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 Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 12:20 pm
Fall_Of_The_Damned Anonymous_Alcoholic Fall_Of_The_Damned
Character: Reiko Uchiha
Technique Name: Visions of Limbo
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A Visual Genjutsu,the target only has to look into the user's eye to fall trap to this Genjutsu. They will feel as if they are falling into the whites of the user's eyes until they find themselves in a blank white world. In this Limbo the flow of time is different then the flow on the outside work. One second in the real world equates to five minutes in this Oblivion. Eventually,if let sit long enough,the victim could go mad from sheer lonliness
After much delibiration, this is going to be denied on the ground of it being waaaaay too similar to Tsukoyomi. I was told it was accepted stare Seeing as no one in this thread told you that, you were lied to.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:51 pm
Anonymous_Alcoholic Fall_Of_The_Damned Anonymous_Alcoholic Fall_Of_The_Damned
Character: Reiko Uchiha
Technique Name: Visions of Limbo
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A Visual Genjutsu,the target only has to look into the user's eye to fall trap to this Genjutsu. They will feel as if they are falling into the whites of the user's eyes until they find themselves in a blank white world. In this Limbo the flow of time is different then the flow on the outside work. One second in the real world equates to five minutes in this Oblivion. Eventually,if let sit long enough,the victim could go mad from sheer lonliness
After much delibiration, this is going to be denied on the ground of it being waaaaay too similar to Tsukoyomi. I was told it was accepted stare Apparently someone accepted it then someone deleted there post
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:14 pm
Fall_Of_The_Damned Anonymous_Alcoholic Fall_Of_The_Damned Anonymous_Alcoholic Fall_Of_The_Damned
Character: Reiko Uchiha
Technique Name: Visions of Limbo
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A Visual Genjutsu,the target only has to look into the user's eye to fall trap to this Genjutsu. They will feel as if they are falling into the whites of the user's eyes until they find themselves in a blank white world. In this Limbo the flow of time is different then the flow on the outside work. One second in the real world equates to five minutes in this Oblivion. Eventually,if let sit long enough,the victim could go mad from sheer lonliness
After much delibiration, this is going to be denied on the ground of it being waaaaay too similar to Tsukoyomi. I was told it was accepted stare Apparently someone accepted it then someone deleted there post Sadly, seeing as there is no post accepting it, it is not accepted. You'll have to re-do the technique.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:32 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:14 pm
Yo-ko
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: (um...up to you guys....)
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Hypnotic eyes
Rank: C? B?
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A small but powerful genjutsu, one that many would find interesting as it affects every individual a little differently. The surroundings become psycodelic, and the user begins to see their own fears, and the fears of any team mates around come to life before their eyes. It may cause a change in location, change in personage, as well as cause other interesting effects like a team mate gets turned into a friend, or another friend entirely. The general basis of the technique is to cause fear and uncertainty in the enemy
Character:Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Ghost in the Fog
Rank: C
Type: Medical/maruton
Description: Synthesizing the poison sack in his body, Sebastian is able to make a dense fog appear and poof out of his body, much like the hidden mist technique. The difference is, however, that this mist when breathed in causes immediate effects, having those caught in the jutsu’s fears appear and pop out of nowhere, as well as other psychedelic and hallucinogenic effects. Even if the persons mouth is covered and breathing restricted, prolonged exposure (3 posts) to the mist causes the same effects, as the toxins will seep through the pores on the skin. Sebastian cannot choose who is affected.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Personal Managment
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Description:
With his extensive understanding in medical knowledge, as well as brain archetecture, Sebastian is able to use his chakra to redirect brain signals in his brain to eliminate a sense, using that space left in the brain to heighten another dramatically or the remaining ones equally.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Predatory Instincts
Rank: D?
Type: Medical
Element: Maruton
Description: Due to his Jiungo bloodline, as well as medical knowledge, Sebastian found a way to add extra sensory nerves in his threads to heighten subcouncious processing of information. This will allow him to "feel" a chakra source around him for a good distance (your disgression). He is unable to gather much intel from this technique, such as strength, bloodline, gender, species, but more so just able to tell that something is there at all.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: A Jiungo's Embrace
Rank: B? A?
Type: Bloodline
Description: After learning to allow a limb to seperate and act on its own, Sebastian added a mean and interesting twist to this technique. Using his fog, genjutsu, or any other distracing tactic, the ninja allows his chosen appendage to sneak up or flank the enemy. Once within the needed range (3 times body height) the apendage moves all of its threads to form a immobilizing trap for the enemy, tying onto all of his appendages and sticking into the ground giving him the appearence of being on a cross. Once immobile, Sebastian can have some fun.....
Before anything, you have to decide on what ranks your abilities will have. That's your job, not mine.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:46 pm
Anonymous_Alcoholic Yo-ko
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: (um...up to you guys....)
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Hypnotic eyes
Rank: C? B?
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A small but powerful genjutsu, one that many would find interesting as it affects every individual a little differently. The surroundings become psycodelic, and the user begins to see their own fears, and the fears of any team mates around come to life before their eyes. It may cause a change in location, change in personage, as well as cause other interesting effects like a team mate gets turned into a friend, or another friend entirely. The general basis of the technique is to cause fear and uncertainty in the enemy
Character:Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Ghost in the Fog
Rank: C
Type: Medical/maruton
Description: Synthesizing the poison sack in his body, Sebastian is able to make a dense fog appear and poof out of his body, much like the hidden mist technique. The difference is, however, that this mist when breathed in causes immediate effects, having those caught in the jutsu’s fears appear and pop out of nowhere, as well as other psychedelic and hallucinogenic effects. Even if the persons mouth is covered and breathing restricted, prolonged exposure (3 posts) to the mist causes the same effects, as the toxins will seep through the pores on the skin. Sebastian cannot choose who is affected.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Personal Managment
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Description:
With his extensive understanding in medical knowledge, as well as brain archetecture, Sebastian is able to use his chakra to redirect brain signals in his brain to eliminate a sense, using that space left in the brain to heighten another dramatically or the remaining ones equally.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Predatory Instincts
Rank: D?
Type: Medical
Element: Maruton
Description: Due to his Jiungo bloodline, as well as medical knowledge, Sebastian found a way to add extra sensory nerves in his threads to heighten subcouncious processing of information. This will allow him to "feel" a chakra source around him for a good distance (your disgression). He is unable to gather much intel from this technique, such as strength, bloodline, gender, species, but more so just able to tell that something is there at all.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: A Jiungo's Embrace
Rank: B? A?
Type: Bloodline
Description: After learning to allow a limb to seperate and act on its own, Sebastian added a mean and interesting twist to this technique. Using his fog, genjutsu, or any other distracing tactic, the ninja allows his chosen appendage to sneak up or flank the enemy. Once within the needed range (3 times body height) the apendage moves all of its threads to form a immobilizing trap for the enemy, tying onto all of his appendages and sticking into the ground giving him the appearence of being on a cross. Once immobile, Sebastian can have some fun.....
Before anything, you have to decide on what ranks your abilities will have. That's your job, not mine. 8ball: B Hypnotic: B Ghost: C Personal: C Predatory: D Embrace: B
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:52 pm
Yo-ko Anonymous_Alcoholic Yo-ko
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: (um...up to you guys....)
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Hypnotic eyes
Rank: C? B?
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A small but powerful genjutsu, one that many would find interesting as it affects every individual a little differently. The surroundings become psycodelic, and the user begins to see their own fears, and the fears of any team mates around come to life before their eyes. It may cause a change in location, change in personage, as well as cause other interesting effects like a team mate gets turned into a friend, or another friend entirely. The general basis of the technique is to cause fear and uncertainty in the enemy
Character:Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Ghost in the Fog
Rank: C
Type: Medical/maruton
Description: Synthesizing the poison sack in his body, Sebastian is able to make a dense fog appear and poof out of his body, much like the hidden mist technique. The difference is, however, that this mist when breathed in causes immediate effects, having those caught in the jutsu’s fears appear and pop out of nowhere, as well as other psychedelic and hallucinogenic effects. Even if the persons mouth is covered and breathing restricted, prolonged exposure (3 posts) to the mist causes the same effects, as the toxins will seep through the pores on the skin. Sebastian cannot choose who is affected.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Personal Managment
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Description:
With his extensive understanding in medical knowledge, as well as brain archetecture, Sebastian is able to use his chakra to redirect brain signals in his brain to eliminate a sense, using that space left in the brain to heighten another dramatically or the remaining ones equally.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Predatory Instincts
Rank: D?
Type: Medical
Element: Maruton
Description: Due to his Jiungo bloodline, as well as medical knowledge, Sebastian found a way to add extra sensory nerves in his threads to heighten subcouncious processing of information. This will allow him to "feel" a chakra source around him for a good distance (your disgression). He is unable to gather much intel from this technique, such as strength, bloodline, gender, species, but more so just able to tell that something is there at all.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: A Jiungo's Embrace
Rank: B? A?
Type: Bloodline
Description: After learning to allow a limb to seperate and act on its own, Sebastian added a mean and interesting twist to this technique. Using his fog, genjutsu, or any other distracing tactic, the ninja allows his chosen appendage to sneak up or flank the enemy. Once within the needed range (3 times body height) the apendage moves all of its threads to form a immobilizing trap for the enemy, tying onto all of his appendages and sticking into the ground giving him the appearence of being on a cross. Once immobile, Sebastian can have some fun.....
Before anything, you have to decide on what ranks your abilities will have. That's your job, not mine. 8ball: B Hypnotic: B Ghost: C Personal: C Predatory: D Embrace: B Now repost this, and put in those ranks. Don't quote.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:54 pm
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: B
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Hypnotic eyes
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A small but powerful genjutsu, one that many would find interesting as it affects every individual a little differently. The surroundings become psycodelic, and the user begins to see their own fears, and the fears of any team mates around come to life before their eyes. It may cause a change in location, change in personage, as well as cause other interesting effects like a team mate gets turned into a friend, or another friend entirely. The general basis of the technique is to cause fear and uncertainty in the enemy
Character:Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Ghost in the Fog
Rank: C
Type: Medical/maruton
Description: Synthesizing the poison sack in his body, Sebastian is able to make a dense fog appear and poof out of his body, much like the hidden mist technique. The difference is, however, that this mist when breathed in causes immediate effects, having those caught in the jutsu’s fears appear and pop out of nowhere, as well as other psychedelic and hallucinogenic effects. Even if the persons mouth is covered and breathing restricted, prolonged exposure (3 posts) to the mist causes the same effects, as the toxins will seep through the pores on the skin. Sebastian cannot choose who is affected.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Personal Managment
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Description:
With his extensive understanding in medical knowledge, as well as brain archetecture, Sebastian is able to use his chakra to redirect brain signals in his brain to eliminate a sense, using that space left in the brain to heighten another dramatically or the remaining ones equally.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Predatory Instincts
Rank: D
Type: Medical
Element: Maruton
Description: Due to his Jiungo bloodline, as well as medical knowledge, Sebastian found a way to add extra sensory nerves in his threads to heighten subcouncious processing of information. This will allow him to "feel" a chakra source around him for a good distance (your disgression). He is unable to gather much intel from this technique, such as strength, bloodline, gender, species, but more so just able to tell that something is there at all.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: A Jiungo's Embrace
Rank: B?
Type: Bloodline
Description: After learning to allow a limb to seperate and act on its own, Sebastian added a mean and interesting twist to this technique. Using his fog, genjutsu, or any other distracing tactic, the ninja allows his chosen appendage to sneak up or flank the enemy. Once within the needed range (3 times body height) the apendage moves all of its threads to form a immobilizing trap for the enemy, tying onto all of his appendages and sticking into the ground giving him the appearence of being on a cross. Once immobile, Sebastian can have some fun.....
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:05 pm
I'm iffy on 8-Ball Touch. Gonna let another mod say something before I render udgement.
How would he be able to force others to mentally manifest the fears of others? That'd be a form of mind control, not just a genjutsu. The fear manifestation I'm fine with, but manifesting the fears of others, someothing one wouldn't know about unless they had telepathy, would be impossible. Also, add a length to that genjutsu.
Is the mist immediate and lasts one post, or does it linger?
Is this sense elimination permanent? How long does it last?
Add a distance, not too much seeing as it's a D-ranked technique.
And the whole embrace thing sounds like an auto-hit if anyone is touched by the technique. Just reword it a bit.
Also, it's Jiongu.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:28 pm
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: 8 ball touch
Rank: B
Type: Medical/passive
Description: Being a jiungo, at an early age Sebastian had found something interesting through his studies to assimilate to his body, an unnatural organ that would be the strength of his abilities: venom sacks from the “fear viper.” Anytime someone comes into contact with Sebastian, they receive a dose of his natural fear inducing toxin that cause psycodelic and hallucenagenic effects for 5 posts, maximizing fear in the enemy. He must wear a mask to avoid having others, allies, from getting affected by toxins traveling through his speech. Weapons are also affected by his touch.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Hypnotic eyes
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu (4 posts)
Description: A small but powerful genjutsu, one that many would find interesting as it affects every individual a little differently. The surroundings become psycodelic, and the user begins to see their own fears come to life before their eyes. It may cause a change in location, change in personage, as well as cause other interesting effects like a team mate gets turned into a friend, or another friend entirely. The general basis of the technique is to cause fear and uncertainty in the enemy
Character:Sebastian crane
Technique Name: Ghost in the Fog
Rank: C
Type: Medical/maruton
Description: Synthesizing the poison sack in his body, Sebastian is able to make a dense fog appear and poof out of his body, much like the hidden mist technique. The difference is, however, that this mist when breathed in causes immediate effects, having those caught in the jutsu’s fears appear and pop out of nowhere, as well as other psychedelic and hallucinogenic effects. Even if the persons mouth is covered and breathing restricted, prolonged exposure (3 posts) to the mist causes the same effects, as the toxins will seep through the pores on the skin. Sebastian cannot choose who is affected. The fog will linger for 5 posts (or however long the hidden mist technqiue lasts. Its meant to be that wil a twist)
Immedeate and lingers
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Personal Managment
Rank: C
Type: Medical
Description:
With his extensive understanding in medical knowledge, as well as brain archetecture, Sebastian is able to use his chakra to redirect brain signals in his brain to eliminate a sense, using that space left in the brain to heighten another dramatically or the remaining ones equally.
costs a C rank to initiate, and a d rank to return to normal.
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: Predatory Instincts
Rank: D
Type: Medical
Element: Maruton
Description: Due to his Jiungo bloodline, as well as medical knowledge, Sebastian found a way to add extra sensory nerves in his threads to heighten subcouncious processing of information. This will allow him to "feel" a chakra source around him for a good distance (your disgression). He is unable to gather much intel from this technique, such as strength, bloodline, gender, species, but more so just able to tell that something is there at all. Good out to 25 yards
seeing as it really isnt giving me much to go on, i was hoping it would give me distance as opposed to substance
Character:Sebastian Crane
Technique Name: A Jingu's Embrace
Rank: B?
Type: Bloodline
Description: After learning to allow a limb to seperate and act on its own, Sebastian added a mean and interesting twist to this technique. Using his fog, genjutsu, or any other distracing tactic, the ninja allows his chosen appendage to sneak up or flank the enemy. Once within the needed range (3 times body height) the apendage moves all of its threads to form a immobilizing trap for the enemy, aiming to tie onto all of his appendages and sticking into the ground giving him the appearence of being on a cross. Once immobile, Sebastian can have some fun. This technqiue is absolutely ineffective without some form of cover or destraction
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:39 pm
How long does the technique linger?
The sense-killing seems like it should cost at least B to return to normal, as destroying one sense is kind of a big deal.
Predatory Instincts, A Jiongu's Embrace, and Hypnotic eyes approved unless stated otherwise.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:43 pm
well can we make it an even C rank per change?
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:59 pm
Eh. I feel more comfortable with that technique being B-ranked.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:01 pm
ok, so to confirm, the change originally is a C rank then to change back is B rank. Or jsut all B rank?
And the fog technique lingers like the hidden mist technique
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:46 pm
B-ranked overall.
And the Hidden Mist technique never has a post-length for how long, so essentially, the Hidden Mist Technique could linger for all of five minutes without continuous chakra feeding.
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