Okay guys I'd like opinions on my Rp skills. Here is an rp from an online wrestling gaming league I have made
Key:
Omnicide=Me
Cody Cameron=My Partner
Celt and Crysis= Team supporting alcohol
Mod, Sajid, Jari, Andy= Unimportant at this point XD
Rp based on: World Wrestling Entertainment
Andy and Jari's music hits, and they make their way to the ring. Moments after they finish, Welcome to the Masquerade surrounds the arena, and kids hold up posters that say 'I took the Straight Edge pledge' and 'I want to live in the Dark Cide', accompanied by loud cheers for the Straight Edge Soldiers. However, no one comes out. And instead, the Titantron turns into a stream of Omnicide and Cody Cameron lying in a pool of blood and shattered glass. The cameraman turns the camera towards himself and is revealed to be none other than Celt, with Crisis behind him.
Celt: Just making sure my match tonight has no company.
He and Crisis laugh as they turn the camera off. Meanwhile Andy and Jari run backstage to try and get Down to Nothing some help.
TIME SKIP
Mod, with Sajid, makes his way to the ring for his match with Celt. Afterwords, Celt and Crisis start their entrance, however something strange happens.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQ7oqmikZDQ
This music and movie show on the Titantron instead of the normal CCS theme song. Celt and Crisis try their best to ignore it as they enter the ring. At the end of the video, a message saying 'Traffic crashes are the No.1 killer of teens and nearly one-third of teen traffic deaths are alcohol-related.' shows on the Titantron.
Max Alfonso: Now I wonder who could've done that.
TIME SKIP
Celt successfully pins Mod, and after a few moments Sajid picks him up and helps him out of the ring. Celt celebrates with his CCS brother, but unknown to them, Omnicide and Cody come out from behind the barricades and sneak into the ring with something in their hands. They poke Celt and Crisis on their shoulders, and when the drunken ones turn around they are greeted by an RKO and a Mic Check, leaving them near unconsciousness. Omnicide and Cody hold up their hands to reveal nicotine patches. They then proceed to sit on top of the defenseless CCS, pick up their heads, and choke them out with the patches. The show closes with CCS struggling to get air.
Celt: Just making sure my match tonight has no company.
He and Crisis laugh as they turn the camera off. Meanwhile Andy and Jari run backstage to try and get Down to Nothing some help.
TIME SKIP
Mod, with Sajid, makes his way to the ring for his match with Celt. Afterwords, Celt and Crisis start their entrance, however something strange happens.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQ7oqmikZDQ
This music and movie show on the Titantron instead of the normal CCS theme song. Celt and Crisis try their best to ignore it as they enter the ring. At the end of the video, a message saying 'Traffic crashes are the No.1 killer of teens and nearly one-third of teen traffic deaths are alcohol-related.' shows on the Titantron.
Max Alfonso: Now I wonder who could've done that.
TIME SKIP
Celt successfully pins Mod, and after a few moments Sajid picks him up and helps him out of the ring. Celt celebrates with his CCS brother, but unknown to them, Omnicide and Cody come out from behind the barricades and sneak into the ring with something in their hands. They poke Celt and Crisis on their shoulders, and when the drunken ones turn around they are greeted by an RKO and a Mic Check, leaving them near unconsciousness. Omnicide and Cody hold up their hands to reveal nicotine patches. They then proceed to sit on top of the defenseless CCS, pick up their heads, and choke them out with the patches. The show closes with CCS struggling to get air.
