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 Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:54 pm
@Rei: Accepted.
@Kage: Accepted just use "" for talking like so.
"Hi, how are you?"
@FireCat: Denied.
I liked your reasons but your grammar was bad. It's I not i when talking and don't refer to yourself when rping you refer to your rpc.
Ex:
"What a totally nice day to take a walk around the leaf village" *i say smiling warmly up at the sun as i brushed some of my long orange hair around my ear. Then i looked forward again and started running in the direction of a near by trainning field.
-Yours.
"What a nice day to take a walk around the village."
Kat said smiling warmly up at the sun as she brushed some of her long orange hair around her ear. She then looked forward and began running into the direction of a nearby training field.
-Mine.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:25 pm
Username: New Light Riku
RP Name: Shiro
Elements: Suiton
Bloodline/clan: None as of yet
Starter forum read: Yes
Demon: None
Activity: Several times a day
Why do you want to join the Leaf?:
The Leaf Village has an.... interesting history. Not to mention the beautiful landscape and architecture.
How can you better the leaf village?:
The leaf village is the one that seems to be constantly under attack. I feel I need to help before the Leaf and its culture gets destroyed.
Rp example:
Shiro woke up and went to his window. Opening it up, a breeze blew in hitting his face. He inhaled the aroma of flowers and wet grass from rain the night before and closed his eyes. Suddenly, his door was slammed open and a voluptuously bulky man entered screaming, "HEY! It's time to pay rent! That's 4 weeks, 4,000 Ryo!" "Gah!" Shiro jumped out the window and fell, hitting the ground. "Erg.... Forgot this place has 2 stories." Shiro ran away from the building, listening as the man yelled, "Don't expect any of your stuff to be here when you get back!"
Shiro ran over to the marketplace. "Wow, look at all of this stuff. Hey look!" He rushed over to an art shop. The man there was selling paintings he made. "Wow.... You're really good." "Well thank you. If there's anything you like, please, just tell me." Shiro tooked at each of the paintings carefully, until he noticed one in particular. It shows a sillhouette of a man with his arms raised, and around him is a world of different shades of blue. "How much for this painting? It is very good." "That one? 350 Ryo. Shiro reached into his pockets, but there was no money. "Oh no! I left my money on the table near my bed. Mr. Karizo has surely gotten to it by now." "That's a shame..... You know what? Take the painting. You telling me that it is good, well... It's pay enough." "I couldn't possibly take it for free." "No, I insist." "Thank you very much," he said, bowing. Shiro walked away, looking for a new home.
After a few hours, he noticed somebody in the middle of the road, unconcious. He ran up to this person. On closer inspection, it was the man who gave him the painting. "Hey! Are you alright?" The man opened his eyes. "I am fine. But the thief is getting away with my most valuable painting." "Wha-..." Shiro ran off. "Wait, you can't go, he is too strong!" "I can take him. It's the least I can do!" After running for a bit, he noticed a man wearing all black running, carrying something. "Stop!" The man stopped and turned around. He took out a kunai. Shiro looked around, scanning his enviornment for something he could use. Then, Shiro remembered something. It had rained the night before, and there were puddles on the ground. "Alright. You want to play hardball?" The puddles started rising, until they took on the shape of Shiro. A total of two clones were made. "We'll play hardball then!" They took on the image of Shiro. "Now! Fish Spit! Shiro and the clones started spitting water continuously at the person. He dropped the painting and started running at the real Shiro with his eyes closed, to protect them from the water. However, he slipped and fell in the mud. Shiro ran over and unmasked the man. "M-Mr. Karizo?" The painter then entered the scene. Karizo was arrested and Shiro picked up the painting. It was ruined from the mud. "I'm so sorry..." "It's quite alright. I believe I have the better end of the bargain, now that a thief has been caught." Shiro started walking away. "Where are you going?" asked the painter. "Well, I really don't know. I've got no home. No famil-" "Come and live with me. I have no children, and I am old enough that one might think I am a grandfather. But I shall raise you." "That sounds.... nice sir." "Please, call me Makoto." Shiro and Makoto walked away toward a new day...
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:18 am
dark don't you feel it a little pointless to keep this thread, i mean back in the day when we had every single person trying to get in it was good. But now...don't you think you should get rid of it, this is the only village that does this
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:11 am
Do we still use the grammar school? If so then this thread wouldn't be of no use, because everyone that spells terribly or has bad grammar can be sent there.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:43 pm
bb3000ae dark don't you feel it a little pointless to keep this thread, i mean back in the day when we had every single person trying to get in it was good. But now...don't you think you should get rid of it, this is the only village that does this Doesn't matter to me, although they should be able to rp properly.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:45 pm
Dark-Ninja70 bb3000ae dark don't you feel it a little pointless to keep this thread, i mean back in the day when we had every single person trying to get in it was good. But now...don't you think you should get rid of it, this is the only village that does this Doesn't matter to me, although they should be able to rp properly. I was going to join leaf but i didnt want to go through this crap ha ha no offense to anyone
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:02 pm
Well we had too. We got sick of all the illiterate people within it and all wanting to join the leaf. I mean there are other Villages PEOPLE. BUt, we do need a some active, experienced rpers.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:12 pm
I agree with you. COME TO CLOUD PEOPLE!
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:50 pm
I agree somewhat with you. Some should go to Cloud. They need people. Also, most would remeber when Moon and Snow was open, but now are closed.
Im just saying that when you go to post your profile. Compare the total number of pages that the Leaf has to all the others. We completely over laped everyone of the about 3 times.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:47 am
Username: Lance1278
Rp name: Hatake Shiromaru
Elements?: Lightning
Bloodline/Clan?: White Chakra
Have you read the Starter Forum? Twice. And a half. Ish.
Demon?: Nope!
Activity: (how often you are online) Daily, just about...
Why do you want to join the leaf?
Honestly, it is the most logical for my character, and I've always been pretty sympathetic with those poor Leafies!
How can you better the leaf village?
Right now?
I can't.
But, after alot of training, promotions, and time, I will be a loyal, competent addition to the village.
That, and the place needs some more color.>.>
Give an Rp example:
He laughed boisteriously, running away from the academy teachers chasing him, making no attempt to hide the two buckets of bright red and orange paint, turning corners without any warning.
The boy running ahead of the chuunin instructors, one Hatake Shiromaru, had just gotten done with another of his pranks, having decided that the academy was much too plain for its own good.
So, he gave it a little color. And now, he was weaving his way through the crowd, discreetly dumping the empty cans of paint into a random trashcan that he passed, and using that first moment of his now-free hands to form the ram hand sign. "Henge!" A poof of smoke later, Shiromaru was gone, and in his place, was a pretty young woman, her chocolate-hued hair in a loose ponytail, and a purple yukata draped over her form, walking along leisurely. His henge, the only jutsu he was actually any good at yet, was so convincing simply because of two factors: 1, it cannot be overloaded with chakra, simply adding detail and becoming more convincing with the greater amount of chakra pushed into it, and 2, his lack of control over his chakra, usually wasting it in a manner similar to trying to fill a teacup with a firehose.
He tittered lightly as the chuunin ran by not even sparing him a glance. "Heh, sucker..."
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:34 am
@Rei: So sorry, I never noticed your application. But if you do see this message, your accepted.
@Lance: Accepted.
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:50 am
Kunesume2 I agree somewhat with you. Some should go to Cloud. They need people. Also, most would remeber when Moon and Snow was open, but now are closed. Im just saying that when you go to post your profile. Compare the total number of pages that the Leaf has to all the others. We completely over laped everyone of the about 3 times. Only because the new guys always want to be like one of the naruto characters.
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:58 am
Username:Zonyice
Rp name:Zonyice or Ice
Elements?: Fire,Earth
Bloodline/Clan?: none atm
Have you read the Starter Forum? Yes
Demon?: None
Activity: (how often you are online) 3 times a week at least
Why do you want to join the leaf? cause my friend in this guild told me to
How can you better the leaf village? i dont think i really can now but maybe later on
Give an Rp example:
Ice is walking through the Forest when out of no way 3 rouge ninja attack him. He jumps back and says with a grin. "this should be fun." then one throws a kunai ice dodges and begins to perform a katon jutsu but then the 2nd ninja appears behind him. "That speed is amazing but not enough to beat me" ice says as he turns around and is punched in the back by the 3rd ninja. hiting the ground ice and the 1st ninja says "what are you talking to." he realizes that the 2 ninja are specialists one in weapons and taijutsu but the 2nd one seems to not noticed by the others. "what do you mean what am i talking to" ice says as he begins to stand up. ice throws a kunai at the taijutsu ninja and begins to run toward the weapon ninja as he performs yet another katon jutsu then the 2nd ninja that they never seemed to notice attacks that taijutsu ninja as he begins to dodge the kunai. the weapon ninja looking puzzled as why hes partner just flew to the ground as if some invisible figure hit him dodges the katon jutsu and with out a flinch realizes hes in a genjutsu. "release" the weapon ninja yells out and then he says "oh that's what you were talking to" he says as he sees hes partner die from the lone lethal punch. 'Oh now you see h..." ice trys to say but then the 2nd ninja teleports behind the weapon ninja and breaks hes neck. the ninja lands and takes off a mask and reveals that hes a leaf ninja and says "Ive been tracking these guys for days but you almost stopped me from stopping them by trying to bring attention to me" he says "Sorry" ice says as they say good bye and take there paths to where they need to go
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:04 am
Dark-Ninja70 bb3000ae dark don't you feel it a little pointless to keep this thread, i mean back in the day when we had every single person trying to get in it was good. But now...don't you think you should get rid of it, this is the only village that does this Doesn't matter to me, although they should be able to rp properly. Welllllll. Consider me for a second. WHen I first joined this guild, I didn't know know one damn thing about RP'ing. I was a "newb" of the RP world. However, as time went on, I got better. Much better might I add. Keep in mind that these so called expereinced RP'ers the Leaf needs might already be joining the leaf, they just haven't gotten to that point yet.........just saying.
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