1. I like it but it looks like you mixed 2 ideas into 1. Either way it looks good....maybe add more stuff too it ta make it pop more.
2. um......I say you should DEF. change the hair and eyes.
3. The shoes don't match and it's too simple. But the overall idea is good. Keep workin' with it.
4. I like the outfit but the hood doesn't work....and maybe try some short gloves with no fingers.....also try the spartan sandals and see what that looks like. If ya don't like how they look ya don't have ta post it with the sandals.
I'd love ta see more!
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