the creeping death. Forsaken did not get away with this though.... His leader, Grace, pulled him into the river to die with her. Forsaken refused to die and when it traveled to starclan, (or what it believed to be starclan...) was cursed for it's horrid sin.
The odd, mystical cats, (who were actually from The Order, a group of cats with mystic powers hidden far up into the mounties), told Forsaken that it could only be relived of the curse if someone broke it, then it would be free. Forsaken now wanders these clans after traveling from it's burned forest, in search to guide the lost and unfortunate. It detest starclan, claiming that the unjustly punished it.
Forsakens views have expanded the more time it would spend with Puresun, who it seems to gravitate towards. Despite it's usual selfish intentions Forsaken has grown a genuine care for the she cat and often worrys about the misfortune it brings into her life.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:28 pm
Mm there are two things I need you to fix: One is that our storyline takes place long, long after the Second Series with the Great Journey. There's no possible way she could have been born in RiverClan. Two, you'll need to change her name...Luna (which I'm assuming means Lunar) is not acceptible as the beginning part of the name. Quote me when you edit.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:30 pm
All seems good! I'll add her to our lists. Thank you! C:
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:37 pm
WTNC Mule All seems good! I'll add her to our lists. Thank you! C:
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:38 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is Lightningkit.
I'm a proud member of StormClan.
I'm a Tom, I should know.
I'm a Newborn.
I'm a Kit.
My kin include Thunderflight(Mother), Whisperblade(Father), Tempestkit and Twisterkit(Sisters), Blizzardkit(Brother), Thor(Grandfather). . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
♥► Fighting!
♥► Challenges! I REFUSE to lose!
♥► Training
♥► Hunting
♥► FOOD!
♥► Spirited cats who know how to have fun
♥► Cats who are ambitious for good things
♥► Worthy Opponents
♥► Interesting/Good cats
♥► Causing trouble/Getting into trouble
♥► Horses! *When he's older*
♥► Feathers...
♥► Thunder and Lightning, oddly enough...
♥► The sky and everything about it, meaning stars, clouds, night-time, etc.
♥► Storms/Bad Weather, well, almost any weather!
♥► StormClan and everyone in it, not to mention everything about it!
♥► Friends
♥► My Parents, they are both mighty and respectable cats who I...love...dearly...SHUT UP!
♥► My annoying hyper or fraidy cat siblings...I...care about them...alot...I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP!
My least favorite things...
✖► Hot weather...
✖► Horrible/Evil cats
✖► Getting hurt, but, eh, it happens!
✖► Not having anything to do
✖► Being cooped up
✖► Feeling trapped
✖► Repeating things more than once
✖► Idiots
✖► Being cold
✖► Danger/War
✖► Negative emotions
✖► Unfairness
✖► Injustice
✖► Unhappy clanmates or family members
✖► Losing fights/challenges
✖► Anyone who thinks they're better then me!
✖► Anyone who think I'm weak!
✖► The weird way I talk, sometimes...
✖► Enemies
✖► Anyone who's rude or mistreats my family
✖► Anyone who thinks they can do whatever they want to me or look down on me!
And, my fears.
☠► The fall of StormClan
☠► Losing my family
☠► Dying worthlessly
☠► Not being able to fulfill my dreams
☠► Being weak
☠► Breaking a true promise
☠► Failing at protecting someone...
. : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Ya wanna know about how I am? Well, I guess I’ll tell ya! I’m not a fraidy cat kit, or a girly one at that. If you think so, you can have a talk with my claws! Anyways, I’m actually pretty fearless and energetic. I’m ready to take on new things, fight, train and, I refuse to tire out until I master whatever it is I’m doing, and I hate being ignored. Cats think that I’m way to ready to get out into the world and try EVERYTHING.
Something I really love to do is fight. I love fighting and taking up challenges. I like to see how far my strength goes and how tough I am. I love to train and get better, but my pride and over confidence can get the best of me. I will not back down from a fight and I will fight honorably, really, I fight fair and I wouldn’t have it any other way. What kind of battle is a worthy one if you aren’t confident, strong, without any dirty tricks? Ya got that right, it’s not a battle at all, and it’s a joke! When I fight seriously, I will go all out, and use my full power to win if I have to. If I ever lose a battle, I swear, I will train non-stop until I’m ready to show who beat me that I’m stronger, that I can change and improve if I try. I can’t stand losing and I won’t stop until I’m better. Of course, grudgingly, even I know when to stop. If I really have to, I’ll stop fighting or…ugh…retreat…if it’s really necessary, though I’ll be very ill about it, you see?
I’m pretty laid back and calm in any situations alike. I will fight to keep my cool in bad situations, for the sake of others, and myself. If others can’t be strong, I like to think that you should do your best and be strong for them. That’s why I will never give up in anything I do, and I will try and try again until I succeed.
On the outside, like in battle, meeting strangers, fighting, or just being around those I’m not close to at all, I have an energetic and cocky attitude. I really get annoyed by cats who think they’re better than me or my family, and I will go out of my way to prove them wrong, my style. I also might flirt with a she-cat here or there, and I really like to party and fight those I find worthy. I’m very reckless and hot-headed, so don’t suspect me to “think before acting”, because, it just doesn’t go for me. I rather act before seeing the outcome, and beat their faces in. I guess I tend to be loud and argue a lot with people, and I like to do things my way, but I think it’s just because I think my way is the right way, and I don’t like being proven wrong. But who does? I hate following rules, I’m more of a free spirit, not held by a chain. I am no where near obedient either, I might just do the opposite of what you say just to be annoying.
Since I'm always picking fights, showing how tough I am, and losing my temper even though I try to be calm and collected, I'm very ambitious, but not in a harmful or terrible way. I’d like to think of it as ambitious at being the best, and I mean the BEST at anything I feel like being good at. With my refusal to lose, I must be confident in my abilities and my will to go on, or everything will fall. I’m the kind of cat to never look back, to keep moving forward, and to get better. I want to prove to others that I’m not someone they can just walk all over. But, on the inside, really, to anyone who is very, and I mean very close to me, I’m rather quiet, mild, and thoughtful. I really hate showing weakness or “softness” on the outside, so I hide it inside. I especially hate showing pain or negative emotion, so I’ll hide it, just so it’s not a burden to anyone. It’s just better that way, I guess. It wouldn’t be a surprise if I’m horribly injured and I try to walk it off like it was nothing. But, I really can be a softy to those I really care about, but that’s only to a FEW reserved cats. If you are close to me, say, like kin or a family member, I’ll do anything to protect you and I’ll even open up more…soften up….I GUESS… I tend to respect those I find honorable, even if they’re from a different clan. It’s just how I am. But this doesn’t mean I’m a softy, because you’ve got another thing coming if you think I’m “cute” or “sensitive”. Ugh.
In all, besides being over confident, cocky, arrogant, rude, energetic, loud, obnoxious, reckless, stubborn, and ambitious, I’m fiercely loyal. I will fight for my clanmates proudly, and will do anything for them. I laugh in the face of danger, for StarClan’s sake. I’m the cat to recklessly rush head first into battle for the things I believe in, or to help or protect someone. I really do care for my clanmates and I respect my leader and higher ups very much. I’ll openly converse with others for my ideas on things, and maybe be open to family members, most likely my parents, on things that concern me, if it’s necessary. I’m pretty selfless, now that I think about it. I will never back down and I will keep moving onwards as a future warrior of StormClan! Ofcourse, I’m just a newborn, but these things sure will flare once I’m older!
*Fun Fact: He sometimes has speech issues when talking, or just says things differently then most. Note: He says "You see" and "Ya" instead of "You" alot.
*Fun Fact: He rarely shows his affection for others, and will go out of his way to hide it, so he doesn't appear girly or soft. But he will SOMETIMES show it, and probably deny it later...
It's what I am, like it or not.
If I do say so my self, I’m quite the handsome tom to look at. For now, I’m just a little fluffy furball, but when I’m old enough to pin you down in a fight, I bet I’m going to be quite the lady-killer, like my mother and father, you see! I’ve heard my mom call me a little copy of her, but I better not look feminine! If you think that’s funny, you can laugh I’m clawing your face off! Okay, enough with the “empty” threats, I’m a pretty cute little scrap of fur. I’m a little larger then most kits, the biggest of my litter! I was first born, duh. So, I have a pretty well built body, though small, for now, with strong legs and a muscular body, like my mom. But, I’m not bulky and I retain a rather slender appearance like my father. I’ll most likely grow up to have strength of my mom and the quickness of my dad, a pretty well rounded body that edges towards bulk. In all, I seem to have a very sharp and devilishly handsome look to me though. Hey, don’t blame me; it’s probably how awesome and cool, which I’ll never admit, my parents are.
My fur is jet black and looks just like my mother’s. Everyone does say I look just like a younger version of her, just male. My fur is really just like my mom’s….why…do…I…look…so…much…LIKE HER? Anyways, since I’m still a kit, my fur is fluffy and very silky soft like mom’s. I have thick well kept fur, thanks to mom always grooming the living cat out of me, so it’s always sleek and clean, but it still has that unkempt look to it, thanks to yours truly. My still soft paw pads are jet-black, along with my sharp, soft, and cute; never even call me that unless you like your whiskers, little nose and thorn sharp claws. Again…JUST LIKE MY MOM. I wonder why I couldn’t be born like my dad, instead of a male version of, well, you know, my mom. But, I think it makes my mom-worshipping siblings jealous that I look more like her than any of the others do! Hah! My most likely best of my features, if not all of them, that I have of my mom’s, are these piercing and intense sapphire gems you call eyes. They are clear blazing sapphire blues that appear icy, like cold fire. They are vibrant and always slightly narrowed, quite the beautiful set of eyes to look at.
Well, that’s what I look like ya weirdo stalkers, why am I even explaining this? Oh well. I hope you’re happy.
My history, don't go poking around!
Well, seeing that I WAS JUST BORN not too long ago, nothing exciting's happened yet, you see? I probably won't let you know when anything else happens since that would be just weird as the Dark Forest. Wait, why are you still here? SHUT UP AND GET OUT!*Don't include this in the posted profile but this is HURRICANEKIT, I just got approved to change his name to LIGHTNINGKIT, since I'm picky and thing the name went better since he has a mother and grandpa who are something to do with lightning/thunder and have the same looks as him :B <3 Don't worry, I had permission to edit your profiles/posts and post his new name. Yeah, it sucked going through ALL those old posts and your profiles. I'm sorry and you're welcome xD <3*
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:25 pm
I fixed it her name is now Snowpool and i changed her bio
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:09 pm
Alright, seems good to go. I'll add her. Thank you! C:
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:25 am
 . : About Me : . My name is Brindlestep.
I'm a proud member of Breezeclan.
I'm a She-cat, I should know.
I'm Twenty moons.
I'm an Warrior.
My kin include Specklethorn. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
~Play
~Training
~Practicing her skills
~Causing mischief
~Sleep
~Ceremonies/Gatherings
~Specklethorn
My least favorite things...
~Being bossed around
~Being bested
~Wet feet
~Too much physical contact
And, my fears.
~Water
~Death
~Closed off spaces . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
A sweet she-cat, loves to chat and socialise. She can be deadly quiet though, and gets jealous quite easily. If this happens, she can get a little snarky, but she isn't so rebellious that she would refuse a direct order. However, she is still a kit at heart, and enjoys messing around and sometimes causing trouble. She also has a slight dislike of kits, and wouldn't dream of having her own until she is ready to retire from being a warrior.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Brown-green eyes, a sandy coloured pelt with darker spotted markings, excellent for camouflage. A lithe she-cat, light on her feet, very fast and able to jump very well. She is an excellent hunter, however she is more adept at hunting than she is at fighting. She has a little nick in her left ear from playing as a kit. Nothing serious, in fact most don't even notice it.
My history, don't go poking around!
Born into the clan, the most adventurous of her litter, and one of two to survive a serious case of whitecough. Her brother, Specklethorn, is a lot quieter, but also a much better fighter. They are very close, and Brindlestep would hate to see something happen to him. In turn, he worries about her constantly. Brindlestep isn't overly fond of a lot of contact, probably from being close to such sick kits earlier in her life. She sleeps right next to Specklethorn, but shuffles away from him in her sleep. She dreams of being leader one day, but would be happy enough to have her own mentor.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:51 am
. : About Me : . My name is Specklethorn.
I'm a proud member of Breezeclan.
I'm a Tom, I should know.
I'm Twenty moons.
I'm an Warrior.
My kin include Brindlestep. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
~Training
~Patrols
~Kits
~Ceremonies/Gatherings
~Brindlestep
~Medicine Cats
My least favorite things...
~The cold
~Getting his sister out of trouble
~Wet feet
~Loud cats
~Boastful cats
And, my fears.
~Water
~Death
~The Death of a Loved One . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Despite his tough outward appearance, Specklethorn is quite the lovely tom. He is polite, and pleasant, and shows genuine interest in the rest of his clans wellbeing. He will often say good morning, or good evening, and treats the others as equals. He doesn't like to fight, nevermind that he is excellent at it. He would gladly give his life for his clan. Fiercely protective. Loves kits.
It's what I am, like it or not.
A burly tom, with a thick set body. Better at fighting than hunting, his pelt is darker than his sisters, and his spots are much darker. Eyes are a light brown, and his whiskers are quite long in comparison to Brindlestep. He isn't as fast as most of the cats of his clan, but he is one of the better fighters, due to his thicker frame.
My history, don't go poking around!
Born into the clan, and one of two of his litter to survive a serious case of whitecough. His sister is Brindlestep. They are very close, and he worries about her constantly. He is fond of kits, despite being close to sick kits earlier in his life. He has no aspirations to lead the clan, only to help train some of the best warriors.
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