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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2017 10:19 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2017 8:00 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 8:08 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2017 2:16 pm
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Odeob: Unfortunately Necro, aka the head weapon mod, said that 480 was the max since that's as much as an S+ ranked technique cost. So absorbing more, even enough to quench our drive for perfection, would be too much. Also I was told that you need to specify that the absorbtion of chakra takes up an activation as well. I know you already have a ring which does so, so please make sure you're aware of that when you use your trick. Everything else looks golden, however.
Karuto and Raiken Armor. Pending: When's the last time I had to judge your customs? Natural State: I got the confirmation that nothing can store stamina. Though I REALLY do appreciate you trying to keep it to such a small number, all things considered. Also remember that absorbing chakra, even your own into the armor to be used later, will cost an activation. You'll probably do it during the down post where your character isn't fighting anyhow, so you should be fine. All of these changes: I really like what you're trying to do. This is a quality aesthetic piece. First problem though, you have six abilities on this armor. That's a huge red flag. I respect that you wanted to do one for each ability, but there are limits. My recommendation is to combine the four into two, like strength and Reflexes are increased while fortitude and speed are decreased and vice versa. That'll bring you back down to four. It'll also make you somewhat more hack... until I make my next demand. The sacrifices are glorious. However, I can't allow you to DOUBLE your stats. I know there are techniques on the listings which do similar things for not nearly the cost you're requesting, but those things WILL be taken off of their respective list. At most I will allow a supreme boost in two stats while a supreme loss in two more. Even that I'm going to double check with Necro, but that seems fair in my book. Finally, these shift changes have to cost an activation. You shouldn't be able to move between them for no penalty. Each form while activated will also continue to cost a supplementary action while its active following the initial post. There's no cost yet for doing so, but if it decides that there needs to be then I'll allow you to take it from the chakra absorbed from your armor solely for no activation.
Malavaes and The Iron b*****d Pending: It's nice to see a sword with a fun name. The Iron b*****d: Approved. Kinship: I really do like what you're doing with this. It's a lot more gentle then how other people have been doing their chakra absorption. Unfortunately, I did get the word that you can't passively absorb chakra. Sorry. Tea Blade: I am weary of this ability, but since you are from the appropriate clan I do see merit in allowing it. If Necro decides that it has to be taken out, however, then I request no hard feelings. As a side note, I'm only willing to approve this if it does what I'm thinking: Where it's able to extend the range of your negation aura as long as the blade is filled with 480 chakra. It says something about the range expanding depending on your body rank. Is that something you forgot to list? Or is the range based off of the clan and your body rank? Blood Potential: Now what does this mean to you? I know in roleplay what it means. But it doesn't give any direct examples related to guild systems to what it does. Does it grant you a long sword formless style up to your current body rank? I don't see anything intrinsically wrong with, but that's because I don't know what you're trying to do mechanically with the ability.
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2017 11:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2017 1:33 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2017 7:36 am
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Chakra Capacity: I know that, "Just because no one did it prior doesn't mean it's a good reason to get denied," is a legitimate argument for my initial judgment. It was my first time taking over custom weapons, and because I couldn't reach the head of custom weapons I based judgments off of prior judgments. Thankfully while waiting for you to respond, however, I was able to ask. He confirmed that weapons cannot absorb and maintain stamina. Even though our guild works very mechanically and chakra and stamina are seen as the same, they're technically different as to what they can get away. If this ever changes then I promise to quote you with the option to change you weapon. Until then, however, I'm going to deny it.
Revenge Counter: 1). No it's not. If you use a bukijutsu technique, (formless bukijutsu counts as simple techniques, btw), then you can counter ninjutsu. The only problem is that ninjutsu is naturally one rank more powerful than buki and taijutsu of simple and complex kinds. So if you swing a simple or complex bukijutsu with B-ranked, without any DR increases, then you can only counter up to a C-ranked ninjutsu. What you're thinking for is the mystic hero discipline, which allows bukijutsu to negate ninjutsu of the same rank regardless of the whole simple, complex, spiritual, ordeal. 2). Tamers allow ninjas to switch out ninjutsu techniques for formless on a one to one ratio. That means by sacrificing four ninjutsu slots you could have up to an A-ranked formless swordplay. I would know, since I'm also a tamer. Honestly though, if you're not going to block the attacks with a sword, then maybe the sword isn't the right weapon for you. Like, Odeob and Karuto are making these cloaks and armors to absorb chakra. Maybe that's something you should look for? I can't allow this ability to absorb chakra that's not directly colliding with it.
Full Counter: Sure thing! The reason why I cannot allow you to have this approved is because first of all, somehow the chakra hitting Kisuke is being absorbed into the sword. That goes back to what I was saying earlier. Having said that, however, I can't see a full reason to outright denied it. Especially if you decide to make this some sort of armor so that you can go more for what everyone else is doing. I think my main issue though is that with the way this guild works, you can't die. Like, if I hit you with an S-ranked technique, that can't kill you. Ideally it should at the very least knock you out, but if you decide in roleplay to be like, "Kisuke stood up after enduring the attack since he's a main character and thus cannot die," obviously it would be a matter of discussion for the fight mods, but to me, you wouldn't be wrong. So to then get hit by an S-ranked, absorb 100% of the chakra, and then be able to use it, sounds REALLY dangerous. Regardless, you can't make judgments based off of how things COULD go. I'll going to switch the judgment to pending, but it can't be a sword in order for it to get approved.
Release Counter: So the max that this sword should be able to absorb is S+ ranked, aka the 480. That's already been stated. Basically all I am saying is that when you release the chakra to have your getsuga tensho moment, that action of releasing the chakra into a blast needs to cost an activation. You can't just say that you released it as a passive, and then do two more attack activation movements.
Fabulous. Approved.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2017 9:01 am
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2017 5:17 pm
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